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[Loremaster]

Major updates for my fanfiction work.

A Certain Hidden Level Five
Summery: One of Academy city's darkest secrets return after two years with broken memories. He is the hidden level five, officially ranked sixth among the seven. His return will spark a serious of events that will shake the very foundation of the science world. Will the hidden level five regain his memories? Or will they be lost forever?

Chapter 33 - The Final Battle
Chapter 34 - An Nightmare's End
Chapter 35 - A Happy Birthday
Chapter 36 - Looking Towards the Future (Epilogue)

A Certain Hidden Past
Summery: From small recollections, diary entries and memories. Witness the history of a certain hidden level five, from the young age of five and throughout his path of destruction lasting eight years. While many look back on the boy's past, never has it been so important to help determine the future, but not everything is what it seems.

A Certain Hidden Origin
A Certain Hidden Christmas Tale
A Certain Hidden Operation
A Certain Field Evaluation and Teamwork

A Certain Hot-Spring Adventure
Summery: During those Six months between 'Certain Hidden Level Five' and 'Certain British Intervention'. The Original Level Five had won some tickets to a hot-spring outside of Academy city, but he wasn't the only one who won tickets there. Find out what happens when they all descend on an unsuspecting resort.

Chapter 1 - The Arrival
Chapter 2 - Sleeping Arrangements

A Certain British Intervention
Summery:A peaceful six months have past since the events of a 'Certain Hidden Level Five'. But all that would come to an end with the death of Eolas and Laura Stuart's father. Igniting a chain of events which not only sends the magical community into confusion, but also the entire world on the brink of a Third World War.

Chapter 1 - The Knight and the Thief
Chapter 2 - The Knight and the Thief(2)
Chapter 3 - The Knight and the Thief(3)
Chapter 4 - The Knight and the Thief(4)

[Hiss13]

Ugh...I finally got off that writers block, got some work done irl, and got to write more of my Birdy Fic.
Here are the previous parts.
Birdy Fic Part 1
Birdy Fic Part 2
Birdy Fic Part 3
Birdy Fic Part 4-5
Birdy Fic Parts 6-7
Birdy Fic Parts 8-11

Spoiler for Birdy Fic Part 12:

A Certain Classroom of A Certain High School

Tsukuyomi Komoe was a girl with a passion for teaching and she loved her class. No matter how much she may have tried to protest it, she loved their rowdy antics and how upbeat the class was in general. So, it should come as no surprise that she was on edge after the class had gone somewhat somber after the passing of one of their own. Even the bell for lunch was enough at that point to startle the little teacher and that was what ended up happening.

“Hiyeeeh!” Komoe looked up to the speaker in a moment of surprise and followed up with a sigh. “That’s it for today. You guys will be having PE after lunch so eat well.” Komoe sighed before turning to the door.

“Komoe-sensei seems to be taking this really hard.”

“What would you expect? Tsuchimikado-kun just passed away without warning.”

“It really just does not feel the same at all without him.”

“Even the Delta Force is too somber.”

“They just feel so unbalanced with only two people.”

The seemingly young teacher placed her hand on the sliding door of the classroom before looking back at the two students sitting and staring out of the window. It hurt her as a teacher to see her students who she treated like her own children looking like that. It hurt her even more that she has been and still was unable to do anything to help alleviate it. Feeling helpless, she slid open the door.

*THUD*

In less than a second, three girls of similar sizes were lying on top of each other in front of that open door. On top was a young blonde. In the middle was…

“SISTER-CHAN!?’ Komoe shouted from her position on the bottom of the dogpile.

“Myaah…” The cat who seemed to have jumped out of the nun’s arms onto her head at the last moment let out a cry while everyone in the class looked towards the scene in front of them.

“Index!? Patricia!? What the hell are you guys doi—bfuu!” Kamijou jolted out of seat after realizing what was going on only to be met with a punch to the stomach from his blue-haired friend.

“Kamijou, again?”

“That bastard.”

“Are we REALLY that surprised?”

