Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

To try and get a little better here...

Fate is normally shy and stuff, but that was shot out as soon as she became a vampire who had to drink from others to live. I'll suck that one up under a "justifiable OOC". When I reveal her past, I will be sure to make her IC and slowly change over the years.

Nanoha....hm... I know she went hardcore a while, but generally for the most part I don't see her as "beam spam-chan" that most people call her. She's a kind teacher who's methods of teaching "don't seem that effective". And also she wants to teach "kindly and understandingly" and "take her time with her students". All are quote/semi-quotes from the series.

True, on the battlefield she has to do what she has to do... but do you see her cackling madly going " KILL KILL KILL KILLL!!!!!!!!!"? no, she fights with her best to push her beliefs on others (that's all war is, really). When out of combat, she's a nice girl. "The white devil" is just a fan made thing that blew up into "accepted canon", I think.

So, for Nanoha, should I make her more assertive?

Also, romance wise, a person alone is differnt than when they arn't. Nanoha may be shy now but she could easily dom Fate.

Remeber, Vampire!Fate is masochistic. She likes being dominated..... /gg

To make one thing clear: Personally I think both of them are justifiable OOC. I agree that Nanoha is hardly the White Devil most people like to see in her. Heck, most of the battles she tries to talk before shooting.

However, I'm not sure what you mean by 'soft-spoken'

Also on a minor note, where did you get the 'teaching methods not very effective' part?

[lil-d01]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Also on a minor note, where did you get the 'teaching methods not very effective' part?

I believe Nanoha mentioned something amongst those lines in episode 9. When Tiana is...angsting.

[Keroko]

Bah, thats just Nanoha bashing herself. Concidering how everyone hails her as the best of the best, I hardly find that reliable. If Nanoha's methods were not very effective, how come she's in the top of what training divisions have to offer?

[lil-d01]

I think that's why Satashi put that phrase in quotation marks. ;D

[Keroko]

I think there is a small misunderstanding on my part. When people say 'soft spoken' the personallities that come to mind are the likes of Hinata and such. Needles to say Nanoha does not fit that image at all.

[Enraptured]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I think there is a small misunderstanding on my part. When people say 'soft spoken' the personallities that come to mind are the likes of Hinata and such. Needles to say Nanoha does not fit that image at all.

Mm IMHO, Fate's more soft spoken than Nanoha, Nanoha reminds me more of the cheery happy girl with occasional overwork-and-breakdown problems. Where Fate will then come and comfort her and they'll share nice hot ... OKAY need to stop before I get carried away. xD
But then, that's just the general impression I got from StrikerS. Unlike A's and the first season, I only watched StrikerS once. Don't like it as much as the older seasons xP


Anyway, voted!
And I can't see that scene in V!F actually, unless it's after a looong time when Nanoha warms up to Fate. I was seeing it more as a StrikerS short actually, but knowing Satashi, it'll probably turn out awesome whatever way xD

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Enraptured

Mm IMHO, Fate's more soft spoken than Nanoha, Nanoha reminds me more of the cheery happy girl with occasional overwork-and-breakdown problems. Where Fate will then come and comfort her and they'll share nice hot ... OKAY need to stop before I get carried away. xD
But then, that's just the general impression I got from StrikerS. Unlike A's and the first season, I only watched StrikerS once. Don't like it as much as the older seasons xP

I think so too. I agree with you on this! Totally. LOL I like the way you think.

Anyway, voted!
And I can't see that scene in V!F actually, unless it's after a looong time when Nanoha warms up to Fate. I was seeing it more as a StrikerS short actually, but knowing Satashi, it'll probably turn out awesome whatever way xD

Yup. Nanoha has to warm up to Fate (I mean really comfortable if she were to do..uh rough things), among other things. Their relationship should have progressed to an extent where both can be very confident about uhm..sexual advances on each other. Or where Fate can convince Nanoha to be kinky with her without Nanoha's hair frizzing out. LOL So that might take a long time. I agree with the StrikerS comment too!

[Enraptured]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

I think so too. I agree with you on this! Totally. LOL I like the way you think.

Yup. Nanoha has to warm up to Fate (I mean really comfortable if she were to do..uh rough things to Fate), among other things. So that might take a long time. I agree with the StrikerS comment too!

