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[LevelSeven]

...Tatsugami Otohime?

Well if you know Japanese girls then sure.

Who is that?
and no i dont know japanese girls but i think they dont act like the ones in toaru or the normal fiction....
i find the idea interesting because toumas life is far away from normal and even if he succeeds in the "supernatural world" i think it would be really funny to think about him as the one who tries to "catch" the love of someone....
like in a life from our world where the girls will not fall for you only because you are nice to them, it should be much harder and more funny XD

[dniv]

Originally Posted by LevelSeven

Who is that?
and no i dont know japanese girls but i think they dont act like the ones in toaru or the normal fiction....
i find the idea interesting because toumas life is far away from normal and even if he succeeds in the "supernatural world" i think it would be really funny to think about him as the one who tries to "catch" the love of someone....
like in a life from our world where the girls will not fall for you only because you are nice to them, it should be much harder and more funny XD

That would be funny. It'd also be funny to see his unluckiness preventing him from succeeding at catching said girl.

Though to be fair, I would guess it isn't that rare for a girl to fall for you if you save their life. Except in Naruto with Sakura-chan.

[LevelSeven]

^which makes it so interesting, and since he never saved her and will never, it will be funny to see touma always doing the false things in such normal stuff XD

[demino_hellsin]

But Fukiyose never remembers getting saved. Shouldn't she fit the bill?

[SmokinFerret88]

Okay, so, after a recieving the feedback from Tsun and other parties, I have decided to revoke the notion of Ichiryu being an actual magic god. Though I don't know where to really place him in terms of catigory, since he seems less like a Majin Candidate but not really like an Impure Majin either.

Frankly speaking, I find that he can manipulate possibilities, and a Majin is a being who encompasses every possibility, then he would have be, like, in arm's reach of actually becoming one. I think it was that kind of logic that made me think 'hey, he manipulates just about anything, himself included, so that must make him a Majin!'.

I'm not lying, that's pretty much how my thoughts were when I was toying with the idea.

Edit:

Also, here's a little something for anyone who's up to the challenge.

I take no credit for this either, it's just something I found and would be hilarious to see written.

>Ollerus successfully sneaking around in Othinus's base, all according to keikaku
>Suddenly motherfucking Gunha shows up and challenges him on the spot, exclaiming that even with that disguise he can still sense the GUTS of his "rival"
>Ollerus shitting all over himself as Gunha fucks up the entire plan
>has to fight Othinus, Gunha jumps in because it's ungutsy for a loli to interrupt their manly battle
>Newly trained Gunha is actually holding his own
>they manage to beat Othinus together in an explosion of color, GUTS, and glory

Again, I take no credit for this, rather it's something I found.

[demino_hellsin]

Having all paths possible to you is still different from sculpting a path available to you.


It's like saying you can buy anything at the store is the same as being able to decide the price on any item in the store.

[SmokinFerret88]

Precisely the thing which you guys helped me realize. Which is why I revoked the idea of him being a Majin. For that, again, I thank you.

Just because he can buy anything doesn't mean he can buy everything; one possibility will lead to another giant web of possibilities. Basically, he has a front-row seat at the items on display, but he still needs to pick one before he can proceed.

Which makes the concept behind why he would take this long to be at his point in power so much more believable to me. Probably at its base, his power could have taken him down a path that would make him just a normal magician. At its base, while his ability to manipulate possibility already unlocked the mass amount of others that existed, any one of those other choices could have put him at a dead end with no means to improve further.

Kinda like selecting a skill-tree from an RPG. One mess-up at the base and the whole build you are trying to make is doomed fail; while later levels practically any choice you make will benefit you. The only difference here is that, in RPGs, you either get an item that can fix the earlier mishap or you can go back and reconfigure the tree to benefit you. Ouji probably couldn't have done that in the early stages until it reached the point where he could.

But, in regards to the ability itself; what says you? Too much or does it seem more...fitting opposed to the original idea behind his power?

[demino_hellsin]

So you're dropping the idea of him being Lucifer's incarnation?

[tsunade666]

his probably dropping the idea of him being a majin.

... no one comment on my idea of tamni fanfic ;_;

this is why I'm hesitating on writing tamni fanfic because of low numbers of viewers that will help expand it. its different from naruto which is everywhere in the net. I might as well plan that fic. its easier to made that one than tamni.

[demino_hellsin]

Because your ideas are pretty psychedelic and require a special audience?

