2008-03-31, 03:05 | Link #6861 | |
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2008-03-31, 03:18 | Link #6868 | |
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I think we've covered most of the more common fetishes for ecchi doujins. Maybe we should swap the postions of 'Maid' and 'Neko-shojo'. By that time they'll probably be into it and we'll have Kyonko calling Kyon 'goshujin-sama'. Which is part of the attraction of the 'Maid'. Last edited by Forceflow; 2008-03-31 at 03:37. |
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2008-03-31, 03:26 | Link #6870 | |||
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But it made a great setup for Kyon's Pheonix Wright parody... Quote:
When the first novel's finished, we'll paste the bugger into your viscom program, add some backgrounds, some characters, and voila! Quote:
I swear. Besides the fact that I'd like to think I did a good job on the dialogue and the character's, and the setting up phase is funny. |
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2008-03-31, 03:38 | Link #6872 | |||
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Kyonko: What the hell? Now we're in a shrine, and I'm a shrine maiden? *look over at Kyon, dressed as the priest* Kyon: ... You don't even need to say anything. And yeah, dkellis I think that would be a good idea too. Kyon and Kyonko essentially -have- to have sex 8 times (I assume Nagato's will have to do a bit of data restructuring, for Kyon), so the last few scenes are going to be more about snarky comedy, while the first few will be "Omg we're having sex". I agree with Kang from earlier. If the script is good enough, and we go all out, we could produce something that's actually quite decent Edit: Quote:
Also, the writers of the light novels need to get their sleep at some point too |
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2008-03-31, 03:52 | Link #6874 |
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What do you guys think of this?
Some more snarky bits: "The 4th or 5th sex scene" Kyon: I just can't do this anymore. I'm not talking about any associated moral qualms, since obviously those are out the window... *looks down at himself* Kyon: ... it just won't go up anymore. Kyonko: Ah well. We tried our best. At least if the universe ends I won't have to deal with Suzumiya anymore. Kyon: Amen to that. -Yuki appears. Begins data manipulation- Kyon: Yuki what are you doing... Oh good lord. Kyonko: It's... big again. Kyon @ Yuki: What are you, some kind of Deus Sex Machina? Yuki: If you mean a play on "Deus Ex Machina", as a convenient plot device to allow the smooth transmission of material from you to your analogue self, then yes. You could say that. *Yuki leaves* Kyon+Kyonko: ... Yes, Kyon at some point has to accuse Yuki of being a Deus Sex Machina. It must be in the doujin! haha |
2008-03-31, 03:54 | Link #6876 |
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/facepalm... in a good way
Thanks to you I now have a mental image of yuki biting down on Kyon's member to do data manipulation... I'm so going to burn. EDIT: forgot my other comments on the script. It looks decent, stuff that they might say. Is there a translation for deus ex machina in japanese? |
2008-03-31, 03:56 | Link #6877 | |
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I had an H-Doujin where that actually happened. Translated in English even... god I wish I had my old doujin folder ;-; Edit: The plot was something like "Kyon has been infected with a deadly data virus that can only be removed through various forms of sex" rather then biting though. |
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2008-03-31, 03:58 | Link #6878 |
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You also need random trivia from Kyon.
[random trivia reference to put in] Lazarus Long, fictional character out of some of Robert Henlein's novels. He lived an extended life, and at one point was persuaded by his timetravelling descendants not to kill himself (out of boredom) by finding something he'd never done before, which was having sex with his opposite sex clone. [/trivia] More snark Kyonko: You know, everything's driven by the subconscious desires of Haruki, right? Kyon: You mean Haruhi. Kyonko: Whatever. Well, doesn't that mean they think having sex with their opposite sex twin will fix the world? *both pause* Kyon: The cosplay's definitely from Haruhi's subconscious. Yeah. |
2008-03-31, 03:59 | Link #6879 | |
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No idea. I'd have to find out from Kang on that one.
I don't know what they do with the phrase "Deus Ex Machina" in Korean or Japanese... If they it stays relatively intact as a phrase, Kang might be able to come up with some kind of word play or phonetic play that would make the phrase sound sexual, which would allow Yuki to reply accordingly. Edit: Quote:
The snark is looking so good to me right now... haha. Edit2: S'more snark Kyon makes the Lazarus Long reference, and for once someone actually understands one of his trivia like comments. He even rejoices at the fact. Kyonko makes some kind of remark to burst his bubble like, "I'm probably the only person in a hundred mile radius who understands what you meant" Last edited by CanadaAotS; 2008-03-31 at 04:11. |
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2008-03-31, 04:09 | Link #6880 | |
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(yuki after chomping down on Kyon's member) Yuki: There has been a marked decrease in the volume of bodily fluids being exchanged between you two. I estimate he will be unable to transfer an appropriate amount of fluid at the next location. (Kyon winces and climaxes or whatever) (Yuki wipes her face as *fluids* drip off her face) Yuki: Data Manipulation complete. Fluid expulsion increased to a steady rate of 300% of normal. Safety Factor of safe universe separation increased to 0.85345224. Kyon/Kyonko: .... (wind blowing sfx) |
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