2011-12-02, 06:33 | Link #10801 | ||
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Depending what kind of clones are you talking about, but if they have EXACT genetic source (and it's impossible to create Ichika without donor unless we can transmute X into Y) there's good chance about genetic defect.
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2011-12-02, 06:41 | Link #10802 |
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@ Senpai - Wasn't that just on his drug addiction? They don't think he's dying at that point, just in danger of overdosing if he's not careful. The skull suit degradation is more on his body being turned more zombie like and how his physical capabilities start to strain (No blood test will help them here). All thing's considered, it's either Maya (found out on her own) or Karon (reads his mind) who finds out about it first. You think I should just have it fail on him during a mission (losing consciousness during an operation)?
Side note - Wait, doesn't that mean he's screwing himself !O.o! Will their kid be a full fledged human or a badass abnormal?
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2011-12-02, 06:45 | Link #10803 | ||
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Also, this is how Dan and Ran's units appear (Yep, she's using Armored Stratos instead of I.S., too few of them ). But Dan has better armor and booster while Ran's has thinner armor but better shielding.
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2011-12-02, 06:56 | Link #10804 |
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@ Senpai = Alright: Karon find out first but he tells her to shut up about it. Maya gets suspicious and starts to check on his condition the past few days. While this is happening, Irish and Tatenashi are on a mission but he starts getting more and more strained. Maya checks his health and physical data compared to before and sees the spikes. Irish collapses during the mission and ends up being a liablility (Command tells Tatenashi to leave him behind if he's useless but she ignores them and helps him). Back in Academy and both of them demand an explanation to his erratic behavior.
Is it okay? Side note - Please don't make the kid too strong. We don't need God mode Sue's in the IS archive, especially with the volatile state of it and hatred for OC's for some reason Also, is Dan and Utsuho's kid male or female? EDIT: Wait, Ran has a unit!? !O.o! @ Stratos - Why exactly is Inami given a teaching position again? Considering the fact that the Minerva isn't an IS and that it's not public knowledge. @ demino_hellsin - Can you give me the weaknesses of the AE?
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2011-12-02, 07:00 | Link #10805 | ||
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Only in the Grimdark spinoff... and she was killed in her third sortie when using that same unit...
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2011-12-02, 07:07 | Link #10806 |
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@ Senpai - How do you think one can explain it? I doubt just blurting out "I'm dying" to them is going to get the best of results. Also, he doesn't know think that they care if he dies (Being raised that way) so he might sound callous/emotionless when he explains.
Side note - I was just going to suggest pairing him with Ichika's kid! Do it! Do it! Do it! I wanna see both parents acting awkward as hell about it Side note 2 - And the death toll rises I really hate reading stories where people die senselessly *Ignores the fact that he wrote two drafts that do the exact same thing*.
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2011-12-02, 07:12 | Link #10807 |
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AE is: - as of now only useable by people with highly adaptive minds. The AE has no working nerve interface to speak of, it runs only on mind-link. The feeling of piloting it is more akin to "getting a new body part" than giving orders. - not able to utilize quantization so all its weapons are built-in and it has no storage form. The closest you can get is to make the AE fly around you but you have to be able to pilot it and the monopole engine must be working 100% - the AE cannot evolve like the IS. It is completely reliant on physical modification of the frame and its parts. - AE lacks the absolute defense of IS since absolute defense is handled by the IS core. - AE is not connected to the IS network. - AE is prone to disruption should you somehow single out one of its components flying solo before combining. EDIT: things off the top of my head. - other than 2 solid state particle conductor blades(can be remote controlled), all its weapons are particle beam based. - an alternate pilot who is also listed as a pilot by the AE can interfere with the current pilot's control. Range is all dependent on the pilot's abilities :P |
2011-12-02, 07:17 | Link #10809 | |
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And also the fact that he's involved himself with the Academy's affairs such that it leads to the following: While the Minerva(or the initial one, at least) could not take down said IS, she realizes Inami's sheer willpower to face it head-on, which eventually allows to him to survive throughout the battle. Then there's him having potential in planning strategic combat. For some reason, she's takes an interest in said potential within him, wanting to see what other hidden potential he has. Last but not least, as per his own request to have Tsurugi enroll. He'll be responsible in training her to meet the Academy's standards, which he also volunteers for by rejecting to teach classes to become Tsurugi's personal instructor until she's ready. Here's a scene: Spoiler for Scene:
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2011-12-02, 07:24 | Link #10811 | |||
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(Chifuyu actually died in final arc instead of that flashback) Besides these two, Ichika or Dan (or BOTH), the deads is composed of unnamed grunts or my OCs....