“Dammit, Kami-yan!” Aogami shouted for everyone to hear. “Why? First it’s that silver-haired nun and now it’s a cute little blonde loli character! What’s next? Some blonde goddess with skimpy clothes and an eyepatch? A high-priestess of a hidden religious sect? A young Cinderella in a form-fitting outfit? Or maybe it will be a star-eyed girl w—geh!!”

The spiky-haired boy who recovered finally retaliated with an identical move. “What the hell was that for!? Moreover, what’s with those super specific examples?!” He stamped before moving in for another punch while Aogami moved in for a cross-counter. Within seconds, a brawl erupted between the two of them.

“Two-hundred yen on Kamijou!”

“Five-hundred on Aogami!”

While the bets were erupting from the population of students in the class, a girl with hime hair approached while slowly reaching her hand out to the spiky-black-haired boy. “Um...please don’t get hurt...” Despite that, she could not muster up the courage to say or do anything more.

Suddenly another bet was announced. “One thousand on Fukiyose!”

The students who already made their bets faced the spiky-haired girl with glasses in the back who had just made her bet. More accurately, they were staring at the Iron Wall Girl who was dashing past her into the fray with an expression of obvious irritation.

“KAMIJOOOOOOOOOU!” With a single low roar, Fukiyose jumped into the fray. “You just had to get Himegami and the rest of the class involved in your damn stupidity!” Within that minute, the brawl escalated with Kamijou and Aogami fighting to stay conscious.

In the meantime, Patricia could only watch as she was unable to stop the loud brawl.

Some Himegami screentime!

...and now...I'm stuck...
I completely forgot what I wanted Patricia's reply message from Part 8 to be.
...and I was on such a roll...

[SmokinFerret88]

I wonder if its too far-fetched to say that there's a maid cafe somewhere in District 7....

Anyone else think its far-fetched or am I the only person with doubts here?

[Draco Spirit]

It could work!

[Hiss13]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

I wonder if its too far-fetched to say that there's a maid cafe somewhere in District 7....

Anyone else think its far-fetched or am I the only person with doubts here?

Um...it's not far-fetched. I can see that happening. Districts 3, 6, 14, and 15 would be more fitting for a maid cafe. But, seeing as District 7 is a residential area, it would be okay.
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Ugh...the damn message is killing me. I think what I originally had planned for Patricia's reply message was a simple no but...that's just not absurd enough...ugh...I can't move on until I figure this out.

[SmokinFerret88]

Ah thanks for the input Hiss, much appreciated.

In regards to the message: I would say it would be simple. The text present there said the message was short; so I'm guessing that it was simple if it was short.

Something along the lines of maybe: "You two worry too much, I'm fine and in good hands. I'm sure sister won't hurt you, so just let her know I'm fine and I'll be home soon."

[Hiss13]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

Ah thanks for the input Hiss, much appreciated.

In regards to the message: I would say it would be simple. The text present there said the message was short; so I'm guessing that it was simple if it was short.

Something along the lines of maybe: "You two worry too much, I'm fine and in good hands. I'm sure sister won't hurt you, so just let her know I'm fine and I'll be home soon."

I did say that it was a short message, didn't I. Geez...it feels like it's been forever since I wrote that. Stupid real life. Stupid medical school applications...

But, your reply gave me an idea.

[SmokinFerret88]

Glad I can be of assistance.

On another note, I'm still debating whether or not I wanna have Mugino in an arcade and only being good a Skee-ball.

Don't ask why I picked Skee-ball...

[Loremaster]

Hey guys, currently working on a one shot and just wondering what you think of what I got so far... It only covers the setting of the story, but it could give you an idea of what is to come.

