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agetreme · 2012-08-15, 20:35

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

You can't erase your past:/ A former terrorist is still a murderer and killed innocent people.

Not if that said terrorist is a little sick in the head....

Terrorist imagined the innocent saying that they forgive him...

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-15, 22:15

So it makes sense to want to receive judgement? And make people hate him so he suffers through more than just the guilt?

Eratas123 · 2012-08-15, 22:33

@ Treme- Yes, and I suppose the Joker thinking all his mass murders are funny to people justifies his actions:/ I don' believe your action is justified just because you think you have a good reason. You own up to what you do, no bs justification.

@ Demi - Up to you. I'm not good with self hating and judgmental characters.

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-15, 22:44

I'm probably gonna end up treating him like a full out gary stu.

Does not help that when I re-imagined his entrance to ISA as being kicked out a cargo plane several hundred meters in the air and proceeds to perform a mid-air assembly of the AE to fight off golems bent on killing him... huh

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-15, 22:47

Everyone is tempted to do that, but the urge will have to fight self limit and wisdom.

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-15, 23:02

Well I'm just building concepts on other stuff right now since I can't full on write the KR xover for now.

As of now the dagger bits are probably the only equipment I have for the AE.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-15, 23:09

Same here, my mind about I.S. is totally blocked. So I run back to Nanoha fandom and start trolling writing again.

Expect me to return full drive in two weeks, but for now, I'll just gather some ideas while randomly talking.

agetreme · 2012-08-15, 23:34

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Same here, my mind about I.S. is totally blocked. So I run back to Nanoha fandom and start trolling writing again.

Expect me to return full drive in two weeks, but for now, I'll just gather some ideas while randomly talking.

I am working on that too....

Though I am working Mana's story at the same time.

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-15, 23:54

XD I had some interest in Nanoha fandom too. Though what preoccupies me now is mostly Yu-gi-oh, One piece and Blazblue(Chronophantasma FTW!)

Eratas123 · 2012-08-16, 02:08

Despite myself trying to write dark stories, I can't help but try to put happy moments or endings for them:/ Why is it so hard to make it full dark?

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-16, 03:56

You want to be optimistic somewhere deep down in you. So you find it hard to write out something so bleak and painful without a silver lining.

StratoSpear · 2012-08-16, 06:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

I'm probably gonna end up treating him like a full out gary stu.

Does not help that when I re-imagined his entrance to ISA as being kicked out a cargo plane several hundred meters in the air and proceeds to perform a mid-air assembly of the AE to fight off golems bent on killing him... huh

Suddenly "Mobile Suit" played in my mind...

EDIT:
Sketches of revamped units for Athena re-write;

Praxidike Drone "Jabber"

Minerva-RE

How do they look?

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-16, 08:53

Okay, so I'm confused about 1 thing only in athena. Praxidike is an organization. Inami and co. are part of praxidike. But they are fighting Praxidike clones. Please correct me because I'm pretty sure I misunderstood somewhere in there.

EDIT: Oh yeah, Rong had his hands and feet all bound up with specialized cuffs when he did that jump.

StratoSpear · 2012-08-16, 08:58

I see no harm in sharing so:

Praxidike proclaims to be an anti-terrorist organisation while in fact, they are the very terrorist organisation that has been plotting to take down the IS system.

However, this truth is hidden from Inami, who aims to find out the very source of the unknown Jabber drones that have been sent to attack the Academy which eventually leads him back to the very group that he's always believed in.

In the original Bouclier, he finds out when he notices Praxidike's mark on one of the dead drone's core unit. For re-write, imma try something different.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-16, 15:36

Ooh, this time the drones looks like mass Produced Minerva, nice!

Eratas123 · 2012-08-16, 21:45

......Anybody here?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-17, 05:26

What? This is world record! Where is everyone? T_T

StratoSpear · 2012-08-17, 06:03

Right here, just... ya know... sketchin.DONE!

I need to rework on the first intervention scene seeing I changed from a trio of identical drones to two with a different type of Jabber leading the group:

Strike Jabber.

inb4lookslikestarkjegan

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-17, 06:05

I Figure the shoulder and the left arm mounted one is energy/particle weapon of short, but what's in the right arm?

