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Old 2007-11-12, 01:44   Link #15681
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Fanservice then


Sion: "...Baka."

Nero: "...."

Sion: "...Ah!"

Nero: "...."

Sion: "...H-Hontoni?"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Naze"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Sou nano nai!"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Urusai, baka kishi..."

Nero: "..."

Sion: "..."

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Arigato."

Nero: "...You're welcomed."
Nero got to play around with Sion huh?

But... HE SPEAKS!!!!!!!


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Not really, I'm just piecing it together as i go along
Still, the intention is there

I must learn from Master

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Omamori Himari


Go look that AS-Forum's manga thread, it has a small thread on it.
Roger!!


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USB... Give in to your temptations...

She is very gentle... You would never have to die again...

...And before you ask, yes I'm the little voice in your head.


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Not nearly enough!
Images are lacking though


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It's not there -_-
Where is it then?
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Old 2007-11-12, 01:51   Link #15682
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USB... Give in to your temptations...

She is very gentle... You would never have to die again...

...And before you ask, yes I'm the little voice in your head.


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Get your own goddess of love !


*Dump a potatoe sack over his head and beat him unconscious*


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FINALLY, he's actually gonna pair Hayate with someone

Though, Hikaru Midorikawa eh...

"Mission Complete"?


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And Galatea DYNAMIC ENTRY FTW!!!!!! Although... will Freya's dream fulfill itself in reality for some awesome yu- *radio static* action? Poor Aura got left behind though (btw, we haven't really seen much of Takeru's sister haven't we?)

Also... is that our first Marimite ref here?! WINRAR
1: well, Gala-nee loves both of the twin sisters, but Freya's much closer to her than Aura.

But awesome yu-*radio static* We'll see about that

For this holiday special, here are the participants:

Spoiler for available:


Spoiler for not available:


So, too bad, we won't see Takeru's Imotou or Alex's/Armstrong's family.

2:

BTW, expect exclusive Gemini/Galatea Service

And I forgot to post this awesome line:

Spoiler:


*runs*

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@Kagerou: Your OC's underwear being seen isn't exactly uncommon here. I'm sure most remember the shiro no pantsu thing i accidentally created.
Ah, yes, I remember that.

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I'm even more interested now

Sounds good


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Guys, guys... Couldn't you have just waited for me? Being so quick to shaft Hayate even.

*Kai pats sobbing commander gently*

Kai: Remember that time Creator-san showed us a shot of Hayate was talking about pairing Aurion up with Kia-ba-chan? And how come she was so familiar with the feeling of not being noticed?

Let's take it from the pegasus' mouth. All your's, Taichou?

Hayate: Ah-anou... I don't think it is too appropiate to admit... Especially since he... And... she's my...

Kai: If you don't speak, no one is ever gonna know. ()

Hayate: I know... But... (swallows) Minna-san! P-please don't hate me! B-bu-but t-the one I love is... is... is...
Spoiler for THE TRUTH IS RIGHT HERE:
Everyone:

Hayate: MOU! If anyone at the Church hears this I'm done for!

Kai: Good job at the admission, Taichou! Yes that was an AlternateS hint that is still being carried in NBC, and possibly The Edge of GuardianS. And further it was hinted when Creator-san declared Hayate as the "Sakura Mato" of the Nanohaverse.

HayateAurion is all but a decoy for that Naaru's insidious plans...

(runs from stunned thread)


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Look who's here?

and some teaser:
Spoiler for Our Secret World:




*runs*
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Old 2007-11-12, 02:03   Link #15683
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Sipher: "...Interesting."

Lance: "What is?"
Emili: "Oi, you two. What are you looking at?"
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Heero

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1: well, Gala-nee loves both of the twin sisters, but Freya's much closer to her than Aura.

But awesome yu-*radio static* We'll see about that
DO WANT

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For this holiday special, here are the participants:

Spoiler for available:


Spoiler for not available:


So, too bad, we won't see Takeru's Imotou or Alex's/Armstrong's family.
No Takeru huh? Too bad for Aura there

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2:

BTW, expect exclusive Gemini/Galatea Service

And I forgot to post this awesome line:

Spoiler:


*runs*


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More RANDOM MADNESS!!!!!

