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ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-20, 13:10

Still German. Even Tabane get her ironic death. From antiheroes POV anyway (she seemed to enjoy it)

Normally they didn't, they don't have the necessary system.

Tempest35 · 2012-03-20, 13:13

#_#

Wha...? WHAA...??!

What is all this talk about self-cest and sex changes...

and no, sex-changed/post-op individuals can't give birth. I don't think doctors are able to completely rearrange somone's biology to implant a full functional reproduction system of one gender into another. The implications are just....

And I thought it was bad with the older Ichika/younger Chifuyu angle... ... ...

*gets hit by the bolt of inspiration* ... thank you, Thor...

Ichika + Chifuyu + Toothbrush

Eratas123 · 2012-03-20, 13:14

I dunno, why not have PT attack them? Asshole victim. Also, what do you mean anti-hero? Who kills her?

Then how the heck do Charles and Laura.....

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-20, 13:19

Damn near everyone, that means ex-PT members who heel-face turn'd.

I 'm afraid you'd ask that simply put, they need the bog-standard in-vitro fertilization. Technically, it's a kid from lesbian couple....Note that Charles tool still useful for recreation purposes, if you know what I mean.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-20, 13:25

Why exactly is only Germany a Houdini? Can't be that hard.

Could you not use white text? I can't read it since J'm on he phone.

@ Tempest - For Future Imperfect

I'm making as much kids as possible.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-20, 13:30

Haven't find the way to do that properly. Since it was mostly the military incompetence in management, which result in illegal lab scattered allover German.

Can you suggest a scenario?

Well, external ovulation. The embryo then planted in Laura's womb and grew to be a normal baby. Mind you Charles is not exactly impotent, if you know what I mean.

Going to sleep..

Eratas123 · 2012-03-20, 13:37

How about just getting caught by the other countries? Of course, this doesn't mean the other countries are completely innocent, but we can deal with that later.

Must feel odd to suddently have a banana in place of a taco.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-20, 13:41

....How about German secretly doing another batch of super-soldier? And United Nations basically go "How many times we should let you slip, assfucker?! Tolerance no more!!"

eh.....?

Tempest35 · 2012-03-20, 13:46

@ Eratas: ....*facepalms* This is why I do genderswaps instead of sex changes...@_@

DarkJak2050 · 2012-03-20, 20:13

Hey, Zero.

Can practically anything trigger some sort of "flashback" that can result in a person "breaking down" right on the spot?

CmmdrRosh · 2012-03-20, 20:34

Hello Everyone! So what's going on in this part of Forum?

Silver-Throne · 2012-03-20, 20:49

I`m almost done with school clearance..

When Creating a OC, be sure it`s not Gary Sue or Mary Sue(IF not aware what it means, go to wikipedia and search Gary Sue)

I should have avoid that. Too bad I suck at writing First-person view. I need tips and pointers how to make 'it', help

CmmdrRosh · 2012-03-20, 20:57

That's why I don't have any "SUE" characters... Most can handle themselves quite nicely, especially with the blackstory for the OC

Plus, I never use First-Person writing... It hurts when I think about it...

Eratas123 · 2012-03-20, 21:31

CmmdrRosh - I've read parts of your story already, but can you give me a summary?

@ Senpai - Then Germany pops out evidence the other countries aren't so innocent

Charles lost his taco and got a banana when he got the operation. Do the math.

CmmdrRosh · 2012-03-20, 22:40

@ Eratas123.... Meh, ok... It's not complete yet though....I want to note that the characters are AU because of the age.... 17-18 compared to 15-16 years old

On December 21, 2012, The IS "White Knight" defended Japan against the ICBMs that targeted Japan's major cities. However, after the "White Knight Incident" nations had been secretly using IS machines to wage wars on each other. A couple of days later, a contact named "Janus" gives the permanent United Nations council members the battle schematics of the "White Knight"-- These nations create the banner of the Special Tactics Against Rogue Infinite Stratos or STARIS

Fast-forward ten years later, and Kenneth Buyuu, an 18 year soldier of the United States STARIS program, is sent to Japan, to help him cope with his past. Problem is a year ago, he lost a loved one to Rogue IS units, leading him to slaughting over a 100 pilots in the US alone. This tarnished the US program of STARIS, the Scion Initiates or SI, and Kenneth is pretty much their redemption card...

