2012-02-01, 23:36 | Link #20504 |
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I didn't say you were doing a bad job Just be careful about this since there are way too many times author's assume making them sympathetic is enough to make it seem like they're in the good or that you should side with them (Once again, leather pants effect). Besides, I really shouldn't talk considering who one of my protagonists are. Sorry if I offended you.
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2012-02-01, 23:41 | Link #20505 |
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No, I honestly ask about that. Truthfully, forst concept of Josh is.... exactly Ichika, except instead of harem, he's surrounded by Child Prodigy, and the creation of I.S. are mostly a noodle mischief...
But then that would cause fridge logic, a lot of them (the facility & insane money required, Tabane's connection with Scientific community, CHifuyu's ability etc). I tried to cover the hole, even if it means I create a shaky foundation that could totally crumble anytime Thanks for the advice
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2012-02-01, 23:45 | Link #20506 |
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I'm just sick and tired of people making these characters who were complete dicks and making them so thatthe story should be about how good they are on the inside when they're complete monster's.
Only advice: If someone's negative, make sure the audience knows it and that they're not acting OOC. Irish is a child terrorist, and he's a jerkass anti-hero to compensate. The audience is not supposed to side with him and this shows. Please don't make Josh an overtly charismatic ladies man and messiah when he pretty much dicked over the world without thinking of the consequences.
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2012-02-01, 23:54 | Link #20508 |
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I have to take my shifting test, so I'm leaving this question here: is it possible for a person to regress in mentality due to circumstances? Like an older person believing he's younger again. This is similar to "finding a happy place".
Wish mr luck
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2012-02-02, 00:27 | Link #20509 |
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Yes, that would be classified as mental illness. The specific disorder is not named, but often result as side effect of other psychological problem such as PTSD, schizophrenia, low intelligence etc.
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