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[demino_hellsin]

Think I should try taking the three snippets, cobble them together and submit them as the first chapter to saint and sinner?

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

QUICK! Someone give me a song that I can have Mugino singing!

Preferably something japanese!

How about "Akiiro no Aria"? It's sung by Mugino's voice actor and is quite pretty.

A song that would fit her personality more would be Nano's "No pain, No game".

Sorry about the late post, I was busy...

[SmokinFerret88]

It's purely up to you demino; but if you do this I think it would be good for you to stick with this particular project and focus on no others unless you are confident that you can handle more than one story at a time.

Btw, here's the snippet....maybe yet another snippet I can use for future chapters.

Spoiler for A Certain Drunkin' Meltdown:

It was official; Kamijou Touma was going to break a certain Saiai’s fucked up illusion of humor by the time the night was over.

“Ah, I'm unhappy...unhappy, I said! What exactly am I to you?!”

He had every reason to be upset as hell about this particular situation and everyone present knew it. Takitsubo, seated off to the furthest side from him, repeatedly sent her own concerned gaze towards him every so often to ensure he was alright. She looked sympathetic, truly she did, but sympathy was not helping him at the moment and thus wasn’t something he needed here. He needed help and a lot of it, but everyone present was not so keen to lift a finger for his sake.

“Put it into words! Use your voice! Yeah, let me hear your answer
You only apologize with an embarrassed face.
That kind of adorable magic can't continue. I'll hit you, got it?!"

It all started with a seemingly good-natured invitation sent to him by Rikou to join her and the rest of the girl’s to a private pool-party. Having some free time, he had accepted the request, He wasn’t given a particularly warm welcome by Mugino when he arrived, though that was to be expected considering how she typically was when regarding him at all. Frenda wasn’t all that friendly either, though Saiai was strangely not-as-harsh on him as her other two friends.

“I'm not too excited!”

He soon found out why she wasn’t so aggressive towards him soon enough, though he sincerely doubted this was the end result Kinuhata had been expecting to achieve. Apparently, as a custom by the staff at this private pool ITEM had reserved for only themselves and a few guests, they were to bring refreshments whenever it was asked of them to do so; though of course not anything alcoholic since everyone present was a minor. What everyone here didn’t know was that Kinuhata had decided that this was the opportune time to perform a bit of mischief for the sake of her own personal curiosity. Being in possession of some alcohol, strong alcohol at that, she somehow managed to slip it into Mugino’s drink when the girl wasn’t looking.

She didn’t know what would become of Kamijou as a result of this, having never seen the Level 5 Meltdowner drunk before in her life. But with this golden opportunity now present, she couldn’t pass up the chance to see just what she would do to the boy when she was drunk off her rockers.

But for all that she was expecting to witness, the results of that choice were not something she had imagined.
Never the less, it was still funny as hell to watch.

“Your smiling face that you show to everyone...
I like that about you, but...Ugh!
That you and this you are equally gentle
But when you make me sick, it's a jump-knee-kick!”

Mugino was practically on fire with and even if this wasn’t the desired result it was still something that needed to be seen to believe. Mugino was smiling; not a smirk, not one of those yandere-like grins, but a completely genuine drunken smile that spoke volumes of how wasted she was. Mugino hardly ever smiled this wide, which was what made this particular spectical something worth mentioning and even photographing! Seriously, while it wasn’t the desired effect she had been expecting, it was still something she would more than likely never see again for a good long while.

Kamijou, on the other hand, was not as pleased with this particular situation he was in. Amongst the group of girls and himself, he had been the last person to catch on to the sudden change in Mugino’s personality. By all accounts, he should have been the first one to notice it, but the fact was he was busy pulling a drowning Rikou out of the pool at the time to really note the change in attitude. It wasn’t until she called him over to her that it became clear that something was wrong. Dreamy-eyed look with a wide smile did a good job at sending off warning bells in his brain; but by then it was too late. Once he was close enough, she snatched his arm, pulled it into her chest and slung her arm around his neck to keep him from moving away without first dragging her with him.

