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Old 2008-07-15, 07:45   Link #2641
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@Keroko: No warning as in no stories on how he gain her affections, like dates, marriage proposals, the actual wedding events....
It pretty much threw my suggestion of building it brick by brick in the trashbin ;/
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Old 2008-07-15, 07:47   Link #2642
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@Keroko: No warning as in no stories on how he gain her affections, like dates, marriage proposals, the actual wedding events....
*rolls eyes* He just now made a rebuilt of Kha's profile, grinding it down to the basics. Of course he's not going to have any stories yet! If you want stories, there are plenty of them in Old Cadia, with the old Kha builds.
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:00   Link #2643
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*rolls eyes* He just now made a rebuilt of Kha's profile, grinding it down to the basics. Of course he's not going to have any stories yet! If you want stories, there are plenty of them in Old Cadia, with the old Kha builds.
Correct me if I'm wrong but I don't recall any of the Kha stories he done ever touch on their relationship aside that they are somewhat going steady.

Besides I'm treating this Kha as a totally new character. How would you feel suddenly out of the blue, someone just came in and claimed for example Signum, as his wife, with little to no warning at all?

Since Kha got the idea from Aria, I assumed he was also shocked to heard that Alice was suddenly married with little warning at all.

All in all I'm objecting out of principle, that is if you want something, you work for it. What Kha did is, to me, akin to having one's cake and eating it too.
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:10   Link #2644
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Now, now, let's calm down, drink tea and have some cake.

For what I see, this version of Kha presented by Kha is pretty much a quick run-down of the more fulfiling profile to come. You WILL give us that complete profile soon, will you not, eh, old chap?

Let's just treat this new piece of cake as a trailer of sorts, lie back and wait with a smile.

Of course, unless that's really all that there is......

*stocks up torture tools for annoyed Cadians*
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:16   Link #2645
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OBJECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No way are you getting Fate that easily!!! I object to the fact you just with no warning whatsoever married Fate like that. Not even a single date! Nothing even on the relationship. You already have Sophia already or is she up for grabs now?
Oh oh let me ROFL first... XD XD XD

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I'll have to work on it, I'll get them out today I think.
Thanks I'll definitely need them. >:3

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Not glaring, just going at what happens when you take all the Khrack away from Kha (though honestly, there were a lot of points in his profile which were fine as they were or only needed minimal changes).
Why else is Khrack named after him?

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Except for the fact that Kha's target has always been Fate from day one? I fail to see the 'no warning' you're talking about Tshou.
Actually, there isn't any profiles. I just wanted to see how shafted I could do this, and really really shafted it was!

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While Ginga is my target, what Kha did was to cheapen the efforts that the rest of us put in in trying to get our OCs gain the girl of their affections. Besides the only OC X CC I truly support is Hayaurion. Seriously, I really love that scene where Aurion puts his hands on Hayate.
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@Keroko: No warning as in no stories on how he gain her affections, like dates, marriage proposals, the actual wedding events....
Well, it was all background to canon, I didn't see why I should bother. After all, its all boring everyday stuff.

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It pretty much threw my suggestion of building it brick by brick in the trashbin ;/
That I did. XD

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*rolls eyes* He just now made a rebuilt of Kha's profile, grinding it down to the basics. Of course he's not going to have any stories yet! If you want stories, there are plenty of them in Old Cadia, with the old Kha builds.
Keroko, thanks for the defence, but this isn't Rebuilt of Kha. I'm not even serious. Didn't expect anyone to take it seriously...

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Correct me if I'm wrong but I don't recall any of the Kha stories he done ever touch on their relationship aside that they are somewhat going steady.

Besides I'm treating this Kha as a totally new character. How would you feel suddenly out of the blue, someone just came in and claimed for example Signum, as his wife, with little to no warning at all?

Since Kha got the idea from Aria, I assumed he was also shocked to heard that Alice was suddenly married with little warning at all.

All in all I'm objecting out of principle, that is if you want something, you work for it. What Kha did is, to me, akin to having one's cake and eating it too.
...that was the most important point of why I made this profile. :/

Okay in all due seriousness, I modeled this after my own experience. We never even knew we were dating, just running around enjoying each other's company. Then I got drafted into the Army, and that was when we made things clear. After that, EVERYONE in our circles were kinda shocked; before, they were joking and laughing and prodding, not taking their jokes seriously, and then we kinda... developed something out of the blue.

In other words, this profile was compiled from the perspective of Anita's and my friends POV. I guess I should've added a few more lines about Keroko and Nanoha nudging Fate along.

