Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Kaijo]

Okay, this I dedicate this one-shot to Shiny, for reasons that will be made clear...

Spoiler for Swingers:

Swingers



"Whew, that was quite an operation," Nove exhaled as the quintet walked up the driveway to the house. "I'm tired all over, and just want to head to bed."

"I told you that Rescue Training Camp is difficult," Subaru told her, amused. "I'm just surprised Gin decided to come along, too."

"Well, I mentioned before that the training is always helpful, even if I'm not in your division," Ginga replied, adjusting her duffel bag. "And it was a good opportunity for us sisters to all spend time together."

"I'm just surprised Cinque managed to keep up on those runs, with her short legs and all," Wendi joked, which made the rest of the sisters, minus the short one, laugh.

Dieci reached out to open the door. "Still, I hope father won't mind we're coming home at this hour. We said we'd be back tomorrow afternoon. I didn't think Ginga would manage to get us on that earlier flight."

As the girls filed in, Ginga smiled mysteriously and replied, "It pays to have connections!"

"Oh, dad, what are you doing up at this hour?" Subaru asked, as the five entered the living room and saw him in the kitchen in a bathrobe.

"Oh, uh, girls, I didn't expect you back at this time, heh," Genya replied, seeming a bit nervous. "I just got up for a midnight snack, heh heh. Um, you girls planning to go right to bed? You seem tired."

"We are," Dieci answered, yawning.

"Genya darling, what's taking you so long?" Lindy said as she came into the living room, wearing another one of their dad's bathrobes. "Oh, hello there girls!"

Four mouths dropped open. Cinque merely raised an eyebrow.

"T-this isn't what it looks like!" Genya insisted, embarrassed.

"When did THIS happen!?" Nove demanded to know, regaining the use of her voice first.

Lindy smiled, not the least bit ashamed, coming over to hold his arm. "Oh, Genya, they were going to find out sooner or later. It's been a month now, ever since I took your father to that trip to Las Vegas on Earth. Fascinating place. It's the funniest thing, we actually apparently woke up married in one of the hotels!"

Ginga began to tremble. "Married!? What about mom!?"

Subaru pumped her fist and grinned. "Go Dad!"

"Don't give him that, Ginga," Lindy admonished her. "He's been alone such a long time. Don't you think he deserves some happiness of his own?"

The eldest sister looked down. "I.. I suppose so."

"So, you are now our mother?" Cinque asked for clarification.

Lindy opened her mouth to reply, but was stopped by another voice.

"What's with all the noise down here, and what's taking so long?" another woman said, coming downstairs and entering the living room as well, also in a bathrobe belonging to their father.

Wendi recognized her easily. "Megane Alphino!?

Subaru and Nove's jaws worked up and down in unison, with no sound coming out, while Ginga's eyes rolled up into the back of her head as she collapsed.

"Are you also our mother now?" Cinque questioned.

Megane, at least, looked suitably red. "Well, when Lindy invited us to come visit Earth, I thought it would be a good chance to spend some time with an old friend, and well, things just sorta happened."

"Las Vegas apparently recognizes polygamies!" Lindy declared, smiling and flashing a V-sign with her fingers.

"DAD!?" Subaru growled, finding her voice first, then stomping up to him to grab his robe and pull it down. "What the HELL did you do!?"

"I'm sorry, I didn't mean for this to happen, it just kinda did!" Genya nearly whined.

"So, we have two mommies now?" Dieci questioned, scratching her head.

Nove nodded and rubbed her temples."And apparently this is how Vivio must feel."

"Any other surprises you wanna fill us in on, DAD?" Subaru asked, pulling him down a bit more.

Genya began sweating more as footsteps were head coming downstairs. "Well, um, that is..."

"What's all the racket down here and, oh, hello everyone!" Shamal said as she entered the room, smiling and waving, then turned to Lindy and Genya. "Have you told them the good news, yet?"

Subaru was so shocked, she let go of her father. "Sha-Sha-Sha-"

Cinque did another count, just to make sure, while Dieci decided she needed to sit down, and Wendi joined Ginga on the floor.