Spoiler:

A Certain Scientific Dystopia

(AU)(OneShot) What happens when the Illumanti had succeeded in bringing down the Roman Catholic church? Speeding up the world's technology advancement and sending the magical community into a frightening decline? In the year of 2014, magic has almost been eradicated except for a city state in Japan. This is a story of their attempt to survive in a Scientific Dystopia.
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Elysium city, the last bastion of the magical community in the entire world. Located in the middle of the Tokyo ruins, the city has a pollution of three million with over half being solely students. The city is dedicated to preserving magical knowledge and reclaim secrets lost after two hundred years of persecution. Built after the First World War and surviving the largest bombing campaign during World War two and even afterwards city was still politically at war with most of the world. With one of the exceptions being the rest of Japan, acting as the third party between them and the world.

This is because after many years of trying the Scientific community hadn't found a way to break through the magical field which protects the city from outside hostile attacks. And because of this long standing stalemate, the Japanese government trying to keep peace on the island had issued the Magical Preservation Bill to the UN. Stating that the city should be protected from being wiped out to avoid losing an important part of the world's culture and history. Arguing while they don't agree with the practices of magicians, that they should be given the chance of living only in the confines of the city.

And were also heavily guarded if any are required to leave the city on business with the rest of the world.

The Bill was accepted and enforced in the 1970s, which was publicly agreed on the grounds of helping those who are naturally born with magical power. By sending them to the city with guidance to control their power for the greater good of humanity. Which was pushed through due to public pressure against execution practices of children born with magic before the bill was enforced.

Thanks to recent political changes, the city has remained even up to today. For the first time in two hundred years, the magical community was finally able to know peace.

But all that was a deliberate farce as while on the surface the major powers of the scientific world had shown good will. In the shadows of the global companies which control most of the world, they continues to wage war to bring an end to magic for good.

Thanks to the recent political changes which governed the world, the city was open to the general public and the city has the right to enforce security on all those with magic and without according to international law. But this had allowed it much easier for agents to sneak into the city and attempt to steal many of the forbidden Grimoires to undermine Elysium and find out a way to end magic surfacing in newborns.

But because of the very fragile political situation, the city can't openly protest these actions and instead had tasked a security group, mostly formed of volunteers of all ages to combat these attacks and preserve the future of their city.

This group is known as the 'Book Keepers' or more popular known as just the 'Keepers'.

And this is where the story begins, when three trainees for the Keeper organisation is thrown into a conflict which could decide the future of their world.

[omega253]

I seriously don't know how I came up with this. For those of you who have watched the anime with a long name that was shortened to NouCome, you might enjoy this.

Spoiler for ERABE:

The bell at A Certain High School rung, signaling that it was time for afternoon break. The boisterous students of Year 1, Class 7 shuffled out of the classroom with the intention of buying or eating lunch with their friends from the other classes.

One of the students who stayed behind, a boy with spiky hair, had his head down on his desk. His arms were locked over his eyes, trying to block out the sunlight as he attempted to obtain a scant few minutes of sleep.

“Oi, Kamijou, don’t sleep during school. You have a bed at home for things like that.” An irate girl with long hair said, walking to his desk as she carried a bundle of packets.

“Mmmhhh…” Kamijou groaned and lifted his head up. Particularly, his hair was even spikier than it usually was and his eyes had deep shadows under them. “What did you say, Fukiyose?”

The Iron Wall girl’s eye twitched. “Did you get any sleep last night?”

The tired boy gave a mad grin. “Not a single second! But it was an eventful night because I finished my backlog of all the homework I’ve missed! That’s right! This Kamijou-san sacrificed many hours of sleep to defeat that dreaded enemy of his! Ahahahahahahahahahaaaaa!!!”

His maniacal rant drew looks from the occupants of the classroom. There were mixed feelings of pity and sympathy from the bedraggled students.

“…Umm,” Fukiyose, for once, was not sure on how to respond to that odd behavior. She looked down to the bundle of nutritious bread in her arms and carefully extended a packet out. “Do you…want a bun?” The girl chose her words carefully as to not provoke another psychotic reaction from the sleep-deprived boy.

A grumble from Kamijou’s stomach sounded out. Since he’d gone on a crusade the previous night to finish every scrap of missing homework, he’s forgone both dinner and breakfast to complete everything before school. Naturally, he was very hungry.