However, don't expect me to develop this timeline, it's meant to be dead. Kha the Original is going along Full Stream. Treat this profile like a Tengen Toppa Gurren-Lagann Parallel Works video, shall we?
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:16   Link #2646
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Besides I'm treating this Kha as a totally new character. How would you feel suddenly out of the blue, someone just came in and claimed for example Signum, as his wife, with little to no warning at all?
Not much, really. Free author world and all that, in fact I remember USB snatching up Nanoha once. Now if someone were to write their characters into my stories and steal two characters away from eachother (say, someone writes a chapter of my Vivio/Syn story and steals Vivio) then that's a different story, but if someone writes their own stories and has their character and Vivio come together, or even merely posts a profile sayin so, I wouldn't raise any trouble over it.

Besides, we already have multiple people here who have stories with their OC's in love, or at least a vague love-like relationship with Fate (-Fate- for example). Kha is hardly the only one.

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Old 2008-07-15, 08:16   Link #2647
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Now, now, let's calm down, drink tea and have some cake.

For what I see, this version of Kha presented by Kha is pretty much a quick run-down of the more fulfiling profile to come. You WILL give us that complete profile soon, will you not, eh, old chap?

Let's just treat this new piece of cake as a trailer of sorts, lie back and wait with a smile.

Of course, unless that's really all that there is......

*stocks up torture tools for annoyed Cadians*

Well, since the inspiration was Aria the Origination. I can tell you that Alicia Florence's fans has NOT expected this development at all, there were no hints, no build-up, nothing. It came out of the blue, in an almost similar way to how KyoAni has handled the Yuuichi x Ayu pairing in Kanon 2006.

The problem is NOT the outcome, it's HOW it was done.
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:24   Link #2648
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Back again. There and Back Again. Sort of, Once Again.

I feel like an idiot...but I'm glad to be an Idiot for Cadia, so here goes nothing.

(Thanks PF for alerting me to my charge's little shitstorm...He needs a new coffin, I'm sure.)

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Hey now, the hardsuits haven't gone anywhere, they just haven't gotten much attention recently because I'm playing around with the mythology to see what works and what doesn't. Judging from yours and PF's reactions to my more recent ideas I'm starting to push it a bit too much. I'll keep that in mind and see if I can't whip up a less mythic mythos for the Church to work with.
Don't you always push it a little much?

Nah, just kidding, it's a common mistake. Mythic mythos is something I personally love...but well the divinity thing WAS rather unnecessary. Who needs a real god when you can be a god-slayer?



Did I just say that? Oops...Nyahahaha.

Still, let's not have religious whatever tint our glasses, hmmm?

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Nah, I'll just have to try to keep it semi-canon; change the gods into the Forerunners of Al Hazard and have Vivian pick up the pieces of their empire once the shit hits the fan. That should be relatively easy to digest compared to what I cooked up before.
That's...slightly better. I'll leave this till you start giving more details.

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...you know, I could just about kick myself for needlessly over complicating things in Comacanon when there's a perfectly viable solution to the matter of "man vs gods" right there in canon. Screw it, we're going back to basics.

The so-called gods of Comacanon are none other than the Forerunners of Al Hazard, who used their tremendous magical powers--which are unlike anything seen anywhere in the multiverse today--to construct an interdimensional empire ages before the rise of Belka. They are labeled gods by the people they rule over because... well what else do you call ageless beings who summon storms, scorch the earth, and raise the dead at a whim?

So the Forerunners build up a massive empire and rule over a wide territory, but they rule with an iron fist over the lesser beings in their power, who are treated like second class citizens at the best of times, and slaves much more often. One Forerunner in particular sympathizes with the common people and is arrested and exiled for aiding and abetting a resistance movement; that particular Forerunner is Vivian, who eventually goes on to become the God-Empress of Belka several centuries later once Al Hazard is destroyed and the empire collapses. Under her guidance, Belka grows into an interdimensional empire in its' own right, bringing peace to the scattered and ravaged worlds left in the wake of Al Hazard's collapse.

She's not the only survivor, either; Cyphus Kane, instead of being a demon sorcerer, is another Forerunner who Vivian clashes with on several occasions before ultimately sealing the source of his inborn god-like magical powers. He spends the next millennia or two trying to recover his strength "the mortal way", by developing his linker core and eventually becoming a SSS-rank mage with the aid of the Book of Darkness and several other projects of his.
...Linker Cores actually become MORE powerful? Someone verify this, please. And I'd advise you to start thinking how these blokes kill each other and themselves too in order to let Vivian take over.

