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Eratas123 · 2013-05-18, 00:43

Same with us now: No one really gives a swot till we start dying because of overheating.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 00:52

Exactly

Spoiler for Sacred Twins Ch 15 - Challenge and Decision Part 3:

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-18, 01:06

Smoking women, sexy or no sexy?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 01:13

Not sexy

Definitely not sexy

YMMV of course

Eratas123 · 2013-05-18, 01:21

Depends on the smoke and type of woman

You see loli's and cute girls smoking, it looks awkward. You see mature and/or beautiful women smoking, its fine. Same with men: Its alright for rugged faced perma stubble guys to smoke, but seeing baby faced duded smoking pot looks hilarious.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 01:23

Well yeah that too

I concede: mature, cigarette-chomping career woman is sexy... to an extent

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-18, 01:31

Touko comes to mind. But Erine looks more like Kokonoe... hmmm...

Eratas123 · 2013-05-18, 01:33

Kokonoe eats lollipops, not cigarettes. There are also things like "Smokeless Cigs": All of the texture and look, none of the nicotine and air pollution. Its been used by those undergoing smoking withdrawal as a placebo.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 01:54

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Kokonoe eats lollipops, not cigarettes. There are also things like "Smokeless Cigs": All of the texture and look, none of the nicotine and air pollution. Its been used by those undergoing smoking withdrawal as a placebo.

Yup

I used to be a smoker back then during high school, then switch to that, and bubble gum.

Actually they DO produce nicotine, but none of the corrosive smoke and dust. It IS a placebo for a good reason.

EDIT: Might add this to Iori's character

Spoiler for info:

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-18, 02:04

I think I have a good start going on... check it.

Spoiler for cake eater intro:

Chifuyu's eye twitched as she glared at the image in the mirror. That. Was definitely not her. Nope, no way, no how, no dice, a whole lot of other noes. No, no, no and no. Just no. The fact it was a wall panel mirror to show her full visage just bothered her even more since it was as if the image were being shoved in her face that “yes, this is you.”. Chifuyu really felt like she'd kill someone.

“Uu... um... senpai?”

The irate woman snapped her gaze to the younger Yamada Maya who came up beside her and sucked in an unhealthy amount of air. My God, just looking at what the green-haired woman was wearing made Chifuyu feel faint from imagining just how painful it might be.

“Hey! You two finished yet?”

Slamming the locker room doors open, a woman strode in. Her hair was up in a bun with the ends popping up like pineapple leaves. She wore a pair of thin spectacles while a lab coat hid her choice of spaghetti strap top and dangerously high mini-skirt. She probably only had the courage to wear such a daring outfit because of the opaque leggings she wore. Her heels clicked against the tiles with a brisk pace that commanded respect. She stopped short of bumping into the the two other women occupying the room and gave them a once over. On the tip of her fingers pinched the practical butt of a cigarette.

“Well you two seem fully dressed to me. What are still dallying here for? Come on. We're running a business here. Time is money and all that shit.”, the woman grumbled as she turned away. But she was stopped in her tracks by a hand on her shoulder. A very strong hand with a popping vein on her now numb shoulder.

“Just one second.”, Chifuyu asked with a smile that would remind men why women were scary. “Do you mean to say that this is all that we're wearing today?”.

The woman in the labcoat turned back, “Yes, now come on.”.

But Chifuyu wasn't quite done yet. “So you mean to tell me. That our standard pilot uniforms are gone.
And in their place are- are- are- THESE!?”, the strongest IS pilot in the world gestured down at her attire. There wasn't much really. At best it couldn't even be called proper clothes much less a pilot uniform. It was a string bikini, even more risque than the underwear she favored.

“Well not entirely.”, the woman in the lab coat took a drag of her mostly gone tobacco before pointing to Maya with it. “Hers is a bit different.”.

And to be honest it was. Maya was fortunate enough not to be wearing a string bikini that was supposed to pass for an IS piloting suit. Instead she got a two part spatz and short sleeved top combo. Now that was really reserved, so why did Chifuyu look at Maya with such pity before? Let's just say those clothes would probably fit a middle-schooler better, a middle-schooler without an iota of puberty corrupting the described childish figure. In contrast, Maya was petite but had the bust and hips of a mother. “Painted on” could not describe what it looked like. It felt more like the taut cloth would burst into shreds at any great show of motion. And judging from how it pressed on tender flesh, Maya wasn't wearing anything underneath as per standard IS pilot suits.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 02:06

You should draw borderline manga, Demi, it'll be a goldmine.

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-18, 02:11

At the very least I will declare that I'd be more tasteful than the reboot manga >.>

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 02:12

That's the spirit

Eratas123 · 2013-05-18, 02:21

Whose the one in the labcoat?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 02:24

His OC

I think

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-18, 02:48

Indeed my OC, Erine Umiyome. One of the Silent Seven and the only woman who can drive Chifuyu up a wall through sheer aloofness. Best metallurgist and smith alive to boot.