“Gottcha!” was what she had said at the time, and thus the reason why he was still stuck in the same spot. That wasn’t the real issue here; the issue was that, because of his arm’s length and the fact that she was leaning up on him, his fingers were treading near very dangerous territory. Being forced to sit down did not amend this issue, for as time passed her body leaned forward ever slightly and thus narrowing the gap between his fingers and that ‘no-zone’ territory between her legs.

“Answer me! Am I special to you?
Between me and those girls, who is more important?!
Why can't you ever say it clearly?!
Won't you cut it out?!”

The fact that she was singing this particular song, one he admittedly wasn’t familiar with, and pointedly looking at him didn’t help matters any. He assumed it was only the alcohol and him being a male which made her act this particular way. She may have started singing this without him here, but that was an assumption he honestly couldn’t make since he was here now and forced to deal with it accordingly. As for how he found out it was Saiai who had done the deed in making Mugino drunk; well, it she wasn’t doing a good job at pretending to be innocent. The Cheshire grin she was sporting did a good job at proving her guilt; one more reason for him to wipe it off her face once Shizuri passed out.
As for Frenda, well, she was just too startled and star-struck by the sight of her ‘big-sis’ figure being this way. She wasn’t used to it, wasn’t able to handle it, but was none the less snapping pictures as fast as she could while Saiai continued to observe the spectacle with a ‘super’ satisfied look in her eyes.

“Ah, I'm unhappy...unhappy, I said! What exactly am I to you?!
Stay with me! Hold my hand! Hold me for a while!”

It was here in which Touma’s arm was released from the terrifyingly strong grip that had bound it in place this entire time. While Kamijou thought he was free at first, he couldn’t have been more wrong as she took that same moment to move her arm from around his neck before gripping the side of his head and forcing it into her chest; his cheek firmly placed on her right breast as his eyes stared at the narrow valley before him. In his mind, as much as he loathed to admit it, a small part of him had died and proceeded to heaven; singing nothing but praise to whatever deity that existed that blessed him with this one bit of good fortune. At the same time, another voice was screaming at the top of its lungs for his body to NOT react to this very stimulating experience.

The very last thing he needed was Mugino or any of the other girl’s present to witness the appearance of a certain part of the male anatomy.

“Again with the magic of that bashful, embarrassed face
Isn't that the wrong mood?! I'll kick you hard! Ugh!!
I'm not too excited!”

At least she wasn’t actually kicking him, otherwise things couldn’t possibly get much-

“Where can we post this that won’t end up being found by Mugino later?”

...worse.

“Such Misfortune!”

The sudden outburst did more than just temporarily pause the girl’s singing; had he known what would happen after he wouldn’t have made a peep. Startled and with no sense of balance, her body proceeded to fall back onto the fold-out chair she was laying on prior to all this. In doing this, she drug Kamijou along with her, having lost his own balance in the process. The end result left Kamijou practically lying on top of Shizuri; earning a collective gasp from both Saiai and Frenda who were still watching the scene rather intently. Rikou, throughout all of this, merely remained silent as she watched this all unfold from afar; though still providing her silent support for Touma. Mugino, on her part, merely blinked groggily a few times once it registered in her brain that Touma was on top of her before letting out an outlandishly schoolgirl-ish giggle.

“Silly fucker, that aint the lyrics.” Apparently, his cry of outrage only caused a slight delay in her singing, though her voice still showed signs of heavy intoxication. Though the sudden pause to her singing was brief, once the surprise of had died away from her fall she took the time to press the boy’s head, if possible, further into her bosom. “Now I forgot where I was…”

Kamijou may need to wait a while longer before he could proceed with his plans to shatter Kinuhata’s fucked up illusion of humor.

Because, as things stood, Mugino was gonna be up for a good while and was most likely not going to release him anytime soon.

[demino_hellsin]

O.o dwah?!?!

Guess I need to close down one of my two active fics if I want to continue... 3 if I count Had Circumstances been Different.

[SmokinFerret88]

I'm only saying that if you're not confident about keeping up with all the fics you have out right now. If you think you can do it, by all means do it. But I find it much easier to focus on one project and Project Darkness is my baby.

I want it to succeed, and it will, so I can't afford to be distracted with other stories. No matter how much I want to do things like that Crippled Touma story. If I didn't have ACWOD you bet your ass I'd be on that project in a heartbeat.