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I'm not arguing against that. I even have Protestant Belka, one born during the pre-Sankt Kaiser years, against an institution equivalent of the "Roman Catholic" back then. I was just refering to the main one we see in canon.

Of course, my limited knowledge of actual Christianity makes me thread very fine tightropes for the development of the history of the Belka church. Parallels happened because I wanted to be safe, not because I'm mocking or anything.
...And if I'm not mistaken, we're going to have them not like each other? Heh.

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This is an idea that came up while I was discussing Comacanon with the guys on the Fukufics Ideas board, and I want to run it by you guys before I give it any serious consideration.

Spoiler for Negima Spoilers:
What's this?!

I'm becoming...somewhat uncomfortable with the level of X-over-ness in Comacanon. I would think that there is no need to link them just yet, it's like linking for the sake of linking, when the two could just stand alone. Still...go on...I'll hear it.

Also, two gripes. Don't mind me, but:

Firstly, clones normally age faster (and not slower) and have more screwed up complications.

Secondly, Heterochromia in general is caused by either mosaic genetics or disease...the only way for Vivio to be a "perfect" clone would probably be to have it inherited directly. Ergo, Either Vivio is pretty screwed up in terms of melanin distribution (which would suck), or Vivian had heterochromia to start with.

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Cthulhu for President: Why Vote for the Lesser Evil?
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Overview

House of Borgia is one of the most important familial clans on Mid-Childa. It have monopoly over the interdimensional commerce, importing and exporting everything, from raw materials to manufactured goods, in the TSAB's sphere of political, econimical and administrative influence.
It's also one of houses that hold the most influence in Mid-Childa's political and administrative spheres. The average Mid-Childian often joke about how it can be hard to get in the TSAB's highest ranks unless you are backed up by a Borgia, and if so, the Borgia have likely plans for you. It's also one of the houses that have made the rampant nepotism in the TSAB a current practice.

History

The history of the House of Borgia on Midchilda has started about three centuries ago when a young terran alchemist, Giosuč Borgia better known as Joshua Borgia, member of the infamous House of Borgia in Italy, has been caught himself in a spatial distortion, resulting from an experiment that has gone wrong during his stay in the Germanic Holy Roman Empire.

Sheltered by the locals of this unknown world where he found himself trapped in, he pretty much made a living in this territory that was a protectorate of the Belkan Reich. He married, used his skill in commerce and political intrigue to climb the social ladder, has childs, then disappeared under mysterious circumstances; leaving books of economy and politics, and a large wealth for his descendants who made it flourish over the decades and generations.

One thing the Borgia can be credited for would be their political abilities. They has managed to survive not only the treacherous politics of the protectorate, but also the turmoil that were the result of the secession of Midchilda from the Belkan empire, the Great War and the rise of the TSAB. People said it was mostly thanks to their underhanded methods, duplicity or their own intelligence gathering resources. It's true to various degree.

Over the years, the clan has split into dozens of minor families born from the various marriages of the members of the House with the local nobility of the worlds under the TSAB's influence. Against most of speculations of the specialists, it was far from weakening the clan, for the minor branches has remained fiercely loyal to the main family, and is still carrying on the political directives given by the head of the clan.

While they are mainly a political and economical power, it doesn't mean that the Borgia has not given valuable mages or soldiers. They has produced great magicians or warriors, but those were often tainted by the shady reputation of the House. The TSAB indeed estimated that having a Borgia as public figure would be really bad for the tSAB's public image.

Customs of the Borgia

Their upbringing feature a painful, and often cruel to the outsiders, darwinian social selection. Treachery and backstabbing are allowed or even encouraged. Those who fails are stuck to the lower ranks or menial jobs. Those who has managed to resist such treatment or has survived it via various means are allowed to pass a ritual to mark their entry into adulthood.
The result of this ritual of coming of age is a tattoo located above the bellybutton, representing a red rose over a radiating black Cross of Saint Peter.

It's seen as a sign of shame for a Borgia to not receive the tattoo.

A birthday or marriage or coming of age will always be celebrated by very large familia gathering. You can expect everyone from the youngest child to the eldest woman, and the brother to the fourth degree cousin, to attend the celebration. And this also applies to funerals. This may have something to do with the italian origins of the clan.

The Borgia has kept a secret language that is actually a Renaissance Italian idiom bastardized with latin and midchildian languages. A modern day Italian who made it in Midchilda would very likely not understand it.

Everyday with a Borgia

It's hard to tell if the friendship of a Borgia is sincere. When you get the attention of one, he or she'll get you favors with various degree of obvious, it could be gifts, a slight increase in your income, a better place in a restaurant, or an unexpected protection. It often mean that he or she make sure that you owe them something, and have likely plans for you, in their own interests. However, it can happen that the friendship from a Borgia is the sincere kind, anyone who has this luck has found a valuable friend.

