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ZeroXSEED · 2012-12-10, 21:38

@ Eras
Generally, there are three types of guy in TLR verse: Ultraconfident, Flexible, and Nihilistic.

1. Ultraconfident guy tend to advance relentlessly on the offensive, trying to get into girls good side and want to looks cool in their eyes. Usually backfire badly when overdoing their antics. Example: Motemitsu, Saruyama, Charles, Len (at first)

2. Flexible guy is the type that didn't see romance as serious business, but doesn't play around either (most of the time), and tend to play push and pull with the girls, seizing full control on the pace of relationship. When they flirt, it tend to be mundane, such as giving fair compliment or friendly tease. Example: TLR!Ichika, Dan, Yuu

3. Nihilistic guy are the type that never lie. But as the name implies, they're often had dim view on themselves. They're usually passive and the one that's being pursued actively. When they flirt, it tend to be incidental or implying mixed message (due to the lack of positive thinking). Example: Rito, Len (later)

demino_hellsin · 2012-12-11, 02:08

Anyone know mecha genre anime or game with a concept artbook? Those things are gold @_@

Eratas123 · 2012-12-11, 02:52

Gundam mecha?

demino_hellsin · 2012-12-11, 03:18

already studied them. 00 and some UC stuff, mostly zeta and Unicorn related models.

wavehawk · 2012-12-11, 03:52

Muv-Luv alternative artbooks?

demino_hellsin · 2012-12-11, 04:05

muv-luv reminds me far too much of linebarrel, except add a more moe harem. at least designwise. I can also see a little geneshaft and fafner.

agetreme · 2012-12-11, 04:07

Blue Flow and Blue Blaster?

http://www.youtube.com/embed/zOJRxkOuoNM

Their Mecha are awesome looking.

The problem is: If you play the actual game.... GOD! MOST OF THE UNITS ARE FREAKING SLOW! THEY ARE F@#KING SLOWER THAN A GI (C&C) unit. THEIR PATHFINDING SUXS AND IT WILL MAKE YOU WISH THAT YOU ARE PLAYING C&C!.

Still looking awesome though.

Played the game because of the Mecha, not the gameplay (apparently, they improve the gameplay a little)....

FtF(Fire to Finalize, I think that what it mean)

Edit: Oh, did I mention that some units are actually improved version of old unit from Blue Flow and the fact that some unit are so effective that they are still using them?

wavehawk · 2012-12-11, 04:14

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

except add a more moe harem

- And most of that moe harem gets eaten by aliens. Including your chosen girl.

demino_hellsin · 2012-12-11, 04:18

yeah... the whole pilot suit that looked like a blue pallette swap of Gantz suits and the gunbuster+fafner type atmosphere of the images apparently did not lie to my genre savvy brain. (I was in denial)

DarkJak2050 · 2012-12-11, 18:12

Okay guys, I seriously need some help on getting chapter 9 started. My main problem is making a transition from the end of chapter 8 and into chapter 9. Here's the last part of chapter 8 to give you guys an idea.

Spoiler for Final parts of Ch. 8:

And that's where I'm having trouble with starting chapter 9.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-12-11, 20:07

There's two way, first, have a switch POV. This is the most convenient and often used transition when there's cliffhanger. Silverbacks and Rogue I.S. watching as Ichika and the rest of student dashing toward their direction, and their reaction toward that.

And of course the second one is keep the POV, but that feels kinda bland.

And off topic: I absolutely hate Muvluv pilot suit's design.

HashiriyaR32 · 2012-12-11, 20:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by agetreme

Blue Flow and Blue Blaster?

http://www.youtube.com/embed/zOJRxkOuoNM

Their Mecha are awesome looking.

The problem is: If you play the actual game.... GOD! MOST OF THE UNITS ARE FREAKING SLOW! THEY ARE F@#KING SLOWER THAN A GI (C&C) unit. THEIR PATHFINDING SUXS AND IT WILL MAKE YOU WISH THAT YOU ARE PLAYING C&C!.