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

Lol! Do it!

Get an Ami Koshimizu song.

Anyway, i went and visit the OEL manga and VN Swords of Edo website and got some inspiration for the fanfics i'm working on with what kind of nightwear will the female characters be wearing for certain scenes.

Here are some..... pics in found from the Swords of Edo VN.

NSFW

Warning: Not safe to view at work or school!

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The first fanfics i'm working is the one where the Level 5s are female and are interested with Touma. The scene i thinking of is Touma ends up in the hospital (again) after battling some weird magic folks. To make sure nobody attacks him during his recovery, three of the Level 5s decide to stay with him for the night (after some fighting, arguing, name calling, voting). In some weird twist of fate, Touma ends up not his usual room but a VIP room that for some reason has a King size bed (Which Heaven Canceler claims the bed was sent by mistake but didn't return since it was a waste to get rid of it.). The girls get an idea how to stay close with Touma. You can probably guess what happens.


The other one was something i just came up for sometime ago. It's an AU where an older Mikoto and Shizuri in college and older Kuroko and Awaki in highschool. Due to some strange reason i'm still unable to know how i got this idea, both Mikoto and Shizuri became a couple and are living together and the same thing happening with Kuroko and Awaki. The fics focuses their daily and love lives.

[silverexorcist]

I came, I saw, I brainstormed, and I wrote. The die has been cast and I have come to a conclusion.

We need more Frenda X Fremea fics.

Spoiler for The Concert:

"This is going to be super awesome."

"For who?! I don't even want to be here!"

"But you're still here. Just get rid of that super frown and try to enjoy yourself."

"I would enjoy myself more somewhere else. I'm feeling sick from being around so many people already."

Mugino's eyes were alight with fury as she stood among a large crowd of people packed so tightly together, Mugino was confident that the fire marshal was hovering nearby, waiting for the slightest excuse to take action, lurking nearby with warrants in hand. It was a sweltering afternoon that was about to turn to evening and she could hardly look in any direction without seeing teenagers looking like they were having the time of their lives.

Did all of these people seriously come for a stupid concert? It must have been nice, living a peaceful life. She on the other hand, wasn't interested in wasting precious time she could use for something else.

"Don't be so uptight." Kinuhata chided as she continued to smile excitedly, no different from any of the others around here. "This is a once in a lifetime chance to see the band that made so many tracks for some movies that I love. It's been a super while since they've become famous stars in Japan and never set foot in the world of amateur movies again, but that doesn't super matter!"

"You're all nerds and idiots. It's too freaking hot out to have so many people packed in one place. It's a pain. Well, at least there's a chance some idiots might get in a fight. That should be somewhat entertaining, even if for a little while."

"Mugino...you're that super idiot."

"Huh?"

"Just two minutes after we got in here, you bumped into a guy and threatened him violently until he super broke into tears and apologized at while groveling at your feet."

"He pissed me off! He had the sort of arrogant look on his face that weaklings get that makes you want punch them! I did everyone a favor."

"You also stepped on the mat someone laid out so he and his friends could sit, and when they spoke up, you nearly blasted their heads off."

"They pissed me off even more!!" Mugino shook off Kinuhata's argument indifferently. "I mean, don't those idiots have better things to do than be here, talking about freaking gossip? The world would be better off without them."

"Concert tickets aren't easy to super get. They sell off quick. Anyone who doesn't respect that enough to show up early and wait with friends doesn't deserve to super get a ticket."

"....and why the hell did you waste one on me when someone who cared could have gotten it themselves?"

"I don't care about other people. You need to be super cultured in music."

"You mean force your annoying tastes one me, don't you?"

Just then, someone carelessly bumped into Mugino from behind, causing the level 5 to stumble slightly. She instantly turned on her heel with rage coloring her face, aiming to put a new hole in the unlucky music lover.

But she didn't see anyone immediately behind her and paused for a moment in confusion.

"What..?"

Out of the corner of her eye, she spotted a short figure weaving its way through the crowd of people's legs, possibly being the one at fault. But instead of chasing down the fleeing suspect, Mugino frowned curiously as she thought.

