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Old 2011-12-15, 20:54   Link #61
Daniel E.
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Very nice entry you got there Ichigo.

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And now?
Much better.
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Old 2011-12-16, 02:10   Link #62
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Try 2, I fixed the font



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Old 2011-12-16, 02:19   Link #63
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Try 2, I fixed the font



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I'm no expert, but I think it looks pretty nice. I'll leave it to the pros to offer some proper c&c if there is any.
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Old 2011-12-16, 03:30   Link #64
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Again the tipo, i dont know byt i think that is the style, in soft light, that is giving that inpression, for me since its a banner i think that you need to put more focus on that.
my versions, i think that it blends, i tried everything lol

I love those little red decorations it's ready to go IMO
but I think it would be better if you place the texts a little to the right (they touch the red flower) and re-arrange the tilted snowflake if it got covered by the texts.

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Looks good, but try to make them more aligned with the ribbons notice that the "A" letter is kind of strayed.
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Old 2011-12-16, 04:05   Link #65
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I've seen that artwork before... it's on the cover of a Touhou arrange album: 東方志奏 8th Spell -Light of Nature-
Excellent choice! The banner pretty much looks perfect as-is.
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Old 2011-12-16, 06:17   Link #66
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I was going for an Urban Winter theme since Kurisu is well. . . always in the city so idk, I'd love comments on how to make it better.
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Old 2011-12-16, 07:10   Link #67
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v0: Well, looks like it's Yui for me (again). Kinda made this in a hurry just to try and get the basic layout down to pat, so there's not really any wintery decorations yet. The render certainly looks better than when I first tried to make it. Which gradient on the text looks better, red or blue? Any other thoughts?



Yui Hirasawa (K-On!): Danbooru link
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Old 2011-12-16, 07:41   Link #68
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pm: Btv does anybody knows the name of the character/series I am using? Honestly I have no idea
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Old 2011-12-16, 07:59   Link #69
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v0: Well, looks like it's Yui for me (again). Kinda made this in a hurry just to try and get the basic layout down to pat, so there's not really any wintery decorations yet. The render certainly looks better than when I first tried to make it. Which gradient on the text looks better, red or blue? Any other thoughts?


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Dry brush stroke
very cute, but i dont liked the black thing under the font >:

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Try 3



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Source: http://sukidakara.wordpress.com/2010...-expectations/

pm: Btv does anybody knows the name of the character/series I am using? Honestly I have no idea
Already tried using the pen tool to form a curve text to flow better with the ribbons, and the image is either from a random vn, or original, konachna link says that is original, but it have a little text in the botton that looks like from a vn.

@Ichigo: Loved yours, its divine ~
@Ahelo: Oh i forgot the quote yours, okey, for me the whole font and pic dont looks like winter, but its cool, just think that the blue bg vs. brown and black colours dont look cool.


ps. Finnaly get it to work, probaly the final ver.
how it is ~*
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Old 2011-12-16, 08:11   Link #70
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I would prefer if the creator himself/herself would be the one posting it; being him/her the one including your name in the post. If the two of you work on the banner, then feel free to post it as a co-submission including both names.
Final question: If one person has already submitted a banner, and I ask that person to help out with one, would that person be considered to be double submitting? It seems like every friend who I can "trust" enough for this is entering.
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Old 2011-12-16, 08:55   Link #71
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Newest version: I added some snow and reworked the girl's eyes:
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Old 2011-12-16, 09:16   Link #72
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v.2.1
v.2.2
Reworked a lot of stuff. C & C are welcome.
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Old 2011-12-16, 09:16   Link #73
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I was going for an Urban Winter theme since Kurisu is well. . . always in the city so idk, I'd love comments on how to make it better.
I like the concept and the fonts too. I think you might want to add more stuffs to "fill" your banner

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v0: Well, looks like it's Yui for me (again). Kinda made this in a hurry just to try and get the basic layout down to pat, so there's not really any wintery decorations yet. The render certainly looks better than when I first tried to make it. Which gradient on the text looks better, red or blue? Any other thoughts?
I like the red one better since Yui's kimono is reddish also agree with Bila, the black stroke is somehow quite disturbing

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Try 3

much better now they fit perfectly

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Newest version: I added some snow and reworked the girl's eyes:
Actually, I prefer your very first version with the trees on both sides of the background, but with more visible text of course. But if you want to continue with this one, I think it's only the font color that needs a change. Using the red from the girl's coat might work IMO

oh, btw, what are those greeny stuffs on the bottom of the pic?

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My try:


Official Art of Hirasawa Yui and Kotobuki Tsumugi from K-ON!

the paw-shaped font might be a bit off, but I just used it because I think it's cute, lol XD

What do you guys think?
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Old 2011-12-16, 09:51   Link #74
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v3

v3.2
I added some more shapes + fixed Kurisu a bit.

C&C are very much welcome
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Old 2011-12-16, 10:05   Link #75
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v3

v3.2
I added some more shapes + fixed Kurisu a bit.

C&C are very much welcome
The 3.2 is better IMO.
I noticed that Kurisu's hair color is kind of messy and pixelated. This might be caused by many things, such as the JPG save quality / bad scan quality / or too much color enhancement (oversaturation or something like that)

I think you need to make the BG color more varied since it's almost invisible for me, especially the buildings maybe use white color for the snow flakes, or use more contrasted variations of the blue color
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Old 2011-12-16, 11:16   Link #76
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Actually, I prefer your very first version with the trees on both sides of the background, but with more visible text of course. But if you want to continue with this one, I think it's only the font color that needs a change. Using the red from the girl's coat might work IMO
@ ahelo I would go with v3,2 but you could add some shape on the background,just teep it mind than you should keep some ''buffer zone'' ( gradiant only) at each end of the border
@Ryonea The problem with my first version was the text, especialy a text than look good and is easy to read, it has to be too much to the right. As the text's color, you think of something like that ?


As for yours, the paw-shaped font isn't bad but mightn't relate with the winter theme
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Old 2011-12-16, 14:58   Link #77
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ps. Finnaly get it to work, probaly the final ver.
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Looks great!

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Final question: If one person has already submitted a banner, and I ask that person to help out with one, would that person be considered to be double submitting? It seems like every friend who I can "trust" enough for this is entering.
If that member has already posted a banner then the only solution is for the other member to give you the banner so that you may post it yourself as your entry. Any member can only submit one entry after all.

@ Ahelo, ganbaru, Ryonea, Milan and Blaze 0041: Your banners already fit the theme and the requirements.
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Old 2011-12-16, 15:17   Link #78
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If that member has already posted a banner then the only solution is for the other member to give you the banner so that you may post it yourself as your entry. Any member can only submit one entry after all.
Just confirming. Thank you!
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Old 2011-12-16, 16:58   Link #79
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Can't offer any constructive criticism but it looks really good. You'll definitely have my vote .. At least by judging from the current entries.

Can we only vote for one, or for three like in the signature contest over at Fan Creations? (That died, though...)
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Old 2011-12-16, 17:31   Link #80
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This is my first time doing this so I am really nervous But here is my first try
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