Nove sighed. "Yeah, they already mentioned the big marriage. I assume you went along and now you're our mother now, too? Why the hell didn't you just annul it at the time?"

Shamal giggled, as her hand went to her stomach. "Well, that's the thing, but it was a bit hard to annul once we discovered that each of us was pregnant."

Subaru followed Ginga and Wendi's example with a *thud*, while Nove growled and leapt the counter, proceeded to beat the crap out of her father, while this time Lindy actually looked a bit embarrassed and Megane chuckled nervously.

Cinque blinked, then pumped her fist. "Go dad?"

Edit: Page claim for, uh, things you don't see coming?

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

Okay, this I dedicate this one-shot to Shiny, for reasons that will be made clear...

Spoiler for Swingers:

Swingers



"Whew, that was quite an operation," Nove exhaled as the quintet walked up the driveway to the house. "I'm tired all over, and just want to head to bed."

"I told you that Rescue Training Camp is difficult," Subaru told her, amused. "I'm just surprised Gin decided to come along, too."

"Well, I mentioned before that the training is always helpful, even if I'm not in your division," Ginga replied, adjusting her duffel bag. "And it was a good opportunity for us sisters to all spend time together."

"I'm just surprised Cinque managed to keep up on those runs, with her short legs and all," Wendi joked, which made the rest of the sisters, minus the short one, laugh.

Dieci reached out to open the door. "Still, I hope father won't mind we're coming home at this hour. We said we'd be back tomorrow afternoon. I didn't think Ginga would manage to get us on that earlier flight."

As the girls filed in, Ginga smiled mysteriously and replied, "It pays to have connections!"

"Oh, dad, what are you doing up at this hour?" Subaru asked, as the five entered the living room and saw him in the kitchen in a bathrobe.

"Oh, uh, girls, I didn't expect you back at this time, heh," Genya replied, seeming a bit nervous. "I just got up for a midnight snack, heh heh. Um, you girls planning to go right to bed? You seem tired."

"We are," Dieci answered, yawning.

"Genya darling, what's taking you so long?" Lindy said as she came into the living room, wearing another one of their dad's bathrobes. "Oh, hello there girls!"

Four mouths dropped open. Cinque merely raised an eyebrow.

"T-this isn't what it looks like!" Genya insisted, embarrassed.

"When did THIS happen!?" Nove demanded to know, regaining the use of her voice first.

Lindy smiled, not the least bit ashamed, coming over to hold his arm. "Oh, Genya, they were going to find out sooner or later. It's been a month now, ever since I took your father to that trip to Las Vegas on Earth. Fascinating place. It's the funniest thing, we actually apparently woke up married in one of the hotels!"

Ginga began to tremble. "Married!? What about mom!?"

Subaru pumped her fist and grinned. "Go Dad!"

"Don't give him that, Ginga," Lindy admonished her. "He's been alone such a long time. Don't you think he deserves some happiness of his own?"

The eldest sister looked down. "I.. I suppose so."

"So, you are now our mother?" Cinque asked for clarification.

Lindy opened her mouth to reply, but was stopped by another voice.

"What's with all the noise down here, and what's taking so long?" another woman said, coming downstairs and entering the living room as well, also in a bathrobe belonging to their father.

Wendi recognized her easily. "Megane Alphino!?

Subaru and Nove's jaws worked up and down in unison, with no sound coming out, while Ginga's eyes rolled up into the back of her head as she collapsed.

"Are you also our mother now?" Cinque questioned.

Megane, at least, looked suitably red. "Well, when Lindy invited us to come visit Earth, I thought it would be a good chance to spend some time with an old friend, and well, things just sorta happened."

"Las Vegas apparently recognizes polygamies!" Lindy declared, smiling and flashing a V-sign with her fingers.

"DAD!?" Subaru growled, finding her voice first, then stomping up to him to grab his robe and pull it down. "What the HELL did you do!?"

"I'm sorry, I didn't mean for this to happen, it just kinda did!" Genya nearly whined.

"So, we have two mommies now?" Dieci questioned, scratching her head.

