Sonjool's Art Thread

[sOnJoOL]

Hi, I don't think the people that knew me (barely) are gone.
So greetings new people =D.

Well, time to start off my new art thread.
Any criticisms or comments are very welcome =D.

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Tried coloring.... which I can't do to save my life. =(
but, I tried =/

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[Zero Shinohara]

Well, to tell the truth, your style is quite nice. The coloring, well... you should work on that, as you know, but you've got the basics, so it should be cool.

One thing I would suggest is trying to get the body parts all on the same "axis".

Her right arm, for example, is at an angle very different than the rest of the body. And the legs as well - try getting them around the same line of the body.

Although I'm assuming you wanted her to be laying down... right?

[sOnJoOL]

Thanks, and yes I suck at coloring =(.
If there are any good guides on coloring with photoshop, would someone tell me please?

yea... and the axis seems to be wrong because I started the outline as the character standing up, but changed it to laying down, so it looks awkward, especially her right arse. =(

Thanks for your comments =)

[Zero Shinohara]

Oh, I see. It's never good to "re-use" your drawing, I can tell you that

And as for CGing, yeah, there're some over around the boards. A few topics below there's a guide I'm writing and also a lot of links that Cats posted. There's got to be some CG tutorials in there.

Spoiler for redline, just for the heck of it:

[Satsumaru]

I agree with Zero :O I think you'll have to elevate her legs and thighs a bit to match the body level

As for colouring, I think you've got a pretty good sense base colour(In particular the skin!). Tho in the future, I would suggest more shadows

Heres a skin colouring tutorial I made awhile ago. I hope this helps Oh btw, its really big lol(3.9mb to be more precise)

You can download it here as a zip file or just click below.

Spoiler for Satsumaru's skin colouring tutorial(Its 3.9mb, its really big so brace yourself lol):

[sOnJoOL]

Thanks =).
I will hone my craft now -_-*

A face of a random character... I have to work on consistently drawing a face =/

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[sOnJoOL]

Originally Posted by Zero Shinohara

Oh, I see. It's never good to "re-use" your drawing, I can tell you that

And as for CGing, yeah, there're some over around the boards. A few topics below there's a guide I'm writing and also a lot of links that Cats posted. There's got to be some CG tutorials in there.

Spoiler for redline, just for the heck of it:

Thanks for the redline =)
I was just about to request for it. (get out of my head >=O)

edit: sorry for double-post =[