More than honor or courage, a Borgia values loyalty above everything. It depend to what extent a Borgia is loyal to his/her clan, the organization that employ them, Midchilda or their homeworld, or their friends. In the name of this loyalty, a Borgia can go to any lenght to prevail.

Notable members of the clan as for today

Giacolone Borgia

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The current head of the clan, his predecessor and father having succumbed to a brain stroke. He is in his mid 40s even tho he look younger.

He lives up to the reputation and expectations of his clan, artfully maneuvering in the political and economical fields of the Midchilda circles and its zone of influence.

He is also rumored to be a high caliber summoner. His personal guard may even be creatures of outside worlds or outerplanes.

Giuseppe Borgia

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Son of Giacolone, he is a TSAB enforcer who quickly climbed the ranks of the hierarchy of the Enforcer branch, to the point that he is now pretty close to the co-director (nobody has ever seen the director). In the long run, he plan to take over the enforcer department, he knows that his maneuvers may draw unwanted attention from the "great heroes" of the enforcer department, Fate and Teana. But he has patience.

He mostly doesn't care about the fierce competition running in the clan. Or it looks like he doesn't.

He master the mid-childian style and has magical affinity with the illusions, on an equal level to Teana.

Fiorenza Borgia

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An oddball in the Clan, she has managed to keep most of her ideals intact. The hardships of her upbringing has cost her one eye. She has gained a deep-rooted hate for most of her family members.

She also joined the TSAB but is working more in the administration and public relations departments, keeping an ear and an eye in the higher spheres of the bureau. She is often seen with the members of the Intelligence department or the Enforcers department.

Two years before the events of StrikerS, she has met Hayate Yagami and has taken a liking on her, having grown a protective instinct over the meister of the Wolkenritters. This liking and will to protect has mostly changed into a romantic interest of the platonic kind over Yagami. She is now trying to protect Hayate from the maneuvers of her own clan, now that she have found who she is the most loyal to.

Fiorenza is a summoner who can call ethereal or elemental beings to do her biding.

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The dirty secrets

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The inspirations

The first question I asked myself was "Would Midchilda have a dirty and ugly side?". when I see the ruins and read about the corruption in the TSAB, it's a big YES.

The name is taken from the infamous Italian family. While the italian mafia would be the main inspiration, there are also the Scorpion clan from Legend of the Five Rings, the House Harkonnen from Dune, and the Clan Giovanni from Vampire the Masquerade. My read of Vampire RPG and Fading Suns sourcebook has rubbed on me.

Before you jump on my throat because of the cross of Saint Peter, keep in mind that it remind the Clan of its Italian roots, and the Roman Catholicism associated with the mentionned roots.
Give me about a few days, I'll work on a full scale reply.

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No complaints; we already have daemons and faeries, it's only a matter of time all beings of Chaos are manifest!

In the name of the Kaiser, I shall claim the undead Lost and the Damned!

Chaos Undivided! >:3
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Spoiler for This Crowning Moment of Awesome was brought to you by Comacanon:
Did you just break Canon? Oh, yes you did.

Did you just foreshadow another break in Canon? Oh, yes you did.

Was it the crowning moment of Awesome?! If one shield on a non-combat unit counts for awesome, yes.

Yuuno looks like a Civilian? I don't really think so.

Yuuno really that strong? Didn't strike me as such before...

My Verdict: Crowning. Moment. Of. Awesome? I. don't. think. so.

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So busy with schoolwork...



Anyway, I might as well announce my own company to use soon.

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Gilbert Derringer: I present you...

~ Derringer Aeronautics and Interstellar Travel, Inc. ~

Talia: We'll get our debut soon, ne, Ane?

Erica: Yes. We're nearing that time.

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Aurion: What 'soon' signifies is still pretty much up in the air. -_-

Aaron: Don't ruin the mood. <.< (And don't imply my delays! >.>)
Ara Ara...

*reaches hand out to Aaron*

Welcome to the busy-man's club, Ossan

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I thought I'd throw the poor guy a bone. It's canon that he has feelings for Nanoha, and it's Comacanon that Nanoha has her eyes on someone else, so a bit of angst is appropriate for the situation followed closely by heroic resolve. In the end, it's The Forgotten Ace who really saves the day, not any of the OCs, just by stalling the cyborgs long enough for reinforcements to show up.
He's an Ace? Just by virtue of blocking the least brainy member of the Wolkenritter? That's new, I never knew he had it in him. In Truth, I reckon the cyborgs got what they wanted, and Jail was cocky. Period. After all, you have them beat to the floor already, so why not just leave them to rot?