“Yes, I’d like tha-“

ERABE

Blue and pink text boxes appeared in mid-air, only visible to the boy.

His heart sunk. Kamijou felt like he was about weep until his tear ducts would dry out.

No. Please, no.

He’d gone hours without sleep and food. Couldn’t he have a little reprieve?!

1-Grope Fukiyose-san’s chest and say, ‘I’ll have these buns.’

2-Stand up and show your buns to the world.

‘What buns?!’ Kamijou roared in his head. ‘Isn’t that just my ass?!’

In the first place, it was the accursed voice that forced to do all his homework in one sitting. The previous night, he’d been given the choice of finishing all of the schoolwork that he was behind on with only breaks for the bathroom or to run through Academy City bare ass naked once the sun came up.

‘Damn, can’t I skip this?’ Pain lanced through the spiky-haired boy’s mind, causing him to wince. ‘Screw it, at least I will be knocked out. I’ll take Choice 1.’ The text boxes disappeared as he made his decision.

Kamijou stuck out his own hands past Fukiyose’s extended arm, landing on her generous bust. She froze as his hands took hold of her breasts. The boy looked her straight in the eye and spoke, “I’ll have these buns.”

“Y-You…!” The girl gritted out, her face going as red as a tomato. She dropped all of the bread and launched a punch.

Kamijou felt a strike akin to a cannonball and soon flew out the open window next to his seat, hearing the wind whistle by. He landed in one of the trees outside the front of the school, the leaves cushioning his fall. The boy curled up on his side and closed his eyes, deciding that some sleep was in order. Interruptions be damned, Kamijou-san would get a minimum seven hours of sleep before he would get down from the tree!

He intentionally ignored the scream of ‘PERVEEEEEEERRRRRRRTTTTTTTT!!!’ that was coming from the classroom above him.

This has some potential as a fic idea. Anybody willing to comment on whether or not I've lost my touch after so long?

[The One Above God]

Originally Posted by omega253

I seriously don't know how I came up with this. For those of you who have watched the anime with a long name that was shortened to NouCome, you might enjoy this.

Spoiler for ERABE:

The bell at A Certain High School rung, signaling that it was time for afternoon break. The boisterous students of Year 1, Class 7 shuffled out of the classroom with the intention of buying or eating lunch with their friends from the other classes.

One of the students who stayed behind, a boy with spiky hair, had his head down on his desk. His arms were locked over his eyes, trying to block out the sunlight as he attempted to obtain a scant few minutes of sleep.

“Oi, Kamijou, don’t sleep during school. You have a bed at home for things like that.” An irate girl with long hair said, walking to his desk as she carried a bundle of packets.

“Mmmhhh…” Kamijou groaned and lifted his head up. Particularly, his hair was even spikier than it usually was and his eyes had deep shadows under them. “What did you say, Fukiyose?”

The Iron Wall girl’s eye twitched. “Did you get any sleep last night?”

The tired boy gave a mad grin. “Not a single second! But it was an eventful night because I finished my backlog of all the homework I’ve missed! That’s right! This Kamijou-san sacrificed many hours of sleep to defeat that dreaded enemy of his! Ahahahahahahahahahaaaaa!!!”

His maniacal rant drew looks from the occupants of the classroom. There were mixed feelings of pity and sympathy from the bedraggled students.

“…Umm,” Fukiyose, for once, was not sure on how to respond to that odd behavior. She looked down to the bundle of nutritious bread in her arms and carefully extended a packet out. “Do you…want a bun?” The girl chose her words carefully as to not provoke another psychotic reaction from the sleep-deprived boy.

A grumble from Kamijou’s stomach sounded out. Since he’d gone on a crusade the previous night to finish every scrap of missing homework, he’s forgone both dinner and breakfast to complete everything before school. Naturally, he was very hungry.

“Yes, I’d like tha-“

ERABE

Blue and pink text boxes appeared in mid-air, only visible to the boy.

His heart sunk. Kamijou felt like he was about weep until his tear ducts would dry out.