Nove nodded and rubbed her temples."And apparently this is how Vivio must feel."

"Any other surprises you wanna fill us in on, DAD?" Subaru asked, pulling him down a bit more.

Genya began sweating more as footsteps were head coming downstairs. "Well, um, that is..."

"What's all the racket down here and, oh, hello everyone!" Shamal said as she entered the room, smiling and waving, then turned to Lindy and Genya. "Have you told them the good news, yet?"

Subaru was so shocked, she let go of her father. "Sha-Sha-Sha-"

Cinque did another count, just to make sure, while Dieci decided she needed to sit down.

Nove sighed. "Yeah, they already mentioned the big marriage. I assume you went along and now you're our mother now, too? Why the hell didn't you just annul it at the time?"

Shamal giggled, as her hand went to her stomach. "Well, that's the thing, but it was a bit hard to annul once we discovered that each of us was pregnant."

Subaru joined her sister on the floor, while Nove growled and leapt the counter, proceeded to beat the crap out of her father, while this time Lindy actually looked a bit embarrassed and Megane chuckled nervously.

Cinque blinked, then pumped her fist. "Go dad?"

Edit: Page claim for, uh, things you don't see coming?

*Falls over laughing* GREAT!

Wait! That means that Vivio is now their niece...

Otto, Deed and Sein are going to be THRILLED!

(Due to Otto, Deed and Sein still being Nove, Wendi, Dieci and Cinque's sisters and the whole thing that went down.)

Still, Awesome.

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

Okay, this I dedicate this one-shot to Shiny, for reasons that will be made clear...

Spoiler for Swingers:

Swingers



"Whew, that was quite an operation," Nove exhaled as the quintet walked up the driveway to the house. "I'm tired all over, and just want to head to bed."

"I told you that Rescue Training Camp is difficult," Subaru told her, amused. "I'm just surprised Gin decided to come along, too."

"Well, I mentioned before that the training is always helpful, even if I'm not in your division," Ginga replied, adjusting her duffel bag. "And it was a good opportunity for us sisters to all spend time together."

"I'm just surprised Cinque managed to keep up on those runs, with her short legs and all," Wendi joked, which made the rest of the sisters, minus the short one, laugh.

Dieci reached out to open the door. "Still, I hope father won't mind we're coming home at this hour. We said we'd be back tomorrow afternoon. I didn't think Ginga would manage to get us on that earlier flight."

As the girls filed in, Ginga smiled mysteriously and replied, "It pays to have connections!"

"Oh, dad, what are you doing up at this hour?" Subaru asked, as the five entered the living room and saw him in the kitchen in a bathrobe.

"Oh, uh, girls, I didn't expect you back at this time, heh," Genya replied, seeming a bit nervous. "I just got up for a midnight snack, heh heh. Um, you girls planning to go right to bed? You seem tired."

"We are," Dieci answered, yawning.

"Genya darling, what's taking you so long?" Lindy said as she came into the living room, wearing another one of their dad's bathrobes. "Oh, hello there girls!"

Four mouths dropped open. Cinque merely raised an eyebrow.

"T-this isn't what it looks like!" Genya insisted, embarrassed.

"When did THIS happen!?" Nove demanded to know, regaining the use of her voice first.

Lindy smiled, not the least bit ashamed, coming over to hold his arm. "Oh, Genya, they were going to find out sooner or later. It's been a month now, ever since I took your father to that trip to Las Vegas on Earth. Fascinating place. It's the funniest thing, we actually apparently woke up married in one of the hotels!"

Ginga began to tremble. "Married!? What about mom!?"

Subaru pumped her fist and grinned. "Go Dad!"

"Don't give him that, Ginga," Lindy admonished her. "He's been alone such a long time. Don't you think he deserves some happiness of his own?"

The eldest sister looked down. "I.. I suppose so."

"So, you are now our mother?" Cinque asked for clarification.

Lindy opened her mouth to reply, but was stopped by another voice.

"What's with all the noise down here, and what's taking so long?" another woman said, coming downstairs and entering the living room as well, also in a bathrobe belonging to their father.