HAHA great minds think alike? xD
LOL I laughed at 'do rough things to Fate'. xD I think a masochistic Fate is bloody hot.
Ps. It's totally OC, considering Precia's been whipping her since she was a kid D:

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Satashi

um...... lesse......

http://snappoll.com/poll/271166.php

XD

Vote and comment and I might do it. Remember to keep NSFW text in spoiler bars and mark them.

Spoiler for this is NSFW text on thoughts:

Do you want to see a more "rough passionate" form of lemon this time? scratching, biting, rolling over and pinning.......maybe some handcuffs, Nanoha seems to have Fate on a leash up there......

But ,as always, it would be tastefully done. nothing stupid, no "oh my gourd yes harder!" crap. But instead, just a "rougher, more frantic" type thing. Nanoha, clearly, would be in control and Fate would love every minute of it.

Comments and thoughts welcome. I originally did that as a joke but lots of people said "continue" so I'm doing vote thing now.

Hum. Well, my opinion is that yes, it would take a LONG time for Nanoha to warm up to this idea - especially the sheltered girl that she is in the fic right now. So I voted for a more... gentle sex scene. At first. :3

[wanwan1203]

Let's do this 4chan style:

Originally Posted by Enraptured

HAHA great minds think alike? xD
LOL I laughed at 'do rough things to Fate'. xD I think a masochistic Fate is bloody hot.
Ps. It's totally OC, considering Precia's been whipping her since she was a kid D:

>>Precia whipping her since she was a kid
>>whipping
You have a point! LOL

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Hum. Well, my opinion is that yes, it would take a LONG time for Nanoha to warm up to this idea - especially the sheltered girl that she is in the fic right now. So I voted for a more... gentle sex scene. At first. :3

>>"At first." yes, and then after that they can--*gets smacked*

[Enraptured]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Hum. Well, my opinion is that yes, it would take a LONG time for Nanoha to warm up to this idea - especially the sheltered girl that she is in the fic right now. So I voted for a more... gentle sex scene. At first. :3

-agrees xD though I voted for outright yes
I just can't see superstudent!Nanoha with a whip bending over handcuffed Fate
Meh I was thinking more of, V!Fate can show her masochistic streak by torturing herself with Nanoha's proximity and uh sweet-smelling blood ( -.- for lack of better words) until she snaps.

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Enraptured

-agrees xD though I voted for outright yes
I just can't see superstudent!Nanoha with a whip bending over handcuffed Fate
Meh I was thinking more of, V!Fate can show her masochistic streak by torturing herself with Nanoha's proximity and uh sweet-smelling blood ( -.- for lack of better words) until she snaps.

I lol'd at "sweet-smelling blood" or should that be delicious irresistible Nanoha brand blood.. Since Fate is torturing herself now by holding herself back...if going by what you said..then that means it's just a matter of time until she snaps! Hehe, all this speculation is making me anxious for the next update.

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Enraptured

-agrees xD though I voted for outright yes
I just can't see superstudent!Nanoha with a whip bending over handcuffed Fate
Meh I was thinking more of, V!Fate can show her masochistic streak by torturing herself with Nanoha's proximity and uh sweet-smelling blood ( -.- for lack of better words) until she snaps.

/just-read-Twilight (WHYYY). Nanoha's blood would smell wonderful to Fate, I'd bet. She's a virgin, and pure. Delicious. :3

And when Fate's passive in sex after being so dominate in the build up. Nanoha's bound to notice something and take initiative. that's what the girl does, take initiative.

[Enraptured]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

I lol'd at "sweet-smelling blood" or should that be delicious irresistible Nanoha brand blood.. Since Fate is torturing herself now by holding herself back...if going by what you said..then that means it's just a matter of time until she snaps! Hehe, all this speculation is making me anxious for the next update.

I had a sudden image of Nanoha's blood.
In a can. ;_;
On a shelf, being sold as branded blood. :K
Yeah I'm kinda excited for the next update too, why do you think I'm checking back every five minutes? xP

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

/just-read-Twilight (WHYYY). Nanoha's blood would smell wonderful to Fate, I'd bet. She's a virgin, and pure. Delicious. :3

And when Fate's passive in sex after being so dominate in the build up. Nanoha's bound to notice something and take initiative. that's what the girl does, take initiative.