Still looking awesome though.

Played the game because of the Mecha, not the gameplay (apparently, they improve the gameplay a little)....

FtF(Fire to Finalize, I think that what it mean)

Edit: Oh, did I mention that some units are actually improved version of old unit from Blue Flow and the fact that some unit are so effective that they are still using them?

Wow damn, you don't know how long it's been since I've seen someone mention Blue Blaster. The person initially introduced it to me 3 years ago is someone I'm no longer in contact with.

Eratas123 · 2012-12-11, 20:48

I'm currently trying to write Reversal. I jsut have one question; how odd is it to see a 14 year old with tatoos?

demino_hellsin · 2012-12-12, 00:57

Depends on level of delinquency. Normal circumstances I'd say uncommon.

wavehawk · 2012-12-12, 03:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

how odd is it to see a 14 year old with tatoos?

- Depends. Do you live in Altona, VIC, Australia?

StratoSpear · 2012-12-12, 07:01

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

how odd is it to see a 14 year old with tatoos?

Very, I'll say. Let alone that 15-16 year olds having tatoos are already quite a sight...

Eratas123 · 2012-12-12, 07:06

Really? I've seen 15 year olds with tatoo.s

agetreme · 2012-12-12, 07:12

Wow... Is Blue Blaster really that obscure that nobody else commented on it?

StratoSpear · 2012-12-12, 07:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Really? I've seen 15 year olds with tatoo.s

Well you can say it's sort of a biased opinion. In Singapore, I rarely see anyone below 16 years of age having a tatoo, if there's any.

@Age
I don't know what to say, man... They look like a combination of TSFs, Virtuaroids and ACs, which is pretty awesome at the very least.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-12-12, 07:30

@ Eras
Yes, it's odd, and the standard really depend on the local culture (Hawke already implies that).

Point: in Japan, a young teen having a tattoo almost always means dim future, being a sure sign of delinquency and lack of disciplined lifestyle, thus gain no respect from moral guardians (Parents, school etc).

@ Age
I'm sure I never heard that....

2012-12-10, 21:38	Link #38621
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras Generally, there are three types of guy in TLR verse: Ultraconfident, Flexible, and Nihilistic. 1. Ultraconfident guy tend to advance relentlessly on the offensive, trying to get into girls good side and want to looks cool in their eyes. Usually backfire badly when overdoing their antics. Example: Motemitsu, Saruyama, Charles, Len (at first) 2. Flexible guy is the type that didn't see romance as serious business, but doesn't play around either (most of the time), and tend to play push and pull with the girls, seizing full control on the pace of relationship. When they flirt, it tend to be mundane, such as giving fair compliment or friendly tease. Example: TLR!Ichika, Dan, Yuu 3. Nihilistic guy are the type that never lie. But as the name implies, they're often had dim view on themselves. They're usually passive and the one that's being pursued actively. When they flirt, it tend to be incidental or implying mixed message (due to the lack of positive thinking). Example: Rito, Len (later) __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2012-12-10 at 21:52.

2012-12-11, 02:52	Link #38623
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Gundam mecha? __________________

2012-12-11, 03:52	Link #38625
wavehawk Some say I'm the Reverse Join Date: Jul 2006	Muv-Luv alternative artbooks? __________________ "We haven't been properly introduced..."

