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JERI · 2004-08-13, 17:22

before I realised my mistake, I've completely messed up the background spirals I wanted. By then, I'm too far into inking to forfeit.

Here it is anyway.

http://img18.exs.cx/img18/7752/VERMIN-1.jpg

As always, any comments/critique are appreciated.

DukeGaladrien · 2004-08-13, 17:52

I'm liking this new pick, that background is wild.

puffpuff · 2004-08-13, 20:16

WOW!
I really like his face and the pose aswell. You can feel the picture moving!
And I agree the background is wild. You´re really skilled at incing!

Shoeshefied · 2004-08-15, 09:15

Quote:

Originally Posted by JERI

here's an asian girl I've drawn out of the blues.

http://img51.exs.cx/img51/4563/BELL-2.jpg

on a scale of 1-10 (1 being shit and 10 being professional), rate it in terms of how I handled the proportions, the dimension, and the layout.

any comments/tips are appreciated.

next up: blonde.

It looks good man, i give yah a solid 8, i love the scenerio

JERI · 2004-08-18, 05:47

This is a picture I did quite a while ago. The image quality is pretty crap because I had to transfer it into my computer using my digital camera.

http://img37.exs.cx/img37/2809/goodchrist-2.jpg

If you feel like commenting, please give me more opinions regarding how I handled body posture/proportions.

-Am!daMaru- · 2004-08-18, 07:21

Hey this is very good dude Gj.

Ps : how do you ink your drawing?

JERI · 2004-08-19, 04:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by -Am!daMaru-

Hey this is very good dude Gj.

Ps : how do you ink your drawing?

I use the Staedtler Pigment Liners. They've got good ink quality and hand control.

They are darned expensive though. Anyone wanna recommend some cheap, durable and smooth inking accessories?

Asura · 2004-08-19, 18:58

faber-castell pitt artist pen, pretty good indian ink, available with plastic brush tip, quick dry on paper. unfortunately i can't find this with 0.05mm tip (so far only copic does). the rest... sakura markers. Though lately I've been using the brush pen more and more due to my inking style (dictates presence of light and dark)...

JERI · 2004-08-25, 06:36

I realise that a samurai girl isn't a very innovative idea, but drawing it has been fun for me.

http://img18.exs.cx/img18/6623/SAMURAI-tone.jpg

This time I'd like some comments on how well I depicted the ethereal nature of the wraith.

Raxial · 2004-08-25, 11:53

really awesome! The wraith is well done, and looks really great. The girl is good too, but maybe her (her left being our right) eye is a little too far from her nose, making the eyes slightly too far apart. But still, with any other small errors, it's really well done, and clean too

Gotta love clean drawings.

JERI · 2004-08-30, 06:20

I've been trying to recondition myself to produce works that are more concious of proper facial proportions. This is one of the resultant sketches.

http://img16.exs.cx/img16/6753/KITSCH-1.jpg

This sketch shows improvement to the eyes problem plaguing my previous works. However, I'm not sure whether the eyes are actually in their proper distance from one another. Please look at it and tell me if the eyes still stand out as being too far apart in this drawing. Also feel free to comment on anything you find anatomically incorrect.

Shoeshefied · 2004-08-30, 07:40

Quote:

Originally Posted by JERI

I've been trying to recondition myself to produce works that are more concious of proper facial proportions. This is one of the resultant sketches.

http://img16.exs.cx/img16/6753/KITSCH-1.jpg

This sketch shows improvement to the eyes problem plaguing my previous works. However, I'm not sure whether the eyes are actually in their proper distance from one another. Please look at it and tell me if the eyes still stand out as being too far apart in this drawing. Also feel free to comment on anything you find anatomically incorrect.

Woooh, shes looks hott, =]**** ,, ,,, , ,, ,, Even with just a dual color she looks nice. Sure have a great drawing style. (JEALous

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sOnJoOL · 2004-08-30, 13:37

damn, you're too good. i always mess up on the legs and the lower half for women.
must improve skills.

Mika · 2004-08-30, 14:10

Seems weird but I have seen her before

...Do you have this at deviant under another name? The very first pic you posted I mean.

__Beloved__ · 2004-08-30, 19:29

Is that what you think us Asians look LIKE??????!!!!!!!!
YOU PIECE OF RACIST STEREOTYPICAL WHITE BOI!!

God that looks like SHIT!

JERI · 2004-08-31, 01:21

Quote:

Originally Posted by __Beloved__

Is that what you think us Asians look LIKE??????!!!!!!!!
YOU PIECE OF RACIST STEREOTYPICAL WHITE BOI!!

Uh-oh! My cover's blown!

