Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

*Read Wavehawk's fic again*

...............................................AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

- Are you guys gettign some idea of what <Ren> is like now?

[Eratas123]

Honestly it isn't as scary as I thought it would be...I'm surprised that <Ren> isn't just blatantly killing them but then again she might be knocking them out to torture later...>_<

[HasuMasu]

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- Are you guys gettign some idea of what <Ren> is like now?

Not exactly.


Oh, and here's a little snippet from mine,
tell me what ya'll think.

Spoiler for BEHOLD!!!:

Crap.

As I lay under a girl’s bed in the hopes to ambush her,
a sharp pain had shot through my chest.

(Not again.)

It goes without saying that I would let out sounds of
pain like everyone else, this fact is most regrettable, why is it you ask?
Simple, I have now revealed my position to the target
who exited the shower just as I experienced the pain; truly
her timing could not have been worse.

Had she found out any other way, I’d have been attacked
under the assumption of coming here with perverted interests,
which I guarantee you is absolutely not the case.

*ahem*

Luckily enough, writhing in pain caused her to react in a way
that didn’t get me blown to pieces, seeing me like that instantly
put her in panic mode and despite only being in a towel, carried
my off on her IS all the way to the infirmary.

See, Rin? You can drop the tsun if you want to.

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

...I'm surprised that <Ren> isn't just blatantly killing them

- Evil sadistic grin

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- Evil sadistic grin

*Aims gun at <Ren>*

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- Evil sadistic grin

I have a bad feeling about this....
*Reload sentry gun*

[wavehawk]

Nuagua...was going to post this as part of a different set tomorrow, but....

<Ren> finally finished chaining up the three thoroughly stoned on
morphine security troops, all of them stupidly happy in their sleep.
They were the weakest links, not important outside of the numbers they
possessed. Of the group, <Ren> needed only focus on the intelligent,
dangerous ones.

Such as the bloodied and broken brit all over the floor. <Ren> could not
risk the man recovering anytime soon, and fracturing his limbs was the
fastest way to do so. Neville was still breathing, if shallowly. Both
his elbows and wrists were broken, knees shattered. One shinbone was
jutting out of his pants leg. It was a sight that would make most other
girls <Ren>'s age go sick with shock.

She thought no more of him, making a mental note that such force was
sufficient to shatter a fully-grown man without killing him.

<Ren> then frowned at her situation. She'd already used four of the five
styrettes. It was the fastest and quietest method of eliminating the
spanish man and the three goons. The original plan was to eliminate the
security contingent and stick a styrette into Cousseran. Unconscious, he
would have been easy to deliver to HQ if they wanted.

Now, however, the Dunois security team was changing their tactics. They
were breaking up into smaller teams--eight two-man teams, and another
pair guarding Cousseran himself. <Ren> had to move up her plan a lot
faster to keep her lead over the men.

It would have been easier to kill them, but <Ren> loved the challenge.

[Eratas123]

<Ren> really isn't very pragmatic is she? Looking for a challenge when your outnumbered and they have guns is pretty daredevil like.

[HasuMasu]

I now bestow upon you the title of fanfic master.

[MeisterBabylon]

I don't know. Even though I did write something grimdarky, it was just meant as another exercise to abuse the technology found in canon.

Armored Stratos Raionman made use of ridiculously designed MPIS that no one wanted to build, until an ISper appears.

Masked Stratos Fourze was a crack adventure making use of Equalizers to boost the powers of MPIS.

IS: The Black Hare (you guys call it the grimdark fic) focuses on a 2nd year student who moonlights as a globe-trotting 1 girl army. She is armed with only an automatic grenade launcher and chainsaw, but she topples dictators and research institutes with equal ease. It's because she has a salvaged 1G IS, she is backed by VEDA, and that she's a genetically-engineered technologically-reinforced super soldier. Her life is told through the eyes of a medical student who finds himself embroiled in her affairs again and again.

You see links to the Schwarzehase? Well, why not?

"For these are my Schwarzehase, And They Shall Know No Fear."

~~~

So yeah, I hate the harem. I wish the characters were better designed. But the technology? That was what I came for.

[HasuMasu]

I can hardly fear anything related to bunnies.

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by Detective-san

I can hardly fear anything related to bunnies.

Have you ever watched the grim adventures of billy? Yandere bunny gives me nightmares.

Side Note-Wonder whats taking EthernalRain so long? Its been about 2-3 days since I gave the chapter 3 draft.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Have you ever watched the grim adventures of billy? Yandere bunny gives me nightmares.

Side Note-Wonder whats taking EthernalRain so long? Its been about 2-3 days since I gave the chapter 3 draft.

Hmm, did he send you a note or something? Maybe there's more edit to do than you expect like mine for example... or his personal issues, online or offline.

To think that Blitz do 70% of the chapter and even the draft is damn epic....how embarrassing

[Eratas123]

Thats the thing, He hasn't sent a message and I even asked him if he got chapter 3 and he didn't reply to that either. Im getting kinda worried and I wonder if I should just post the draft right now or keep waiting.

[Silver-Throne]

I`ll try looking for the software/website which is a grammar checker.
I might need it just in case

[HasuMasu]

Your English is fine.

[Yachiyo]

I'm outta here

[Eratas123]

OPed again Yachiyo? Any plans for a new fic?

[Yachiyo]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

OPed again Yachiyo? Any plans for a new fic?

actually, yes, new fic maybe release this later october or november depends on how fast I can construct the plot.

[Eratas123]

So guys,Wait out for the beta or post the draft now? What do you think

Side note- Good Luck Charlotte-chan