Erio's gonna be in big trouble from Fate after the play methinks Although the sudden mention of the Ma *jet engine roar* al is

*scrubs brain with bleach*

Minor correction before I forget though: His name is Negi, not Negima

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and some teaser:
Spoiler for Our Secret World:




*runs*
Man, that's a collection I wish I had Although Yuuno as Wodan is
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Old 2007-11-12, 02:18   Link #15685
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Heero


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DO WANT


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No Takeru huh? Too bad for Aura there
But then...
Spoiler for see the highlighted words:

After all, "sharing is caring."

[Otouchan]
"Happy yaro GA...."
[/Otouchan]

Let us hope Yutaro won't have to encounter HIM.

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More RANDOM MADNESS!!!!!

Erio's gonna be in big trouble from Fate after the play methinks Although the sudden mention of the Ma *jet engine roar* al is

*scrubs brain with bleach*
how so?

Well, blame Chrono and T3H MASK.

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Man, that's a collection I wish I had Although Yuuno as Wodan is
He has to be another REAL MAN

and to quote this:
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"Wodan Scrya should be paired up with Signum Loveless for the laughs."

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Old 2007-11-12, 02:36   Link #15686
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Glen's spells are done! XD

Spoiler for Glen's Spell List:
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Glen's spells are done! XD

Spoiler for Glen's Spell List:
I can see a lot of Super Robot Wars references here. Cybuster? Check. Alt Eisen/Weiss Ritter? Check. Good job. Looking forward for more.
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Nero got to play around with Sion huh?

It's just a kids' conversation

It's completely, perfectly, absolutely innocent.


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But... HE SPEAKS!!!!!!!

Nero would only talk if he feels... Extremely compelled to, very interested in something, or once in awhile when he meets worthy enemies.


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Where is it then?
It's a bear hug from behind, her arms are in the way.


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Emili: "Oi, you two. What are you looking at?"
Lance: "No where... >.>"

Sipher: "I'm currently deciding... Whether a not... You are..."


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Good reaction.
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Lance: "No where... >.>"

Sipher: "I'm currently deciding... Whether a not... You are..."
Emili: *Tsundere twitch* "Come on, spit it out! Whether or not I'm a what?"
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Emili: *Tsundere twitch* "Come on, spit it out! Whether or not I'm a what?"
Sipher: "Whether a not... You are... Attractive enough."


*Sinister grin*
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Old 2007-11-12, 04:22   Link #15691
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S&W:

Smith: You know what we want!!!!
Wesson: And you know what we need!!!!
Smith: SATISFACTION!!!!
Wesson: EXCITEMENT!!!!

S&W: X-STASY!!!!!!!!


Mai: ...

*deep roaring chainsaw revving*

I shall take great satisfaction, excitement and ecstasy in your deaths

Smith: ... I love you brother.
Wesson: And the same to you.
Ahahahaha! I'm liking Smith and Wesson already.

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X FREAKING DEE

NAOMI IS ABSOLUTE WIN AND TOTAL AWESOME PERSONIFIED

*laughs* haha, thx. She's a bit of a tsunderekko, though more to the deredere, and she's a nice girl, and really really really tries hard to get love from her brother. She's a little clingly and insecure, I guess. She's 15, but inside she's still a little girl who wants to love and to be loved.

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Basically, he becomes the sore thumb in the group

At least, he'll be good as a distraction
That's sort of a shitty job description though ain't it?

Atuwe: So what exactly do you do on the team?
Franz: Well I'm a distraction and evasion specialists...
Atuwe: So you're the bullet magnet then?
Franz: ... I liked my description better.
Lol, something like that, Lowe. There's a reason why he's in the Heavy Assault Platoon, basically; he's the frontal distraction while everyone else flanks and takes out the enemy from the side... it's the total opposite of what I normally do in CoD2 and the CoD4 demo, which is flank as the AI teammates form the distraction...