Wendi recognized her easily. "Megane Alphino!?

Subaru and Nove's jaws worked up and down in unison, with no sound coming out, while Ginga's eyes rolled up into the back of her head as she collapsed.

"Are you also our mother now?" Cinque questioned.

Megane, at least, looked suitably red. "Well, when Lindy invited us to come visit Earth, I thought it would be a good chance to spend some time with an old friend, and well, things just sorta happened."

"Las Vegas apparently recognizes polygamies!" Lindy declared, smiling and flashing a V-sign with her fingers.

"DAD!?" Subaru growled, finding her voice first, then stomping up to him to grab his robe and pull it down. "What the HELL did you do!?"

"I'm sorry, I didn't mean for this to happen, it just kinda did!" Genya nearly whined.

"So, we have two mommies now?" Dieci questioned, scratching her head.

Nove nodded and rubbed her temples."And apparently this is how Vivio must feel."

"Any other surprises you wanna fill us in on, DAD?" Subaru asked, pulling him down a bit more.

Genya began sweating more as footsteps were head coming downstairs. "Well, um, that is..."

"What's all the racket down here and, oh, hello everyone!" Shamal said as she entered the room, smiling and waving, then turned to Lindy and Genya. "Have you told them the good news, yet?"

Subaru was so shocked, she let go of her father. "Sha-Sha-Sha-"

Cinque did another count, just to make sure, while Dieci decided she needed to sit down, and Wendi joined Ginga on the floor.

Nove sighed. "Yeah, they already mentioned the big marriage. I assume you went along and now you're our mother now, too? Why the hell didn't you just annul it at the time?"

Shamal giggled, as her hand went to her stomach. "Well, that's the thing, but it was a bit hard to annul once we discovered that each of us was pregnant."

Subaru followed Ginga and Wendi's example with a *thud*, while Nove growled and leapt the counter, proceeded to beat the crap out of her father, while this time Lindy actually looked a bit embarrassed and Megane chuckled nervously.

Cinque blinked, then pumped her fist. "Go dad?"

Edit: Page claim for, uh, things you don't see coming?

Haha, that was awesome! Though I don't know why Shamal was thrown into the mix Great job! I love that last line

"Go dad?"

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

Okay, this I dedicate this one-shot to Shiny, for reasons that will be made clear...

Spoiler for Swingers:

Swingers



"Whew, that was quite an operation," Nove exhaled as the quintet walked up the driveway to the house. "I'm tired all over, and just want to head to bed."

"I told you that Rescue Training Camp is difficult," Subaru told her, amused. "I'm just surprised Gin decided to come along, too."

"Well, I mentioned before that the training is always helpful, even if I'm not in your division," Ginga replied, adjusting her duffel bag. "And it was a good opportunity for us sisters to all spend time together."

"I'm just surprised Cinque managed to keep up on those runs, with her short legs and all," Wendi joked, which made the rest of the sisters, minus the short one, laugh.

Dieci reached out to open the door. "Still, I hope father won't mind we're coming home at this hour. We said we'd be back tomorrow afternoon. I didn't think Ginga would manage to get us on that earlier flight."

As the girls filed in, Ginga smiled mysteriously and replied, "It pays to have connections!"

"Oh, dad, what are you doing up at this hour?" Subaru asked, as the five entered the living room and saw him in the kitchen in a bathrobe.

"Oh, uh, girls, I didn't expect you back at this time, heh," Genya replied, seeming a bit nervous. "I just got up for a midnight snack, heh heh. Um, you girls planning to go right to bed? You seem tired."

"We are," Dieci answered, yawning.

"Genya darling, what's taking you so long?" Lindy said as she came into the living room, wearing another one of their dad's bathrobes. "Oh, hello there girls!"

Four mouths dropped open. Cinque merely raised an eyebrow.

"T-this isn't what it looks like!" Genya insisted, embarrassed.

"When did THIS happen!?" Nove demanded to know, regaining the use of her voice first.