Honestly.

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Well I've got Misriah Armory, which has been making service weapons for the Erusian and Sotoan militaries since god knows when. M6 Magnus, MA5C Assault Rifles, BR55HB Battle Rifles... there's the real-world Springfield Armory, which makes the M1911A1s the Air Wing Girls use... Colt, who makes Naomi's M4A1... Springfield Armory again, who make the bodies of the M14s that are then taken and used to make the bog-standard Rifle Devices of the Assault Platoon...

Anyway I was going to give Yuuno a Crowning Moment of Awesome for Alpha. He would have waded into battle and rescued Nanoha, rifle firing away...

And I go to sleep. Tired. Garh work -_-
Can we have a real REAL Crowning Moment of Awesome for Yuuno? I think I want one too...and I don't think I'm good enough for it. And yes, Comart, he doesn't need a rifle to be cool, though he needs a lot more than a Canon Breaker and one shield to be awesome.



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Guns? Yuuno don't need no stinkin' guns, not when he's fished all manner of lost and arcane magical knowledge out of the depths of the Infinity Library. And given Yuuno's skills with barrier magic and support spells, I wouldn't put it past him to be able to conjure his own reality marble; all that really demands is shaping the rules of the pocket universe you create within the barrier, something Yuuno could probably pull off since he went and Took a Level in Badass on us.
Reality Marble? I see my hind foot laughing now...

*turns to his foot*

"Shut up! I'm talking here!"

Head knowledge is one thing, Comart. The power to use it is another, and as far as canon has it, it doesn't look like Yuuno can do that, yet. You'll need to prove it, or show it in your canon, without breaking too much canon china. And if you were referring to yourself when you talked about his Taking a Level in Badass...then well, I'm afraid the term "Badass" has gone mainstream.

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I solved the civilian transport issue by having a central transit station linked to every universe in the TSAB's territory, which is monitored and heavily guarded by the TSA Main Branch. Picture a space station floating in a pocket dimension, like the Garden of Time but bigger. Oh, and it just so happens to look eerily similar to the Magic World gate in Negima, which of course will make it a target of choice for Fate Averruncus, Interdimensional Terrorist Extraordinaire, when Negi and company are trying to pay a visit to Mid-Childa during StrikerS. Yes, I'm so very evil, i know.

Oh, and it doubles as one of the TSA's biggest interdimensional drydocks and a good portion of the fleet is docked here when Fate makes his move, including the ship of a certain admiral we all know and love, who's not going to take too kindly to Fate blowing up a lynchpin of interdimensional travel.

Chrono Harlaown vs Fate Averruncus: place your bets, people!
And now we have Fate Acerruncus. This is getting overdone, but like I said, go on. Still, one gripe I have on you: Why do you need that when all you need is civilian transport, a la Star Wars, plus some obligatory route escort?

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I tried...

Spoiler for The UnKhracked Kha!!!:
...and I yawned. :3

This is a "fits into any universe" version of Kha without Khrack or h4xx, and even fits into canon perfectly!

Most of all, he only scores 7 on the Mary Scale!

*notices the whole thread is glaring at him*

...um... what?

*starts running*

I got the idea from ARIA the Orgination. ^^;;;
I'll settle you later, Kha. I'm too tired right now.

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OBJECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No way are you getting Fate that easily!!! I object to the fact you just with no warning whatsoever married Fate like that. Not even a single date! Nothing even on the relationship. You already have Sophia already or is she up for grabs now?
Of course he can!

HE'S KHA, REMEMBER?!

After all, it would help my story quite nicely if the two of them would have to worry about each other while dealing with a lot of shit on their own, so WHY NOT?

*Flees the Shou(l)-Storm at LICHT SPEED!!!!!!*

Sophia? That's...interesting

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I thought Tshou's target was Ginga so why the objection ?
He wants MOAR. Don't you know men like him always want MOAR?

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While Ginga is my target, what Kha did was to cheapen the efforts that the rest of us put in in trying to get our OCs gain the girl of their affections. Besides the only OC X CC I truly support is Hayaurion. Seriously, I really love that scene where Aurion puts his hands on Hayate.