*chuckles* Yeah, TK, it is a shitty job description. Sadly, it's the truth. And you nailed Franz's essence. ^__^

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Ouch

Even without Glen and Naomi, there'll be other people to do the... castration for them
*dozens of shadowy figures can be seen madly sharpening knives, swords, axes, spears, and pretty much any other bladed weapon know to man in the background*

Indeed approaching the Aces with impure thoughts is fought with peril from many angles.
Indeed it is. Glen's ambivialent towards the Aces (who're on the level of personal aquaintances), but he doesn't want the fallout from Franz's impure thoughts to splash onto the OFM... though by StrikerS, Franz has pretty much given up on any thoughts of sexxoring Fate, due to the presence of Kha.

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Smith and Wesson: BROTHER!!!!!!! *cries hotblooded manly tears*

GIGA DRILL BREAKER?!?!?!?!?! FOR FREAKING REAL?!?!?! MOST AWESOME!!!!

Too bad Nanoha pulled a Lord Genome on him with her excellent use of Barrier Burst

And I see Franz really is going to get along well with the Linebackers

Smith: A flash of blue...
Wesson: An azure cloud set against the milky sky...

S&W: Such words to live by *cries hotblooded tears*


Most awesome chapter here
Franz: "Smith! Wesson! Though we are unrelated, yet I see the truth! The hot blood that flows in my veins flows through your veins as well! This hot blood binds us into the brotherhood of TRUE MEN!"

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1) I'm going to like these scenarios, thats for sure
2) Ouch, so he has the hot blood, but none of the benefits that comes with it.... Not a good combo...
3) Nice work there Clannad reference was nicely done (Unlike some some people in here..)
*chuckles* Thank you, thank you. As for the hot blood... his bonuses are a little different. He thinks faster and reacts faster, and can charge up his attacks a bit faster, since I have a theory that hot blood makes magic flow faster. At the end of the day though, the disadvantages still don't quite outwiegh the benefits - Giga Drill Breaker is powerful, but when you can defeat it with Barrier Burst...There's actually another Clannad reference in Franz's bio; his next door neighbours are very muchly based off Akio and Sanae.

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Indeed for Johnson's Big Green Style can be neither defeated nor denied!
*Chuckles* Indeed. The Gadget Drone that can take him out hasn't been created yet, or so Ivanovich-Johnson believes.

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Ouch, hot blood without the bonuses would make your life expectancy rather low wouldn't it...
Yeah, but my observations have been that while GAR exists, hot blood is an alien concept in the nanoverse, thus needing to be adjusted...

Franz's hot blood bonuses are an increased reaction time, faster thought processes (with a bent towards destructive spells) and Giga Drill Breaker, which needs hot blood to be used, regardless of cartridges. My handwaving reason is that hot blood flows through the veins faster, which means that the magic flows out of the linker core into the spell faster, which gives a faster acivation/charge time for spells... on the other hand, he's still a beam magnet. Can't make him too gar

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Well Nanoha is pretty much the living avatar of Defeat Means Friendship.
Lol, yeah. About the only friends she's made without defeating them are Yuuno, Suzuka, and Hayate... and even then, one could argue that she defeated Yuuno's heart...

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Well you know if he got and internet connection it might not be so bad...
*chuckles* True, I'd forgotten about that. On the other hand, Ivanovich and Glen will be watching him, so he can't be surfing away...

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Na I prefer to fight at range, with large amounts of explosives and AOE attacks.
There's nothing wrong with those at all. ^_^

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Yet strangely it dosen't seem to be slowing down and indeed new members are joining.
Way I see we’ve simply reigned the thread back to a point of sanity and kept it form plunging into an abyss of Mary Sues and wanktastic nonsense utterly unsupported by canon. Too much control is bad, too little is even worse. IMO this thread was beginning to suffer from the later people were getting out of control and beginning to ignore canon and just do whatever the hell they wanted in interests of “coolness” sometimes with at best shaky logic to try and justify it.

Satashi isn't that bad he's not a terrible writer which is more then I can say for allot of fanfic authors, but he's letting the praise he's gotten go to his head IMO despite his denials I think he thrives on being acknowledge as a big dog in Nanoha Fanfics. (which is sort of laughable but hey better to be big dog of a small yard then a little fish in a big ocean I suppose)
I think the current level of control is okay. Life is full of tradeoffs and balancing acts.