Yeah I got the 'smell wonderful' thing from Twilight!
Did you read Meyer's website? Theres an extract on her other project where Twilight's rewritten in Edward's POV, it's kinda cool. xD Like Fate and Nanoha. Or am I thinking too much again? D:
Haha TAKE INITIATIVE, NANOHA, you're our last hope! <333
Unless Fate tells her bluntly.

Fate: Hey. I enjoy being dominated.
Nanoha: !!?!?!!???!?

PS. Hey whaddya know, I learned how to multi-quote! xD
ZZZ. I am totally distracted from doing my Lit essay and I blame nanofate xP

[Satashi]

Nanoha. No time to read back post, I had to get this done.

Dedicated to those going through finals and exams.

WARNING: This one is romantic/slightly citrus splashed!!!!!!! NSFW tag included!!!!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.16 ( I think/ NSFW):

"Nanoha" I moved slightly to look up at the girl I had just cuddled for that sweet come-on line. Her face was a cross between excited and sensual at the same time. "Do you... kiss on the fifth date?"

Fifth? Was this our... Fourth wasn't it? Or was she counting... Oh I see. Giving her a smile, I debated my answer. Was I really ready for my first kiss?

Seeing my hesitation, she changed her request. "May I... kiss your neck?"

"My neck?" I asked, shocked at how my words came out in a whisper. My heart started beating faster as she gently nuzzled my head to the side, body shifting to almost straddle mine. "Why...?"

"Because," The same reasoning yet again. "I am a vampire."

She rested her forehead against mine and opened her mouth to show me her fangs. "Are you..." I thought aloud, a little fearful. "One of those emo Gothic girls who really think they are a vampire?"

Fate closed her mouth and grinned. "I am a vampire," she stated again, leaning to breath against my neck. "That's the truth."

"What did I get into...?" I sighed out but gasped when Fate slid against me.

"May I?" She asked again, almost pleadingly. I didn't know what to say. Her small weight against my body, hot breath against my skin... Her hand was rubbing my side and hip snuggled against my legs. "Please?"

"Okay," I answered quickly, almost intoxicated by the rush of new feelings coursing through me. Instead of kissing, I felt her press against me more, mouth breathing against my collarbone. A small wet trail came and I realized, in a mix of shock and surprising anticipation, that she was licking me. Seconds later a kiss came.

It was wet, and flecked with her tongue again. Her body pushed harder against mine and our love seat slid back even more to recline fully. Her breath was against my damp skin, hand touching my side, body warmth seeping into me... It was almost too much, and I had to close my eyes and gasp to give it an outlet before it took over.

Another kiss, a third, a fourth, each one getting a little harder, a little more desperate. ' Just a little more' my mind told me. 'Just let her do a little more...'.

Fate started to suck, pulling my skin up and holding it. The rush of pleasure mixed with a sweet tang of pain made my back arch and her hand took the chance to snake under me. 'Just a little... you can stop later...'

She released the suction and immediately started again just above it. I started to lose track of what was going on, the new feelings overwhelming my sense of reason. 'It can stop later...'

A third nip and I was being pulled almost painfully against her. Fate's breath was panting almost, body rubbing against mine pleasantly. She lifted me up more and my head moved fully to the side on it's own to offer her more. My hand went to her hair, breathing slowed, heartbeat pounding.

Fate open her mouth wide, pressing it close to my skin, and stalled. Her pants were erratic, almost erotic... Her tongue tasted me again and once more she paused just as I felt her teeth touch me to nibble.

She pulled away and I looked slowly at her. Fate was flushed, breathing hard, and hips almost rocking against me. "We should stop," She panted desperately. "Or I'll... go too far."

"Oh... Okay..." My senses were coming back and I just looked at her. I felt strangely satisfied, and I had a new respect for her. She stopped where I couldn't, and respected me as a friend and a person she was interested in...

"Nanoha..." She took both my hands and squeezed them. It was almost as if she was coming down from a body blitz... "Please... be my girlfriend?"

I didn't have to think about it. Someone who could respect me this much and honestly try to make me happy and give me my space?

It was a dream come true.

"Yes."

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Enraptured

I had a sudden image of Nanoha's blood.
In a can. ;_;
On a shelf, being sold as branded blood. :K
Yeah I'm kinda excited for the next update too, why do you think I'm checking back every five minutes? xP

Me too, I'm re-watching Nanoha As to pass the time. (I'm on episode 10) Although I should really be going to bed now (it's 11:30pm here)..