@Keroko: No warning as in no stories on how he gain her affections, like dates, marriage proposals, the actual wedding events....
Arrrrhhhh...You're getting me started, Shou. I'm halfway through that scene of Tais'...I just need another 5k or so for a clincher



RUNS

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*rolls eyes* He just now made a rebuilt of Kha's profile, grinding it down to the basics. Of course he's not going to have any stories yet! If you want stories, there are plenty of them in Old Cadia, with the old Kha builds.
I should go read them...but not now.

Xena, Out.
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:24   Link #2649
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Well, here goes. The most protective Barrier Jacket seen in OC - short of TK's Ranger Barrier Jackets, anyway.

...or a Full Armor Danmaku Jacket...

Spoiler for Type-ODST Assault Barrier Jacket:
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:25   Link #2650
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Not much, really. Free author world and all that, in fact I remember USB snatching up Nanoha once. Now if someone were to write their characters into my stories and steal two characters away from eachother (say, someone writes a chapter of my Vivio/Syn story and steals Vivio) then that's a different story, but if someone writes their own stories and has their character and Vivio come together, I wouldn't raise any trouble over it.

Besides, we already have multiple people here who have stories with their OC's in love, or at least a vague love-like relationship with Fate (-Fate- for example). Kha is hardly the only one.

*other stuff deleted cause Kha was just poking people, apparently*
Let me clarify a bit. I don't object to his end goal which is Kha getting Fate. I object to his methods which was no real build up at all, just a stated he got her basically. I'm a closet romantic, I love to read about dates and stuff. It gives me warm and fuzzy feelings inside. Kha skipping all of that just rubs me the wrong way even if its just sort of a joke.

*GLARES DAGGERS AT KHA
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:25   Link #2651
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So I came back and found this relationship thingy, and decided to give it a shot. The results were... interesting. On the first try I threw my four main OC's and Vivio in the mix:

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Syn is apparently on hostile grounds with Tesla, though I have no idea why. She is Keroko's 'opponent' which makes a bit of sense, considering these two are polar oposites in terms of combat. She is indifferent towards Uomo, which makes perfect sense, and she is... Vivio's... sex... friend?

*ahem* Moving on to Keroko, she is apparently forcible with Tesla, who reacts subordinative to her (perhaps Keroko had Tesla join a rough training sesion? The subordinative part makes sense, concidering Keroko does outrank her) she is on friendly terms with Vivio (would have loved to get a 'relative' or something on that one. Oh well, close enough) and is comrades with Uomo, I can work with that.

Speaking of which, Uomo apparently has a 'miracle' relation to Vivio... NOD crack seems to influence this thing. <_<

Tesla's relation with Vivio is one of acomplishes according to this. Have to think of that one.

After this, I replaced Vivio with Jun, just for kicks. The results had me rolling over the floor with laughter:

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So, Jun is Tesla's apprentice? In what I wonder. He's an aquantance of Syn, which makes sense.

It was after that that I fell down laughing, as he is Keroko's sex friend. Really ironic concidering I introduced him as a possible boyfriend of Keroko during the 'lets pair up Keroko' craze.

But the real kicker came when the line towards Uomo appeared. 'costume play friend' brilliant! Two traps, and costume play friends!
So much crack...the the worse is that it computes...partially.


As for my OC's diagram...well...it gets cracky as well...
Spoiler for What the...:

Some make sense, while others don't
Heck, Koji and Maren aren't even connected >_>
So...
Spoiler for Connections:

So...yeah...this Correlation Diagram thing can be pretty cracky

*warps away*
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Old 2008-07-15, 08:33   Link #2652
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Iruel and Hel are WHAT?!?!?!

...can this be canon?

*RUNZ*


She will make a appearence in future chapters... see how she is and than decide if you still want that to be canon.


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I tried...

Spoiler for The UnKhracked Kha!!!:
...and I yawned. :3

This is a "fits into any universe" version of Kha without Khrack or h4xx, and even fits into canon perfectly!

Most of all, he only scores 7 on the Mary Scale!

*notices the whole thread is glaring at him*

...um... what?

*starts running*

I got the idea from ARIA the Orgination. ^^;;;
Wait a second... that's all whats left if you strip him of Khrack!?

Bring back the Khrack damnit!!

(Ok ok! I know you're just a jokeing.)

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A fact which had me biting and clawing the tables at school more often then not. German and Dutch are desceptively similar in words, but gramatically there is a huge difference.
To quote Mark Twain: "My philological studies have satisfied me that a gifted person ought to learn English (barring spelling and pronouncing) in thirty hours, French in thirty days, and German in thirty years. It seems manifest, then, that the latter tongue ought to be trimmed down and repaired. If it is to remain as it is, it ought to be gently and reverently set aside among the dead languages, for only the dead have time to learn it."