Eratas123 · 2013-05-18, 04:01

Well, Yandere Laura uses knives.....and axes....while its dark out.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-18, 04:14

Why Laura is a yandere, again?

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-18, 04:15

and can you give a sample of how you wrote her?

Eratas123 · 2013-05-18, 04:28

She's imitating all the girls in order to try and get closer to Ichika (Idiot plot): First she tries Houki (Tsundere Kendo Fanatic), then Cecilia (Snobby Aristocrat whose cooking sucks), and then, as of the current chapter, Rin (Scary Yandere who thinks murder and assault is a viable solution).

@ Demi - Short terms: She cuts the power (To set the mood:/), then stalks Ichika through the halls at night. She also drags her knife against the wall in order to give that 'I'm coming for you' sound.

2013-05-18, 00:43	Link #43461
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Same with us now: No one really gives a swot till we start dying because of overheating. __________________

2013-05-18, 00:52	Link #43462
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Exactly Spoiler for Sacred Twins Ch 15 - Challenge and Decision Part 3: ~CECILIA POV~ “Fuee… and I thought Houki will be interested” “She’s been like that… since the fight broke out” “What do you mean, Cecilia?” “If I had to guess… Houki-san wanted to join us… come to think of it; I often forgot she is not a personal I.S. owner, such a shame” I began to notice things ever since I began my CQC training with Houki-san, particularly, her viewpoint. Strength above everything else, to win with one’s effort without outside interference. To be honest, it wasn’t bad, but… that kind of viewpoint is unsuited for I.S. pilot. “Houki probably see herself in a bad light, now” Madoka-san sighed, of course, she should’ve known this more than even me. “Ne… Madoka-san, I want to ask, what’s Houki-san like back then?” “A powerless girl… just like me… Ichika-nii always protects us, always, could heal us with his smile even though he’s injured and humiliated fighting for our sake” Madoka-san told me about things that happen in their childhood, Houki-san is very repressed emotionally, Madoka-san is cripplingly shy, both of them aren't treated that well by other girls, by virtue of being different. And Ichika-san... Ichika-san is one spirited individual, who could struggle on his own feet against physical and mental hardship... I still cannot believe it, if not the fact that I myself had changed much over the years... the epiphany is amazing, isn't it? That aside, I want to know... no, even dream what if... what if we had met long ago... what if unlike now, I'm not an outsider, a newcomer to their circle. Ah, anyway… but wasn’t this happen recently instead? “Ichika-nii always been fighting, we’re orphans and we’re often bullied because of that… but in the end, Chifuyu-nee took the brunt of damage when the bullies’ parents came to complaint” Madoka-san grunted, until she snapped and furiously pull her hair “Nggaaahh! Now I feel embarrassed. And Shinononos are so kind too… it’s almost like we have real parents even, it’s almost embarrassing when they apologize for our silliness” Well, technically Ichika-san do that to defend Houki-san, is sense of guilt run in Orimura blood or something? At least it wasn’t self destructive in the case of Madoka-san. “Little to no chance building another relationship after being seized by government… not to mention being separated from the rest of her families, the reason why she’s almost obsessed with Ichika-nii. I don’t want to admit it at first, but… I’m just that selfish” I see… I guess… everyone does have their problem… so that’s why Ichika-san said it. I wonder… if I should feel lucky… that I am raised by my parents, no matter how imperfect it is… because in this world, there are kids who never once saw their parents, like Madoka-san and Ichika-san. And there are also people like Houki-san, unable to meet her parents even though they’re so kind, even though they’re alive and well. Would it be more, say, painful? Knowing you have no slightest malice to your parents, at all? “Madoka-san, did you say you see Shinonono as a family?” “Yeah, as rude as it is… as self-centered as it is, I prefer to think so… they’re so kind and we owe them a lot… Houki is my first true friend… and we share a lot of thought even if we didn’t say it loud” With this newfound feeling, I feel like my confidence boosted. True family is not only those that related with blood and ink, but also those you held dearest. If I wasn’t satisfied with my greedy, living relatives, I should just build my own ideal family! __________________

2013-05-18, 01:13	Link #43464
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Not sexy Definitely not sexy YMMV of course __________________

2013-05-18, 01:21	Link #43465
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Depends on the smoke and type of woman You see loli's and cute girls smoking, it looks awkward. You see mature and/or beautiful women smoking, its fine. Same with men: Its alright for rugged faced perma stubble guys to smoke, but seeing baby faced duded smoking pot looks hilarious. __________________

2013-05-18, 01:23	Link #43466
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well yeah that too I concede: mature, cigarette-chomping career woman is sexy... to an extent __________________

2013-05-18, 01:06	Link #43463
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Smoking women, sexy or no sexy?