Lindy smiled, not the least bit ashamed, coming over to hold his arm. "Oh, Genya, they were going to find out sooner or later. It's been a month now, ever since I took your father to that trip to Las Vegas on Earth. Fascinating place. It's the funniest thing, we actually apparently woke up married in one of the hotels!"

Ginga began to tremble. "Married!? What about mom!?"

Subaru pumped her fist and grinned. "Go Dad!"

"Don't give him that, Ginga," Lindy admonished her. "He's been alone such a long time. Don't you think he deserves some happiness of his own?"

The eldest sister looked down. "I.. I suppose so."

"So, you are now our mother?" Cinque asked for clarification.

Lindy opened her mouth to reply, but was stopped by another voice.

"What's with all the noise down here, and what's taking so long?" another woman said, coming downstairs and entering the living room as well, also in a bathrobe belonging to their father.

Wendi recognized her easily. "Megane Alphino!?

Subaru and Nove's jaws worked up and down in unison, with no sound coming out, while Ginga's eyes rolled up into the back of her head as she collapsed.

"Are you also our mother now?" Cinque questioned.

Megane, at least, looked suitably red. "Well, when Lindy invited us to come visit Earth, I thought it would be a good chance to spend some time with an old friend, and well, things just sorta happened."

"Las Vegas apparently recognizes polygamies!" Lindy declared, smiling and flashing a V-sign with her fingers.

"DAD!?" Subaru growled, finding her voice first, then stomping up to him to grab his robe and pull it down. "What the HELL did you do!?"

"I'm sorry, I didn't mean for this to happen, it just kinda did!" Genya nearly whined.

"So, we have two mommies now?" Dieci questioned, scratching her head.

Nove nodded and rubbed her temples."And apparently this is how Vivio must feel."

"Any other surprises you wanna fill us in on, DAD?" Subaru asked, pulling him down a bit more.

Genya began sweating more as footsteps were head coming downstairs. "Well, um, that is..."

"What's all the racket down here and, oh, hello everyone!" Shamal said as she entered the room, smiling and waving, then turned to Lindy and Genya. "Have you told them the good news, yet?"

Subaru was so shocked, she let go of her father. "Sha-Sha-Sha-"

Cinque did another count, just to make sure, while Dieci decided she needed to sit down, and Wendi joined Ginga on the floor.

Nove sighed. "Yeah, they already mentioned the big marriage. I assume you went along and now you're our mother now, too? Why the hell didn't you just annul it at the time?"

Shamal giggled, as her hand went to her stomach. "Well, that's the thing, but it was a bit hard to annul once we discovered that each of us was pregnant."

Subaru followed Ginga and Wendi's example with a *thud*, while Nove growled and leapt the counter, proceeded to beat the crap out of her father, while this time Lindy actually looked a bit embarrassed and Megane chuckled nervously.

Cinque blinked, then pumped her fist. "Go dad?"

Edit: Page claim for, uh, things you don't see coming?

I didn't start howling with laughter until Shamal came down the stairs. Up until that point, I was trying to keep it inside. The minute she came down, I failed. Miserably.

"Las Vegas apparently recognizes polygamies!"

[Kaijo]

It occurred to me that I didn't add a bonus ending to this, so here ya go. Main fic can be found a few posts up here: Swingers

Spoiler for Swingers Bonus ending:

Bonus Ending:

Genya cleared his voice as he stood up. “Hello, and thank you all for coming to the first annual Nakajima family get together. I'm sure most of us already know each other, but you can use this chance to get better acquainted while enjoying the food.”

As he sat down to hesitant applause, Lindy smiled at him. “Good speech, dear!”

Genya sighed, wondering if this was a good idea, as his two other 6-month pregnant wives dug in.

“So, does that mean Vita is now my sister or something?” Nove questioned glumly.

“You have a problem with that?” the hammer knight told her darkly, although she didn't appear real amused, either.

“Well,technically speaking, according to how we are listed in the Bureau's registry, Shamal is listed as my mother, while Signum is an older sister and Vita is my younger sister,” Hayate admitted, clearly enjoying this.

“I suppose that makes us sisters as well, Testarossa,” Signum noted, but mainly focusing on the food.