"That fluffy blonde hair...kind of looks familiar..."

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"In the end, what is Mugino doing here?!" Frenda Seivelun demanded of no one in particular as she shivered behind a wall of people. Just by crouching down slightly, she easily hid herself despite her clear foreign features. She'd learned through experience that the best way to hide a blonde in Japan was to make it so she was never seen.

"Essentially, do you know that girl?" Frenda's little sister, Fremea Seivelun asked curiously as she looked up at her sister, who had dove at her from behind the crowd of people as if rescuing her from a fatal trap. "You're shaking like you barey avoided death."

"Just unlucky coincidence." Frenda murmured as she let her breath out slowly. "If those two had seen me here, who knows what would happen? I’d never hear the end of it. In the end, it’s a good thing Takitsubo didn't come."

“Come on!” Fremea completely ignored her sister's concerns despite having been the one to ask as she tugged on Frenda’s skirt eagerly. “Essentially, we need to find a good spot before the concert starts! I want a good view to hear everything!”

“That makes no sense.” Frenda muttered as she let Fremea drag her along through the crowd. “But in the end, you still haven’t even thanked me for using my connections to get you a ticket to come here. I don’t even like this type of music, so show some gratitude.”

“Essentially, you don’t like anything that isn’t sung by an idol, do you?”

“Of course not! In the end, idols are meant to be idolized! I bet you only like this sort of music because you’re hanging out with those Skill-Out people so much! The same for those violent games you keep trying to get me to buy for you!”

“Komaba-oniichan is not a bad influence! He should be praised for teaching me so much!”

Frenda was about to retort, but was interrupted as the crowd erupted into cheers and whistles as the band that was meant to perform came out onto the stage that the crowd was centered around. Fremea tried to jumped several times to see over the people in front of her, putting all of her strength into the movement, but the extra inch she gained for a moment only showed her the backs of everyone in front of her..

In the end, she can’t do anything without me.

Frenda sighed as she picked Fremea up in her arms and placed her on her shoulders, allowing the small girl to see over the heads of the people nearby. No sooner had she done so than the music began to play and Fremea began to bounce with excitement.

But I guess that’s why I’m still around for her, right?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

“Uwah...it’s starting.”

Kamijou Touma sighed miserably as he looked around, hearing the muffled sound of music nearby.

He’d somehow been lucky enough to get tickets to a concert for free, something very unusual for his normal trend of misfortune. He didn’t listen to music too often, but it seemed like a waste of a rare piece of luck for him to just not go, but he didn’t know anyone in particular who listened to this sort of music, so he couldn’t give the ticket away.

And now he was wandering the halls leading to the stage where the band was playing, having somehow made a wrong turn to an outside concert.

“Is Kamijou-san doomed to wander these halls at least until the very end of the concert, missing everything? Was my luck just an illusion that I fell for…?”

He should have known when he hadn’t lost his ticket, which was what he’d expected would happen. But he wouldn’t lose heart. He needed to keep looking, or else he’d been giving in to his cruel misfortune and would never become victorious.

So he picked himself up and continued forward, making a turn around a wall up ahead.

“Ah.”

This single word escaped his mouth as his foot was caught on what seemed like the wire of a plug--specifically one connected to an amp--and he stumbled forward several feet, accidently pulling the plug out on the way.

Instinctively, he tried to correct his balance and brought his other foot forward to catch himself.

And his foot went straight through a large drum, pushing it over so symbols clattered to the ground.

A long and heavy silence filled the air as Kamijou met the shocked eyes of the band and the audience.

“................................................. ...............................”

“WHAT THE HELL!”

“YOU BASTARD!!!”

“YOU RUINED EVERYTHING!”

“IS THIS SOME SORT OF STUPID PRANK?!”

“DIE AND GET OFF THE STAGE!”

All sorts of debris sailed through the air, aimed for Kamijou’s head, and he covered his head immediately to block them as he cried internally. Why did he have to stumble ONTO the stage, of all places?

And why were there beams mixed in with the debris?!

“I’LL KILL YOU, YOU STUPID TROLL! GET OVER HERE SO I CAN MELT THAT STUPID LOOK ON YOUR FACE RIGHT OFF!”