2012-12-11, 04:07	Link #38627
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Blue Flow and Blue Blaster? http://www.youtube.com/embed/zOJRxkOuoNM Their Mecha are awesome looking. The problem is: If you play the actual game.... GOD! MOST OF THE UNITS ARE FREAKING SLOW! THEY ARE F@#KING SLOWER THAN A GI (C&C) unit. THEIR PATHFINDING SUXS AND IT WILL MAKE YOU WISH THAT YOU ARE PLAYING C&C!. Still looking awesome though. Played the game because of the Mecha, not the gameplay (apparently, they improve the gameplay a little).... FtF(Fire to Finalize, I think that what it mean) Edit: Oh, did I mention that some units are actually improved version of old unit from Blue Flow and the fact that some unit are so effective that they are still using them? __________________ Ara Han

2012-12-11, 18:12	Link #38630
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Okay guys, I seriously need some help on getting chapter 9 started. My main problem is making a transition from the end of chapter 8 and into chapter 9. Here's the last part of chapter 8 to give you guys an idea. Spoiler for Final parts of Ch. 8: DON DON DON DON DON DON DON DON DON DON! The booming sound echoed as the missiles flew out at the same time from the ISes shoulders and wings. "Incoming!" The missiles rushed at us. "Disperse!" We all broke off as the missiles closed in. "Oh shit! They're locked on us!" BAM! Click clack! BAM! Click clack! BAM! Click clack! Ratchet's continuously firing his Flak Cannon at the missiles homing in on him. With its very wide shotgun pattern on every shot at close range, multiple missiles prematurely went off from getting hit by the barrage of flak shells. "Tch…" I had my share of missiles homing on me. But unlike Ratchet, I didn't equip my Silverback with a Flak Cannon to counter them. The best I can do is to avoid them at all costs. I sprinted left, heading for the soccer field with the missiles still following me from behind, roaring like a pack of wolves. Getting closer and closer to the field, the missiles were slowly approaching right behind me. There's only one thing that I have that could get me out of this mess. "—" Like a last ditch effort, I burst myself backwards into the air; jumping over the missiles that are locked on to me in a back flip fashion. I threw out a Concussion grenade ahead of the hoard of missiles as they began to pull up towards back me. Beephew! The Concussion grenade went off; throwing the missiles off their course and into total disarray. Some of them went off by crashing into each other in mid-air, while the rest blew up as they crashed into the ground. "Ha-ha-ha…" "Hot Shot, you okay?" Landing to recover from that ordeal, Sideswipe contacted me through the radio comms. "I'm alright. What about Ratchet and Scourge?" "They're okay. Although, the IS managed to down Scourge's Silverback with those missiles, but Ratchet restored his energy shield." I got back up and spotted the IS at the school's track and field, engaging on Scourge. Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh Perh! Scourge retaliates with his Saber assault rifle. "Come on, bitch! Is that all you got?" "—" The shoulder wings of the IS then began to slide open as I made a mad rush towards the IS to assist Scourge. But before I can get a shot off from my Saber, the IS launched another barrage of missiles at me and Scourge. Scourge was still firing his Saber at the IS, dodging each missile right before they hit him. These missiles were not lock-on, so dodging them is a whole lot easier. "Hah!" I dove forward towards the oncoming missiles through the gaps, and hit the ground rolling towards the IS. Getting out of my roll, I deployed both of my forearm mounted combat blades and lunged at the IS. KLANG! The sound of heaving metal clashing echoed throughout the school grounds. The IS pulled out a halberd at the last second to deflect my strike, knocking me back. "—" "Tch. So you do have a melee weapon." Trying to regain my balance, the IS was about to strike her Halberd down right at me. "Ugh!" I dove right to dodge the first strike, but the IS wasn't done; it soon followed up with a series of swings. Whooph! Going left… Whooph! Then right... And while I was avoiding the swings, Ratchet then came on the radio comms. "Hot Shot, I'm picking up 6 bogies heading our way." "How far are they away from us?" "They're about 10 kilometer (6.2 miles) away from here and closing in fast." "Well, check on them once every now and then." "Roger, boss man." Great, as if things aren't tough enough as it is… The IS held her halberd up about to do an overhead swing. On reaction, I raised my both my arms up and crossed my blades to block the downward strike. "Gr-r-r-r-g-gh!" A deadlock, but one where the IS has the advantage because it's applying its weight down on me. "Gr-r. Er-r-r-r-rghh!" I can feel the ground collapsing from underneath me; I won't last much longer… "Guys, I can use some help here!" Scourge and Sideswipe were frantically aiming their Sabers precisely to avoid hitting me. "Bro, we can't get a clear shot off with you in that deadlock." "Ratchet…" "You want to blow up the whole school? Anyway, those bogies have stopped about 1.2 kilometers (0.75 miles) from here." "Well, wha- what are they doing- if they have to stop?" "I don't know for sure, but it looks like that they're just standing there." "Tch..." "—" The IS continues to apply more force on me, forcing me further into the ground. Tick-tack! I heard a sharp metallic cracking sound from above and looked at my blades. Oh, shit… A crack began to form on both blades from where the blade of the IS's Halberd in contact with. "Gr-er-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r…" As a last ditch effort to break the lock, I shift my crossed blades to the left… "HYA-AGH!" And suddenly swung them sideways to the right, diverting the IS's strike. The sudden jolt threw the IS off balance. With the current conditions of my blades, I had to retract them and go bare handed. And just as I was about to make a strike towards the IS, someone blared through the radio comms. "INCOMING!" "!" BOOM! *BOOM!