Fate hid a slight smile. “I suppose it does. And Chrono is your brother now, too.”

“Please don't talk like that,” Chrono told her, as Amy patted his back sympathetically.

“Then I have fives mamas now?” Vivio wondered aloud as she counted on her fingers, then turned to Lutecia and smiled. “And I think we are sisters now, too!”

Lutecia, who had been enjoying giving great service to this bunch at her place, darkened a bit and looked down. “I-I guess so... oh well...”

Ginga continuing crying into her food, while Subaru looked at her three pregnant mothers and mumbled, “Stupid father doesn't breed; stupid father pollinates.”

Zafira and Arf just hid out under the table and munched on food, wonder how they were supposed to be related now.

Nanoha merely smiled and helped herself to the food, while singing softly. “That's the way they became the Genya Bunch~!”

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

It occurred to me that I didn't add a bonus ending to this, so here ya go. Main fic can be found a few posts up here: Swingers

Spoiler for Swingers Bonus ending:

Bonus Ending:

Genya cleared his voice as he stood up. “Hello, and thank you all for coming to the first annual Nakajima family get together. I'm sure most of us already know each other, but you can use this chance to get better acquainted while enjoying the food.”

As he sat down to hesitant applause, Lindy smiled at him. “Good speech, dear!”

Genya sighed, wondering if this was a good idea, as his two other 6-month pregnant wives dug in.

“So, does that mean Vita is now my sister or something?” Nove questioned glumly.

“You have a problem with that?” the hammer knight told her darkly, although she didn't appear real amused, either.

“Well,technically speaking, according to how we are listed in the Bureau's registry, Shamal is listed as my mother, while Signum is an older sister and Vita is my younger sister,” Hayate admitted, clearly enjoying this.

“I suppose that makes us sisters as well, Testarossa,” Signum noted, but mainly focusing on the food.

Fate hid a slight smile. “I suppose it does. And Chrono is your brother now, too.”

“Please don't talk like that,” Chrono told her, as Amy patted his back sympathetically.

“Then I have fives mamas now?” Vivio wondered aloud as she counted on her fingers, then turned to Lutecia and smiled. “And I think we are sisters now, too!”

Lutecia, who had been enjoying giving great service to this bunch at her place, darkened a bit and looked down. “I-I guess so... oh well...”

Ginga continuing crying into her food, while Subaru looked at her three pregnant mothers and mumbled, “Stupid father doesn't breed; stupid father pollinates.”

Zafira and Arf just hid out under the table and munched on food, wonder how they were supposed to be related now.

Nanoha merely smiled and helped herself to the food, while singing softly. “That's the way they became the Genya Bunch~!”

Haha, and I thought my family gatherings were huge

[Nanya01]

Well, I went and did it...

Numbers Omake is up on FF.Net now.

[deathcurse]

I just posted the Daily Activity Logs first chapter on Fanfiction.net . The rest will be coming after RB and I get a chance to edit and decide on what the release order should be (story chronology, or the Log # (the order they were written)......)

Also by the way, the link to the latest Log is posted under my signature, in case anyone wanted easy linking .

[Kaijo]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

The rest will be coming after RB and I get a chance to edit and decide on what the release order should be (story chronology, or the Log # (the order they were written)......)

Kyoto Animation, the studio that released the anime episodes of "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya," want to hire you and the Rev...

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

Kyoto Animation, the studio that released the anime episodes of "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya," want to hire you and the Rev...

Is that a commentary about which order we should use? Suggestions are welcome, really .

[Kaijo]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

Is that a commentary about which order we should use? Suggestions are welcome, really .

Oh heh, guess you didn't get the reference. When that studio went to make anime episodes of the light novels, they aired them in non-linear order. So there is both an "airing order" and "chronological order." In fact, at the end of each ep during the "coming next episode" preview, Kyon and Haruhi each give different episode titles for the next one, with one being the airing order and the other being the chronological order.