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Barring the strip friends bit with Kha (seriously, Kha is a cleric for Saint's sake <_<) I can definetely see the others happening.
I can't see the "Rinya is the child, Syn is the guardian" thing happening. Only the other way around. As Rin is 18 at the time of StrikerS. But who know... maybe if we start interpreting "guardian/child" diffrently...


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So Nel-chan and Carnage are merely pissing eachother off because they're embarrased around eachother? Interesting...
You mean similiar to "Was sich liebt, das neckt sich."? (wich literaly translates into: "What's in love with each other, likes to tease each other." but is officialy translated with: "The quarrel of lovers is the renewal of love.")
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There are badass and badass, my badass may be not your badass and is very likely not his badass, his badass may be not your badass and is definitely not mine, your badass may be my badass. Then there are the BOTW* Badass that is just too badass on the badass and lulz department.

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Old 2008-07-15, 08:41   Link #2654
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I threw Uomo and a few of my favourity cyborgs through the diagram thingy, and added Jail for kicks. The results were, once again, interesting:

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According to thing diagran, Cinque worries for Uomo. This is exactly what I wanted for their relationship, as Cinque knows that Uomo is a spy placed into the TSAB, and wants to realize his errors and turn a new leaf before he gets into trouble. The forcible on Uomo's part would symbolize his loyalty to his organisation and resisting Cinque's pleas. Simply perfect.

Wendi seems to be in the same boat as Cinque. This is unexpected, but I can work with this. Wendi is one of the cyborgs who likes them to be a familly after all.

Nove is embarrased around Uomo, this is perfect again, as we know Nove is somewhat shy around men (in the manga, the girls wonder wether Otto is a boy, causing Nove to burry her head in the water in embarassment. )

Jail was simply brilliant. 'Wiretapping friend' XD since Uomo is a spy, he was keeping tabs on Jail's operations wherever possible, but as ordered by his organisation, would also send information to Jail whenever needed. NOD crack just doesn't want to let Uomo go, it seems.
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Old 2008-07-15, 09:17   Link #2655
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...Linker Cores actually become MORE powerful? Someone verify this, please. And I'd advise you to start thinking how these blokes kill each other and themselves too in order to let Vivian take over.
The fact that little B-rank mages became AA-rank mages in StrikerS should have verified this long ago.

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Firstly, clones normally age faster (and not slower) and have more screwed up complications.

Secondly, Heterochromia in general is caused by either mosaic genetics or disease...the only way for Vivio to be a "perfect" clone would probably be to have it inherited directly. Ergo, Either Vivio is pretty screwed up in terms of melanin distribution (which would suck), or Vivian had heterochromia to start with.
This is anime, in which people have unatural hair and eye color because it looks cool. Applying normal biology for eye-color and clone growth-rate doesn't really work.

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He's an Ace? Just by virtue of blocking the least brainy member of the Wolkenritter? That's new, I never knew he had it in him. In Truth, I reckon the cyborgs got what they wanted, and Jail was cocky. Period. After all, you have them beat to the floor already, so why not just leave them to rot?

Honestly.
Blocking, and holding her off for an extended amount of time while searching for a way out of the barrier at the same time. Not to mention he blocked Yami no Sho's attack later on on his own, something Nanoha and Fate couldn't do.

Yes, I do think Yuuno is an ace on his own right.

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Let me clarify a bit. I don't object to his end goal which is Kha getting Fate. I object to his methods which was no real build up at all, just a stated he got her basically. I'm a closet romantic, I love to read about dates and stuff. It gives me warm and fuzzy feelings inside. Kha skipping all of that just rubs me the wrong way even if its just sort of a joke.

*GLARES DAGGERS AT KHA
M'okay, guess I'll have to make my Vivio/Syn story extra warm and fuzzy.

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So much crack...the the worse is that it computes...partially.


As for my OC's diagram...well...it gets cracky as well...
Spoiler for What the...:

Some make sense, while others don't
Heck, Koji and Maren aren't even connected >_>
So...
Spoiler for Connections:

So...yeah...this Correlation Diagram thing can be pretty cracky

*warps away*
Cracky diagrams are cracky. Insest? whut?

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Well, here goes. The most protective Barrier Jacket seen in OC - short of TK's Ranger Barrier Jackets, anyway.

...or a Full Armor Danmaku Jacket...

Spoiler for Type-ODST Assault Barrier Jacket:
I hope you don't mind if I don't comment much on the internal workings of Barrier Jackets you described (don't want to open the BJ discussion again. ) but suffice to say the armors look gooood. OOC for the TSAB, but gooood.