He is no ordinary soldier, a super soldier under the name "Son of the Three" regarding the Greatest Black-Ops STARIS pilots training him. (But then again, ALL members of STARIS are super soldiers, they are trained to brutally take down IS pilots). However, Kenneth is a special case where... Nope too far in the plot I have planned, will be saving that for later....

Eratas123 · 2012-03-20, 22:50

Sounds like Metal Gear Solid or something. Anyway, 100 IS pilots? Might be too much there.

CmmdrRosh · 2012-03-20, 22:57

Meh, I never read too much into the MGS series...

As for the IS pilots slaughter, it will be explained by the Three Black-Ops pilots that the world of the IS is ever-changing, people taking different names, lies deceit, etc. Even Phantom Task will have a pretty sizable front against the world of the IS.

As I put in in the fanfiction, "The Infinite Stratos are the light... While STARIS is the dark." I like the concept of duality with characters, just as Kenneth. He seems to be a stoic person from the outside, but once you get to know him, he really is a nice person, and does have emotions... He just doesn't like showing it.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-20, 23:10

There are only 467 cores, and those were spread evenly all over the world with abut 20 at most per country. How did he, in your words, slaughter 100 pilots when he was just in the US?

CmmdrRosh · 2012-03-20, 23:20

"Officially" told numbers to actual numbers, the STARIS wants to keep a constant watch on everything the IS world does... A constant balance between the IS cores and how much is told to the public...

A majority of the pilots were cadets representatives candidates that didn't quite make the cut for a personal IS to be announced.

Not like it mattered for them anyways, as they can cloak the true form of their IS armor. (This would also be used to explain how in the world Charlotte was able to conceal her breasts...yay cloaking technology of absurdity!)

I was going to have later Tabane Shinonono comment on that near the end, that she feels like Alfred Nobel and his creation of dynamite... How much would she like to see her own inventions used to blow each other up over petty conflicts...And why is uses that "GENKI" personality of hers...

Eratas123 · 2012-03-20, 23:26

All right, good luck with your fic then. Just be careful, this fandom and archive seems to love tearing into any story, bar humor, that disregards canon too much. Hence why many stories have few reviews.

2012-03-20, 13:10	Link #26761
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Still German. Even Tabane get her ironic death. From antiheroes POV anyway (she seemed to enjoy it) Normally they didn't, they don't have the necessary system. __________________

2012-03-20, 13:13	Link #26762
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	#_# Wha...? WHAA...??! What is all this talk about self-cest and sex changes... and no, sex-changed/post-op individuals can't give birth. I don't think doctors are able to completely rearrange somone's biology to implant a full functional reproduction system of one gender into another. The implications are just.... And I thought it was bad with the older Ichika/younger Chifuyu angle... ... ... gets hit by the bolt of inspiration ... thank you, Thor... Ichika + Chifuyu + Toothbrush __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2012-03-20, 13:14	Link #26763
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I dunno, why not have PT attack them? Asshole victim. Also, what do you mean anti-hero? Who kills her? Then how the heck do Charles and Laura..... __________________

2012-03-20, 13:19	Link #26764
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Damn near everyone, that means ex-PT members who heel-face turn'd. I 'm afraid you'd ask that simply put, they need the bog-standard in-vitro fertilization. Technically, it's a kid from lesbian couple....Note that Charles tool still useful for recreation purposes, if you know what I mean. __________________

2012-03-20, 13:25	Link #26765
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Why exactly is only Germany a Houdini? Can't be that hard. Could you not use white text? I can't read it since J'm on he phone. @ Tempest - For Future Imperfect I'm making as much kids as possible. __________________