For some reason, Satashi's stuff just doesn't really do it for me. *shrug* Dunno why, but I kinda thought her stuff was a little off...

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Very nice piece there . "Beamspam-chan"...I lol'd soo much at that
Man...it seems like I need to make more characters if I want to get any character development progress going
Haha What I do is I just try and tell a story... "Five Minutes to Lose" pretty much wrote itself on the spot, which is unusual in that it's the fastest and easiest piece of writing I've ever done. Though I did have fun writing it *grins*

Lowe has the right idea on the gunfire. It is never a good idea to make your air support angry or hurt her feelings, especially if she's your "little-sister-not-related-by-blood"; she's liable to ignore your frantic request for air support, or she might make a ..."Near Miss"... and almost blow your head off.

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WIN!

Talk about liberal amounts of HOTBLOOD! And GDB to boot!
Nice one!
Goose is pretty good at character interactions. I think it comes from being a real-life pwn puppy.
Sad but true. *sighs* I also read a fair bit of W.E.B. Griffin, David Weber and John Ringo. Ringo especially has a knack for interactions - I recommend the "March" series of books he co-wrote with Weber.

And as I said, the only way Franz had a snowball's chance in hell of defeating Beamspam-chan was his hot blood... but it wasn't enough to make up the difference in skill.

On the other hand, he pwns the Aces and almost everyone in RF6 in terms of stamina and hot blood.

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Glen: "...You mean... there are more like him?"
Franz:
Glen: "...*facepalm* I need a drink."
S&W: OH HELL YES WE ARE!!!!!!

Smith: Magic, it is a Sacred Power!
Wesson: Magic, it's an adventure to the Unknown!
Smith: And Magic!
Wesson: It is!

S&W: THE PROOF OF COURAGE!!!!!! THE HEART OF MAGMA's BURNING IGNITION!!!!!

PERFECT UNION, SMITH AND WESSON!!!!!


Smith: Who do you?!
Wesson: All of you!!


S&W: THINK WE ARE?!?!?!?!?!
Glen: "...Would they die if I wished hard enough?
Franz: "Never! They have the spirit! THE TRUE! SPIRIT! OF! ME-

Glen: "...*sigh*"
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Emili: "Ugh, I'll show you, perverts! Eternal Coffin!"
Franz: "Still... Emili, isn't Eternal Coffin too extreme? I mean, there's always your Emili Kicku...
Emili: "NOTHING is too extreme for perverts!"
Naomi: "They'd better hope their hot blood can unfreeze them..."
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S&W: MANLY IGNITION!!!!!!!!! SHOW THEM THE TRUE SPIRIT OF REAL MEN!!!!



Linebackers: Such an attack won't work on u-

*Frozen Solid*

Mai: ...

Aho...
Naomi: "Bruder, if you're ever as perverted as them, I'll make sure you suffer in that way."
Franz: "Oh? Last night, you were begging me, 'Oh, Onii-chaaaan, look at me this way... see me as a woman...love me ten-" *gurgle*
Naomi: *blushing* "Don't you dare finish that sentence!" *removes her elbow from Franz's throat*

Annnd with this, done for now... Later tonight, I'll be posting Franz's skillset and Ivanovich's profile.
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Old 2007-11-12, 04:24   Link #15692
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Anyway, here's Glen's relevant information. Need to finish spell list *despair*.
People will see the SRW references.

Spoiler for Captain Glen Schattenman:
Interesting. I'm loving the references here. And don't worry about similarities with some of my characters. I've already redone the ATX team as my OC's with completely new names.

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FINALLY, he's actually gonna pair Hayate with someone

Though, Hikaru Midorikawa eh...

"Mission Complete"?
Yep. Reiji's proposition started the alarms in my brain so I finally claimed Hayate in this forum.

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Guys, guys... Couldn't you have just waited for me? Being so quick to shaft Hayate even.

*Kai pats sobbing commander gently*

Kai: Remember that time Creator-san showed us a shot of Hayate was talking about pairing Aurion up with Kia-ba-chan? And how come she was so familiar with the feeling of not being noticed?

Let's take it from the pegasus' mouth. All your's, Taichou?

Hayate: Ah-anou... I don't think it is too appropiate to admit... Especially since he... And... she's my...