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2011-12-02, 07:26 | Link #10812 |
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@ Stratos - Chifuyu seems to dislike kids getting involved with Quota's above their age so I think it's more like she's the trying to limit his interactions, not the other way around.
Also, you might want to be careful of making him take the spotlight for too long. It tends to irk readers if the canon cast was cast aside completely. Side note - PLEASE don't tell me the man-hater's gonna fall for him It's been done so may times it's ridiculous. @ demino_hellsin - Alright then, how many can he control at once? Don't say all of them, that's a bit of an asspull. @ Senpai - Ho do you think he should try to explain it? Lie, downplay it, try to weasel out, just say he's dying? I can't decide! Shippers on deck? Did you forget his reaction when Ran showed interest in Ichika? He was pretty much completely against it. I might have any of the mains die, but I'll have them do it giving the enemy the middle finger as they go down. As I said before, Irish can die but I need him to die accomplishing something and not getting gunned down like Michael with Akira.
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2011-12-02, 07:32 | Link #10813 |
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@eratas: Rong can use all of them at once... but like I said, it's not pleasant(either renders him comatose or dead). The only other way all bits can deploy at once is if the AE's current pilot lets another registered pilot have control over the unlaunched bits. Mostly Rong would just use them like 6-10 at a time either as reusable missiles or extra guns on field.
Though I am now thinking over whether I really want or need this system... this is supposed to be in response to a major threat that none of the characters can beat(except Chifuyu) on their own, and have a 1%<x<0% chance of winning when fighting as a team... |
2011-12-02, 07:36 | Link #10814 |
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@ demino_hellsin - Just don't make him br able to do it all the time or readers will call bull on it. Also, don't forget the teachers and the dtudent council presudent, they're most likely very strong and capable based on what we've seen so far so they won't be helpless either.
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2011-12-02, 07:40 | Link #10815 | |||
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Then again, seeing how she's friends with the canon cast back in Athena Bouclier... Her being their schoolmate/classmate means they'll also be making appearances. Quote:
Then again, she begins to have doubts after learning Tsurugi's true feelings for him. Moreover, she hasn't discarded her feelings for Ichika yet. (also, why would you refer to her as a man-hater?) We'll see how it goes.
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2011-12-02, 07:52 | Link #10817 |
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@ Senpai - Made an edit to 2nd to last post.
@ Stratos - The canon cast aren't useless. The teachers should be able to handle golem attacks since it's their jobs to do so. Having them not do anything and just making Inami fight is major derailment of verse law. If that fails, don't forget that the 1st years and 2nd years have been shown to be smart enough to be able to take them on. They wouldn't sit back and watch either. The feminist falling for a guy has a lot of unfortunate implications (Mainly the one where she has to fall for a guy despite trying to be independent from them to be happy) so her taking an interest in Inami or Ichika might end up backfiring. Why not just have her change her attitude without falling for either? @ demino_hellsin - To wit: Maya, who's shown to be a clumsy ditz, was good enough to fight and beat two rep candidates, at the same time, with an inferior unit, and even when she wasn't very serious about it. This should show how good teachers are in the IS verse.
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2011-12-02, 08:13 | Link #10819 | |||
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Then again, it's a challenge, but I'll see what I can do.
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2011-12-02, 08:13 | Link #10820 |
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@ demino_hellsin - They would call that that big bad "mary/gary sue" If he curbstomps everyone and then Rong manages to beat him, that might cause eyebrows to be raised. I'm making phantom task borderline villain sue's in mine but this is offset by the fact that no one (bar Chifuyu and Maya) actually manage to land a win. All the protags get serious injuries or lasting damage to show that they're not as strong as the narrative implies they are.
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