Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[demino_hellsin]

I want to introduce him as a terrorist(it'd cause varied reactions, hard to control and predict what happens but I just want to try), he's roomed with Ichika still. Why? Because in the 2-3 weeks in America before Rong is transferred to ISA he is visited by a school staff representative to check his stability. He was okay during their "talk". And he's a man, awkward moment is awkward.

[ZeroXSEED]

*Facepalm*

Well, if you want to, just... be careful.

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - It would depend if his actions are shown as well. As we said earlier, showing him killing innocent civilians us gonna make almost everyone around him have a hard time talking to him. If it was self defense or killing criminals, maybe they'll think it's okay. If it was killing innocent people, then they'll definitely have a hard time talking with him.

EDIT: @ Senpai - Is a stab through the stomach area usually fatal?

[demino_hellsin]

No one would know the details of his past. There are rumors spreading about the specifics and I've thought of a character that would do that.

Basically, Rong says "Hi, I'm a terrorist." but everything he does screams "Hardworking student"

[ZeroXSEED]

@Eras
Depends, I think hitting some organ are less-fatal than others, yet more dangerous in long term. For example, hitting the guts (colon) while not causing heavy bleeding, the infection can be VERY lethal if not treated in few hours. Inversely, hitting vital organs such as kidney and liver can cause heavy bleeding and you'll die in few MINUTES.

@Demino
If that's the case then it'll be fine, everyone would look at him silly, just don't do that too often or readers will accuse that everyone is OOC. I still against him roomed with Ichika however, too far-fetched.

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - Do you plan to reveal it at some point to the cast or just leave it?

@ Senpai - Alright, what if the thing that stabbed him was one of Arachne's tentacles.

[demino_hellsin]

They'll take his declaration seriously at some point. Pending on the circumstances a ghost will come back to haunt him

[ZeroXSEED]

How do I knew? I don't even knew the size of the tentacles and if they're more dangerous than they're appear (for example, serrated edge etc).

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - I meant if they know his actions and what he did, not if they take his declaration seriously or not.

@ Senpai - I'd imagine it's more like the size of regular combat tentacles (about the size of a teenagers palm) and the the edges aren't serrated, only the tip will be sharp.

[demino_hellsin]

@era-era: that's going to be the interesting part. Judge a man by his past, or his present? Hence Rong's question to Fillia in his profile "Can a monster become a man?" It's another way of me saying, "I'll see what happens "

[HasuMasu]

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- If you ask me, that's probably not the only reason. I'm thinking Dunois Industries are invovled in other shady deals. Why else would they use Charlotte for this operation to get Ichika's info?

Because if they didn't do that, then there would be no Charu moe.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - I'd imagine it's more like the size of regular combat tentacles (about the size of a teenagers palm) and the the edges aren't serrated, only the tip will be sharp.

Lethal, period. Especially if said tentacles also burst in the back.

Originally Posted by Detective-san

Because if they didn't do that, then there would be no Charu moe.

Pah... Favoritism. Instead of fixing everyone's character BASED on Char, Izuru broke her.

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - Then I wish you good luck. That's going to be hard to write since Rong's actions aren't easy to swallow for most people, especially the IS cast who have a high moral ground on a lot of things. I'll do the same thing but it'll be toned down since-

1. Irish is a jerkass and doesn't care what most of the cast thinks of him.

and

2. His actions are easier to understand since he tried to stop the bombing of civilian sites when his other teammates tried to do it and ended up getting majorly crippled because of it (Slashed neck, weak body from waking up early from comatose and near useless arms).

@ Box - Charlotte was, in their eyes, a useless bastard child till they found her high I.S sync rate and decided "Wait a minute, we can use this!". It's most likely she's the only child of the Dunoa company who's close to Ichika's age.

@ Senpai - It won't be too deep in and he has the skull suit to protect him. If it's still lethal, how about the side of the body instead?

[demino_hellsin]

What are the chances of an 11 year old going through the http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.ph...IntoTheCockpit in an Infinite Stratos?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - It won't be too deep in and he has the skull suit to protect him. If it's still lethal, how about the side of the body instead?

No, the Colon would be still the best choice (a stab on the guts), but Irish will rendered helpless because of the sudden shock and change in body fluid pressure, rather than due to pain and injury.

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

What are the chances of an 11 year old going through the http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.ph...IntoTheCockpit in an Infinite Stratos?

Chances are nil, unless it's someone important enough like Tatenashi.

[StratoSpear]

About to publish Chapter 11, should I:

- End Athena Bouclier here and start a new story for Tsurugi's arc(odds are it'll have way more chapters)

or

- Resume with Athena Bouclier, posting the synopsis for Tsurugi's arc in the next chapter.