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To quote Mark Twain: "My philological studies have satisfied me that a gifted person ought to learn English (barring spelling and pronouncing) in thirty hours, French in thirty days, and German in thirty years. It seems manifest, then, that the latter tongue ought to be trimmed down and repaired. If it is to remain as it is, it ought to be gently and reverently set aside among the dead languages, for only the dead have time to learn it."
U has crappy laguage!

Though I find French much harder to understand myself.

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I can't see the "Rinya is the child, Syn is the guardian" thing happening. Only the other way around. As Rin is 18 at the time of StrikerS. But who know... maybe if we start interpreting "guardian/child" diffrently...
Whoops, missed that one.

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You mean similiar to "Was sich liebt, das neckt sich."? (wich literaly translates into: "What's in love with each other, likes to tease each other." but is officialy translated with: "The quarrel of lovers is the renewal of love.")
Somewhat. It was only a funny scenario.
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Old 2008-07-15, 09:26   Link #2656
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...confusion like this is why people all agree I'm a bad joker.

I've explained it mostly in the IRC, but for those who are still interested, this universe is actually pretty dark. Because all I did was remove Kha from every major event he was in and made him have a normal life, without removing the events...



...meaning Sophia remains a wildcard...

...Artei is going to assassinate Carym and the rest of the liberals, destabilizing an already fragile Belka state...

...Heaven's Feel is speeding to its ultimate conclusion, and Kluize has everything going according to plan...

...Hayate's life is in danger...

...darkness shall eclipse Ordered Space once again.



It really is a dark future after StrikerS, and plenty of time to give this Kha flesh just based on this. But unlike all my other timelines, this is so new, its so raw and unknown even for myself. If only I bothered to write about him apart from letting it all just Subete wo Keikakudoori.

And once again, sorry Keroko... ><;;;;;
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Ok, I'm back. When did Yunno become GAR, all of a sudden. I mean, I half expect him to come in, and use his power of the Anchients to summon a Golem to defeat the modern Cyborgs.

I shall have to use my ultimate technique! TORNADO BLADE!



Kha: Generic Kha makes me RAGE

Sheba: Would your clan have any MP (Minsters of Parliment), under its control. I wanted to expand my fanfic/OC character's history somehow, besides him being a borderline Taiga clone.
Nice BGM work, by the way. Er um, history work.

Spoiler for The Secret of Space:


Also, if you mess up with the Roman Catholicisms, I will use my PAPAL BEAMU from the US of A to strike you down!

Evangelion Xgouki: I think its some sort of Rid-Er, but we already have Lutecia and her partne*

Ryand-Smith is blasted by Garyu's Rider Kick for 10K damage

Estavali: Where is this IRC chan that you speak of? Also, why is there Galaxy Railway fluff in Nanohaverse?

Saint X: A possible theme could be people making "straw purchases" of heavy supplies, because in StrikerS, normal guns were still a huge issue even then.

Keroko: Request for borrowing Syn for later.

Wild Goose: MAGICAL LYRICAL SPACE MARINES: FUCK YEAH. That is all. I mean, Space Marines, with Nanohaverse Magic? "Send in the Mistress Chief!"

Also, decided to establish Aura's proper profile, please don't fry me!

Spoiler for Aura Profile 1:
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Sheba: Would your clan have any MP (Minsters of Parliment), under its control. I wanted to expand my fanfic/OC character's history somehow, besides him being a borderline Taiga clone.
Nice BGM work, by the way. Er um, history work.

Also, if you mess up with the Roman Catholicisms, I will use my PAPAL BEAMU from the US of A to strike you down!
Well, that was what "political influence" stand for.

And I do not intend to mess with Roman Catholicism. the inverted cross is just a normal catholic symbol when people actually know about saint Peter.
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Gawd, how LONG has it been?! I thought I was going to be using Aura post-humously! Welcome back Ryand-smith, and enjoy the ride. It's gonna be Rebuilt, or its gonna be re-Rebuilt.

*peers around nervously, hoping Keroko's just busy with Syn's parents and not pissed* ><;;;
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Old 2008-07-15, 09:50   Link #2660
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Well, Syn sure, erm... leads an interesting life.
Oddly enough I think Rune and Syn was the only combo that got "sex friends" Despite her very uhm... Outgoing-ness...

Though she got "unrequited love" with Taryn (a OC of my friend) Rune was only "Friend" but Taryn was "Unrequited love"

EDIT:
Oh and apparently Rune's in a relationship with Lotte
Lotte--[serious love]--[frivolous love]--Rune

The frivolous part fits Rune so well
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