No. Please, no.

He’d gone hours without sleep and food. Couldn’t he have a little reprieve?!

1-Grope Fukiyose-san’s chest and say, ‘I’ll have these buns.’

2-Stand up and show your buns to the world.

‘What buns?!’ Kamijou roared in his head. ‘Isn’t that just my ass?!’

In the first place, it was the accursed voice that forced to do all his homework in one sitting. The previous night, he’d been given the choice of finishing all of the schoolwork that he was behind on with only breaks for the bathroom or to run through Academy City bare ass naked once the sun came up.

‘Damn, can’t I skip this?’ Pain lanced through the spiky-haired boy’s mind, causing him to wince. ‘Screw it, at least I will be knocked out. I’ll take Choice 1.’ The text boxes disappeared as he made his decision.

Kamijou stuck out his own hands past Fukiyose’s extended arm, landing on her generous bust. She froze as his hands took hold of her breasts. The boy looked her straight in the eye and spoke, “I’ll have these buns.”

“Y-You…!” The girl gritted out, her face going as red as a tomato. She dropped all of the bread and launched a punch.

Kamijou felt a strike akin to a cannonball and soon flew out the open window next to his seat, hearing the wind whistle by. He landed in one of the trees outside the front of the school, the leaves cushioning his fall. The boy curled up on his side and closed his eyes, deciding that some sleep was in order. Interruptions be damned, Kamijou-san would get a minimum seven hours of sleep before he would get down from the tree!

He intentionally ignored the scream of ‘PERVEEEEEEERRRRRRRTTTTTTTT!!!’ that was coming from the classroom above him.

This has some potential as a fic idea. Anybody willing to comment on whether or not I've lost my touch after so long?

hmmm... Smells like MISFORTUNE lol Someone with Touma's luck(or the lack of it) should never have the choice power it would be just too much.
I liked this though. Can't wait to read a full chapter if you ever decide on making one

[TkMacintosh]

Just think of when it happens mid-battle against a female opponent...The possibilities of things going wrong then is just hilarious.

[Hiss13]

Originally Posted by omega253

I seriously don't know how I came up with this. For those of you who have watched the anime with a long name that was shortened to NouCome, you might enjoy this.

Spoiler for ERABE:

The bell at A Certain High School rung, signaling that it was time for afternoon break. The boisterous students of Year 1, Class 7 shuffled out of the classroom with the intention of buying or eating lunch with their friends from the other classes.

One of the students who stayed behind, a boy with spiky hair, had his head down on his desk. His arms were locked over his eyes, trying to block out the sunlight as he attempted to obtain a scant few minutes of sleep.

“Oi, Kamijou, don’t sleep during school. You have a bed at home for things like that.” An irate girl with long hair said, walking to his desk as she carried a bundle of packets.

“Mmmhhh…” Kamijou groaned and lifted his head up. Particularly, his hair was even spikier than it usually was and his eyes had deep shadows under them. “What did you say, Fukiyose?”

The Iron Wall girl’s eye twitched. “Did you get any sleep last night?”

The tired boy gave a mad grin. “Not a single second! But it was an eventful night because I finished my backlog of all the homework I’ve missed! That’s right! This Kamijou-san sacrificed many hours of sleep to defeat that dreaded enemy of his! Ahahahahahahahahahaaaaa!!!”

His maniacal rant drew looks from the occupants of the classroom. There were mixed feelings of pity and sympathy from the bedraggled students.

“…Umm,” Fukiyose, for once, was not sure on how to respond to that odd behavior. She looked down to the bundle of nutritious bread in her arms and carefully extended a packet out. “Do you…want a bun?” The girl chose her words carefully as to not provoke another psychotic reaction from the sleep-deprived boy.

A grumble from Kamijou’s stomach sounded out. Since he’d gone on a crusade the previous night to finish every scrap of missing homework, he’s forgone both dinner and breakfast to complete everything before school. Naturally, he was very hungry.