2013-05-18, 01:31	Link #43467
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Touko comes to mind. But Erine looks more like Kokonoe... hmmm...

2013-05-18, 01:33	Link #43468
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Kokonoe eats lollipops, not cigarettes. There are also things like "Smokeless Cigs": All of the texture and look, none of the nicotine and air pollution. Its been used by those undergoing smoking withdrawal as a placebo. __________________

2013-05-18, 02:04	Link #43470
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I think I have a good start going on... check it. Spoiler for cake eater intro: Chifuyu's eye twitched as she glared at the image in the mirror. That. Was definitely not her. Nope, no way, no how, no dice, a whole lot of other noes. No, no, no and no. Just no. The fact it was a wall panel mirror to show her full visage just bothered her even more since it was as if the image were being shoved in her face that “yes, this is you.”. Chifuyu really felt like she'd kill someone. “Uu... um... senpai?” The irate woman snapped her gaze to the younger Yamada Maya who came up beside her and sucked in an unhealthy amount of air. My God, just looking at what the green-haired woman was wearing made Chifuyu feel faint from imagining just how painful it might be. “Hey! You two finished yet?” Slamming the locker room doors open, a woman strode in. Her hair was up in a bun with the ends popping up like pineapple leaves. She wore a pair of thin spectacles while a lab coat hid her choice of spaghetti strap top and dangerously high mini-skirt. She probably only had the courage to wear such a daring outfit because of the opaque leggings she wore. Her heels clicked against the tiles with a brisk pace that commanded respect. She stopped short of bumping into the the two other women occupying the room and gave them a once over. On the tip of her fingers pinched the practical butt of a cigarette. “Well you two seem fully dressed to me. What are still dallying here for? Come on. We're running a business here. Time is money and all that shit.”, the woman grumbled as she turned away. But she was stopped in her tracks by a hand on her shoulder. A very strong hand with a popping vein on her now numb shoulder. “Just one second.”, Chifuyu asked with a smile that would remind men why women were scary. “Do you mean to say that this is all that we're wearing today?”. The woman in the labcoat turned back, “Yes, now come on.”. But Chifuyu wasn't quite done yet. “So you mean to tell me. That our standard pilot uniforms are gone. And in their place are- are- are- THESE!?”, the strongest IS pilot in the world gestured down at her attire. There wasn't much really. At best it couldn't even be called proper clothes much less a pilot uniform. It was a string bikini, even more risque than the underwear she favored. “Well not entirely.”, the woman in the lab coat took a drag of her mostly gone tobacco before pointing to Maya with it. “Hers is a bit different.”. And to be honest it was. Maya was fortunate enough not to be wearing a string bikini that was supposed to pass for an IS piloting suit. Instead she got a two part spatz and short sleeved top combo. Now that was really reserved, so why did Chifuyu look at Maya with such pity before? Let's just say those clothes would probably fit a middle-schooler better, a middle-schooler without an iota of puberty corrupting the described childish figure. In contrast, Maya was petite but had the bust and hips of a mother. “Painted on” could not describe what it looked like. It felt more like the taut cloth would burst into shreds at any great show of motion. And judging from how it pressed on tender flesh, Maya wasn't wearing anything underneath as per standard IS pilot suits.

2013-05-18, 02:06	Link #43471
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	You should draw borderline manga, Demi, it'll be a goldmine. __________________

2013-05-18, 02:11	Link #43472
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	At the very least I will declare that I'd be more tasteful than the reboot manga >.>

2013-05-18, 02:12	Link #43473
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	That's the spirit __________________

2013-05-18, 02:21	Link #43474
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Whose the one in the labcoat? __________________

2013-05-18, 02:24	Link #43475
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	His OC I think __________________

2013-05-18, 02:48	Link #43476
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Indeed my OC, Erine Umiyome. One of the Silent Seven and the only woman who can drive Chifuyu up a wall through sheer aloofness. Best metallurgist and smith alive to boot.

2013-05-18, 04:01	Link #43477
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Well, Yandere Laura uses knives.....and axes....while its dark out. __________________

2013-05-18, 04:14	Link #43478
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Why Laura is a yandere, again? __________________

2013-05-18, 04:15	Link #43479
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	and can you give a sample of how you wrote her?

2013-05-18, 04:28	Link #43480
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	She's imitating all the girls in order to try and get closer to Ichika (Idiot plot): First she tries Houki (Tsundere Kendo Fanatic), then Cecilia (Snobby Aristocrat whose cooking sucks), and then, as of the current chapter, Rin (Scary Yandere who thinks murder and assault is a viable solution). @ Demi - Short terms: She cuts the power (To set the mood:/), then stalks Ichika through the halls at night. She also drags her knife against the wall in order to give that 'I'm coming for you' sound. __________________