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We know that there's some give and take in these games, but actually changing the story as the challenger participates in it strikes me as cheating on the part of the GM (and see ep6, where the player and GM essentially retroactively cheat and screw up the whole thing). Did ep1 simply not have a firm solution until Will guessed at it? Because before that point nobody had even come close to "getting it right." For whatever definition "right" is if it doesn't matter until the possibility is disclaimed. Likewise, if any solution that fits and isn't countered is allowable, can Erika's ep5 theory become true even though there's a red that says it isn't, and even though it's not even clear anybody is actually dead? You can't say "oh yeah it's solvable" if you don't actually have a solution, or if there are a million different solutions and you haven't decided on which one is right until your opponent starts guessing them. Because that's what it turns the red and blue into: A guessing game. It cheapens literally everything about the first four episodes... which makes it plausible as a Chiru development, I admit. If that's the brilliant innovation Ryukishi wants to add to the mystery genre, he's an even worse writer than I thought, because he's incompetent and lazy.
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2013-08-11, 21:15 | Link #32743 |
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My point is it makes Beatrice intellectually dishonest and runs at odds with her entire purpose. It doesn't make any sense. And it creates an implication that Ryukishi didn't know where he was taking the story until he decided to take it where he did, meaning he's intellectually dishonest and a hypocrite.
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It is possible that Erika and Bern misinterpreted the rules in EP6 about switching locations retroactively (hidden under bed VS hidden in closet) escpacially considering that there was no need for that in Beato's solution. Aside from Erika talking about it, it was never shown directly to us readers, if such a trick by the GM is possible, or not. If we assume that the actions of the characters are set in stone from the beginning, then Genius Battler is required, else it all falls apart. Alternatively there is the option that such tricks are only possible directly as a reaction to the actions of the human side. It is also possible that the player holds no power at all and all actions the player chooses are "written" by the GM as well, but then the whole "Meta-Layers" would not make any real sense.
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2013-08-11, 21:55 | Link #32745 |
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Once Erika and Battler start agreeing to retroactively change the story, things get fuzzy. Since we have no idea how Dawn was "intended" to play out (if indeed it even was), there's no explanation for things like the shower trap or why Battler wouldn't have left his room yet or why Kanon even came to get him.
If anything I think that whole thing should be illustrative of why the game can't be like that, because nothing makes sense once you start trying to manipulate the story around each other. Also: How exactly does a Logic Error even work if the GM can Later Queen him or herself out of any problem with subsequent declarations? Why couldn't Battler just declare it was all a dream or something? Obviously with Genius Battler it makes more sense as he's established a set of apparently contradictory reds that actually aren't, and is merely choosing not to fight the Logic Error motion. But if Genius Battler isn't true, he either didn't know about Shkanon or deliberately chose not to invoke it to save himself. Why would he do either of those things?
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Man, discussion is getting to be over my head. XD
So, in laymens terms ... EP6 is very direct that a GM can Later Queen themselves a solution, and how this would work. It also says openly that doing so is usually a really bad idea that can turn your game into an incomprehensible mess, and we have little reason to believe Beato ever engaged in it as a GM, anyway, since, if anything, Battler was too incompetent to even approach her intended answer, which she wanted him to. Quote:
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In a way Genius Battler would be way more cruel to Erika in the 6th game than Beato ever was. He made her misinterpret the rules multiple times and played along with those non-existant rules. We also know that the NPCs of a game are usually written by the gamemaster as well, so at least Beato the elder was "scripted" by Battler.
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But if Kanon is a bodiless person, then he still counts regardless (based on what you've said). So he counts in ep6 without respect to whether he has a body or not, just as he did in every previous episode. Plus, Kanon kinda has to exist, because red describes his actions in that episode. Yet if Kanon and Shannon counted separately, then Erika is right and she is the 18th person. And she apparently isn't. It just seems cleaner to say there were always only 16 "people," and that "people" count in the normal expected sense, but that "characters" can be spoken of in red without violating that number. Thus, Kinzo and Kanon actually are completely identical: Nonexistent persons being spoken of in red but not actually part of the person count. The difference is Kanon is being portrayed by a (usually) living person, so he can actually take actions while alive. Beatrice can describe "the person who is Shannon/Kanon/Beatrice" (who is just one person) as either of Shannon or Kanon at will. Granted, I never liked this tomfoolery, but it is cleaner. Quote:
Although having discussed this, I suppose you could question - per Erika's more humanizing characterization and backstory in ep6 - whether she was also scripted. Although if that's the case either Bern never noticed, or didn't care, or Erika intended to just hijack her own character development... but then Dlanor was there, so I dunno. Or maybe Battler scripted everybody, including Bern.
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How reliable are EP6 and 7 supposed to be? 6 has no qualified witness to draw clues from and 7 has the most reliable and qualified witness of all. But both boards were constructed by Featherine. She claims to have the Golden Truth and therefore can craft a story just as true and valid as all the previous ones, but she's never shown to issue a Golden Truth.
