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Old 2010-07-01, 14:11   Link #25761
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I swear Kaijo, you're almost as bad with the cliffhangers as the Geass writers during R2!
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Old 2010-07-01, 14:25   Link #25762
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Indeed - there's a story behind her appearance too but alas I'll never get time to draw it

Bumping the pace a bit this instalment - 2 pages for your viewing pleasure.

-Before Dawn-

Spoiler for Pages 5, 6 (read right -> left):


Spoiler for Previously:


Ok, 2 things:
a) I was going for the spittle kind of rain, not a downpour. I did put dark clouds in earlier panels so hopefully it doesn't seem completely like a 'oooh, pretty and dramatic (not to mention cliche)' thing.
b) Does it work even if I don't put sound effects in like 'clatter' (panel where Laevatein drops) and 'thump' (where she falls to her knees) etc? I really suck at sound effects, unless they're meant to turn out amusing.

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It still works, since it's clear in the drawing that levantein is clattering and that signum fell to her knees. As for sound effects I can't even draw them amusingly, I was only ever a mediocre drawer though...so yeah.

I agree with Yasanagi, Kaijo that cliffhanger is almost as bad as R2, oh and almost as cruel as well.
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Old 2010-07-01, 14:45   Link #25763
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@Yasanagi, shiroi mahotsukai: Heh, sorry about that.^^;; But trust me when I say the next chapter will be worth it....
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Old 2010-07-01, 14:51   Link #25764
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Just make sure Givo doesn't die, Kaijo. Nanoha will hunt you down if he does, I think...
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Old 2010-07-01, 14:57   Link #25765
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Future Tense

Chapter 8: Adrift


Previous chapters can be found here.

In which Nanoha runs into some people she knows, and we get a glimpse of what Fate is up to...

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 8: Adrift:


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Dang it, Kaijo! Get us from this cliff ASAP. I'm dying T_T.

So, Vivio is with the church and Hayate wants the people from the church so that must mean their criminals...

Resistance Leader!Vivio?

Does that mean Fate hasn't seen Vivio for at least twenty years?
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Old 2010-07-01, 15:11   Link #25766
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Good chapter, Kaijo. So, we get to know what happened to Givo. Meh, poor boy... and poor sister Schach, it`s seems Fate realy hellbent on finding Vivio.

But most sad think, IMHO, is how totaly was crushed friendsip between other Nanoha`s cast. Almost, as if they blame each others for their losses.
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Old 2010-07-01, 15:38   Link #25767
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Since people want more background...

Spoiler for A Certain Divided Force 2:
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Old 2010-07-01, 15:59   Link #25768
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Old 2010-07-01, 16:01   Link #25769
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Just make sure Givo doesn't die, Kaijo. Nanoha will hunt you down if he does, I think...
Heh, people are starting to expect that of me, aren't they? Especially with this fic. "Well, he's killing off everyone else, what's one more, especially if it screws Nanoha up?"

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Dang it, Kaijo! Get us from this cliff ASAP. I'm dying T_T.

So, Vivio is with the church and Hayate wants the people from the church so that must mean their criminals...

Resistance Leader!Vivio?

Does that mean Fate hasn't seen Vivio for at least twenty years?
Without giving too much away, you're not too far off. Although I can say it's been quite awhile since Fate has seen Vivio....

Who is a criminal, is all a matter of perspective in this fic. The settings, plots, and plans in this fic allow me to work with a lot of grey areas.^^

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Good chapter, Kaijo. So, we get to know what happened to Givo. Meh, poor boy... and poor sister Schach, it`s seems Fate realy hellbent on finding Vivio.

But most sad think, IMHO, is how totaly was crushed friendsip between other Nanoha`s cast. Almost, as if they blame each others for their losses.
People probably wondered what was the only thing that might make Fate give up pursuit of a Nanoha clone.

And you're also starting to pick up a few things I've hinted at; they aren't quite the happy family they used to be, for good reason...

Thanks for the comments, guys.^^
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Old 2010-07-01, 16:18   Link #25770
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@Yasanagi Describe for me would you, what kind of colour is silvery-brown, sounds pretty.

Oh and Kaijo, everyone knows happy families are overated these days, there's no fun if everyone gets along all the time.
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Old 2010-07-01, 16:59   Link #25771
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Future Tense

Chapter 8: Adrift


Previous chapters can be found here.

In which Nanoha runs into some people she knows, and we get a glimpse of what Fate is up to...

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 8: Adrift:


Edit: Page claim for new chapters?

I knew it! Holy Vivio to the rescue!! All hail the Saint Kaiser/Jesus Christ/Holy Light/#@#$^!!!!

Wow, the plot really thickens. I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh, and bonus points if you can work in 「少し頭冷やそうか」 (Maybe you should cool your head down a bit).....