[LevelSeven]

Spoiler for idea:

i think the idea about a dimensional crack is interesting...

suddenly without any sign a gaint white light appears in the sky....
a level 12 earthquake begins and after it ended their are suddenly three men standing in the middle of a destroyed district...
a 25 years old Accelerator, Touma and Hamazura, all three have terrible scars over their bodys, (they have the bodys of veteran soldiers)
accel has millions of different symbols on his skin, terrible scars all over his body,
touma has a gaint right cut on the place of his right eye (dont have a right eye anymore) and hundreds of small scars on his right arm,
hamazura is also not in a better shape, his left arm is gone and his right feet is a cyborg one...
> the only thing clear for the reader: this three have survived horrible stuff....
they start to walk into different directions without saying a word:
accel changes his appereance while he walked without any unordinary movement or spell into his 16 years old self...
touma takes out a ring which he puts on his left hand and after a few second he changes too...
hamazura walks and refines his life force into mana, the next moment the whole ground around him cracks and explodes, after the smoke vanishes he also looks exactly like his 16 years old self... even his left arm is back...

they dont look back, instead: they have pictures....
accels pictures: Kakine Teitoku, Misaka Mikoto
toumas pictures: Shokuhou Misaki, Aogami Pierce
shiages pictures: Takitsubo Rikou, Mugino Shizuri
the only words which they spoke into the dark, cold and quiete night: "My Target"

does it sound interesting ??

[demino_hellsin]

Add a "Kyah!" At the end of their statements and I'll laugh my ass off

[tsunade666]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Because your ideas are pretty psychedelic and require a special audience?

eeeh? what do you mean?

I'm sure Kirei and Gil will love to see someone's suffering plus there shouldn't be always up and down in the story. That's what I believe. Its only down and stay in the middle aiming for something that is not meant to be is being greedy

[demino_hellsin]

I'm pretty sure there's something wrong when you have Kirei and Gil representing your audience.

[LevelSeven]

Who are kirei and gil?

[demino_hellsin]

um... a priest who is obssessed with hurting people who is appalled at the fact he's a sadist and then finds peace by discovering Mapo tofu, but not before his alternate dimensional selves attempt to destroy the world like a thousand times.

Gil is short for Gilgamesh who is a copy of the original Gilgamesh given form. Arrogant and looks down at all other living things as toys. He has no problem breaking his own toys and has problems with other people touching his toys without his permission. ALso a spoiled brat with the ability to rain deadly steel of every legendary weapon in the world as well as his own unique weapon that can rip dimensions.

[LevelSeven]

and what are they in this thread? (Only questioning because im confused)

[demino_hellsin]

Um... they are from Fate Stay/Night and I believe he intends to make a crossover involving them.

Spoiler for to meet:

Kamijou Touma's life was at its end. The young man who survived the bloody fields of world war 3 and the end of the world was now going to die.

"In today's news, the Royal Family of Great Britain has announced that 2nd princess Carissa is engaged and to be wed to a young Japanese man named Kamijou Touma. This is his picture right here.", the TV news anchor's face was replaced with the photo of a young Asian boy with spikey black hair and a serious straight face. "The Royal Family are now on their way to Japan in order to meet with the parents of this young man."

...

In the middle of the university canteen, Kamijou Touma sat there with his hands frozen mid-rise with noodles on his chopsticks. His eyes were transfixed on the screen of the TV in the corner. He just knew he was going to die...

"KAMI-YAAAAAAAAN!!!!"

He cried deeply at such misfortune as he wished circumstances had been different.

[tsunade666]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Um... they are from Fate Stay/Night and I believe he intends to make a crossover involving them.

... dude... you didn't read what I wrote didn't you?

... I'm sad... >_> or should I say, as expected.

Spoiler for what I wrote or an idea for what I would like to wrote:

Originally Posted by tsunade666

lol, where did you get the idea I hate Touma?

Does seeing someone suffer = to hate already?

Kirei will love to hear it.

if some fate faggot read that. They will understand the idea of someone appearing when the world is in danger and will brought and *end* to the threat in the most destructive and effective way.

No, I like Touma. I just don't like the way tamni is written but plot wise and character wise. I like it.

Originally Posted by tsunade666

fic idea. what do you guys think is better

first idea

title: to a certain lonely travel

this idea comes from the idea that Touma died when Othinus killed him in the phase. He wasn't been brought back to the world Othinus re-created for him. Othinus died alone.

Touma was thrown into another set of world/phases thanks to silver star to complete his plans.

In another world. Touma will grow from baby until teenage years or he died. In this worlds. The worlds are dying or there would be a point where it will be destroyed. Touma was born there to prevent it. He will either win and save the world or die trying to end it or at least give a winning chances to the humans again.

This story sets with Touma travelling after millions of times. Dying millions of times and living again. Betrayed and lonely. This Touma would still be Touma that want to save those he can save but his methods are a bit dark or his a dark touma? or realistic Touma and not idealistic. This is also possibly not a harem because I don't like those story. Its a story of being lonely and him trying to find home or at least break his curse of being born again just to die.

