Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Detective-san

Ahh, I remember the days I used to
take on gangs a la Tomoyo from
Clannad, nobody carried weapons,
although I can't recall why.

WOW! unless it's unarmed duel, I never EVER won a fight.

(I have the build & skill, but not the guts )

[Eratas123]

@ Wavehawk- Revenge for the nightmares old man! Hope that bain bleach was effective

@Zero- I'll read it when I have more free time >_< doing a teacher migration paper is a pain in the ass What exactly is the manga about? And do any of the pictures even HINT of any musculinity?

At least you know why Tatenashi constantly tries to dress him up in the drafts and why Ichika was confused during the "confession"

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Wavehawk- Revenge for the nightmares old man! Hope that bain bleaxh was effective

@Zero- I'll read it when I have less free time >_< doing a teacher migration paper is a pain in the ass What exactly is the manga about? And do any of the pictures even HINT of any musculinity?

At least you know why Tatenashi constantly tries to dress him up in the drafts and why Ichika was confused during the confession

Ubel Blatt (literally: SUper Blade) is a dark fantasy story about an immortal swordsman seeking for revenge. He was betrayed when he was 16 and almost killed by his comrades, it was Pixie blood that saved him, allowing him to recover (although it took 20 years).

TVTropes link

The similarities with Irish:

> White haired Shota (technically 36 years shota)

> Looks liek a lady (sucesfully disguises as girls most of the time, and while voluntary, he dislike crossdressing, it's all for the sake of survival)

> Celibate (though he KNEW sex and not virgin, he doesn't enjoy it).

> Deadpan and nihilistic about everything

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Ubel Blatt (literally: SUper Blade) is a dark fantasy story about an immortal swordsman seeking for revenge. He was betrayed when he was 16 and almost killed by his comrades, it was Pixie blood that saved him, allowing him to recover (although it took 20 years).

TVTropes link

The similarities with Irish:

> White haired Shota (technically 36 years shota)

> Looks liek a lady (sucesfully disguises as girls most of the time, and while voluntary, he dislike crossdressing, it's all for the sake of survival)

> Celibate (though he KNEW sex and not virgin, he doesn't enjoy it).

> Deadpan and nihilistic about everything

1. White Haired Shota- Describes him perfectly! Though he doesn't even know what it means (He wasn't raised in japan)

2. Looks like a lady- Describes him when he's wearing gender neutral clothes People will remark that he looks older and prettier as a girl (which pisses him off beyond belief)

3. Celibate- He's not really Celibate, he just has a VERY stunted view of sex (Even more than Ichika if you can believe that) since he was raised by all males and they didn't even bother to give him the talk. Actually, I planned for a part where he has his first *ahem* Dream (Most likely about Tatenashi) and he gets extremely weirded out and will start acting awkward when he's with her. Can I ask for your help whenever I get to this part?

4. Deadpan and Nihilistic- Deadpan describes how he talks 90% of the time but what Nihilistic means??

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

1. White Haired Shota- Describes him perfectly! Though he doesn't even know what it means (He wasn't raised in japan)

2. Looks like a lady- Describes him when he's wearing gender neutral clothes People will remark that he looks older and prettier as a girl (which pisses him off beyond belief)

3. Celibate- He's not really Celibate, he just has a VERY stunted view of sex (Even more than Ichika if you can believe that) since he was raised by all males and they didn't even bother to give him the talk. Actually, I planned for a part where he has his first *ahem* Dream (Most likely about Tatenashi) and he gets extremely weirded out and will start acting awkward when he's with her. Can I ask for your help whenever I get to this part?

4. Deadpan and Nihilistic- Deadpan describes how he talks 90% of the time but what Nihilistic means??

Nihilistic = Took every aspect of life from negative point of view. At least until he met his "Pupil/Partner/Love Interest" Ato as well as the rest of his new friends.

[Eratas123]

So can I ask for your help in writing the the dream sequence and awkwardness that comes after? I need to write romance/ecchi for that part and if you've read my story then you know I tend to suck at those parts. Which is why Ichika's parts and "Daydreams of Maidens in love" are so hard to write

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

So can I ask for your help in writing the the dream sequence and awkwardness that comes after? I need to write romance/ecchi for that part and if you've read my story then you know I tend to suck at those parts. Which is why Ichika's parts and "Daydreams of Maidens in love" are so hard to write

As soon as I finish Sacred twins' past arc (probably chapter 10)

Here's a snippet of Ran's nightmare/ wet dream after caught Ichika, Dan, and Char watching porn (makes sense in context, I assure you). I'm not sure if it's allowed because this is technically lime...

Spoiler for Spoiler:

Ran: "There...is that....ICHIKA-SAN?!"

Ichika: "What's wrong?"

Ran: "Y-you're doing it with Madoka-san, is...isn't that forbidden?"

Ichika: "You know why it's taboo?"

Ran: "huh?"

