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wew... just read the raw man Sadly no update for the last few months
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2016-12-31, 09:51 | Link #69 |
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Very interesting new chapters indeed.
Their experience in the forest & its otherworldly atmosphere & finally meeting someone who can answer their questions (which adds more as well), it was a long wait but what we got was quite significant.
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2017-01-12, 02:12 | Link #71 |
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The translations are painfully slow. From what has been already translated, I have already learned that when it comes to story writing, you should never put a vital main protagonist character on a bus early on in the story. You dumb author.
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2017-01-12, 05:06 | Link #72 | |
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^I'm guessing It's just from your point of view since the flow & progress of the story is gonna' way slower based on what's available & translated.
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Pretty cool results too about their spirit partners, their horses new "special attributes" are also pretty amusing (almost like a new species of sorts?).
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2017-01-12, 07:14 | Link #73 |
Confused Shark
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^1 horse boi
Mikazuki died early in the story The new horse, Sakura, was obtained in this world Airin's case of disability was mentioned before. Btw, Kei is still growing, his magic capacity is rising But, author said it won't be to the level of TUUUEEEEE
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2017-01-12, 08:24 | Link #74 | |
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Unfortunately true, but I do appreciate that it is being translated.
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2017-01-12, 08:48 | Link #75 | |
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For me it was only an hour or so. In the story it was also only 1 night.
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2017-01-12, 09:56 | Link #76 | |
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Certainly the translation speed doesn't help at all, but if I was an editor I would strongly recommend the pacing of the "emergency situation" to be drastically improved (ie cut down the amount of words for that section by 50% or more even with the same action). |
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2017-01-12, 10:13 | Link #77 | |
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^ I personally wasn't going like that when I went through the raws. Maybe I was just that really into the fight & scenes maybe.
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Ah, I'm reminded of the other people also transported (the one w/ the leopard girl), kinda' curious on how they're been fairing. Oh hey, interesting comments in the blog about the translations huh.
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2017-01-12, 10:24 | Link #78 | |
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^Author still remembers the "Jap The Ripper" thing
Yea, when will those guys show up again. They got that amazing magician there. Very valuable since magic here so hard to exercise, needing catalyst and shit. Quote:
The original raw took like 2 weeks real time for her to wake up, probably producing similar effect like the translation The point is to create tension and show how deadly this world is (actually deadly, unlike other isekai stories) It was done greatly here imho, many failed to create thrilling situations
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2017-01-12, 12:11 | Link #79 | |
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The lack of tension is indeed a big problem in many WNs. It's fine if it's intended to be "slice of life" but if it's supposed to be a more action orientated series then having all the tension of a "walk-through" is bad. (Ditto bad pacing, poor prose, personality-free MCs, nonsensical powers or world-building, etc etc....) |
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2017-01-12, 12:34 | Link #80 | |
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Other charas aside from MC get sidelined for so long in the early stage Vermillion is actually kinda like that. So you all are overestimating Eileen's initial importance to the story. Now everyone knows that Eileen is the only heroine in the story, I mean she's on the cover and all, but it started as WN, right? Initially, people didn't know how the story will develop, it could even turn harem, so her absence for awhile wasn't really a bother back then. The initial readers followed the story intently, the ones read later reached her recovery quickly, so honestly the ones who think this is a problem are only english readers who doesn't get their fast translation lolol
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