Each world Touma ended too will be problematic one way or another. Enemies or problem that are beyond his scope and understanding will ended up as *food* for *it* and will be stored on his soul and will be carry on each *life* which is why when he traveled for more than a million times. He also has million different baggage within him that he can access if he removes the seal or IB.

But his fighting style will remain on what he learn on early worlds. Use your brains, IB and your eyes to see the death of your enemy.

My idea of IB is still the same that it can form a corporeal weapon in the form of dagger with chains into his right arm or a katana with 7 threads attach to it.

Well he is the world's reference point and if the world is being threaten to be destroyed. Someone needs to save it.

The end story or at least of part 1 is Touma finally being able to come home but his a different from what others remember of him.

idea 2

title? (haven't think of yet but probably To a certain lost children)

Touma died (again. love it ) and wasn't been able to be revived by the dying magic god. To complete silver stars plan. Touma need to further evolved but a certain dragon;angel want some bit of entertainment. While Touma was facing the magic god. Silver star isn't the only one snooping around. The Dragon;Angel takes 2 soul outside of the system and gave them 2 front row seat on Touma's suffering train. This 2 heroes sees his pain and understand him on some level but they still can't fully understand it because they are just seeing it and not actually feeling it (I feel it annoying for people try to say. I understand your suffering because I saw it and feel it but DO YOU REALLY FEEL IT? DO YOU EXPERIENCE IT YOURSELF? seeing and experiencing is different things for me)

when Touma was flung to another phase. Dragon;Angel send the 2 observant souls with him. The 3 Touma, Shiage and Accelerator was born into a confusing world of amalgamation of combine phases. It shouldn't work that way. But Dragon;Angel find it more amusing that way. The 3 was born in a Kihara Family/Clan. The Kihara family is secluded away from the world. Creating and experimenting on their own device. Heinous and inhuman. When the 3 reach a certain age, they planned the massacre of the old members of the family. These ones are hopeless but the young ones can be still saved.

After killing the old members of the clan. They took control of the clan and use its ingenious level of technology to either find a way back home or help their current world.

Unlike the previews idea. This idea is where Touma tried to world travel without dying but using a machine to punch through space and time and create gates into another world. While Touma jumps form one world to another. He saves the world but each jump is still taking a toll on him because he still can't find their home. Shiage and Accelerator are trying to support him and also wants to go home. But as these 2 grow. The longing for their own home are fading because they are finding their own family here and love ones. But Touma still perseveres.

This story is where Shiage and Accelerator at least manage to find love ones and form a family in the said world while Touma still searches way home but unlike the previews idea where I loath the idea of harem. Here, Touma will be unwillingly build one but it will be one sided because his too focus on finding way home.

Here in this story. Kihara family will take the world by storm or advance technology. Taking down gods by guns that shoots laser and more.

What do you guys think honestly on the 2 idea.

And no, I don't like sappy happy SoL romcom story so don't expect much on it but instead expect action, tragedy or problems, deaths and betrayal or just eldrich abomination trying to wipe out humanity.

Originally Posted by tsunade666

I plan on a crossover but this one also gives an interesting feel but I prefer Touma being raised by a kihara in the academy city if I where to make it a bit realistic. Trained and prepared by the kihara's, weapon of the director against the enemy of academy city. lots of blood.

ah, I don't believe in happy endings.

The second idea has actually a plan for it instead of the first one.

the first idea is after a million times. Touma is rinse and repeat. He doesn't care about others. Tried to be civil on whose family he is born with. Try to protect them while in the shadow and prepared for the inevitable problem to come in years. Like a well oiled machine. Rinse and repeat. But one day a girl barge into his life. Continually try to open up his dried heart. Then little even by little. He tried again. And slowly by surely. The heart that is dry as the sand of times is getting wet and soft. But well I don't believe in happy endings.

While he is becoming human again and preparing for war. He left for 2 year or 1 year? it depends on what I think. But after coming back?

what he arrives at is the girl that gives meaning to his life have already love someone else.

this someone else.... is his current younger brother

a sinister smile at its fullest

but he won't hate.

he won't judge

anger is useless on a tool of the universe to preserve its rightful path

he will just go back to how it always was

a tool

a final weapon

ah. a.hahah.ah.ah.ah.a.h

I just love this kind of story.

The second idea/story. Is Touma desperately trying to find home wihle the first story is the story that gave up.

What felt hollow on the second story?

I plan for Accelerator to have a family or at least a daughter.

shiage too

but for Touma?

his stuck on trying to find home

well its just that he saw the end of othinus on how she gave up on the world and all for his sake. His guilty conciseness is driving him to go back and save her because he felt that she just condemn her to her death.