“Yes, I’d like tha-“

ERABE

Blue and pink text boxes appeared in mid-air, only visible to the boy.

His heart sunk. Kamijou felt like he was about weep until his tear ducts would dry out.

No. Please, no.

He’d gone hours without sleep and food. Couldn’t he have a little reprieve?!

1-Grope Fukiyose-san’s chest and say, ‘I’ll have these buns.’

2-Stand up and show your buns to the world.

‘What buns?!’ Kamijou roared in his head. ‘Isn’t that just my ass?!’

In the first place, it was the accursed voice that forced to do all his homework in one sitting. The previous night, he’d been given the choice of finishing all of the schoolwork that he was behind on with only breaks for the bathroom or to run through Academy City bare ass naked once the sun came up.

‘Damn, can’t I skip this?’ Pain lanced through the spiky-haired boy’s mind, causing him to wince. ‘Screw it, at least I will be knocked out. I’ll take Choice 1.’ The text boxes disappeared as he made his decision.

Kamijou stuck out his own hands past Fukiyose’s extended arm, landing on her generous bust. She froze as his hands took hold of her breasts. The boy looked her straight in the eye and spoke, “I’ll have these buns.”

“Y-You…!” The girl gritted out, her face going as red as a tomato. She dropped all of the bread and launched a punch.

Kamijou felt a strike akin to a cannonball and soon flew out the open window next to his seat, hearing the wind whistle by. He landed in one of the trees outside the front of the school, the leaves cushioning his fall. The boy curled up on his side and closed his eyes, deciding that some sleep was in order. Interruptions be damned, Kamijou-san would get a minimum seven hours of sleep before he would get down from the tree!

He intentionally ignored the scream of ‘PERVEEEEEEERRRRRRRTTTTTTTT!!!’ that was coming from the classroom above him.

This has some potential as a fic idea. Anybody willing to comment on whether or not I've lost my touch after so long?

I don't remember what your touch was but you likely have not lost it.
I can just imagine Kotomine Kirei laughing as he randomly orders "ERABE".

[Loremaster]

To continue from my post above, the story has been completed and revised. Hope you enjoy my Alternative universe called a Certain Scientific Dystopia https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1053851...-Story-Version

[Wandering Soul]

Originally Posted by omega253

I seriously don't know how I came up with this. For those of you who have watched the anime with a long name that was shortened to NouCome, you might enjoy this.

Spoiler for ERABE:

The bell at A Certain High School rung, signaling that it was time for afternoon break. The boisterous students of Year 1, Class 7 shuffled out of the classroom with the intention of buying or eating lunch with their friends from the other classes.

One of the students who stayed behind, a boy with spiky hair, had his head down on his desk. His arms were locked over his eyes, trying to block out the sunlight as he attempted to obtain a scant few minutes of sleep.

“Oi, Kamijou, don’t sleep during school. You have a bed at home for things like that.” An irate girl with long hair said, walking to his desk as she carried a bundle of packets.

“Mmmhhh…” Kamijou groaned and lifted his head up. Particularly, his hair was even spikier than it usually was and his eyes had deep shadows under them. “What did you say, Fukiyose?”

The Iron Wall girl’s eye twitched. “Did you get any sleep last night?”

The tired boy gave a mad grin. “Not a single second! But it was an eventful night because I finished my backlog of all the homework I’ve missed! That’s right! This Kamijou-san sacrificed many hours of sleep to defeat that dreaded enemy of his! Ahahahahahahahahahaaaaa!!!”

His maniacal rant drew looks from the occupants of the classroom. There were mixed feelings of pity and sympathy from the bedraggled students.

“…Umm,” Fukiyose, for once, was not sure on how to respond to that odd behavior. She looked down to the bundle of nutritious bread in her arms and carefully extended a packet out. “Do you…want a bun?” The girl chose her words carefully as to not provoke another psychotic reaction from the sleep-deprived boy.

A grumble from Kamijou’s stomach sounded out. Since he’d gone on a crusade the previous night to finish every scrap of missing homework, he’s forgone both dinner and breakfast to complete everything before school. Naturally, he was very hungry.