“Oh! Mugino is super mad! You were actually enjoying the concert, weren’t you?”

“I’ll kill you too, if you don’t shut up!”

“Essentially, what happened? Why did the music stop?”

“Iiiiddddiiioooot! Be quiet or Mugino might hear you!”

“SUCH MISFORTUNE!!!!!”

[SmokinFerret88]

Comrade Ferret Approves!

[omega253]

Aaaaaaand I'm back.

Comrade Ferret, your drunk Mugino snip was worth the wait.

Now on to something I just remembered.

Earlier in this thread, I read some discussion about what the left hand counterpart to the Holy Right might be and what powers it had.

What if the Left Hand is Zabaniyah? As in that ability that those Assassin Servants had in Type-Moon.

[SmokinFerret88]

Earlier in this thread, I read some discussion about what the left hand counterpart to the Holy Right might be and what powers it had.

Imagine Breaker.

Think about it, Fiamma's Holy Right was on his right, and Touma's IB is on his Right arm. Now, when the two face the other, each of their respective arm power (as I'm calling it to lessen the confusion) is on their opponent's left side. Even if its power derives from the right arm, to the person observing them from the their front it appears as the left side.

Therefore, Touma's right arm is Fiamma's left and Fiamma's right arm is Touma's left.

The power to heal and the power to destroy. Holy Right clearly was a tool of destruction while Imagine Breaker is a tool of repairing that damage done to the natural order; thus a form of healing.

Or I could be dead wrong about all of this (which is likely) but that's how I personally choose to view it.

[Mr.Kyon]

I always thought it was symbolic that Dragon King comes out when Touma only has his left arm on.

[SmokinFerret88]

Symbolic how?

Like in the way I described above or do you mean it in a different way?

[omega253]

Originally Posted by Pandabreaker

Status: “Resolution” -- waiting
Story type: Long term
Pairing: Fukiyose Seiri x Kamijyo Touma
Summary: It’s the first day of January and everyone has a new year resolution specially for one girl. Seiri Fukiyose has a new goal for the year. Although it branches out into the same ideals of working harder at school and becoming a role-model student. One particular goal is the love of one Touma Kamijyo. Long has she been holding herself in check and no longer will she continue her act. This year is the year when she will finally get herself a boyfriend! Watch out Touma the class rep is on the move!

And it seems like I might've provoked a serious discussion......

Oh well. I guess it's time to derail that.

You see the idea I just quoted above? It's really old. It's on the fourth page of this thread on a list from that Panda dude.

Would anybody mind if I take this idea?

[SmokinFerret88]

Doubtful, but I'm not positive about it honestly.

[demino_hellsin]

Funny when I imagined the holy right version of IB, the whole monster arm thing, it would be that the arm can only attack 3 times before the flesh fed to it rots. Kamijou has to have his right arm cut off to activate it. And finally, its attack range can hit up to a kilometer. Everything hit will feel like their time stopped for a split second and any abnormal or supernatural happening/trait within the range will be nullified/sealed for a few minutes, seal lasts longer the more powerful the sealed power is.

[omega253]

I just want to try shipping Fukiyose and Touma.

[silverexorcist]

I thought there was more meaning in the fact that the strange thing appears whenever Kamijou-san's arm is crushed or destroyed, blurring the definition of being a 'right hand'.

[allfictions]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

staring at that thing for 15 minutes and still can't figure out what it is

Originally Posted by tsunade666

From what vn game is that?

That's from the visual novel Dies Irae, an untranslated visual novel. I have not played it myself, but the concept seems interesting from what I got from the (extremely) rare summaries I managed to find online. A better (somewhat) summary:

As the Soviet Union marches on Berlin in May of 1945, a secretive group of sorcerers and madmen gathers to perform a terrible ritual. They care nothing for the fate of the Reich. To them, the countless lives lost in the battle are the perfect sacrifice to fuel their spell. After the war, they vanish and are not heard from again, except in rumor. One day, it is whispered, they will return. And on that day, the world will end. Fear the demons in human form. Fear the Longinus Dreizehn Orden.