I'm leaning towards number 2, whatcha think?

[agetreme]

Crack Fic (in the same vein as that Mock IS tournament)

Spoiler for Stratosphere Radio Ep 1:

Tsukane: Hi!Hi everybody! Welcome to Stratosphere radio, the mysterious radio channel that broadcast across different universe from the tip of the Stratosphere. I am the host of this show, Tabane.....Nah, fool you for a second didn't I? I am just the girl with the same name as the creator of IS, Akaki Tsukane-chan!

Tsuruna: "and I am the co-host Aoi Tsuruna. Akaki, before we begin, Akaki, can you tell our non-Japanese audience the joke behind your name?"

Tsukane: "My given name share the same Kanji as Tabane!"

Tsuruna: "and there you have it. The joy of Japanese language. Now, the explanation of Stratosphere radio."

Tsukane: "Stratosphere Radio, or Stratos radio for short, is a radio channel where you can post anything here and get our very bias answer on various topics regarding Infinite Stratos."

Tsuruna: "Akaki... we aren't suppose to tell them the "bias" part..."

Tsukane: "Really?!"

Tsuruna: "To direct your answer to us, you just need to type "@Stratosradio:" and our dear broadcaster Agetreme will collect the question and direct it to us. However, no Sociopolitical/political questions please, we don't want to start a gender war here."

Tsukane: "Psst... and don't ask us about in-dept information on IS technology neither, the reason why we are doing this, is to earn extra credit for our failing grade."

Tsuruna: "Don't tell people that!"

Tsukane: "Anyway, since this is our first episode, there is no question directed to us....so what should we do?"

Tsuruna: "According to producer's note, it says "Talk whatever you like...."

Tsukane: "Then I shall begin. I recently just bought the legendary Figure of the Legendary Chifuyu-nee! And guess what did I found out?"

Tsuruna: "What did you found out? Hidden accessories? Free collectable trading cards of embarrassing picture of Chifuyu-nee?"

Tsukane*Epic!*: "IT IS PROPORTIONALLY ACCURATE!"

Tsuruna: *GASP!* How is that possible!"

Tsukane: "I know! I measure the model's three sizes with a string and a ruler during class..."

Tsuruna: "That's our perverted men for you....Wait a minute... Akaki! You should paid attention in class..... beside that how the hell did you manage to get data on Chifuyu-nee's three sizes!"

Tsukane: "It's Confidential but I can assure you, my information is very accurate."

Tsuruna: "I am surprise you still have time to buy the figurine....I thought you are busy hosting other events too? Such as that IS tournament....few months ago? If I didn't forget..."

Tsukane: "Too bad you aren't there....Chifuyu-nee total trash all those Noobs."

Tsuruna: "About that Tournament....."

Tsukane: "yes?"

Tsuruna: "You forgot to introduce yourself."

Tsukane: "......"

Tsuruna: "........."

Tsukane: "OMG! You are right!"

Tsuruna: "you should really stop doing that Tabane Joke of yours..."

Tsukane: "Anyway, that all the time we have in this first episode. Until next time, this is Stratos Radio. I am your host Akaki Tsukane."

Tsuruna: "Aoi Tsuruna."

Tsukane: "see you next time..... I hope."

[demino_hellsin]

can the daughter of a general work? Through circumstances I've yet to finalize she was with him, the base was attacked, turns out the general was to inspect the newly delivered IS. To save everyone, she got in the IS. Or more like fell in and started flailing around in hopes of saving everyone.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by StratoSpear

About to publish Chapter 11, should I:

- End Athena Bouclier here and start a new story for Tsurugi's arc(odds are it'll have way more chapters)

or

- Resume with Athena Bouclier, posting the synopsis for Tsurugi's arc in the next chapter.

I'm leaning towards number 2, whatcha think?

Depends, if you still feature Inami prominently, I'd say two. But if he is sidelined from the spotlight, then number one.

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

can the daughter of a general work? Through circumstances I've yet to finalize she was with him, the base was attacked, turns out the general was to inspect the newly delivered IS. To save everyone, she got in the IS. Or more like fell in and started flailing around in hopes of saving everyone.

Is the attack unexpected? Does the girl have a GOOD reason to be there? And how exactly she ended in I.S. Hangar (usually located underground, heavily armored, or both)?

Answer these question and analyze it.

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - Near impossible, it would have had to be planned before hand.

@ Stratos - I go with 1.

@ Zero - So where should he get attacked? He can't dodge it, it's the catalyst for his amnesia.