Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Terminator98]

PHEW.

Done a lot of stuff.
Sadly, it wasn't finishing chapter 3. :P

Spoiler for ☢CAUTION!!☢ ☢CAUTION!!☢ ☢CAUTION!!☢ NEW CHARACTER!:

NEW Character, Yoko Kaneko!

Spoiler for Then, here's her IS:

OD-EXSIS-02 "Beirith"

WARNING, DO NOT MESS WITH ALEX WHEN SHE'S AROUND... Yandere is here.

OMG, SOPHIA'S GOT A NEW UNIT!

Spoiler for NEW UNIT! NSFW!!:

OD-EXSIS-01 "Alseides"

Ahem. So the stage is set, FINALLY.

By the way, if you people are interested into seeing the whole history behind Omega Division's IS development and how the plasma magic thing most of its units have works, SEE HERE:

Omega Division IS Model Details



And now, let us give a sneak peek of the OD-EXIS-02 "Samael"

Spoiler for OD-EXIS-02 "Samael":

So yeah. My dream of creating this side story of IS that actually branches into its own epic side is becoming true...

Now, I have one little request to all of you:

Which one of my girls do you prefer? I'm planning on doing something in the future, but I could choose any of the girls, so I thought that the public's favorite should be the chosen one...

Here's the "complete" list of the girls:

Spoiler for List of my girls. Pick one:

Kanzaki Lyn

Hikari Haruka

Sarah Delavalliere

Kaneko Yoko

Sophia Rainer

[agetreme]

I like Sarah.... because she doesn't seem that obsessed with Alex as other girls...

Spoiler for Profile Updated:

Edited personality
Ayara Hawa

More Detailed background for Yuu
Kamijou Yuu

Changed Teliawa's name to Talia
Talia L. Curious

[Tempy]

Ehh.

Blatant, but I was bored.

Hell Raven
Sword Dancer

Whatevs.

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by Tempy

Ehh.

Blatant, but I was bored.

Hell Raven
Sword Dancer

Whatevs.

Woot nice artwork. The "new" country thing looks kinda special.
As for Hell Raven, she kinda looks like the OD-EXSIS-02 "Berith"

Guess we can all go so far before using the same ideas... XD

Ok, next post will DEFINITELY be chapter 3...

Which one of my girls do you prefer? I'm planning on doing something in the future, but I could choose any of the girls, so I thought that the public's favorite should be the chosen one...

Here's the "complete" list of the girls:

Spoiler for The girls.:

Kanzaki Lyn

Hikari Haruka

Sarah Delavalliere

Kaneko Yoko

Sophia Rainer

As for the girl's choice thing I posted earlier, it'd be better if you guys PMed me rather than posting on the forums. Will save lots of unrelated post stuff.

[JamesEdwards]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Woot nice artwork. The "new" country thing looks kinda special.

It's not meant to be taken too seriously, yo. Enjoy the "weird-ness", and don't hurt yourself now.

[Terminator98]

perhaps should I rephrase? "Unique"?

well anyways, the first time it's been proposed inside this threat that's pretty much has a lot of common ideas with most of the stuff differentiating cannon chars and other ones being either country or small background details.

Anyways...

How's your own fan-fic advancing?

[blitz1/2]

Is Yoko a parody of Touhou`s Okuu? because I just found the nuclear caution to be hilarious.

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Is Yoko a parody of Touhou`s Okuu? because I just found the nuclear caution to be hilarious.

You've hit the right spot.
Yep, she, her IS, and the later appearing Lucifer are somewhat based on Okuu.

Besides, isn't an IS with an ARM CANNON that has nuclear abilities and Raven wings, NOT make you think of this little miss badass? (hell, her IS's battle theme gives the identity right out)

Yoko's character will focus less on Okuu's "stupid" side and will have a yandere nature... If you want to spoil yourself a bit with what I plan to do with her, *or it might be a false indicator, who knows* google up her VA... she did... an interesting char.

I wonder if Sophia's IS has attracted the attention of some by being an EXPY of one of the world's coolest mechs...

[JamesEdwards]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Anyways...

How's your own fan-fic advancing?

Since you asked. Here. Now updated to Chapter 2. The divergence is just beginning.

[asaqe]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Snip

I will raise a Noblesse Oblige in the SM verse soon enough, also another pilot. An enemy pilot actually, this came up when I was trying to make an Cowboy build AC in AC3, works pretty well in CQB.

Spoiler for A True PLUS:

"I say it is time to clean house, first dealing with Orimura and then dealing with the unique case of an Powersuit Pilot and his buddy."

"So you relish in killing people or something?"

"I just enjoy cleaning up this mess you started."

Pilot Name: Victor "Vanquero" Leone
Age: Unknown
Appearance: A duster on his head and a worn out leather jacket with slacks with an emblem on his sleeve
Occupation: Cleaner
Unit Name: Shrapnel
Weapon Araments: Dual Shotguns and Dual Pistols with a mounted Chaingun.

