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Evil Rick · 2008-10-01, 11:53

Well, here is version 3

C & C will be apreciated

Eps~ · 2008-10-01, 11:59

Those moving bars look mighty familiar!

It would look better without those lines in between. You can probably do that by just setting it on lighter.

Drake · 2008-10-01, 12:18

Cheers for the comments and C&C guys.

I've tried the same bold layout with a different image and colour and even managed to keep the curved edges without losing to much quality when i optimized it.

Original entry:

Which one do you think i should stick with ?

Evil Rick · 2008-10-01, 12:20

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eps~

Those moving bars look mighty familiar!

It would look better without those lines in between. You can probably do that by just setting it on lighter.

Yep! Your tuto

Version 4

C&C?

ryuukazi · 2008-10-01, 13:18

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cyz

It would be nice if you could see the instrument she was holding. How 'bout tilting it?

the render's guitar is behind the render so i choosed to focus on the head phones

Drake · 2008-10-01, 13:25

Affix you could edit in the guitar head behind her right sholder so it looks like she's slung it. Should look ok since the strap is already there.

=]

ryuukazi · 2008-10-01, 13:27

exactly thats a good idea tho it might kill the flow of things, ill test it out.

Thanks Drake

Final entry

Drake · 2008-10-01, 13:55

Much better =D

Faeyice · 2008-10-01, 14:02

This is what I've come up with so far. C&C please.

Marina · 2008-10-01, 16:16

Faeyice - very nice, I love the faded/retro feel to it (I hope that's what you wanted!), but I do want to know what the black squiggle is on the very left...

Evil Rick - Those bars look much better than your original version. Someone already mentioned this, but have you tried getting the bars to move separately? Like, while one is moving down, the other is moving up?

Drake - I think both of them look good, but I have to honestly say I still lean towards the original blue just because I like the render better. I might change my mind if the red one were fixed a little because as of now the render is a bit blurry, especially around her face.

AffiX - looks good! I love that particular render, I have it, just haven't gotten around to doing anything with it >.<

PG - also another render that I really like. My only thing with it is that the way it is now, I'm reading it "listening music." Are they supposed to be separate phrases like "listening" and then "music," or are you aiming more for "listening TO music?"

Endrance · 2008-10-01, 16:24

Tried speeding up the animation just a lil bit but i dunno if it should be faster or slower.....C&C peez

escimo · 2008-10-01, 16:28

Evil Rick, How about making the bar animation in 4 separate slices with different frame delays, if you use delays that are not dividable by each other it'd make it almost random.

Faeyice · 2008-10-01, 16:47

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marina

Faeyice - very nice, I love the faded/retro feel to it (I hope that's what you wanted!), but I do want to know what the black squiggle is on the very left...

LOL, I don't even know how I managed to get what I have now with what I started making. It was gray when I started out. 8D;

Oh, that's a brush I used. It WAS part of a tape cassette brush, but I only had the part that showed the film coming out of it. I guess I should remove it.

^Version without the tape, and Final Entry unless stated otherwise.

Drake · 2008-10-01, 17:03

Didnt really notice the any initial blurring myself but i've give it a bit of a sharpening anyway.

v3

The_Artist · 2008-10-01, 17:25

Quote:

Originally Posted by AtomicoX

Bah, I abandoned the anime idea and instead did something else.

FINAL ENTRY

Very nice. That's my kind of style. Though there is something i just can't put my finger on..

escimo · 2008-10-01, 17:38

Well, guess I'll post something as well. Probably will not enter this though.

Funny, got to pick the theme and now I'm struggling to find inspiration. Oh well, oh well...

NorthernFallout · 2008-10-01, 17:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by The_Artist

Very nice. That's my kind of style. Though there is something i just can't put my finger on..

If I could make a guess, it would be the text. It's the only thing I'm not happy about, but I didn't come up with anything else.

The_Artist · 2008-10-01, 18:44

I can't find any good "anime" renders to use ):
Anyone want to help?

Faeyice · 2008-10-01, 19:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by The_Artist

I can't find any good "anime" renders to use ):
Anyone want to help?

Here's a few I found yesterday when I was looking for some.

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...nders/Aoi2.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...s/guitar-5.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...tarockstar.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...itarristas.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...icismylife.png

Arceon · 2008-10-01, 19:29

I ran across a new render. . .and well I had to use it:

C&C?

@Haku: I dunno the spazzy look actually gives it a pretty cool feel to it. . .(Man I feel like such an outcast. . I got no animated sigs >>) Edit: Post Baleted D:

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Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	Well, here is version 3 C & C will be apreciated __________________

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Eps~ Busy busy busy Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Slovenia Age: 36	Those moving bars look mighty familiar! It would look better without those lines in between. You can probably do that by just setting it on lighter. __________________ My Graphics Workshop

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Drake dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Northern Ireland	Cheers for the comments and C&C guys. I've tried the same bold layout with a different image and colour and even managed to keep the curved edges without losing to much quality when i optimized it. Original entry: Which one do you think i should stick with ? __________________ Last edited by Drake; 2008-10-01 at 17:03.

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Drake dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Northern Ireland	Affix you could edit in the guitar head behind her right sholder so it looks like she's slung it. Should look ok since the strap is already there. =] __________________

2008-10-01, 13:27	Link #67
ryuukazi Empire of the Sun Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Empire of the Sun	exactly thats a good idea tho it might kill the flow of things, ill test it out. Thanks Drake *Final entry* __________________ Thought I’d never see, The love you found in me, Now it’s changing all the time, Living in a rhythm where the minutes working overtime Last edited by ryuukazi; 2008-10-04 at 16:29.

2008-10-01, 13:55	Link #68
Drake dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Northern Ireland	Much better =D __________________

2008-10-01, 14:02	Link #69
Faeyice it's animal, unbelievable Graphic Designer Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: U.S.A	This is what I've come up with so far. C&C please. __________________

2008-10-01, 16:24	Link #71
Endrance ~Rock ☆~ Graphic Designer Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In The Farplane	Tried speeding up the animation just a lil bit but i dunno if it should be faster or slower.....C&C peez __________________ Endrance's Sigs

2008-10-01, 16:28	Link #72
escimo Paparazzi Join Date: Mar 2008 Age: 41	Evil Rick, How about making the bar animation in 4 separate slices with different frame delays, if you use delays that are not dividable by each other it'd make it almost random.

2008-10-01, 17:03	Link #74
Drake dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Northern Ireland	Didnt really notice the any initial blurring myself but i've give it a bit of a sharpening anyway. v3 __________________ Last edited by Drake; 2008-10-01 at 17:14.

2008-10-01, 17:38	Link #76
escimo Paparazzi Join Date: Mar 2008 Age: 41	Well, guess I'll post something as well. Probably will not enter this though. Funny, got to pick the theme and now I'm struggling to find inspiration. Oh well, oh well...

2008-10-01, 18:44	Link #78
The_Artist Creation Join Date: Aug 2008	I can't find any good "anime" renders to use ): Anyone want to help?

2008-10-01, 19:29	Link #80
Arceon Rediscovered Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Requiem Age: 30	I ran across a new render. . .and well I had to use it: C&C? @Haku: I dunno the spazzy look actually gives it a pretty cool feel to it. . .(Man I feel like such an outcast. . I got no animated sigs >>) Edit: Post Baleted D: __________________ --Gallery of the Arceon-- Last edited by Arceon; 2008-10-01 at 20:05.