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2013-11-13, 01:37 | Link #8462 |
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And those, are the parts that do managed to annoy me of the series. Don't get me wrong, I do like the series as a whole, but these parts and others fits way too much with the patters of Marty Stus and Mary Sues. One main thing is that having "consequences" is the one part that sets apart Sues/Stus from balanced characters. As I have said, I equates Divinity with Stu/Sue-ness. And most traits Stu and Sues have, I utterly detests them.
Well, I have hang around people who hates many kinds of bad writing, including that of Stus and Sues, and thus it rubs on me. When you have read, written, edited, and analyzed many stories, you simply just have a different kind of view on what had originally been fine to you.
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It's basically the same thing really, except Robert's faults caused a lot of issues after he died, while the Campiones, although troublemakers, haven't caused that degree of trouble. Quote:
You've answered your own question. Apart from Uldin and Alec, no Campione is actually in a leadership position. Salvatore, Luo Hao, Godou and Voban are just figureheads that other people use to create a larger organization or stabilize an existing one, and in return they support them. Don't get too caught up in the whole 'King' business.
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2013-11-13, 03:58 | Link #8464 |
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At least Robert did something. There was the matters with Daenerys Targaryen and with Ned and the aftermath of his death. Though I am more on the opinion that it's Ned's honor, ineptitude in the 'game of thrones', and his ultimate death were the things that actually driven things to hell.
But in the end, I suppose I can agree with you but I seems to find it weird... why haven't we seen an actually terrible Campione thus far? The worst we've seen were Voban and he's somewhat of a stereotypical villain and still has some standards (or at least ambigous in motivation) compared to the likes of Joffrey, Jack Diehard, and Arturo. While I still think the reason why things didn't go to hell like after Robert and Ned's death was only Artus, for all they said about Campione being tyrants we haven't seen much of actual competent tyrant Campiones.
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2013-11-13, 04:09 | Link #8465 | |
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Anyway, learning martial arts or swordsmanship IS useful, but he won't be getting time to learn it to a useful level over the course of the series. That could take a decade or more, assuming he even has enough talent. More importantly, he has a badass sword that he can't even use as a sword because when he actually does he swings it like a baseball bat. That's just sad. Also, Circe's prophecy/prediction stated he would wield a white sword along with the black one as a cross. That implies to me using them as physical weapons. So my pet theory is that he is going to get a boost in this area through an authority or a "gift" from some future war god he defeats. |
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2013-11-13, 10:35 | Link #8468 |
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Okay, Ch 2, part 2 seems to be conflicted cliffhanger to be honest.
Everyone thought that Annie only usurped the King Oberon’s ability to travel the Astral Plane as she pleases but to think that obligations of King Oberon were transferred to her as well. Maybe because of her personality, I guess. Next, the “Deity” that lived in the astral plane, where they are right now, must be an important figure that keeps the records of history and the void. I only know 1 or 2 deities that fit the description but there might be many of them in different religion or a specific figure. Spoiler for Duties of the Deity:
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2013-11-13, 10:41 | Link #8469 |
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It depended on whether she can take on 3 Campiones and survived. Godou won't be easy to take down, and definitely not Doni. Aisha may be less of a threat but she has more experience and that "detach from the time frame" move that make every attack useless on her.
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2013-11-13, 10:57 | Link #8470 |
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Meh, it's in the past, Luo Hao wouldn't know. The best way to do that would be by cooperating with Artio or something. Well, that or by turning them against each other. Not too hard considering who they are. Just get them bicker to the point of tiredness then shoot all of her bullets, go into hiding until the bullets are replenished, and then do it again. Rinse and repeat. The only problem would be Aisha but since she's using the corrective power to detach from time frame, it is possible to request support from the deity.
But I doubt she'd actually do it. She'll probably try to get them to just go back to the future/present.
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2013-11-13, 11:34 | Link #8473 | |
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The fact that they're in the boundary between life and death could mean that the deity is similar to Susanoo, a god who retired from being heretic. Would be funny if that deity rebels and returns to being a heretic god from doing too much work.
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Well, who knows. I felt more like he was a Proper God. His level of staying to duty seems to be much more than a Heretic God could have shown. Besides, I don't think a Heretic God could ever do something of his level. Not mentioning if he is a retired god, then what's the point of him doing his job?
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2013-11-13, 20:36 | Link #8478 |
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Chapter 2 updated. Some Aisha service there. She was probably planning to wear Godou's shirt. And Ama no Murakumo reduced to being a cellphone for Godou to contact Ena. No wonder he feels irritated a bit.
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2013-11-13, 21:15 | Link #8479 |
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Yes~! Update~!
Some of the illustrations are out too! So Ama no Murakumo the divine sword is now a cellphone. Another female Campione's naked body seen by Godou first from Nee-san Luo Hao next is the Imouto Aisha.
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2013-11-14, 01:55 | Link #8480 |
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Lol... I guess it should have been obvious that something like that would happen.
Although ... Aisha wearing Godou's shirt ... that he wared before, has some meaning as well. Not to mention, I guess it also means Godou managed to attract every single female Campione from his era, which is definitely some, pretty good achievement. Finally, I guess that Ama no Tsuragi is a little frustrated at Godou for being used as cellphone, instead of being used in battle - but that will most likely change, near the end of this volume |
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