Kai: If you don't speak, no one is ever gonna know. ()

Hayate: I know... But... (swallows) Minna-san! P-please don't hate me! B-bu-but t-the one I love is... is... is...
Spoiler for THE TRUTH IS RIGHT HERE:
Everyone:

Hayate: MOU! If anyone at the Church hears this I'm done for!

Kai: Good job at the admission, Taichou! Yes that was an AlternateS hint that is still being carried in NBC, and possibly The Edge of GuardianS. And further it was hinted when Creator-san declared Hayate as the "Sakura Mato" of the Nanohaverse.

HayateAurion is all but a decoy for that Naaru's insidious plans...

(runs from stunned thread)
Tough luck. She's MINE (OCverse-wise) already.

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TK, you've done it!!!

You made him realize what we've known all along!!
Que-?

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YATTA!!!

IT HAS HAPPENED!!!


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So.


LoweGear.


Chaos.


You want to know who the representation of my fiancee would be.

Spoiler for Look here.:
She looks cute.

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EDIT: I just read Aaron's new plans. Sucks that Kha's losing another member of his harem, but Whoever Hikaru's gonna be, he has my blessings. ()
Good.

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Why do you ask?
Because Chaos = Fuko DOES. NOT. COMPUTE!!!

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Just a liiitle post before I'm off.

@Aaron: Count me among the few who do not want to see AurionXHayate.

Though Midorikawa... Zelgadis?!
Thanks. And I'm still thinking about which Midorikawa character's voice to base off...

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No go, Kha. You already pretty much claimed Fate, remember?


And Keroko-kun's got Nanoha.

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Fanservice then


Sion: "...Baka."

Nero: "...."

Sion: "...Ah!"

Nero: "...."

Sion: "...H-Hontoni?"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Naze"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Sou nano... >.>"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Urusai, baka kishi..."

Nero: "..."

Sion: "..."

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Arigato."

Nero: "...You're welcomed."
Nice! Though a little silent...

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Look who's here?

and some teaser:
Spoiler for Our Secret World:




*runs*


Just about sums it up. Ibis will be in, right? WANT!

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Glen's spells are done! XD

Spoiler for Glen's Spell List:
Nicely done. The spells are direct and effective.
Though that spell list is a long shot from being long. You should take a look at Satty's OC's whom all of which have LONG spell lists.

And Aurion's as well...
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I think the current level of control is okay. Life is full of tradeoffs and balancing acts.

For some reason, Satashi's stuff just doesn't really do it for me. *shrug* Dunno why, but I kinda thought her stuff was a little off...
Satashi is a he. Or some here would say, IT.

On the other hand, something's happening across the river. Chaos might be interested.
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Old 2007-11-12, 04:39   Link #15694
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Here is another episode of "My name is Tais". Fairly lousy attempt on writing from me as usual so don't get your hopes up. A rather silly(and stupid) way of explaining why he wasn't around during the 9-12 event.
Spoiler for Flight can be embarrassing or an interesting way to meet people:
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Old 2007-11-12, 04:50   Link #15695
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Yep. Reiji's proposition started the alarms in my brain so I finally claimed Hayate in this forum.
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Tough luck. She's MINE (OCverse-wise) already.
For records:
  • Aaron got Hayate.
  • Keroko-kun got Nanoha.
  • Kha got Fate.

Meh, I don't think I can get my hand on others--

Wait. I already got my hands on Ginga.

*runs*

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Just about sums it up. Ibis will be in, right? WANT!


Yes, and surprise?
Spoiler for already mentioned in the chapter but what the hell:


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Nicely done. The spells are direct and effective.
Though that spell list is a long shot from being long. You should take a look at Satty's OC's whom all of which have LONG spell lists.

And Aurion's as well...


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Here is another episode of "My name is Tais". Fairly lousy attempt on writing from me as usual so don't get your hopes up. A rather silly(and stupid) way of explaining why he wasn't around during the 9-12 event.
Spoiler for Flight can be embarrassing or an interesting way to meet people:
CC pls.