S/N: the arts resembles I.S. more than before

StratoSpear · 2012-08-17, 06:10

Actually, the right arm(the one with the tri-barrel) is the particle beam gun and the one on the left(the one with a vent-like opening at the tip) is the beam saber.

EDIT: Really? =D

2012-08-15, 22:33	Link #35623
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Treme- Yes, and I suppose the Joker thinking all his mass murders are funny to people justifies his actions:/ I don' believe your action is justified just because you think you have a good reason. You own up to what you do, no bs justification. @ Demi - Up to you. I'm not good with self hating and judgmental characters. __________________

2012-08-15, 22:47	Link #35625
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Everyone is tempted to do that, but the urge will have to fight self limit and wisdom. __________________

2012-08-15, 23:09	Link #35627
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Same here, my mind about I.S. is totally blocked. So I run back to Nanoha fandom and start trolling writing again. Expect me to return full drive in two weeks, but for now, I'll just gather some ideas while randomly talking. __________________

2012-08-16, 02:08	Link #35630
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Despite myself trying to write dark stories, I can't help but try to put happy moments or endings for them:/ Why is it so hard to make it full dark? __________________

2012-08-16, 08:58	Link #35634
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	I see no harm in sharing so: Praxidike proclaims to be an anti-terrorist organisation while in fact, they are the very terrorist organisation that has been plotting to take down the IS system. However, this truth is hidden from Inami, who aims to find out the very source of the unknown Jabber drones that have been sent to attack the Academy which eventually leads him back to the very group that he's always believed in. In the original Bouclier, he finds out when he notices Praxidike's mark on one of the dead drone's core unit. For re-write, imma try something different. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame." Last edited by StratoSpear; 2012-08-16 at 09:31.

2012-08-15, 22:15	Link #35622
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	So it makes sense to want to receive judgement? And make people hate him so he suffers through more than just the guilt?

2012-08-15, 22:44	Link #35624
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I'm probably gonna end up treating him like a full out gary stu. Does not help that when I re-imagined his entrance to ISA as being kicked out a cargo plane several hundred meters in the air and proceeds to perform a mid-air assembly of the AE to fight off golems bent on killing him... huh

2012-08-15, 23:02	Link #35626
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Well I'm just building concepts on other stuff right now since I can't full on write the KR xover for now. As of now the dagger bits are probably the only equipment I have for the AE.

2012-08-15, 23:54	Link #35629
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	XD I had some interest in Nanoha fandom too. Though what preoccupies me now is mostly Yu-gi-oh, One piece and Blazblue(Chronophantasma FTW!)

2012-08-16, 03:56	Link #35631
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	You want to be optimistic somewhere deep down in you. So you find it hard to write out something so bleak and painful without a silver lining.

2012-08-16, 08:53	Link #35633
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Okay, so I'm confused about 1 thing only in athena. Praxidike is an organization. Inami and co. are part of praxidike. But they are fighting Praxidike clones. Please correct me because I'm pretty sure I misunderstood somewhere in there. EDIT: Oh yeah, Rong had his hands and feet all bound up with specialized cuffs when he did that jump.

2012-08-16, 15:36	Link #35635
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ooh, this time the drones looks like mass Produced Minerva, nice! __________________

2012-08-16, 21:45	Link #35636
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	......Anybody here? __________________

2012-08-17, 05:26	Link #35637
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	What? This is world record! Where is everyone? T_T __________________

2012-08-17, 06:03	Link #35638
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Right here, just... ya know... sketchin.DONE! I need to rework on the first intervention scene seeing I changed from a trio of identical drones to two with a different type of Jabber leading the group: Strike Jabber. inb4lookslikestarkjegan __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-08-17, 06:05	Link #35639
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I Figure the shoulder and the left arm mounted one is energy/particle weapon of short, but what's in the right arm? S/N: the arts resembles I.S. more than before __________________

2012-08-17, 06:10	Link #35640
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Actually, the right arm(the one with the tri-barrel) is the particle beam gun and the one on the left(the one with a vent-like opening at the tip) is the beam saber. EDIT: Really? =D __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."