2012-03-20, 13:30	Link #26766
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Haven't find the way to do that properly. Since it was mostly the military incompetence in management, which result in illegal lab scattered allover German. Can you suggest a scenario? Well, external ovulation. The embryo then planted in Laura's womb and grew to be a normal baby. Mind you Charles is not exactly impotent, if you know what I mean. Going to sleep.. __________________

2012-03-20, 13:37	Link #26767
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	How about just getting caught by the other countries? Of course, this doesn't mean the other countries are completely innocent, but we can deal with that later. Must feel odd to suddently have a banana in place of a taco. __________________

2012-03-20, 13:41	Link #26768
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	....How about German secretly doing another batch of super-soldier? And United Nations basically go "How many times we should let you slip, assfucker?! Tolerance no more!!" eh.....? __________________

2012-03-20, 13:46	Link #26769
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	@ Eratas: ....facepalms This is why I do genderswaps instead of sex changes...@_@ __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2012-03-20, 20:13	Link #26770
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Hey, Zero. Can practically anything trigger some sort of "flashback" that can result in a person "breaking down" right on the spot?

2012-03-20, 20:34	Link #26771
CmmdrRosh Gray Jedi Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: In the grey shadows between....	Hello Everyone! So what's going on in this part of Forum? __________________ This is Commander Rosh from the frontlines... "Those that lay their eyes on a member of STARIS...Shall be silenced." -Special Tactics Against Rogue Infinite Stratos (STARIS) Credos Infinite Stratos: Spirit of a Soldier "I will keep fighting, because that's the only thing that makes me feel... That is my reality." - The Cobalt Mercenary Objective Reality: A Sword Art Online Fanfiction

2012-03-20, 20:49	Link #26772
Silver-Throne Big Game Author Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Exclusively Inside Your Mind.	I`m almost done with school clearance.. When Creating a OC, be sure it`s not Gary Sue or Mary Sue(IF not aware what it means, go to wikipedia and search Gary Sue) I should have avoid that. Too bad I suck at writing First-person view. I need tips and pointers how to make 'it', help __________________ Deviant Art Fanfiction.net Profile WOT SEA

2012-03-20, 20:57	Link #26773
CmmdrRosh Gray Jedi Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: In the grey shadows between....	That's why I don't have any "SUE" characters... Most can handle themselves quite nicely, especially with the blackstory for the OC Plus, I never use First-Person writing... It hurts when I think about it... __________________ This is Commander Rosh from the frontlines... "Those that lay their eyes on a member of STARIS...Shall be silenced." -Special Tactics Against Rogue Infinite Stratos (STARIS) Credos Infinite Stratos: Spirit of a Soldier "I will keep fighting, because that's the only thing that makes me feel... That is my reality." - The Cobalt Mercenary Objective Reality: A Sword Art Online Fanfiction

2012-03-20, 21:31	Link #26774
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	CmmdrRosh - I've read parts of your story already, but can you give me a summary? @ Senpai - Then Germany pops out evidence the other countries aren't so innocent Charles lost his taco and got a banana when he got the operation. Do the math. __________________

