Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

@ Treme - Uh....that sounds like some kind of "Mars needs women" plot.

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Age & Stratos
There ARE basic Raphael, and student DOES use them as V1 can shown us.

@ Demi
"Miss, you cut the wrong pipe, carotid artery is the best choice for that"

[agetreme]

New Fantasy Idea has nothing to do with IS.

Foregone conclusion because the story take place in a land where all fairy tales are real/true.

Edit:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Treme - Uh....that sounds like some kind of "Mars needs women" plot.

yea.... Except that the reason why Mars needs women is because the Martian end up killing all their women....to show off that their machine is better than theirs.... and guys are better than girls

@ Age & Stratos
There ARE basic Raphael, and student DOES use them as V1 can shown us.

Read: Owned by ISA

The Teachers don't have their own Personal IS (the nations probably took back the core).

[demino_hellsin]

@zero: thanks.

Also, she doesn't just cut herself. She finds ways to inflict pain on herself.

[Eratas123]

@ Demi - Still whining. The other characters may not see it, but the readers do. Unless it's shown as very damaging and crippling, don't add it.

@ Treme - You're posting a story that has nothing to do with IS on the IS board?

[ZeroXSEED]

Just think something hilarious.

Tatenashi challenged people not what's she's weak at. But something the person she challenged is damn good at...

Stupid idea... Sigh.

[StratoSpear]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@ Age & Stratos
There ARE basic Raphael, and student DOES use them as V1 can shown us.

Cool! Guess Tsurugi doesn't have to stay planted in the Academy anymore every time Inami does something stupid:

Spoiler for Scene:

========== In Training Hall Seven’s office ==========

Iris sleeps on the couch with her hands at the back of her head. As she turns to sleep on her side, her communicator on a nearby desk beeps a series of tones.

*TEETEET* *TEETEET*

“Mrrrrr… Eh…?”

She slowly comes awake then gets off the couch upon hearing her beeping communicator. She then walks over to the table and picks it up then places it on her right ear.

“Three speaking.”

“Three, we got a situation. Get prepped, now.”

“Will do, One. But… What’s going on?”

“Imminent drone attack it seems, they’re currently being held back by JSDF’s fighter jets at Mount Kiyosumi.”

“Drone squad at Kiyosumi…? That’s quite a distance away.”

“Yeah no kidding. Though Wolf One doesn’t seem to lean that way… That guy’s already halfway there!”

Iris’ expression grows horrified upon hearing her leader’s words.

“Wolf One…? Oh no...”

Iris quickly runs over to the door and opens it but she stops upon seeing Tsurugi at the doorstep with her head hanging low, partially covering her face with her hair.

“Tsurugi…? Something up?”

Tsurugi remains silent for a moment as Iris notices her arms slightly trembling then looks back up to her partially-covered face.

“So you heard…”

“Where is he, Iris…?”

“I don’t know where exactly… But seeing as the area of conflict is at Mount Kiyosumi, he should be passing over Kisarazu city according to Aegis One.”

“I’m coming along.”

“What? Y-You can’t! Sensei will never—”

“Iris, please. Don’t deny me this.”

Iris cringes for a moment, looking away as she mentally contemplates then back to Tsurugi.

“All right then. Come with me, I’ll get you a firearms training unit. Let’s go!”

“Right!”

[demino_hellsin]

That OC is actually my take on one of the girls who go unnoticed in the series. Kinda like how everyone else is adding OCs to the female student body.

She's probably going to be in storage till I find a story that fits her.

@eras: which one should be crippling? the mental issues or the self-inflicted injuries?

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Demi - Still whining. The other characters may not see it, but the readers do. Unless it's shown as very damaging and crippling, don't add it.

@ Treme - You're posting a story that has nothing to do with IS on the IS board?

Nope. Not going to do that because I will be working on the IS story...again

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - On what basis is she called a sue? She's skilled in some things shown, but there's no indication she's an expert in everything.

@ Demi - Both. Drug abusers are not only physically crippled, but have strung out mindsets and perceptions. Make sure that it has consequences other than "Look at this! She cuts herself so she's flawed!"

@ Treme - Good luck.

[ZeroXSEED]

I dunno, maybe because she can get away with... like, everything, her entrance alone includes stomped damn near everyone, and tamed the harem like... instantly. Remember that Mary Sue is a YMMV term (as TvTropes put emphasis at) and thus there will be people that call her one.

Anyway, the Idea abovew is that she's trying to prove she's not a sue... by challenging people she obviously would lose against. Ichika lampshades the stupidity when she challenged Kanzashi in a typing match...

[Eratas123]

Did you miss the whole "Owned by the Golem and hospitalized" scene? Doesn't sound like something a sue would do. Once again, trying not to be offensive. Just providing an argument.

[ZeroXSEED]

I haven't read that part yet. Besides, I did say the term is subjective.

[demino_hellsin]

Maybe the time gap IRL between V5 and V7, fans were bashing Tate about being a sue, which added to Izuru's ire. So he wrote that to quell the masses.

[Eratas123]

You also said that you didn't like her very much because you thought she was a sue Just saying so you might be able to use this. She seems to be weak to AI's due ti their reaction time and being unable to be tricked.

@ Demi - Except no one was really bashing her. Everybpdy just about liked her since she had a more refreshing and funny personality. He probably added it to show "THe Golems kick ass".

[ZeroXSEED]

Indeed only two people amongst the forum-goers called her a sue... and one of them is me. I forgot who but it's not me who said it first.

Besides, the issue about proving she's not a sue is mitigated by rule of funny, maybe an omake or something will do.

[Eratas123]

She only seems to be a sue when the scene's supposed to be funny. Besides, she's not S rank, is she?

[demino_hellsin]

But she's still schooling the S rank... that tells me what now?

[Eratas123]

That Houki's strong but unskilled. It's not that hard to believe an old man can own a body builder. Why? Cause the old man has skills while all the builder has is muscles. Same thing with those two.

[demino_hellsin]

kind of different, but that's your call