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Only once when Tate slip an innocent comment about Kanzahsi finally, in the form of Tranquil fury "Do you even knew what I feel? Being compared all the time and feeling that all my effort goes nowhere?" Tatenashi return the favor though. "You know, Ichika doens't even saw me as one of the girls. I belive the same thing happen to a lot of people... they only saw me as an icon of perfect achievement. They don't even saw me as human." :| Quote:
If the plan goes right, Dan and Utsuho will be closer earlier than expected as Utsuho gave him number and e-mail ardress. By the time Festival rolls in, they're just need confession to be official. Dan still have to cope with his darkside and regret about it. :|
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2012-01-12, 01:41 | Link #17662 |
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@ Senpai - What powers do Ichika and Madoka have here again?
Honest opinion: Both sisters got it pretty bad Regret about what? He's dating a cute girl and things finally look up. Speaking of which, how does the family react
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2012-01-12, 01:51 | Link #17663 | |
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Ichika: Extranormal vision, enhanced reflex, near-eidetic memory, kinaesthetic, enhanced regenreration, super immunity.
Madoka: Eidetic memory, natural compass, flexibility, spatial awareness, enhanced regeneration, super adaptation. Quote:
His paranoid is overboard, but understandable given what he experienced. After all, he's a 15 year old guy with a lot of doubt and dilemma. :|
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2012-01-12, 01:53 | Link #17664 |
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I am altering Yuya's personality to something....interesting...
His new theme is Balance and his unit is so well-balanced that it is good at nothing (just like your Typical Eastern RPG hero!) *Age will start the pilot fic when he get into the mood*
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2012-01-12, 01:56 | Link #17665 |
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@ Senpai - Most of those can be hidden. But regeneration? That'll cause some questions.
Do you know why OC's (mine included) tend to have tragic pasts? This is true for every OC out there. The age thing is not a big deal here, right? @ Treme - Western RPG heroes tend to be Jack of all stats too
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2012-01-12, 02:03 | Link #17666 | ||
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I don't know why, but it's always work that way. :| Naw
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2012-01-12, 02:11 | Link #17668 | |
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Mind you what exactly Ichika's reason to say in I.S.A.? He doesn't want to be come a... err... lab rats.
And I.S.A. medical personnel are damn professional. THat's why Meister is a great writer, it shown that all his effort making normal characters not wasted Quote:
Everyone doesn't look at the age difference that much, since it means Dan will have a girlfriend that can guide him to path of righteousness
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2012-01-12, 02:18 | Link #17669 |
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Doesn't professional mean they won't let him go without explaining?
All of us use bad pasts as a crutch of some sort, I guess. Still, I want to avoid the angst proboem that follows. Gen must feel so proud Ran on the other hand might be shocked that her brother got a date before she did
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2012-01-12, 02:23 | Link #17670 | |||
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Dan: "How? I don't know we just met and hit it well... stuff happens but somehow this works" Ran: "How that could explain anything??" Ren: "Maybe you just need to broaden your view"
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2012-01-12, 02:26 | Link #17671 |
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@ Senpai - So bribing them is impossible? Failing that, can a patient convince them to keep a secret?
Rin's had a pretty normal life, actually. Her parents are divorced, but that really doesn't make her past dark. Of course, now Ran has someone to talk to if she wants info on Ichika How could Utsuho say no to her stepsister?
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2012-01-12, 02:30 | Link #17672 | |||
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Of course, Utsuho can't say Ichika has massive supply of girlfriend material already. (Ran already knew but still it's improper)
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2012-01-12, 02:35 | Link #17673 |
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@ Senpai - So any info taken is not given to anyome except the patient?
Do Ran and Cecilia becomw friends in your story? They seem to have a funny dynamic already. Jtsuho might want to tell her that her Oujo-sama likes Ichika too
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2012-01-12, 02:41 | Link #17674 | |||
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Anyway, I think we should stop about Dan. I don't want to spill to much before write it for real (I tend to change my cocnept a LOT when poured it to the draft). Jsut hope I can come with something decent.
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2012-01-12, 02:45 | Link #17675 |
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@ Senpai - Patients guardian? That's gonna a problem to write
Just curious, but will they stay in ISA or go back to their home countries when they grow up? Charlotte's stuck till Dunoa'a dealt with. Does Ichika not like anyone/is annoyed with anyone in canon? Apart from enemies, obviously.
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2012-01-12, 02:48 | Link #17676 | ||
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Don't see any, except if you're talking about Irish....
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So, no one in particular.
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2012-01-12, 02:52 | Link #17677 |
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@ Senpai - Yes, I was talking about him. This is gonna be a pain to write since a blood test would show a massive amount of drug residue.
I meant Cecilia and Rin Has Ichika imroved his piloting skills much since Volume 3?
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2012-01-12, 02:59 | Link #17678 | |
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They did, and become a Tsundere for each other. Canon or fanon?
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2012-01-12, 03:07 | Link #17680 | |
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Now, how about Eric, Eddie and Clay? Remember, Eric has 4 scars on his face, one of them cutting downwards across his eye. Like in this picture below. Spoiler for Eric's Eyescar:
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