2011-02-05, 00:28 | Link #3581 | |
SHSL Lurker
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Academy City
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There are some issues with that plotline. The main character sounds like a potential Gary Stu (male Mary Sue), which is often the main issue when trying to make a Level 6 character. There's another user in the fanfic thread who's trying to make a story with a Level 6 main character as well. Absorbing multiple abilities just makes him even more broken. My main points: 1. Grammar. Spelling. Punctuation. Paragraph spacing. All of these are important. It was pretty hard reading the summary in the first place. 2. You CANNOT just simply throw in the DNA of all powerful characters in there for your convenience. The main reason the Radio Noise project failed was precisely because it was impossible to create a Level 5 by using the DNA of one. It's not mentioned in the anime, but there was an experiment called the May Project of Darkness which tried to copy Accelerator's powers. It failed, and it has been stated that the abilities of Academy City's #1 and #2 cannot be replicated. They can produce inferior imitations like Saiai's Offense Armor which uses nitrogen as a means of defending, but using the DNA of a Level 5 will definitely not produce another Level 5, much less a Level 6. In the first place, a Level 6 is defined as a person whose power reaches to the level of "god". It's impossible to reproduce one just by combining DNA of random people together, and I'm pretty sure biology doesn't work that way. 3. Shadow manipulation? You can do that with magic, that's for sure (like Oriana's shadow sword shorthand), but with science that's a bit too unrealistic. 4. I can't tell what the sentence "he has the ability to give level zero's powea LEvel 6rs but not level them up, this makes him become in charge of skill out and he does that before taking aleistor." means. So he has an ability to give Level 0's powers but not give them a level? However, Level 0's DO have abilities in the first place, it's just that either they're too weak to detect or they're passive. Making him a leader of Skill-Out makes no sense - if he's a Level 6, then the Skill-Out people will probably despise him no matter what his intentions are, since he is the embodiment of everything that they hate.
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2011-02-06, 18:15 | Link #3596 |
Portable Dude Mk. II
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights.
Age: 35
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In a sense, do we all know how Accelerator looked like in actual imagery (apart from the novel illustration which shows him flying off in his "White Angel" form, still that has his eyes obscured) when he does? I'm thinking in that look he no longer sports his shrunk pupils, they will be drawn larger and that he doesn't frown as much anymore thus making him a total bishounen at that point.
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2011-02-06, 21:06 | Link #3599 |
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Join Date: Aug 2010
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... Frak.
Accelerator, regardless of gender, is not supposed to be moe... I can never see Accelerator in the same light again *headdesk*. *goes on a rant that ends in a skyward scream of how my image of what Accelerator should be like is ruined forever* (disclaimer - I'm not really that seriously peeved, though it DID give me quite a impact >.> ) |
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