2012-03-20, 22:40	Link #26775
CmmdrRosh Gray Jedi Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: In the grey shadows between....	@ Eratas123.... Meh, ok... It's not complete yet though....I want to note that the characters are AU because of the age.... 17-18 compared to 15-16 years old On December 21, 2012, The IS "White Knight" defended Japan against the ICBMs that targeted Japan's major cities. However, after the "White Knight Incident" nations had been secretly using IS machines to wage wars on each other. A couple of days later, a contact named "Janus" gives the permanent United Nations council members the battle schematics of the "White Knight"-- These nations create the banner of the Special Tactics Against Rogue Infinite Stratos or STARIS Fast-forward ten years later, and Kenneth Buyuu, an 18 year soldier of the United States STARIS program, is sent to Japan, to help him cope with his past. Problem is a year ago, he lost a loved one to Rogue IS units, leading him to slaughting over a 100 pilots in the US alone. This tarnished the US program of STARIS, the Scion Initiates or SI, and Kenneth is pretty much their redemption card... He is no ordinary soldier, a super soldier under the name "Son of the Three" regarding the Greatest Black-Ops STARIS pilots training him. (But then again, ALL members of STARIS are super soldiers, they are trained to brutally take down IS pilots). However, Kenneth is a special case where... Nope too far in the plot I have planned, will be saving that for later.... __________________ This is Commander Rosh from the frontlines... "Those that lay their eyes on a member of STARIS...Shall be silenced." -Special Tactics Against Rogue Infinite Stratos (STARIS) Credos Infinite Stratos: Spirit of a Soldier "I will keep fighting, because that's the only thing that makes me feel... That is my reality." - The Cobalt Mercenary Objective Reality: A Sword Art Online Fanfiction Last edited by CmmdrRosh; 2012-03-20 at 22:46. Reason: Continuation

2012-03-20, 22:50	Link #26776
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Sounds like Metal Gear Solid or something. Anyway, 100 IS pilots? Might be too much there. __________________

2012-03-20, 22:57	Link #26777
CmmdrRosh Gray Jedi Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: In the grey shadows between....	Meh, I never read too much into the MGS series... As for the IS pilots slaughter, it will be explained by the Three Black-Ops pilots that the world of the IS is ever-changing, people taking different names, lies deceit, etc. Even Phantom Task will have a pretty sizable front against the world of the IS. As I put in in the fanfiction, "The Infinite Stratos are the light... While STARIS is the dark." I like the concept of duality with characters, just as Kenneth. He seems to be a stoic person from the outside, but once you get to know him, he really is a nice person, and does have emotions... He just doesn't like showing it. __________________ This is Commander Rosh from the frontlines... "Those that lay their eyes on a member of STARIS...Shall be silenced." -Special Tactics Against Rogue Infinite Stratos (STARIS) Credos Infinite Stratos: Spirit of a Soldier "I will keep fighting, because that's the only thing that makes me feel... That is my reality." - The Cobalt Mercenary Objective Reality: A Sword Art Online Fanfiction

2012-03-20, 23:10	Link #26778
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	There are only 467 cores, and those were spread evenly all over the world with abut 20 at most per country. How did he, in your words, slaughter 100 pilots when he was just in the US? __________________

2012-03-20, 23:20	Link #26779
CmmdrRosh Gray Jedi Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: In the grey shadows between....	"Officially" told numbers to actual numbers, the STARIS wants to keep a constant watch on everything the IS world does... A constant balance between the IS cores and how much is told to the public... A majority of the pilots were cadets representatives candidates that didn't quite make the cut for a personal IS to be announced. Not like it mattered for them anyways, as they can cloak the true form of their IS armor. (This would also be used to explain how in the world Charlotte was able to conceal her breasts...yay cloaking technology of absurdity!) I was going to have later Tabane Shinonono comment on that near the end, that she feels like Alfred Nobel and his creation of dynamite... How much would she like to see her own inventions used to blow each other up over petty conflicts...And why is uses that "GENKI" personality of hers... __________________ This is Commander Rosh from the frontlines... "Those that lay their eyes on a member of STARIS...Shall be silenced." -Special Tactics Against Rogue Infinite Stratos (STARIS) Credos Infinite Stratos: Spirit of a Soldier "I will keep fighting, because that's the only thing that makes me feel... That is my reality." - The Cobalt Mercenary Objective Reality: A Sword Art Online Fanfiction Last edited by CmmdrRosh; 2012-03-20 at 23:22. Reason: Addition

2012-03-20, 23:26	Link #26780
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	All right, good luck with your fic then. Just be careful, this fandom and archive seems to love tearing into any story, bar humor, that disregards canon too much. Hence why many stories have few reviews. __________________