“Yes, I’d like tha-“

ERABE

Blue and pink text boxes appeared in mid-air, only visible to the boy.

His heart sunk. Kamijou felt like he was about weep until his tear ducts would dry out.

No. Please, no.

He’d gone hours without sleep and food. Couldn’t he have a little reprieve?!

1-Grope Fukiyose-san’s chest and say, ‘I’ll have these buns.’

2-Stand up and show your buns to the world.

‘What buns?!’ Kamijou roared in his head. ‘Isn’t that just my ass?!’

In the first place, it was the accursed voice that forced to do all his homework in one sitting. The previous night, he’d been given the choice of finishing all of the schoolwork that he was behind on with only breaks for the bathroom or to run through Academy City bare ass naked once the sun came up.

‘Damn, can’t I skip this?’ Pain lanced through the spiky-haired boy’s mind, causing him to wince. ‘Screw it, at least I will be knocked out. I’ll take Choice 1.’ The text boxes disappeared as he made his decision.

Kamijou stuck out his own hands past Fukiyose’s extended arm, landing on her generous bust. She froze as his hands took hold of her breasts. The boy looked her straight in the eye and spoke, “I’ll have these buns.”

“Y-You…!” The girl gritted out, her face going as red as a tomato. She dropped all of the bread and launched a punch.

Kamijou felt a strike akin to a cannonball and soon flew out the open window next to his seat, hearing the wind whistle by. He landed in one of the trees outside the front of the school, the leaves cushioning his fall. The boy curled up on his side and closed his eyes, deciding that some sleep was in order. Interruptions be damned, Kamijou-san would get a minimum seven hours of sleep before he would get down from the tree!

He intentionally ignored the scream of ‘PERVEEEEEEERRRRRRRTTTTTTTT!!!’ that was coming from the classroom above him.

This has some potential as a fic idea. Anybody willing to comment on whether or not I've lost my touch after so long?

I definitely don't think that you have lost your touch. Hope you continue this idea.

[SmokinFerret88]

..::ATTENTION!!!::..

A Certain World of Darkness has been updated.

..::THAT IS ALL!!!::..

[RPG_Fanatic]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

..::ATTENTION!!!::..

A Certain World of Darkness has been updated.

..::THAT IS ALL!!!::..

As someone who has been filling in the void of waiting for the next Index Novel/Anime, and Railgun arc by reading fan fiction, this fanfic greatly intrigues me.

I will have to add it to the list.

[Atrum023]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

..::ATTENTION!!!::..

A Certain World of Darkness has been updated.

..::THAT IS ALL!!!::..

Huh, am I right to assume that Tsuchimikado is going to take care of certain... problems permanently?

And nice encounter with Ruiko there, didn't expect it at all.

[SmokinFerret88]

Originally Posted by Atrum023

Huh, am I right to assume that Tsuchimikado is going to take care of certain... problems permanently?

Maaybe~

Originally Posted by Atrum023

And nice encounter with Ruiko there, didn't expect it at all.

It was kind of a spur of the moment kinda deal in complete honesty. I wanted to save the MUGINO INTERACTIONS for the chapter to come rather than tease everyone with it before cutting it off. But the scene itself is more symbolic than anything else; its pretty clear from the forth paragraph from the bottom.

Saten's obviously in one side of the world and Kamijou was going down the path leading towards ITEM...I think you get where I'm going with this.

And as I said in the author's notes; in the conclusion of this chapter is the point in which we can all collectively say:

[R.LocK]

...Hey, can someone kick me? I thought I was cured, but now I've got a plotbunny! It's unhealthy! Freaking Kagami's forcing my hand with his latest work!!!!!!!!1111111!!!!

In other words, I've got a cool idea for a fanfic, and I'm probably going to go with it all the way down.

P.S. I think of deleting current chapters of my currently stalled fanfic in a while for reworking, so... take a look at it, and think how bad it is? Prologue won't be touched since it's good for now.