Haha TAKE INITIATIVE, NANOHA, you're our last hope! <333
Unless Fate tells her bluntly.

Fate: Hey. I enjoy being dominated.
Nanoha: !!?!?!!???!?

XD or
Fate: Nanoha I would like it very much if you handcuff me to the bed and "do rough things to me".
Nanoha: D: O.O?!!!!

PS. Hey whaddya know, I learned how to multi-quote! xD

Ah well then
woot!!!

edit: B Fate really wants to torture herself eh.. Good luck Fate!! Citrus flavored update.. *blushes*

[Enraptured]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha. No time to read back post, I had to get this done.

Dedicated to those going through finals and exams.

WARNING: This one is romantic/slightly citrus splashed!!!!!!! NSFW tag included!!!!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.16 ( I think/ NSFW):

"Nanoha" I moved slightly to look up at the girl I had just cuddled for that sweet come-on line. Her face was a cross between excited and sensual at the same time. "Do you... kiss on the fifth date?"

Fifth? Was this our... Fourth wasn't it? Or was she counting... Oh I see. Giving her a smile, I debated my answer. Was I really ready for my first kiss?

Seeing my hesitation, she changed her request. "May I... kiss your neck?"

"My neck?" I asked, shocked at how my words came out in a whisper. My heart started beating faster as she gently nuzzled my head to the side, body shifting to almost straddle mine. "Why...?"

"Because," The same reasoning yet again. "I am a vampire."

She rested her forehead against mine and opened her mouth to show me her fangs. "Are you..." I thought aloud, a little fearful. "One of those emo Gothic girls who really think they are a vampire?"

Fate closed her mouth and grinned. "I am a vampire," she stated again, leaning to breath against my neck. "That's the truth."

"What did I get into...?" I sighed out but gasped when Fate slid against me.

"May I?" She asked again, almost pleadingly. I didn't know what to say. Her small weight against my body, hot breath against my skin... Her hand was rubbing my side and hip snuggled against my legs. "Please?"

"Okay," I answered quickly, almost intoxicated by the rush of new feelings coursing through me. Instead of kissing, I felt her press against me more, mouth breathing against my collarbone. A small wet trail came and I realized, in a mix of shock and surprising anticipation, that she was licking me. Seconds later a kiss came.

It was wet, and flecked with her tongue again. Her body pushed harder against mine and our love seat slid back even more to recline fully. Her breath was against my damp skin, hand touching my side, body warmth seeping into me... It was almost too much, and I had to close my eyes and gasp to give it an outlet before it took over.

Another kiss, a third, a fourth, each one getting a little harder, a little more desperate. ' Just a little more' my mind told me. 'Just let her do a little more...'.

Fate started to suck, pulling my skin up and holding it. The rush of pleasure mixed with a sweet tang of pain made my back arch and her hand took the chance to snake under me. 'Just a little... you can stop later...'

She released the suction and immediately started again just above it. I started to lose track of what was going on, the new feelings overwhelming my sense of reason. 'It can stop later...'

A third nip and I was being pulled almost painfully against her. Fate's breath was panting almost, body rubbing against mine pleasantly. She lifted me up more and my head moved fully to the side on it's own to offer her more. My hand went to her hair, breathing slowed, heartbeat pounding.

Fate open her mouth wide, pressing it close to my skin, and stalled. Her pants were erratic, almost erotic... Her tongue tasted me again and once more she paused just as I felt her teeth touch me to nibble.

She pulled away and I looked slowly at her. Fate was flushed, breathing hard, and hips almost rocking against me. "We should stop," She panted desperately. "Or I'll... go too far."

"Oh... Okay..." My senses were coming back and I just looked at her. I felt strangely satisfied, and I had a new respect for her. She stopped where I couldn't, and respected me as a friend and a person she was interested in...

"Nanoha..." She took both my hands and squeezed them. It was almost as if she was coming down from a body blitz... "Please... be my girlfriend?"

I didn't have to think about it. Someone who could respect me this much and honestly try to make me happy and give me my space?

It was a dream come true.

"Yes."

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

AHHH BEEEEE!!!
Omg that was... <3333
Fate is so!!!
I really can't find any word to describe -.-
I'll comment again later when my brain starts functioning properly D:

@wanwan, hee we share the same time zone!!! : D

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha. No time to read back post, I had to get this done.