It's ben a long time since we last saw Tais, and so this is what happened to him? Hope he will recover soon.
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Old 2007-11-12, 04:52   Link #15696
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Here is another episode of "My name is Tais". Fairly lousy attempt on writing from me as usual so don't get your hopes up. A rather silly(and stupid) way of explaining why he wasn't around during the 9-12 event.
Spoiler for Flight can be embarrassing or an interesting way to meet people:
CC pls.
"CC"? Crowd control?

And it took a battleship to take him out of action for all of StrikerS...

Whatever the case, I want Tais to tank for us in Black Temple. Illidan'd probably hit him for peanuts.

Then again, his lack of a brain might wipe us at world boss. >_>

Btw, its been so long, I'm not too sure if you've factored Ginga being a cyborg? And this may be AU, but let's say if I were to bring Tais in The Edge of GuardianS, 5 years after StrikerS, where would you think he'd be?
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Wild Goose: Franz makes for a very interesting character in that battle with Nanoha. I'm liking him already. Any official profile?

Based on the battle with Nanoha I somewhat have an anti-Franz rolling around in my head already. Barring your permission, of course.
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Old 2007-11-12, 05:12   Link #15698
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I have the feeling I missed out on a lot of Keroko's history back when I wrote that piece. Still this is very useful.
More like I need to stop camping the OC-thread and continue writing Codex: Deathwing. I never really wrote down that scenario.

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Different MO’s in any case Reps want metal, any metal, or hell even minerals in general seem to do, Nids want Bio-mass. (Reps will run PAST people to get at more high grade metals or interesting tech) Nids eat planets down to bed rock, but under the effect of a time dilation field Reps converted a planets mass entirely into more reps. Then the good guys tried to kill them with a blackhole and they somehow escaped that… don’t ask how not even the Asgard (millions of years old space faring race) could figure it out. They’re also pretty much immune to most energy weapons they just absorb the blasts, though ballistic weapons DO work, by terminally disrupting their structure, least until more of them come along and “eat” the corpse to replace it.

They are of coruse extremely adaptive as well and are known to not merely copy, but improve assimilated technology, and the later human forms are even smarter plus being immune to bullets and energy weapons, and can shape shift. The race is basiclly grey goo… well grey cubes anyway. They did find a way to counter them later though in the form of a disruptor that targets the “technobabble pathways linking individual replicator cells” effectively causing the things to fall apart when hit, but of course the damn bugger being adaptable little shits started figuring out how to resist it after awhile so they had to start changing it’s operating parameters and such. Eventually they lured all the buggers into the Milky Way, turned on ever Stargate in the galaxy and fired an ancient super weapon through them that mimicked the disruption effect on a galactic scale and wiped the little shits out for good, well sorta; they came back in the spin-off kinda.

And this has been a pointless Stargate History Lesson brought to you by TKs rabid love of the series.
Heeh, do you have an episode count on them?

I still like the Nids better, though. They don't need to be H4XX. They just need to be lots.

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Ouch... Keroko really takes after her sister afterall Although fighting a Tyrannid Bio-Titan?! That's even worse than the Zerg
Zerg are tiny little ants compared to the terror that is Tyranid.

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Well, there is Xealot, Mai's ever-so-rare familiar
Not really a Tyranid, though. Not to mention an extinct gene.

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MC 71, huh? That'd fall within the timeframe of Arcas' official time with the Rogues, and DEFINITELY his unofficial time.
*scribble scribble* Dully noted and incoörporated.

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Don't bother, the other works are usually kicked aside after a few coments.
So I noticed. Only one response to Fall of an Empire so far.

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Hold on.

*Take in a deep breath, and observed how beautiful the morning is...*

...Okay I'm back.

Nelson: HA HA!

I told you it was in character!I told you it was in character!I told you it was in character!I told you it was in character!I told you it was in character!I told you it was in character!I told you it was in character! Didn't I? Didn't I?! But NOOOOO, you won't believe me! Didn't you? Didn't you?! Well, WHOS YOUR DADDY NOW?!

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There, all is forgiven And I accept your apologies
*opens mouth to argue*

....

*thinks better of it and closes it again.* M'kay then.

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And now, IMAGE TIME!!!!