Madoka: "Chances of genetic related disorder is much higher in inbreeding right? Also, the imprinting effect between siblings and childhood friends was said to prevent that form happens"

Ran: "I KNEW THAT! BUT HOW-"

Madoka: "We're doing it with the butt, so it doesn't count"

(the passage is from a hentai manga, I'm serious)

As for the romance, better ask Yachiyo-chan.

[Eratas123]

@ Zero- Thanks for the help I'm okay with ecchi/romance but I SUCK when I have to write it myself, this is why the Kyuukai and Irish's parts seem more detailed/better written than Ichika's.

Why would Ran have a nightmare of Ichika doing it with Madoka of all people!? You'd think it be with Rin considering she's known her for far longer

I posted a link to another photo below, I DARE you to open it Please tell me what you think of it in your next post.

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...oker-convenien

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero- Thanks for the help I'm okay with ecchi/romance but I SUCK when I have to write it myself, this is why the Kyuukai and Irish's parts seem more detailed/better written than Ichika's.

Why would Ran have a nightmare of Ichika doing it with Madoka of all people!? You'd think it be with Rin considering she's known her for far longer

I posted a link to another photo below, I DARE you to open it Please tell me what you think of it in your next post.

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...oker-convenien

Huh? Just that? I've seen something wilder.

Just kidding, as I said it's makes sense in context.

Spoiler for Gotanda:

Dan was angry at Ichika for being oblivious and challenged him to watch porn together, Char was dragged in process.

There's no ecchi scenes detailed except for the three guys commentary, the expression is neutral enjoyment (Dan), anguish and disbelief (ichika) and embarassment (Char).

(The problem is, alll three guys is aroused somewhat, and then Ichika and Dan began to have illusion of female Char, Char was so angry he began to strip himself, leading to Dan screaming 'MAN BOOBS').

All the girls are peeking from the door (the situation inside is too chaotic for the guys to realize that the door is unlocked) Talk about mutual embarassment

The three guys went outside to distract themselves from lewd fantasy (leading to the brawl).

Ran is having a nightmare because the actress has voice resembles Madoka's

[HasuMasu]

For some odd reason, I'm a bit more
comfortable writing romance scenes
rather than action ones, I swear
it's not because I watch shoujo or
anything.

[Eratas123]

Why the hell would Ichika be in anguish when he's watching porn!? (Granted I've never watched it so I wouldn't know myself) Being embarassed is one thing but being in anguish? Is he gay or something?

This also gave me an Idea.

Ichika, Kyuukai, and Irish are hanging out in a room.

Ichika: So what do you guys wanna do?

Kyuukai: How about watching some Hentai?

Ichika: Hentai?

Irish: Sounds like some kind of weapon.

Kyuukai: You don't know what Hentai is!? Where the hell have you been the past 5 years?

Ichika: Middle School

Irish: All over europe.

Kyuukai: You guys are hopeless! *sigh* Time for me to give you a crash course then!.
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30 minutes later

Ichika: W-W-What was that!? I didn't know you could do that with syrup!

Irish: *cough* *cough* A-A formidable weapon indeed.

Kyuukai: This is just the beginning you two, next up are the tentacles.

Irish and Ichika: Tentacles!?

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Ichika's room.

Chifuyu: Ichika, are you here?

Ichika:....

Chifuyu: Hey...What's wrong?

Ichika: If I was ruined for marriage, do you think anyone will still take me?

Chifuyu: What are you talking about.

Ichika: Twincest.

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Irish and Tatenashi's room

Tatenashi: Hey Irish-kun!

Irish: I stared into the abyss and the abyss stared back unto me.

Tatenasi: What are you talking about?

Irish: To break a mans bones are one thing but to break ones soul is another.

Tatenashi: Well...I'm gonna go take a bath...Wanna join me?"

Irish: "..."

Tatenashi: Hmhmhmhm, Are you actually consid-

Irish: *Faint*

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Why the hell would Ichika be in anguish when he's watching porn!? (Granted I've never watched it so I wouldn't know myself) Being embarassed is one thing but being in anguish? Is he gay or something?

Irish: *Faint*

A MAN'S DRILL IS THE BEST WEAPON! XD

But no, ichika is anguished not because it's hardcore porn or something, the problem is...IT'S TWINCEST HENTAI that Dan's friend lended him (as a prank, Dan does not knew until halfway the video)

(The one they watch? something in the Line of Yosuga No Sora, hence the Twincest scene, arguably the best scene, located halfway)

And the actress sounds like Madoka, do the math.

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

A MAN'S DRILL IS THE BEST WEAPON! XD

But no, ichika is anguished not because it's hardcore porn or something, the problem is...IT'S TWINCEST HENTAI that Dan's friend lended him (as a prank, Dan does not knew until halfway the video)

(The one they watch? something in the Line of Yosuga No Sora, hence the Twincest scene, arguably the best scene, located halfway)

And the actress sounds like Madoka, do the math.