Even though this Tiana has gone quite evil now, she has nothing on the White Devil.... hehehehehe......
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Old 2010-07-01, 17:04   Link #25772
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I wouldn't mind seeing a Vivio vs. Fate showdown in Future Tense--that'd be pretty awesome, especially if Vivio calls Fate out for all her atrocities.
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Old 2010-07-01, 17:42   Link #25773
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D, just looking at her already poked Thoma's sunk memories. Keep going.
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Old 2010-07-01, 19:26   Link #25774
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Went and posted chapter 8 of Future Tense to ff.net, and you can find it here. (And yes, Mozco, it's the real chapter 8 this time!^^;

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I knew it! Holy Vivio to the rescue!! All hail the Saint Kaiser/Jesus Christ/Holy Light/#@#$^!!!!

Wow, the plot really thickens. I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh, and bonus points if you can work in 「少し頭冷やそうか」 (Maybe you should cool your head down a bit).....

Even though this Tiana has gone quite evil now, she has nothing on the White Devil.... hehehehehe......
For some reason, your first line there had me singing "Santa Christ, Santa Christ, we all love Santa Christ!" But I've probably been watching too much Nostalgia Critic, heh.

But as for your request, we'll see if I can't work in that line, just for you. ;p

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I wouldn't mind seeing a Vivio vs. Fate showdown in Future Tense--that'd be pretty awesome, especially if Vivio calls Fate out for all her atrocities.
Vivio seems to be a popular person; quite a lot of people want to see her, heh. All I can say is, your patience will be rewarded; she'll show up eventually. ;p
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Old 2010-07-01, 22:41   Link #25775
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Went and posted chapter 8 of Future Tense to ff.net, and you can find it here. (And yes, Mozco, it's the real chapter 8 this time!^^;
And I've already read it, though I don't really have anything to say that hasn't already been said: excellent as usual, poor Clone!Nanoha just cannot catch a break, and I am totally looking forward to seeing what kind of a badass Future Vivio turned out to be. She's apparently tough enough that the Saint Church still has 'territory' despite the general response to disagreeing with Hayate being death, so that's a good sign. I'm sort of hoping she's grown into a full-on Sankt Kaiser Zwei who will stomp all over dear misguided Fate-mama, but that's just me...

Well, that probably isn't just me, actually.
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Old 2010-07-01, 22:53   Link #25776
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YEAH!!! The crowd demands a kickass Vivio! I'm already imaging something like this:

*Scene Shift. A crowd of menacing enforcers, lead by Teana, Fate, AND Hayate, slowly but surely am gaining ground over the last Church stronghold.*
Resistance Soldier #1: They have discovered us!!
*Background bombing and explosions occuring*
Hayate: This is the end for all you puny rebels!! Resound Judgment, Ragnorok!!!
*White beam of WTF death head towards the Resistance fighter*
Resistance Fighter #2: Is this... truly the end?
*Vivio come bust in in her Saint Kaiser glory and blocks Hayate's attack*
Vivio: Fear not, for I, the Saint Kaiser, has arrived!! For the glory of the Holy Light!!!!
*Epic battles*

This is the result of playing too much World of Warcraft.... *SHOT*

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Old 2010-07-01, 23:08   Link #25777
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@Kaijo and Yasanagi: I'll have to read your new chapters another time, for I've been busy all day working on my own stuff. I have produced much fruit!

The Location of Happiness chapter 5

This chapter is quite long and it is filled with plenty of Shari face time and lots of mostly made up science mumbo jumbo!

Spoiler for LoH chapter 5:


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In other news: I'm done this fic. I got the rest of it all writen out so I was wondering if people wanted it all at once, or if they want me to space it out a bit.

EDIT: D. Something jiggled loose, so keep pushing!
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Old 2010-07-02, 00:07   Link #25778
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Don't worry, Raiser, I love your fics too!! It's funny how all these NanoFate nutjobs hate Yuuno; if not for Yuuno, Nanoha and Fate wouldn't even have met and Fate would probably end up rotting in a TSAB jail!

Speaking of which, is anyone interested in writing a FateYuuno fic where Nanoha DIDN'T die? Yuuno is really a sweet guy and I'd love it to see him gets appreciated more.
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Old 2010-07-02, 01:00   Link #25779
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Intresting chapter - it`s nice to see how Yuuno can get a shine for himself.
But i can`t get away from feeling, that something not right with Miyako, but maybe it`s just my imagination.
Well, keep going. Good luck.
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Old 2010-07-02, 06:52   Link #25780
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Speaking of which, is anyone interested in writing a FateYuuno fic where Nanoha DIDN'T die? Yuuno is really a sweet guy and I'd love it to see him gets appreciated more.
I have a few fics like that planned, but in the meantime there's my Ace Enforcer fic and it's ongoing sequel. Thus far it's just Fate being in love with Yuuno, though.

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