Pilot Profile: Victor worked as an professional cleaner for the highest bidder in the corporate world, killing and cleaning up targets. His reputation for cleaning house was well known, the man relishes in hunting the toughest of foes which is why when the IS was introduced, contracts switched from killing influential men went to killing women. To prepare for this type of wet work, he received surgery to enhance himself and making him able to push the power armor to it's limits. His first assignment was to eliminate Orimura Ichika or Shinonono Houki and capture the IS core. And he is going to relish in the hunt.

Unit Information: THe Shrapnel is designed to be a CQB gunslinger unit, equipped with 2 heavy shotguns, it fires 2 shots of cluster munitions that carry autocannon caliber slugs at the enemy. He is also equipped with a Cruise Missile Launcher which is equipped with an activation failsafe, only specialized AMS software can prevent it's detonation. Upon detection of brute force such as shooting at it (A difficult task as the missile is heavily armored) it detonates it's payload. It also have a set of powerful revolvers for backup

The unit is also notorious for it's speed and agility, a fitting choice for the gunslinger as he needs to close the gap to defeat his foes although he dislikes melee combat as his unit is not meant for punching enemy units

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by JamesEdwards

Since you asked. Here. Now updated to Chapter 2. The divergence is just beginning.

nice nice nice !

After having lost time checking up chapter 3, re wording stuff and re doing some sentences...

I've been dragged away into making another expy of Haruka's IS... having two sniper IS in the same team is meh...

Also, dumped the 3D model for Sarah's IS as well...
Will update both of their IS as the time come.

And yes JE, I got something for Belial's first form which is not a gundam expy. :P

(My old fanboyism is popping up)

Spoiler for Big Pic:

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Spoiler for ☢CAUTION!!☢ ☢CAUTION!!☢ ☢CAUTION!!☢ NEW CHARACTER!:

NEW Character, Yoko Kaneko!

Spoiler for Then, here's her IS:

OD-EXSIS-02 "Beirith"

WARNING, DO NOT MESS WITH ALEX WHEN SHE'S AROUND... Yandere is here.

...so people like watching videos of her singing.

Originally Posted by agetreme

I like Sarah.... because she doesn't seem that obsessed with Alex as other girls...

Spoiler for Profile Updated:

Edited personality
Ayara Hawa

More Detailed background for Yuu
Kamijou Yuu

Changed Teliawa's name to Talia
Talia L. Curious

Yuu is an Bein Boxer. I mean, look at ECE Fighter.

Originally Posted by Tempy

Ehh.

Blatant, but I was bored.

Hell Raven
Sword Dancer

Whatevs.

I knew it was coming. And the SRW shouts keep on coming.

Both countries with being essentially outsiders and cosmopolitan, the only difference between the 2 is that one is essentially a Chinese-dominant community living on the moon while the other is a Japanese-dominant island living in the Pacific.

Bet Gensokyo have a problem with the Lunarians-- I mean Spacenoids. But I guess they count as Lunarians considering their association with Shinonono Tehbunny and prolific use of the Chang Er legend.

[Saint X]

Some 2-in-1 thing for now

Proposed Images:

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/592802/
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/498890/


Name: Ange / Monique Esquivel
Nickname/s: Angel, An-ge, An for Ange. Moni, Mon-mon for Monique.
Age: 16
Home Country: Spain
IS Unit: Standard Uchigane.
Affiliation: Members of Class 1-3, members of the Spanish Contingent, which also includes its’ representative, Juana Mallari and her IS [El Santa Maria del Flamenco / El Flamenco].

Spoiler for Notes of Differentiation:

Ange and Monique, though identical twins, still have some differences, one needs to look closer and take notes.

First up, their eye shapes are different. Monique, despite being the younger of the twins, has a slight Tsurime bend, while Ange has a slight Tareme bend, despite being the older. And you think the eyes match the personality, think again- the twins have inversions of their apparent eye-related personalities- go figure. Then their view on life are almost polar opposites, Ange is the cheerful one while Monique can be equated to a deadpan person. But then they have a wide range of things they agree upon, like food- though Monique prefers more spicy food. They also dress differently, as Ange prefers skirts and related items while Monique prefers pants and such. Their preferred fighting style is also different, as Ange prefers melee and Monique prefers ranged.

Spoiler for History Thingy:

Twin Daughters of a well-to-do middle class family, Ange and Monique are what you can call “ordinary” in terms of the situation, except for the fact that these two were sent to the IS Academy, as it is “one of the best institutions of learning in the world”- and of course, having the IS Academy in your resume would be of great help in future prospects. And with that good intent, they began to live their high school lives.

But an interesting thing happened during the Admissions for the Academy. When the Twins were up for the trial fitting of the Uchigane Units- which by the way there were 2 of them at that day to help process the queue faster, the examiners discovered a strange anomaly when the two equipped the said IS Trainer- a harmonic brainwave was detected among the two and that the IS-equipped examiners were having a hard time keeping up with each of them, as they seem to switch from one fighting style to another- after a short pause. What actually happened was that the IS system, with its’ black boxed technology became a sort of bridge between the minds of the twins, giving them a sort of twin-linked ESP and the capability of mentally swapping places- thus giving them a sort of capability switching. Take note that this strange anomaly only occurs when both twins are piloting an IS. A paper regarding IS-initiated ESP and psychic anomalies was released years prior and gave the examining team something to ponder about, thus setting in action a lot of in-IS monitoring on the part of the twins, though they have no knowledge of it.