Dedicated to those going through finals and exams.

WARNING: This one is romantic/slightly citrus splashed!!!!!!! NSFW tag included!!!!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.16 ( I think/ NSFW):

"Nanoha" I moved slightly to look up at the girl I had just cuddled for that sweet come-on line. Her face was a cross between excited and sensual at the same time. "Do you... kiss on the fifth date?"

Fifth? Was this our... Fourth wasn't it? Or was she counting... Oh I see. Giving her a smile, I debated my answer. Was I really ready for my first kiss?

Seeing my hesitation, she changed her request. "May I... kiss your neck?"

"My neck?" I asked, shocked at how my words came out in a whisper. My heart started beating faster as she gently nuzzled my head to the side, body shifting to almost straddle mine. "Why...?"

"Because," The same reasoning yet again. "I am a vampire."

She rested her forehead against mine and opened her mouth to show me her fangs. "Are you..." I thought aloud, a little fearful. "One of those emo Gothic girls who really think they are a vampire?"

Fate closed her mouth and grinned. "I am a vampire," she stated again, leaning to breath against my neck. "That's the truth."

"What did I get into...?" I sighed out but gasped when Fate slid against me.

"May I?" She asked again, almost pleadingly. I didn't know what to say. Her small weight against my body, hot breath against my skin... Her hand was rubbing my side and hip snuggled against my legs. "Please?"

"Okay," I answered quickly, almost intoxicated by the rush of new feelings coursing through me. Instead of kissing, I felt her press against me more, mouth breathing against my collarbone. A small wet trail came and I realized, in a mix of shock and surprising anticipation, that she was licking me. Seconds later a kiss came.

It was wet, and flecked with her tongue again. Her body pushed harder against mine and our love seat slid back even more to recline fully. Her breath was against my damp skin, hand touching my side, body warmth seeping into me... It was almost too much, and I had to close my eyes and gasp to give it an outlet before it took over.

Another kiss, a third, a fourth, each one getting a little harder, a little more desperate. ' Just a little more' my mind told me. 'Just let her do a little more...'.

Fate started to suck, pulling my skin up and holding it. The rush of pleasure mixed with a sweet tang of pain made my back arch and her hand took the chance to snake under me. 'Just a little... you can stop later...'

She released the suction and immediately started again just above it. I started to lose track of what was going on, the new feelings overwhelming my sense of reason. 'It can stop later...'

A third nip and I was being pulled almost painfully against her. Fate's breath was panting almost, body rubbing against mine pleasantly. She lifted me up more and my head moved fully to the side on it's own to offer her more. My hand went to her hair, breathing slowed, heartbeat pounding.

Fate open her mouth wide, pressing it close to my skin, and stalled. Her pants were erratic, almost erotic... Her tongue tasted me again and once more she paused just as I felt her teeth touch me to nibble.

She pulled away and I looked slowly at her. Fate was flushed, breathing hard, and hips almost rocking against me. "We should stop," She panted desperately. "Or I'll... go too far."

"Oh... Okay..." My senses were coming back and I just looked at her. I felt strangely satisfied, and I had a new respect for her. She stopped where I couldn't, and respected me as a friend and a person she was interested in...

"Nanoha..." She took both my hands and squeezed them. It was almost as if she was coming down from a body blitz... "Please... be my girlfriend?"

I didn't have to think about it. Someone who could respect me this much and honestly try to make me happy and give me my space?

It was a dream come true.

"Yes."

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Definately B this time, that was a fun part, wonder what people will say if they see the bites.

But, wasnt this part 17, part 16 was back on page 232?

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

I lol'd at "sweet-smelling blood" or should that be delicious irresistible Nanoha brand blood.. Since Fate is torturing herself now by holding herself back...if going by what you said..then that means it's just a matter of time until she snaps! Hehe, all this speculation is making me anxious for the next update.

wait till Nanoha is a Paladin and finds out Fate is not playing a Vampire
then she will go crazy and before get a break down

Originally Posted by Enraptured

I had a sudden image of Nanoha's blood.
In a can. ;_;
On a shelf, being sold as branded blood. :K
Yeah I'm kinda excited for the next update too, why do you think I'm checking back every five minutes? xP

I thought of blood in wine bottles
the best staff for Fate
filled by Nanoha herself*filling the injection and so on* because Fate respect her to much, to drink or only drink, when there is a special moment^^
*rambling goes to far in future*

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha. No time to read back post, I had to get this done.