* Something struck both me and the rogue IS; knocking it down and knocking me away from the IS. "Dagh! Ugh!... Ugh…" The visor has a huge 3-way crack in the center of it, with all 3 cracks reaching the edges of the visor. As for the vision, it lost its color and blurred as I hit the ground from that attack. "Ugh…" I tried to get myself up, but it feels like that I have a huge weight throughout my body, preventing me from getting up. I can faintly hear Sideswipe in the raido comms to alert Ratchet and Scourge… "Hot Shot's down! Hot Shot, Hot Shot!" "UO-O-O-O-O-H-H-H-H! Stop this at once!" "Who are you guys? And why are you attacking that IS?" The radio comms are flooding with constant chatter from multiple sources; making it difficult to make out who's saying what. All the while my helmet's vision began to slowly turn from grey to red hue. *12:29 PM, August 17 2021. Odaiba, Japan Airspace.* Soaring through the skies over Odaiba is a small group of ISes, flying in the direction of Ishiyama High. This group of ISes consists of the Byakushiki, Blue Tears, Shenlong, Raphael-Revie Custom II, Schwarzer Regen and Akatsubaki. The Byakushiki, piloted by Ichika Orimura, is at the front of the group, leading the way. Entering range of the optical systems, Ichika is observing the ongoing skirmish ahead of them through a magnified live video feed. "What are those things!-?" Cecilia Alcott, The Blue Tear's pilot, noticed the rogue IS and the Silverbacks don't resemble anything of what they've encountered before. As well as the size difference between the IS and the Silverbacks "Whatever they are, they sure are not on good terms with each other." Laura's watching two Silverbacks, one picking up another as the smoke around them began to clear. As the Silverback that got picked up stood up, it re-engaged the rogue IS. Charlotte, The Raphael-Revive Custom II's pilot, noticed the surrounding area around Ishiyama High. "Well, at least the area around the high school's evacuated." "That's good. Wait a minute…" Ichika took a closer look at one of the Silverbacks through the video feed. The Silverback he's watching made a charge towards the IS, evading through the gaps of the oncoming missiles the IS launched and lunged at the IS with both forearm mounted combat blades deployed. "Are those the Silverbacks!-?" "Silverbacks? Weren't those recently unveiled?" Rin, the ShenLong's pilot, watches one of the Silverbacks dodge the rogue IS's halberd, as they got closer to the high school. "It said during its unveiling that it can rival the 3rd generation ISes..." "That I would like to see." Cecilia and Rin looks as though that a small fire has been lit up inside them. All the while, Houki continues to watch one of the Silverbacks get into a deadlock with the rogue IS while the other Silverbacks are having a tough time getting a steady aim. "No matter what, we have to put an end to that." """"""Right!"""""" Ichika called up his main weapon, the Yukihira, and Houki with her twin katanas, the Amatsuki and Karaware as the whole group stopped mid-air 1.2 kilometers (0.75 miles) away from the high school. Charlotte called up her Garm SMG and Rin pulled out one of her scimitar blades. Cecilia pulled out her Blue Pierce laser rifle and dispatched 4 bits from the Blue Tears's wings. Laura began to deploy support struts behind her, at the same time deploying her right shoulder mounted rail gun and both took aim at the IS and Silverback in their deadlock. Ichika, Houki, Charlote and Rin are holding back behind Cecilia and Laura, waiting for them to take their shots. Zrr-r-r-r-r-r… Laura began to charge up her Railgun and Cecilia got a lock on her target. Watching the Silverback break the deadlock by suddenly swinging his crossed arms right, the sudden jolt threw the IS off balance causing it to stumble. The gap in between the rogue IS and the Silverback gave the 2 IS pilots the opportunity. BOOM! ***Bhew—!*** The charged shot from Laura's rail gun and the laser beams from Cecilia's Blue Pierce laser rifle and bits were fired simultaneously. Impacting their targets near the south building of the high school The rail gunshot and one of the bit's lasers made a direct hit on the rogue IS, and the Blue Pierce and the other 3 bits laser struck the Silverback that's in a middle of a mid air, pre-emptive strike towards the IS and he falls to the ground. "Target's have been hit! Keep hitting them! Keep hitting them!" "Tch!" Ichika, tightly gripped the Yukihira, increased the thrusters power on the Byakushiki and dashes towards the rogue IS and the Silverbacks. Houki startles at his abrupt yet reckless maneuver. "Hey! Ichika!... Oh, he's always like this…" With her calls unable to reach him, she and the rest of the IS pilots follow suit, amplifying their thruster's power output to catch up to the Byakushiki. And that's where I'm having trouble with starting chapter 9.