Asides from being monitored for data, nothing else was out of the ordinary for these two- well unless you count the hijinks of nearby class 1-1 and 1-2, which the whole of class 1-3 tries to avoid. The twins share a room with the Philippine Representative, Maria Antonia Estevez- in a so-called “cooking room” as it is one of the few rooms in all of the dormitories that have equipped kitchens- a fragment of the buildings’ previous -pre-IS Academy lives as school buildings. And with that room setting, the twins and the lonely representative became the best of friends- bonding over cooking and all.

Let’s hope that they don’t do more damage than the first 2 sections are already doing.

[MeisterBabylon]

...looks like we both thought of Infinite Stratos Perception (ISP) independently from each other.

[Saint X]

my IS-initiated ESP is very different from your so called ISPers

no hand-powered coin railguns
no explosive line scribbling
no "natural" particle beam spewing
no redirection of vectors

ESPECIALLY NO HANDED CANCELING OF ANY CAPABILITY/ABILITY

AND ALSO NO SPROUTING OF FLOWERS ON HEAD AND KEEPING THINGS IN STASIS

*shoots Kha with a 105mm trout*

[Terminator98]

jajaja... I smell some familiar stuff in the air.

Now, T98 and his co-editor JE (many thanks to him again), BRINGING YOU CHAPTER 3!!

Infinite Stratos : Omega Gaiden - Chapter 3, Puzzled Soul


Also, updates most of my OC's IS with either a new pic or a totally refitted IS.
Here's the complete list

Spoiler for IS List per Pilot:

OD-EXIS-01 "Belial" (Pic changed) piloted by Alex Hikari








OD-EXSIS-03 "White Rose" (Pic and IS changed totally) piloted by Haruka Hikari






OD-EXSIS-04 "Lumine (Pic changed, weapons changed slightly) piloted by Sarah Delavalierre

now working in Vegas Movie maker for an OP... using THIS:

Whoo. Lots of work.

[John117xCortana]

Loved the new chapter. That part where Alex managed to hold his ground against Chifuyu was great !

I prefer the previous pic version of the Belial though.

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Saint X

my IS-initiated ESP is very different from your so called ISPers

no hand-powered coin railguns
no explosive line scribbling
no "natural" particle beam spewing
no redirection of vectors

ESPECIALLY NO HANDED CANCELING OF ANY CAPABILITY/ABILITY

AND ALSO NO SPROUTING OF FLOWERS ON HEAD AND KEEPING THINGS IN STASIS

*shoots Kha with a 105mm trout*

Oi don't go rip everything out of a certain alternate universe!

Originally Posted by Shinonono Tabane

"When a person is united with an IS core, she shares all her neural inputs with her armor. For some people, it is so great that a sixth sense is born..."

Tabane swirled the red wine under her nose, enjoying its calming scents.

"[Infinite Stratos Perception.]"

She sipped the salve and returned her focus to the snatches of Karon and Laura's battle over the darkened skies of ISA.

"The natural ISPer and the One Stratos..."

A dark smile spread as Shinonono held up a toast.

"Happy birthday."

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by John117xCortana

Loved the new chapter. That part where Alex managed to hold his ground against Chifuyu was great !

I prefer the previous pic version of the Belial though.

And I prefer the newer version. Thanks for the feedback.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Oi don't go rip everything out of a certain alternate universe!

So you'd have an IS with a MATTER NEGATING hand that could block anything eh?


Let's add vampires and alucard to this. OH.. AND NAZI ZOMBIES...


One a side note, will have to give a massive update to the OC list. Also forgot to update the index of my fan-fics.. will do that when I wake up.


Otherwise... a disturbing force of some galactic origin has been spotted...



Witness... My version of JE's canonverse char. Info sheet should come up soon enough after I've sorted out everything with JE.


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As for my future slice of life... the ISA music festival/ball night is still in my mind... especially if MAXIMILLIAN WOULD GET ON THE STAGE AND SING... along with the Shooting star band and the Omega Division band backing him up with instrumentals.

Vocals: Maximillian
Guitarists: Gou Karon, Sarah Delavalliere
Bassists: Haruka Hikari, Elena de Wolf
Drums: Erika??
Piano: Alex
*insert other insturment*: Rachel, Alice, Shura?

OMG YES:

I must say again... YESS FOR THIS.


EDIT:

Infinite Stratos : Omega Gaiden - Table of Contents (UPDATED)

Original Characters/IS List (UPDATED, comments alongside every character... IF you don't see your name in there, or anything you ant me to fix, just point it out.)

Omega Division IS Models Details (UPDATED GRAPH)

[agetreme]

I changed Teliawa's name to Talia quite sometime ago.

Lisa is Talia's middle name, her family name is Curious.