Ah, ah, ah, he will also find someone that understands him but she is also sets on her own path and objective. The two will understand each other eye to eye but that will be it. The girl love someone and he is set on his own goal. Just respect to each other but that is the closest thing I will give to drama.

AND I FREAKING HATE THE KIND OF BIRIBIRI SO THERE WON'T BE LIKE HER.

And if by somehow the idea of creating a fic of Touma being raised by Kihara. There is no way that Touma would take an abuse of someone hitting him by lightning or someone biting his head on. Heck, I don't even believe someone will tolerate that kind of attitude

Originally Posted by tsunade666

The muse won't stop. While I'm thinking of the ideas for the first 2. The idea of Touma being created artificially and raised by Kihara won't stop.

I don't see any reason for Touma to be son of Touya and Shiina. (its a fic a what if)
His mother is Fraulen or embryo from her. That explains his resilient on attack so no BS will power. IF he had a semi-immortal body plus a fast adapting one. It helps on him receiving and analyzing data to counter attack the enemy. the sperm is more like genetically engineered for further purposes on increasing his capabilities to the max.

I can also see Accelerator being created in the lab. You just can't explain that stupidly smart/fast processing of his brain. I view it as genetically engineered too and not just boosted by drugs or stimuli. Same for Kakine. Though it would be good if their capabilities or specs are the same so there won't be BS "I'm starter than you" but that's only the beginning. The two will grow on their own research lab and directed by the Kihara's. They will also help Touma one way or another when his on mission.

Since Touma is more like a spear head of academy city when one is trying to invade it. Special assassin or agent directed ordered by the director.

Also Accelerator and Kakine aren't public recorded esper. In public they are only level 3.

The rank no 1 in public eyes is the RAILGUN

and there are hidden level 5 with the special purposes created by the dark side of the city for their own purposes.

Because seriously... I don't think parents would allow their children to be turn into royally f*cked kids >_> or maybe its just me but its unnatural that there aren't even parents problem arising in academy city. Like what happen to the child errors?

I know they are abandon children and japan has compulsory education so academy city can't drive they away but I think that just adds fuel to the fire that they can be experimented and nothing escapes outside of the city.

I would also like the expand the idea of universities where the graduates work for the city or do they just mysteriously disappear? in the novel it wasn't known what happen to them. Its like there isn't even one.

So its like this. One you enter the city. You either work for them or just "spirited away" without explanation (but the truth is your brain is harvested and being used to power their own experiment)

ah... ah... ah... a.h...... new muse won't stop.

Railgun being number 1. Public face number 1. Starts from level 1 to 5. WOOOHOOO!!!! viva cult...

darkside is really separated from the normality of the city that unless you plunged in deeper you won't notice.

you will notice the gray side which is the skill-out but the darkness? no one notice or live to tell the tale.

What about Misaki being an idol? I can see her as one.

hmm hmmm hmmm Touma's secret mission is to guard her in one of her mini concert outside of the city when a terrorist group attacks. That is their first meeting(there are child start thing in japan right?)

hmm hmm

public level 5 hmmm how many.... 7? but they aren't connected to the dark side or some of them have contact or experience it but outright they don't have a full view of it. Specially among the 7. Only 2 or 3 knew the danger of the city.

the secret level 5 are how many?.... 2 are accel and kakine with 3 others? or 5 others too? hmm hmm their power are on different level from the public ones because they are specially created by the Kihara's for the true purpose of the city.

hmm hmm hmm muse won't stop but I probably won't write it. I'm no good at writing or I don't have experience on it. Just plain ideas.

ah. I also don't like OC so the other level 5 espers will probably taken from other series.

Index isn't a munchdex but a real pendex. I remember demino suggest a more robotic index. I like that idea.

plus lvl7 I think it's possible for Index to read 103000 grimoire and more. If you haven't forgotten, just like what allfiction said. She has photographic memory (which is like forgotten in canon 0_0) from what I remember. Index is strapped on a table? or operating table and was forced to read/view the grimoire. She is a tool of the church. Don't be blinded by the canon's happy atmosphere that your forgetting they are magicians. They can be nasty and inhumane if they wanted. TO them she is the magical library and probably nothing more but well. Laura needs a way to control her(aside from the controller) so she was given freedom and means of connecting with the other. It can also be used on the people who she is connected too. They can easily manipulated with a false lie that the church feed them. Its a bit stupid but well its human emotion. It can be a bit frustrating to think further because it varies on how one will react towards their "important person"

there is nothing there that I say I will write about FSN as a crossover (from what I remember and intended)

I just said that Kirei and Gil will appreciate my play. I try to be a script write that will put Kirei's play into shame.

Nothing FSN here. Just pure suffering.

[demino_hellsin]

welp there's a crapload of incomprehensible dimension jumping and causal upheavals and suffering so yeah. I can only see Nasuverse being injected there.