SOTM 2010 - June (Neon Genesis Evangelion) - Entry Thread

[ganbaru]

@ Naoto, I do prefer your last version, less charged
@milan kyuubi your latest try is very nice is a sober way, don't add much on the background or this feeling will be broken.
@ Miko Miko why not adding a butterfly-like wing on the other side?
@ Haladflire65 I stayed silent until now because I had nothing constructive to say. You could make the text a little ( very little ) smaller.
@ Mekdra I would go with the second ( I can't tell what is supposed to be on the first one )

My newest version, C&C are welcome as always.

[Miko Miko]

Hm.. I think I'd ruin it with a butterfly wing.. well anyway I will be to busy to do anymore attempts so I'll label that my final entry

[ganbaru]

Originally Posted by Miko Miko

Hm.. I think I'd ruin it with a butterfly wing..

Don't you have already a yellow one on the blue side?

[Miko Miko]

Originally Posted by ganbaru

Don't you have already a yellow one on the blue side?

Oh that.. well not really, it wasn't meant to look like a butterfly wing, I just wanted to create the same sort of yellow effect on the other side

[NorthernFallout]

Still a lot of time left so dropping this as a first version. And yes the text is meant to be hard to see.

[Drake]

Updated with some slight tweeks.

[Squarecrow]

Originally Posted by ganbaru

Lord Crow is it me or there's something around her ?

At first I tried doing something with smudges but it didn't go very far. I left the smudged layers in.

[milan kyuubi]

My new trys. Thoughts on this people?

[Haladflire65]

Originally Posted by milan kyuubi

I like the Rei one but can you get rid of that glowing border thingy around her? I think it'll look better without it.

[milan kyuubi]

^^
V1 and V2 from the first one.

[ganbaru]

@ AtomicoX why not redussing the border's thickness ?
@ milan kyuubi I dion't have any preference betweem V1 and v2, but I have to agree with Haladflire65 about this bright thing around her.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by rikimtasu

just watched eva,it is amazing!so heres what i done for this month sotm.

v1,without any good idea on border yet,cc is needed for me^^

Has a nice concept, yet the pure white bg looks abit odd, still the squares and text save it.

Originally Posted by ganbaru

my second try, insted of removing it, i modified the ''errasing '' c&c would be welcome.

Yeah, looks better ganb, still feels like if something is missing. Not sure what, maybe a text or some more efects.

Originally Posted by zwei

c&c welcome.

Like the colors on this one better, quite an awesome sig.

Originally Posted by sabriel

Here's my attempt:

The text is a bit hard to read, also not surer about that "aura" surroungung the render. :/

Originally Posted by lord crow

Your sig gave me a little inspiration. Wanted to try out some scanlines so i whipped up something simple:


bottom left corner isn't what i hoped for.

lol, it's a funny sig, like the style on it.

Originally Posted by naoto

my first sign is too chaotic so i remake.
Maybe i was too greedy

Looks a LOT better, definetly and improvement.

Originally Posted by haladflire65

looks much better, but the right side of the render looks a bit messy.

Ver. 4!

Oh, not, the black stain's lines being visible on her face spoils the sig terrinly! D:

Originally Posted by mekdra

hi hi here my firts intent




or


i'm still not sure which to choose

bye

It's a bit hard for me to see what's going on on any of the two sigs, both atre too chaotic, perhaps too much efects.

Originally Posted by atomicox

still a lot of time left so dropping this as a first version. And yes the text is meant to be hard to see.

I'm speakless, an awesome evil sig to satisfy the phsyco inside me. O3O

Originally Posted by drake

updated with some slight tweeks.

Can't see much diference between the previous version, still looks really cool.

Originally Posted by milan kyuubi

^^
v1 and v2 from the first one.

Hmmm... like V2 better but I'm not sure about the "stroke" on Rei's render :/

[Cierra]

My entry

too bad i got no time at all

[Squarecrow]

Two new ones:




Been bored. So far for a final entry I'm thinking either the Unit 01 DBZ style or the first Mari one.

Spoiler for space:

Tweaked:


The smudge layer was too embedded into the layers so I tried a soft light layer to counter it.

[abet17]

just trying to make one ^_^
my 1st draft

[ganbaru]

@Lord Crow I prefer your second Mari's sig.
@ Cierra may I suggest a gradation for the white area insted of a clear demarquation.
@ Abet17 Its Rei not Rie and I would change the A's font.

My fourth try I reworked the text and some effect on the render. C&C would be welcome.

[abet17]

Originally Posted by ganbaru

@ Abet17 Its Rei not Rie and I would change the A's font.

thanks ganbaru for the early comment ^_^
i didn't notice that.........


some changes.............
looks like my 2nd draft

[Namiey]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

It's a nice style of sig, I sense that the textn is a bit, just a bit hard to read mostly for the white areas at the bg.

what text? if you mean the italic text at the bg, it's just for decoration.

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Hmmm... like V2 better but I'm not sure about the "stroke" on Rei's render :/

agreed.

Final entry:

[geki~]

Final Entry

[Drake]

Quite like that geki =D

I was going to use the same render before I went with mari.