Hence the joke. :P

I watched that series in chronological order myself, as it helped me to make more sense of it.^^

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

Oh heh, guess you didn't get the reference. When that studio went to make anime episodes of the light novels, they aired them in non-linear order. So there is both an "airing order" and "chronological order." In fact, at the end of each ep during the "coming next episode" preview, Kyon and Haruhi each give different episode titles for the next one, with one being the airing order and the other being the chronological order.

Hence the joke. :P

I watched that series in chronological order myself, as it helped me to make more sense of it.^^

I got the joke, I was wondering if it was a comment or just a joke....from the rest of your post (correct me if I'm wrong) I'm assuming you're suggesting an in-story chronological order for chapters?

[Kaijo]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

I got the joke, I was wondering if it was a comment or just a joke....from the rest of your post (correct me if I'm wrong) I'm assuming you're suggesting an in-story chronological order for chapters?

Man, trick me into explaining a perfectly good joke, and thus making me look silly!

I suppose I was suggesting chrono order. :P

[RadiantBeam]

Well, posting things in chronological order for the FF.net version won't be a problem since we've more or less hammered things out here in the FFT. Actually keeping things in chronological order for posts to the FFT, on the other hand...

[TheShinySword]

If you can do out of chrono well it's really really cool and a really nice way to do story telling. If you can't and people complain then don't do it, simple as that. I can't comment any further 'cause I don't read it.


@Kaijo: I lawl'd and immediately imagined the giiiiiiiiaaaaaant spread of boxes they'd need to fit everyone in.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

It occurred to me that I didn't add a bonus ending to this, so here ya go. Main fic can be found a few posts up here: Swingers

Spoiler for Swingers Bonus ending:

Bonus Ending:

Genya cleared his voice as he stood up. “Hello, and thank you all for coming to the first annual Nakajima family get together. I'm sure most of us already know each other, but you can use this chance to get better acquainted while enjoying the food.”

As he sat down to hesitant applause, Lindy smiled at him. “Good speech, dear!”

Genya sighed, wondering if this was a good idea, as his two other 6-month pregnant wives dug in.

“So, does that mean Vita is now my sister or something?” Nove questioned glumly.

“You have a problem with that?” the hammer knight told her darkly, although she didn't appear real amused, either.

“Well,technically speaking, according to how we are listed in the Bureau's registry, Shamal is listed as my mother, while Signum is an older sister and Vita is my younger sister,” Hayate admitted, clearly enjoying this.

“I suppose that makes us sisters as well, Testarossa,” Signum noted, but mainly focusing on the food.

Fate hid a slight smile. “I suppose it does. And Chrono is your brother now, too.”

“Please don't talk like that,” Chrono told her, as Amy patted his back sympathetically.

“Then I have fives mamas now?” Vivio wondered aloud as she counted on her fingers, then turned to Lutecia and smiled. “And I think we are sisters now, too!”

Lutecia, who had been enjoying giving great service to this bunch at her place, darkened a bit and looked down. “I-I guess so... oh well...”

Ginga continuing crying into her food, while Subaru looked at her three pregnant mothers and mumbled, “Stupid father doesn't breed; stupid father pollinates.”

Zafira and Arf just hid out under the table and munched on food, wonder how they were supposed to be related now.

Nanoha merely smiled and helped herself to the food, while singing softly. “That's the way they became the Genya Bunch~!”

...

Kai, my love for you burns brighter than a thousand suns. Please join my harem.

[Kaijo]

@Shiny: glad you liked it^^

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

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Kai, my love for you burns brighter than a thousand suns. Please join my harem.

I thought you'd like that part. =D

But as for the harem, hmm, is there a good health plan? retirement fund? How many vacation days a year? Do I get a membership card?

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

But as for the harem, hmm, is there a good health plan? retirement fund? How many vacation days a year? Do I get a membership card?

You get a coloured collar?

(I can't be bothered to go back to the page where that came up, even though it'd be funny )

[sniperk]

After a few touch-ups I posted 'Mesmerized' on FF.net

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5732620/1/

[RadiantBeam]

So.... I have a snow day tomorrow.... *ponders*

Would be a good time to update some of my work. Maybe. Hopefully. I have the ideas, just not the inspiration...