Flash forward to present-day Japan. Fujii Ren is released from the hospital after two months spent recovering from wounds suffered in a vicious brawl with his best friend Shiro. As Christmas approaches, he tries to rebuild his life, clinging to what brilliance remains. But even that is soon threatened. For the knights of the LDO have returned, and brought the apocalypse to his doorstep. Forced to wield the same unholy power as his foes, will Ren be able to protect what is dear to him from the inhuman might of the Longinus Dreizehn Orden?

Images

Nazi Magicians

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^This is (some members) of the Longinus Dreizehn Orden. Most of them are real life based characters, such as Reinhard Tristan Eugen Heydrich (who, by the way, looks a lot like Fiamma in the game, such as here), Valerian Trifa, and there is even guy who is Hermes Trismegistus, Albertus Magnus, Paracelsus, Michel de Nostredame, Christian Rosenkreuz, Johann Georg Faust, Alessandro di Cagliostro, and the Count of St. Germain all at the same time!

But what interest me the most in this game is the use spells of Norse origin with names such as Múspellsheimr Lavateinn, Midgardr Völsunga Saga, Gladsheimr, Vanaheimr, and Niflheimr Fenrisúlfr, and other spells making references to German folklore, especially operas: Der Freiscütz Samiel, Eine Faust Ouvertüre, Goldene Schwan Lohengrin, plus a reference to Nietzsche (Also sprach Zarathustra)


Now that I think about it, why not write a fic about Touma facing a Nazi magic cabal, like say, descendants of the original Thule Society?

[R.D.Blax]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

The first fanfics i'm working is the one where the Level 5s are female and are interested with Touma. The scene i thinking of is Touma ends up in the hospital (again) after battling some weird magic folks. To make sure nobody attacks him during his recovery, three of the Level 5s decide to stay with him for the night (after some fighting, arguing, name calling, voting). In some weird twist of fate, Touma ends up not his usual room but a VIP room that for some reason has a King size bed (Which Heaven Canceler claims the bed was sent by mistake but didn't return since it was a waste to get rid of it.). The girls get an idea how to stay close with Touma. You can probably guess what happens.


The other one was something i just came up for sometime ago. It's an AU where an older Mikoto and Shizuri in college and older Kuroko and Awaki in highschool. Due to some strange reason i'm still unable to know how i got this idea, both Mikoto and Shizuri became a couple and are living together and the same thing happening with Kuroko and Awaki. The fics focuses their daily and love lives.

I'm ready to throw money at my screen so your second fic come faster. Yandere x Tsundere and Pervy!Teleport couple is something which should have happened sooner.

Originally Posted by omega253

I just want to try shipping Fukiyose and Touma.

The idea of Pandabreaker can't work... because Fukiyose it's not the class rep ! I think it's Aogami More seriously, I find this idea pretty plain, but if you think you can make it work, go ahead.

[SmokinFerret88]

^This is (some members) of the Longinus Dreizehn Orden. Most of them are real life based characters, such as Reinhard Tristan Eugen Heydrich (who, by the way, look a lot like Fiamma in the game, such as here), Valerian Trifa, and there is even guy who is Hermes Trismegistus, Albertus Magnus, Paracelsus, Michel de Nostredame, Christian Rosenkreuz, Johann Georg Faust, Alessandro di Cagliostro, and the Count of St. Germain all at the same time!

But what interest me the most in this game is the use spells of Norse origin with names such as Múspellsheimr Lavateinn, Midgardr Völsunga Saga, Gladsheimr, Vanaheimr, and Niflheimr Fenrisúlfr, and other spells making references to German folklore, especially operas: Der Freiscütz Samiel, Eine Faust Ouvertüre, Goldene Schwan Lohengrin, plus a reference to Nietzsche (Also sprach Zarathustra)


Now that I think about it, why not write a fic about Touma facing a Nazi magic cabal, like say, descendants of the original Thule Society?

If I ever get far enough into my Darkness Project to have Touma enter the magic-side, I can probably make this happen. Maybe, not positive, hell I'll need to do a lot of research on it, but I'm pretty sure I can give this a idea a shot.

Which reminds me, I still have Jacob Prier to work on. Interesting concept behind him, if you want the details. I still have his profile somewhere if you wanna see what I have on him thus far.