So after remembering that Diary of a Windtalker takes place years after StrikerS in the timeline, and seeing as how Mai participates, I wondered what she'd look like during that time.

And... here's the result.

Spoiler for Mai Enna, 20-years old: Atashi wa Yume...:
Lovely pictures.

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Fanservice then


Sion: "...Baka."

Nero: "...."

Sion: "...Ah!"

Nero: "...."

Sion: "...H-Hontoni?"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Naze"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Sou nano... >.>"

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Urusai, baka kishi..."

Nero: "..."

Sion: "..."

Nero: "..."

Sion: "...Arigato."

Nero: "...You're welcomed."
They really ahve mastered the art of slent talking.

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Thanks. And I'm still thinking about which Midorikawa character's voice to base off...
*dives down in a prayer position* Zelgadis Zelgadis Zelgadis Zelgadis Zelgadis.

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And Keroko-kun's got Nanoha.
reminds me to write a Yuunoha scenario one of these days...

Oh, and I've laid claim to Yuuno too.

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Here is another episode of "My name is Tais". Fairly lousy attempt on writing from me as usual so don't get your hopes up. A rather silly(and stupid) way of explaining why he wasn't around during the 9-12 event.
Spoiler for Flight can be embarrassing or an interesting way to meet people:
CC pls.
Ouch.... In the end it took a warship to take out the mighty Tais.

Typical
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Old 2007-11-12, 05:22   Link #15699
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Well...since you guys asked for it...here goes...
Spoiler for afterwards - somewhat NSFW:

Well...that's the most romantic thing I could think of
*runs*
That's the most? Where's the floating-in-space-naked one?

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Originally, that'd be Kuragaya Yuiko from Little Busters.

In OC, she's Dark Spica, Spica's supremely sexy dere-dere mode
For someone carrying the "Dark" title, this image is fitting.

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I thought the same too at first. Until that one episode that revealed Kino's origins. You'll be surprised at what "Kino" was back then

Interestingly enough Animax re-aired Kino's Journey this morning, damn first episode still gives me the chills (in a good way)
Kino's world is one crazy place. Though, without the advent of globalization, some aspects of Kino's world isn't too far off in reality even, sadly.




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Can anyone here ACTUALLY speak Japanese?
I can hear Japanese to a 90% degree and can generally converse so long as the talk doesn't go into jargons. I went to Fukuoka once during an exchange program and could at least manage to not look like a total idiot.

As for reading... I'm Chinese myself, albiet a little bit banana... I can mostly get it reasonably right, but I hate putting the effort since it tires me. I used to translate special effects of YGO cards for our playing community, but that's about it. And it's not it's error-free.

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As it seems, the person who several of the people in the OC thread wants to be Hayate's significant other is Aurion...

WHY?!?! Can't they just be father-daughter like in my plans?!
And to make it worse... Seems like Canon and Canaan/Cadia implications tend to point there, as Nighty said before... >.>

I'm fine with implication crack, as I'm doing those myself. But do you seriously want her to be paired up with him?
I'm not serious about it, but I'll admit it's fun to see.

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Maybe I should start making another OC who's going to be paired with Hayate... Since I had lots of practice with Aurion and Almaria's rabu-rabu moments...

Maybe that Fayt character would do... Or maybe I'll make an entirely new one... A late-joiner Ace like Leona, perhaps? Post-StrikerS.


And maybe I can create a one-sided rival...

*runs*

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And now, IMAGE TIME!!!!

So after remembering that Diary of a Windtalker takes place years after StrikerS in the timeline, and seeing as how Mai participates, I wondered what she'd look like during that time.

And... here's the result.

Spoiler for Mai Enna, 20-years old: Atashi wa Yume...:
Nice romantic piece.

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Anyway, here's Glen's relevant information. Need to finish spell list *despair*.
People will see the SRW references.

Spoiler for Captain Glen Schattenman:
Nice character. Interesting designs and choice of songs, as well. Not bad.

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<deep thought>
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Fine... It's been long overdue anyway... Thank you, Tk. I've decided to stop this hesitation and take things into my own hands!

Everyone... Back off from Hayate starting now... Since I've decided to give her a romantic interest... Her future is now in my hands... And NOBODY is stopping me...