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Even if Battler did create EP6 rather than Featherine creating her own interpretation of it, EP7 isn't the same board; Featherine lured her into her drawing room, displayed the board she created, then demanded Bern read for her. Since Bern is echoing Featherine throughout conversations with Willard, I wouldn't credit her with being in charge, even if she's nominally Game Master.
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All of which points to the idea that Beatrice did have an answer in mind from the start, making ep6's retroactive play between Erika and Battler the anomaly.
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I didn't say 'unsolvable', just unreliable. You just can't take anything away from it that isn't substantiated in the POV of a qualified witness in a valid representation of the events. Featherine can claim to know what the truth is without actually knowing it, even if parts are corroborated by other sources.
The problem is that the guarantee of an honest POV that was in Knox's original 9th is now just implied in a conjunction of the revised 7th and 9th. And every prior chapter has shown even the omniscient 3rd person POV isn't objective, and can be completely full of shit. You at least had Battler's perspective as a qualified witness, plus Red Truth to fact check anything outside that. In EP 6 Erika completely subverts that by violating the 7th and engaging in lies of omission, and since Battler isn't the detective and Meta-Battler can't be the detective, there's no honest POV to expect anywhere. But this would be a trivial problem if the entire board can't be relied on, which would be a problem even with the most objective and disciplined detective possible, such as is presented in the EP7. Last edited by DokEnkephalin; 2013-08-12 at 18:34. Reason: oop, wrong rule |
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I think we can safely agree that EP1 and 2 are Classical Detective Fiction (honkaku misuteri), but in EP3 already we have a shift in narrative perspective, the author is no longer all-knowing because only with End of the Golden Witch does Tohya also realize the truth, which he either forgot or never realized in the first place. This means it is not the system of Classical Detective Fiction (nor the Classical High or Low Fantasy) in which the author narrates from a position of omniscience. Anti-Mystery is described as "Being Detective Fiction while rejecting the idea of Detective Fiction". This leads into the aforementioned Later Queen Problem, how can we know that actually "all the clues have been presented?" Anti-Fantasy is considered to be the refusal of contributing to neither a blind belief system nor to absolute unreflected nihilism, but using the framework of Fantasy Fiction to ironically or cynically point out the flaws of absolute, unfounded belief. And in the end both are the only options that stay with us, in a time where philosophy has denied most of all ideas of an absolute truth being available to humans. And isn't this exactly what Umineko mirrors? What it contributes to is, for me, not simply mystery fiction, but a discourse on writing vs. knowing in general. I don't want to say that Ryukishi reached any new philosophical ground, because this has all been said and done by the 90s. But he presented it in an entertaining and engaging way, especially because he didn't give a set answer, even if he decided on it. That would be the point, he knows it, he is the God of his world and can decide how much he imparts on us, but everything else is for us to work with the clues we have. Concerning the Genius Battler discussion. If we consider EP6 to be the continuation of the quarrel between opponents of EP5, then Battler's intent would be clear. It is to make all people innocent, the only person he is willing to sacrifice is himself. His original goal might have been to have it all be a giant game, but not making this clear in his narrative he opened up a window for anybody to say "nope, this character killed them all" and this is what Erika did. |
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Ignore all that nonsense for a moment and look at the Battler/Beatrice contest simply as a relationship between human beings (or witchly beings, whatever): Beatrice has a particular purpose for which she has engaged Battler. To act in a way that is fundamentally inconsistent with this purpose would not benefit her. The people advancing this notion that she can arbitrarily employ red to pare down the reality and that it isn't set until she says it is essentially suggest that there is no ideal reality for each story in her mind. But if that were so, there would be no truth until such time as it is created, meaning Beatrice either never really had one (which would make her a hypocrite, demanding of Battler a realization she herself does not even have for him to find) or that she is fine with whatever truth is collectively constructed by their battle (and she isn't, not even a little bit; see ep4 and ep5). The point I'm trying to make here is that even if such a way of going about things is possible, it's something Beatrice would not have done, as otherwise it ruins her character. And I had about enough of her character being assassinated in Chiru, thanks. Now, perhaps the argument is that these are reflecting deeper themes about the uncertainty of truth beyond the grade school level realization that it's impossible to know all information. Perhaps the point is that there is a conflict between Battler and Beatrice who believe in the importance of a full Truth versus people like Erika and Bernkastel who just want to know facts and draw whatever conclusion sounds easiest from them. But if these supposed nuances were important to the story, then they should have actually been developed as important aspects of the story. Perhaps the story was building to that originally, but it certainly never got there. The conflict I described could have been the conflict of Twilight, but it really wasn't. For it to have been, it needed a lot more depth than it got. Was that the fault of rushing ep8? Will the manga establish that better? I have no idea, but I know the text as presented and it wasn't that. I agree that what we got was entertaining, but philosophically it's laughable; it's essentially on par with the guy on a pot binge who suddenly realizes that, like, there's no reason anything has to be true at all, maaaaan. It makes no claim to any meaningful understanding of Truth beyond what it speaks of on a surface level (and perhaps it never meant to, in which case it isn't the author's fault). It can essentially be summed up as "Did you know it's hard to know facts, and that Truth isn't just an aggregation of facts?" Certainly a valid point, but not necessarily a deep one. If indeed we're arguing it's anything more than that, it fails to support itself. Making a point one refuses to back up or defend is intellectual cowardice. On the other hand, if Ryukishi's purpose was merely to take some ideas he'd heard about and write what he considered to be a fun story blending genres that he enjoyed and hoped others would as well, then I'm not going to lay that charge at his feet. But if that's so (and I suspect that's exactly what it is), we shouldn't take his themes too much deeper than he himself did, as it's questionable whether he knew, cared, or even thought about those themes beyond what he actually advanced. That entire essay about Anti-Mystery and Anti-Fantasy always struck me as about the same level of reflection as a book report. It's a neat idea he didn't entirely grasp but wanted to use as a vague basis for a story about witches battling over truth with truth. And that's a cool concept! I don't mind so much if that's all it was meant to be. But there's a number of philosophical issues the story merely raised and never actually followed through on. It would certainly have been interesting to see more development of the idea of deception as a moral good, and whether that's actually justifiable (Beatrice seemed to think it was, Battler initially seemed to think it wasn't; then the changed his mind, why?).