Dedicated to those going through finals and exams.

WARNING: This one is romantic/slightly citrus splashed!!!!!!! NSFW tag included!!!!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.16 ( I think/ NSFW):

"Nanoha" I moved slightly to look up at the girl I had just cuddled for that sweet come-on line. Her face was a cross between excited and sensual at the same time. "Do you... kiss on the fifth date?"

Fifth? Was this our... Fourth wasn't it? Or was she counting... Oh I see. Giving her a smile, I debated my answer. Was I really ready for my first kiss?

Seeing my hesitation, she changed her request. "May I... kiss your neck?"

"My neck?" I asked, shocked at how my words came out in a whisper. My heart started beating faster as she gently nuzzled my head to the side, body shifting to almost straddle mine. "Why...?"

"Because," The same reasoning yet again. "I am a vampire."

She rested her forehead against mine and opened her mouth to show me her fangs. "Are you..." I thought aloud, a little fearful. "One of those emo Gothic girls who really think they are a vampire?"

Fate closed her mouth and grinned. "I am a vampire," she stated again, leaning to breath against my neck. "That's the truth."

"What did I get into...?" I sighed out but gasped when Fate slid against me.

"May I?" She asked again, almost pleadingly. I didn't know what to say. Her small weight against my body, hot breath against my skin... Her hand was rubbing my side and hip snuggled against my legs. "Please?"

"Okay," I answered quickly, almost intoxicated by the rush of new feelings coursing through me. Instead of kissing, I felt her press against me more, mouth breathing against my collarbone. A small wet trail came and I realized, in a mix of shock and surprising anticipation, that she was licking me. Seconds later a kiss came.

It was wet, and flecked with her tongue again. Her body pushed harder against mine and our love seat slid back even more to recline fully. Her breath was against my damp skin, hand touching my side, body warmth seeping into me... It was almost too much, and I had to close my eyes and gasp to give it an outlet before it took over.

Another kiss, a third, a fourth, each one getting a little harder, a little more desperate. ' Just a little more' my mind told me. 'Just let her do a little more...'.

Fate started to suck, pulling my skin up and holding it. The rush of pleasure mixed with a sweet tang of pain made my back arch and her hand took the chance to snake under me. 'Just a little... you can stop later...'

She released the suction and immediately started again just above it. I started to lose track of what was going on, the new feelings overwhelming my sense of reason. 'It can stop later...'

A third nip and I was being pulled almost painfully against her. Fate's breath was panting almost, body rubbing against mine pleasantly. She lifted me up more and my head moved fully to the side on it's own to offer her more. My hand went to her hair, breathing slowed, heartbeat pounding.

Fate open her mouth wide, pressing it close to my skin, and stalled. Her pants were erratic, almost erotic... Her tongue tasted me again and once more she paused just as I felt her teeth touch me to nibble.

She pulled away and I looked slowly at her. Fate was flushed, breathing hard, and hips almost rocking against me. "We should stop," She panted desperately. "Or I'll... go too far."

"Oh... Okay..." My senses were coming back and I just looked at her. I felt strangely satisfied, and I had a new respect for her. She stopped where I couldn't, and respected me as a friend and a person she was interested in...

"Nanoha..." She took both my hands and squeezed them. It was almost as if she was coming down from a body blitz... "Please... be my girlfriend?"

I didn't have to think about it. Someone who could respect me this much and honestly try to make me happy and give me my space?

It was a dream come true.

"Yes."

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

thats hot
good move Fate

B

[wanwan1203]

Someone needs to do a crackfic about this Nanoha in a can thing! er I mean Nanoha's blood in a can/wine bottle/carton/injection/tetra pack/vending machine/etc. Where's TheShinySword?? Paging TSS. Requesting for daily supply of crack on the thread.

Fate: I need my Nanoha fix.
Nanoha: oO;;

@Enraptured: really? @.@ I'm getting double vision already due to lack of sleep. must. sleep. now. must. resist. *passes out* And I visited your blog and I was literally LOLing at the Fate addiction. And about that faux "demonstration" with the uh... you know. you're funny.

edit: page claim. must be my lucky day. oO page claimed for lemony part of V!F and Nanoha's blood!