ENOUGH IS ENOUGH! She's getting her romance SOON!

ORE WO DARE DATTO OMOTTE YAGARU?!?!

And no, it's not Aurion. I'm making another Ace. Post-StrikerS like Leona.

Clue, he'll be voiced by Hikaru Midorikawa.
Finally.

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Guys, guys... Couldn't you have just waited for me? Being so quick to shaft Hayate even.

*Kai pats sobbing commander gently*

Kai: Remember that time Creator-san showed us a shot of Hayate was talking about pairing Aurion up with Kia-ba-chan? And how come she was so familiar with the feeling of not being noticed?

Let's take it from the pegasus' mouth. All your's, Taichou?

Hayate: Ah-anou... I don't think it is too appropiate to admit... Especially since he... And... she's my...

Kai: If you don't speak, no one is ever gonna know. ()

Hayate: I know... But... (swallows) Minna-san! P-please don't hate me! B-bu-but t-the one I love is... is... is...
Spoiler for THE TRUTH IS RIGHT HERE:
Everyone:

Hayate: MOU! If anyone at the Church hears this I'm done for!

Kai: Good job at the admission, Taichou! Yes that was an AlternateS hint that is still being carried in NBC, and possibly The Edge of GuardianS. And further it was hinted when Creator-san declared Hayate as the "Sakura Mato" of the Nanohaverse.

HayateAurion is all but a decoy for that Naaru's insidious plans...

(runs from stunned thread)
We're not stunned... We're not... We're just...

Saga: TRI-HEART BREAKERRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Some guy off of DeviantArt named wen-m I think. I'm using his art again for Emili

Emili: *blushing* "B-baka! Who said you could run off! Get back here so I can beat you up!"

Glen: "Thank you, Emi- Emili?"
*Glen stares at the figure chasing Lii*
*Sigh*
I see. Joy, more sites to waste my time on...

I'll stop as soon as you put down that staff....
Requesting immediate evac from my position!
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Glen's spells are done! XD

Spoiler for Glen's Spell List:
That's long? You haven't seen nothing yet

You said Cosmic Nova is equiv to 2 divine busters to the gut. I'm going to hope you mean the original DB's not augmented by cartridges... He's AA ranked yet he puts out the equiv of 2 DB's (AAA/AAA+ each) with the help of three cartidges? When Nanoha is using 2-3 cartidges per (normal)DB? Even with the non-augmented DB's that may still be too high for my tastes. Explanations please.

The SLB level combo attack raised an eyebrow from me as well. Although I'm not as worried about that one. Which SLB? Normal, A's or Strikers? If it's Strikers you should already know my response...

I assume that's there's drawbacks to the power boost that he get's from being in berserker mode (whether he want's to be that way or not). Actually there had better be drawbacks....
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*chuckles* Thank you, thank you. As for the hot blood... his bonuses are a little different. He thinks faster and reacts faster, and can charge up his attacks a bit faster, since I have a theory that hot blood makes magic flow faster. At the end of the day though, the disadvantages still don't quite outwiegh the benefits - Giga Drill Breaker is powerful, but when you can defeat it with Barrier Burst...There's actually another Clannad reference in Franz's bio; his next door neighbours are very muchly based off Akio and Sanae.
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Sad but true. *sighs* I also read a fair bit of W.E.B. Griffin, David Weber and John Ringo. Ringo especially has a knack for interactions - I recommend the "March" series of books he co-wrote with Weber.
*notes down the authors*
thanks for those I haven't read any of their books so I'll have to give them a shot
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Here is another episode of "My name is Tais". Fairly lousy attempt on writing from me as usual so don't get your hopes up. A rather silly(and stupid) way of explaining why he wasn't around during the 9-12 event.
Spoiler for Flight can be embarrassing or an interesting way to meet people:
CC pls.
Ouch

Although I'm not sure if he could actually breathe at 36k feet.... Also I'm fairly certain that the amount of force needed to actually dent the armour plating would have been fatal.... Not to mention that he would have been incinereated upon re-entry to the atmosphere.....

Want to change it so the ship was coming down to the planet for maintainence/repairs/ some other random reason?

Still, it's great to see you back
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