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I've been thinking lately 07 was reading about various fallacies and thought paradoxes that aren't commonly known when he came up with Umineko - tho I'm not suggesting he did an insightful work on them.
The so called "homonculus fallacy" in particular sounds like it rang a bell in 07 about the rules playing themselves, the multiplication of observers constantly creating new meta-levels, behavior vs rules and the endless created by infinite recess. |
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I can't really argue with the math, and your argument is sound. But, "Kanon was hiding behind Godha" is just so ... flat on it's face dumb, and contrary to everything about how the scene is presented I just can't go along with it. I also don't feel good eliminating both Shannon and Kanon's individual personhoods, and referring to them as "just characters". Doesn't sit well with me thematically, I mean. I would rather keep abiding that Kanon had a body in EP5 alone, and any discrepancy in the biody count, before or after, is just Ryukishi stumbling, yet again, over his own somewhat mastubatory narrative contrivances on the matter. So I guess I agree to disagree. Quote:
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I feel like EP8 is really disconnected from the rest of the series as a whole, and a lot of that can be put down to how the whole thing seems to describe an internal struggle of Ange's that doesn't really have any connection to the meta-narrative of the rest of the series, yet still uses characters from that same meta-narrative to display its points. I do think that was really kind of awkwardly done, and it does bug me how the tone of EP8 is such a departure from everything before it. Part of me would honestly have been happy if the series had ended after the main part of EP7, since its final chapter really is a beautiful scene to end on. I do like a lot of EP8 though, especially the parts with Tohya (even though that whole thing deserved to be covered in a lot more detail than it was). I mean, it isn't just BATTLER in EP8 who seems to be strangely disconnected from his previous portrayal; Beatrice being there is also weird since she was supposed to have been put to rest at the start of EP7. And Dlanor's viewpoint seems to have undergone a radical change for no particular reason as well. In EP5, she said "Magic that hides the result in darkness is EVIL. I will not permit IT. However, magic that governs the process is not necessarily EVIL." But in EP8 she seems to be fighting on the side that wants to 'hide the result in darkness' without any problem, and also seems to suddenly completely hate Erika even though they seemed to have reached some sort of an understanding at the end of EP6. Renall has already gone into how Erika herself seems to have reversed all her EP6 development in EP8 too, and we've talked lots of times about Ange seeming to have lost all her EP4 development. So yeah, I really do find it hard to connect EP8 to the rest of the series properly. I sort of like it as a stand-alone, but it just doesn't seem to fit somehow. |
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The other possibility is that Ryukishi earnestly believes that if there's no reliable/detective perspective, literally anything can be shown and it's not unfair to Erika, hence why she can have Kanon in the room in front of her piece's eyes and not complain about this later, or why she can separate everyone into two rooms in ep6 and somehow not notice Kanon isn't where she intended him to be.
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On reread, Ep 1 manga realllllyyyyy spells out how suicidal getting to the golden land is for Beatrice "rest in eternal sleep" and all.
Also, Beatrice was a soft author, because she essentially always had the power in red to proclaim that "Beatrice did X". Apart from the fact that Beatrice was definitively non-human, she was constructed in much the same way as Shannon or Kanon. As Ronove said, it would break the game, but you could easily have said. "Beatrice killed Dr Nanjo" in red. Plus, I think all those points you raise about the Golden Land are points I've always wondered about heaven in general. The conclusion to draw is that if a state of eternal happiness exists, it can't be that concrete. It would just have to be eternal happiness, otherwise what happens if you die and 30 years later your wife dies? Same issues. Also note: Someone needs to always be on the outside door of the golden land, because if you don't stay alive to tell people that everyone in it is happy, the golden land doesn't exist. Proof for Battler/Yasu surviving maybe? |
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