You'd think they'd be smart enough to stop the video once it reached the halfway mark and the twincest started, or...you know...LOCKED THEIR DOOR!

I can just imagine Kyuukai tying up Kyuukai and Irish while forcing them to watch porn Ichika thinking he was ruined for marriage and Irish quoting Frederich Niestze and going into blue screen of death doesn't seem impossible either

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

You'd think they'd be smart enough to stop the video once it reached the halfway mark and the twincest started, or...you know...LOCKED THEIR DOOR!

I can just imagine Kyuukai tying up Kyuukai and Irish while forcing them to watch porn Ichika thinking he was ruined for marriage and Irish quoting Frederich Niestze and going into blue screen of death doesn't seem impossible either

As I said, three of them too aroused too stop and not realized that the door is open, while all the girls is watching them watching porn (redundant I know), and even after it's finished, they're just too panic to pay attention to the girls.

Spoiler for Spoiler:

And you THINK Joshua will use his manly charm to get to score some girls (or at least, Natasha, who he knew for a long time and always making a move on him) but NOOO!! WHile he's not oblivious, he definitely bothered that too many women seduce him at FIRST SIGHT.

I guess genetic is at work....

[Eratas123]

Why didn't they lock their door BEFORE they started watching? I can buy Ichika and Charles not doing it but Dan forgetting to do it seems kinda odd.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Why didn't they lock their door BEFORE they started watching? I can buy Ichika and Charles not doing it but Dan forgetting to do it seems kinda odd.

Yeah, that's definitely Dan's fault, he's so desperate at teaching Ichika that he forgot to lock the door...and in his defense, the girls are went somewhere at the time, and it's his parents never bother him even if they heard weird sounds.

Dan WOULD NOT DARE to do it if Ran is within 1 km radius....

[Eratas123]

Can you tell me how strong representative cadidates tend to be? I only saw Charlotte and Laura in action and I can't exactly gauge it just from those two, Tatenashi was also shown as competent but she's pretty much good at anything so I can't exactly gauge that either.

Side note- I'm planning a bit of a retcon: Irish sucks at close quarters and hand to hand combat but is a decent knife fighter against regular human opponents if they manage to get too close and they aren't overly trained/experts, I also plan to make him the most agile male protagonist being able to do flips and acrobatics that the other two can't since the Skull suit made his body extremely light and thin. What do you think? Too much?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Can you tell me how strong representative cadidates tend to be? I only saw Charlotte and Laura in action and I can't exactly gauge it just from those two, Tatenashi was also shown as competent but she's pretty much good at anything so I can't exactly gauge that either.

Side note- I'm planning a bit of a retcon: Irish sucks at close quarters and hand to hand combat but is a decent knife fighter against regular human opponents if they manage to get too close and they aren't overly trained/experts, I also plan to make him the most agile male protagonist being able to do flips and acrobatics that the other two can't since the Skull suit made his body extremely light and thin. What do you think? Too much?

gauge? Here's my explanation

MELEE:
Laura > Ichika > Houki> Ling > Char > Cecilia
CLOSE/ MID RANGE;
Char > Laura > Ling > Houki > Cecilia > Ichika
LONG:
Cecilia > Laura > Char > Houki > Ling > Ichika
SPEED:
Houki > Ichika > Cecilia > Char > Ling > Laura
DEFENSE:
Laura > Char > Ling > Houki > Ichika > Cecilia
SKILL:
Laura > Char > Ling > Cecilia > Houki > Ichika

That's from Canon observation so far, insert Tatenashi somewhere in that line. Yeah, Ichika and Cecilia is screwed.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

gauge? Here's my explanation

MELEE:
Laura > Ichika > Houki> Ling > Char > Cecilia
CLOSE/ MID RANGE;
Char > Laura > Ling > Houki > Cecilia > Ichika
LONG:
Cecilia > Laura > Char > Houki > Ling > Ichika
SPEED:
Houki > Ichika > Cecilia > Char > Ling > Laura
DEFENSE:
Laura > Char > Ling > Houki > Ichika > Cecilia
SKILL:
Laura > Char > Ling > Cecilia > Houki > Ichika

That's from Canon observation so far, insert Tatenashi somewhere in that line. Yeah, Ichika and Cecilia is screwed.

Ichika's skill is pretty much a wild card, since his Byaku Shiki keeps pulling him down and he has the ability to think and adjust.

[Eratas123]

Ichika and Cecilia's stats suck! But why's Ichika's melee and speed stat so high? I haven't seen him win a single fight in the novels and the closest there is is volume 6 where he threatens two guys harassing Charlotte and I doubt either of those two can fight very well. Rin and Houki should be higher than him in the melee list since Houki has kendo training and Rin has CQC training, Laura should also be higher than him considering she was able to dodge those robbers bullets.

What do you think of the retcons? Should I leave him as is or do the retcons?