2012-12-11, 02:08	Link #38622
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Anyone know mecha genre anime or game with a concept artbook? Those things are gold @_@

2012-12-11, 03:18	Link #38624
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	already studied them. 00 and some UC stuff, mostly zeta and Unicorn related models.

2012-12-11, 04:05	Link #38626
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	muv-luv reminds me far too much of linebarrel, except add a more moe harem. at least designwise. I can also see a little geneshaft and fafner.

2012-12-11, 04:18	Link #38629
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	yeah... the whole pilot suit that looked like a blue pallette swap of Gantz suits and the gunbuster+fafner type atmosphere of the images apparently did not lie to my genre savvy brain. (I was in denial)

2012-12-11, 20:07	Link #38631
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	There's two way, first, have a switch POV. This is the most convenient and often used transition when there's cliffhanger. Silverbacks and Rogue I.S. watching as Ichika and the rest of student dashing toward their direction, and their reaction toward that. And of course the second one is keep the POV, but that feels kinda bland. And off topic: I absolutely hate Muvluv pilot suit's design. __________________

2012-12-11, 20:48	Link #38633
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I'm currently trying to write Reversal. I jsut have one question; how odd is it to see a 14 year old with tatoos? __________________

2012-12-12, 00:57	Link #38634
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Depends on level of delinquency. Normal circumstances I'd say uncommon.

2012-12-12, 07:06	Link #38637
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Really? I've seen 15 year olds with tatoo.s __________________

2012-12-12, 07:12	Link #38638
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Wow... Is Blue Blaster really that obscure that nobody else commented on it? __________________ Ara Han

2012-12-12, 07:30	Link #38640
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras Yes, it's odd, and the standard really depend on the local culture (Hawke already implies that). Point: in Japan, a young teen having a tattoo almost always means dim future, being a sure sign of delinquency and lack of disciplined lifestyle, thus gain no respect from moral guardians (Parents, school etc). @ Age I'm sure I never heard that.... __________________