Asura · 2004-08-31, 04:21

Uh-oh, someone just exploded....super glue?

Shoeshefied · 2004-08-31, 22:12

asian or not.. i didnt think it was a big deal..(coulddd be the other passive passive aggressive thing next to sarcasm...loll, ) . im asian, bah i dont see myself with much labels... .so i wonder..

tabula rosa

xfordained · 2004-08-31, 23:25

to me when ever u draw a certain race u have to use the sterotyplical looks its just how it goes after all thats what all anime and cartoons do

JERI · 2004-09-19, 06:29

one of the rare occasions I actually do a fanart.

http://img13.exs.cx/img13/3010/KOMUGI-1.jpg

2004-08-13, 17:22	Link #21
JERI Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004	before I realised my mistake, I've completely messed up the background spirals I wanted. By then, I'm too far into inking to forfeit. Here it is anyway. http://img18.exs.cx/img18/7752/VERMIN-1.jpg As always, any comments/critique are appreciated.

2004-08-13, 17:52	Link #22
DukeGaladrien Hopeless Baseball Fanatic Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Oceanside, CA Age: 40	I'm liking this new pick, that background is wild.

2004-08-13, 20:16	Link #23
puffpuff Fallen Raven Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: in the chaos between life and death. Age: 34	WOW! I really like his face and the pose aswell. You can feel the picture moving! And I agree the background is wild. You´re really skilled at incing!

2004-08-18, 05:47	Link #25
JERI Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004	This is a picture I did quite a while ago. The image quality is pretty crap because I had to transfer it into my computer using my digital camera. http://img37.exs.cx/img37/2809/goodchrist-2.jpg If you feel like commenting, please give me more opinions regarding how I handled body posture/proportions.

2004-08-18, 07:21	Link #26
-Am!daMaru- Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mauritius Age: 34	Hey this is very good dude Gj. Ps : how do you ink your drawing?

2004-08-19, 18:58	Link #28
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	faber-castell pitt artist pen, pretty good indian ink, available with plastic brush tip, quick dry on paper. unfortunately i can't find this with 0.05mm tip (so far only copic does). the rest... sakura markers. Though lately I've been using the brush pen more and more due to my inking style (dictates presence of light and dark)...

2004-08-25, 06:36	Link #29
JERI Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004	I realise that a samurai girl isn't a very innovative idea, but drawing it has been fun for me. http://img18.exs.cx/img18/6623/SAMURAI-tone.jpg This time I'd like some comments on how well I depicted the ethereal nature of the wraith.

2004-08-25, 11:53	Link #30
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	really awesome! The wraith is well done, and looks really great. The girl is good too, but maybe her (her left being our right) eye is a little too far from her nose, making the eyes slightly too far apart. But still, with any other small errors, it's really well done, and clean too Gotta love clean drawings.

2004-08-30, 06:20	Link #31
JERI Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004	I've been trying to recondition myself to produce works that are more concious of proper facial proportions. This is one of the resultant sketches. http://img16.exs.cx/img16/6753/KITSCH-1.jpg This sketch shows improvement to the eyes problem plaguing my previous works. However, I'm not sure whether the eyes are actually in their proper distance from one another. Please look at it and tell me if the eyes still stand out as being too far apart in this drawing. Also feel free to comment on anything you find anatomically incorrect.

2004-08-30, 13:37	Link #33
sOnJoOL Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004	damn, you're too good. i always mess up on the legs and the lower half for women. must improve skills.

2004-08-30, 14:10	Link #34
Mika Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Canada Age: 46	Seems weird but I have seen her before ...Do you have this at deviant under another name? The very first pic you posted I mean.

2004-08-30, 19:29	Link #35
__Beloved__ -Suki- Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Upstairs Age: 41	Is that what you think us Asians look LIKE??????!!!!!!!! YOU PIECE OF RACIST STEREOTYPICAL WHITE BOI!! God that looks like SHIT!

2004-08-31, 04:21	Link #37
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	Uh-oh, someone just exploded....super glue?

2004-08-31, 22:12	Link #38
Shoeshefied Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: EST Age: 38	asian or not.. i didnt think it was a big deal..(coulddd be the other passive passive aggressive thing next to sarcasm...loll, ) . im asian, bah i dont see myself with much labels... .so i wonder.. tabula rosa

2004-08-31, 23:25	Link #39
xfordained you should die Join Date: Nov 2003	to me when ever u draw a certain race u have to use the sterotyplical looks its just how it goes after all thats what all anime and cartoons do

2004-09-19, 06:29	Link #40
JERI Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004	one of the rare occasions I actually do a fanart. http://img13.exs.cx/img13/3010/KOMUGI-1.jpg