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Old 2007-11-15, 11:47   Link #16001
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Why is it always bananas...

Maybe if I should change it to carrots instead of cucumbers
Only two replied so far.

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EH?! Fate/Yuuno was that effective ?!

Hmmm....

Nonetheless, just kill her and make the others suffer...

I find the common screaming-about-not-wanting-to-die the best to bring out emotions... Maybe something like Mikawa Kai in episode 24...
Very. For various reasons on both sides.

There are other ways but like Nighty said, it's all about the execution.

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Basically, as a mage one-on-one with Hayate, it's "can I run Hayate through before she goes "planetary nuke apeshit" on me?" So in a one-on-one situation, a clearly weaker mage with CC specialization has a puncher's chance in taking Hayate down.

As for my character:

Spoiler for OC criticism and response:
Now the revisions:

Spoiler for Revisions:
Well the revisions are there but I don't see anyone having abilities that would be close to the Aces, even below par by a few notches. The three are the best in what they do after all.

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Old 2007-11-15, 11:48   Link #16002
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I found this In the image thread.
Spoiler for Signum:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
WHO? WHO DID THIS TO SIGNUM?????
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Old 2007-11-15, 11:53   Link #16003
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[Pirate singing]Absorbent and yellow and porous is he![/Pirate singing]



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Wouldn't be Tessa if she wasn't.
Though you wonder where's the clueless and generally stupid teenager sergeant.


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The kind with AK-47 and RPGs or the one with DVDs?
We have both really, but the former isn't too big of a problem. Probably because they can't even afford AKs.


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Pretty much actually going just by canon even the perv thing is kinda shaky.
The voyeur thing is just going to remain a nano joke. I'm not going to write Vice as one in my works really. It can be included, but I don't see much value in it other than being a gag that will get old really fast.


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Well good luck in that being stuck in an office can suck, my dad been working in banking (the computer systems for that handle transfer between them mostly, he didn't even go to college and now makes like 200+ a year... advantage of getting in on the ground floor) for a bit less then 30 years now and dosen't seem to mind. I could never do that though police work might not be like in TVs but at least my "office" will be a car with a 250+ HP engine.
Well depending on the job really. Its probably like a lottery ticket here nowadays, strike a good one that suits you then you won't mind staying just a bit longer. I'm hoping for one where I get a bit of time to check this thread during work.


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Yeah I mostly watch MMA matches now (seeing one high kick to the side of the head just LEVEL a guy built of 250 pounds of muscle will get you hooked), wrestling can be fun for the comedy value at times though.
Most of the time I just watch it to see what those idiots have to say when they just pop up from backstage and go "imma kick your sorry ass, and take that belt, which you don't deserve" or some other crap like that. The actual matches itself can be so stupid its not even funny.


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Yes that much better... and so cute.
Cute is an understatement. Tiny 30cm tall girls that use -desu are the ultimate in cuteness!


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I wouldn't think it's too fun when said reaction involves eating your brain?
Between you and me, I feed her scraps of some random legionnaire's brain every now and then just to keep her off me.


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Justice will always prevail in the end!



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Everything has been done before by someone... probably the Simpson's, twice.



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Gee what gave it away, couldn't have been the cannibalism could it?
Nahh more like the constantly mood-swinging kittiness.


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*Hecate sized moth tears off half of PA left ear*
PA: MOTHERFU*censored*
>.<' Mike Tyson wannabe??


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Pretty soon we'll have not only a UD Sentai but an OC-tan team too...
*Bonks PA on the head* Stop it little perv.
Ecchi-tan+Keroko-tan. 3 more vacancies.


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So asking for sex tapes of Maren is cool, but this isn't?
Selective protectiveness.


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"We can rebuild her stronger, faster, better... more tsuny."
"Tsun-ness works better than any other thing any other day, you won't regret your choice!"


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This is for your own good! Stereotypic Generic Asian Dungeon master up the voltage!

"Ahh yes, his jewels will fry like skin of finely cooked Peking Duck!"



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*Vestrell jams her finger nails into PA eyes, hard*
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! Whoever said tsunderes are fun are so wrong!


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...

Kagerou: What is this strange feeling of killing intent in the air...

Goodbye Kagerou, it was nice knowing you.


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Shit don't look at me I've got a paper due tomorrow that's only like half done.
I tend to procrastinate too, then I end up losing sleep because I'll ditch sleeping to get it done at the last minute.


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Getting rich enough to flee your neighborhood for a better one is a widespread and time honored tradition after all.
It really depends on the country you're living in really, "greener pastures" can be pretty overrated too depending on your target "pasture".


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... -_- Dungeon Master set Voltage to "extra crispy"

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Well you might be able to do something about at least one of those.
I might be inclined to some day.


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I'm not terribly motivated to bust my butt, but I do like what I'm taking so I can get the energy up when I really need it.
Well liking what you are doing is the biggest motivation IMO.


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And here I am on the up swing coming OUT of a lazy spell, but that could be because a major holiday is coming up and the family is getting together for the first time in quite a while.
Speaking of holidays I wonder how long I'll be able to bum before my parents give me a whack on the behind and force me to get a job.


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His laziness is different from everyones.



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I have to admit I've been finding it hard to find time to watch half what I've download... I've got a pile of backlogged eps for most series...
I've got close to 20 episodes of Bleach backlog, over 10 of Jigoku Shoujo and I haven't even download the second season, among many other animes. I can't even say the current season is anymore important than previous ones, seeing as seeders may die off real quick if I'm not fast enough.


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Thanks, I liked it too


Hmm...SparkerS?


Here's an example
Spoiler for first impression:


Ah...tsundere girls, what would the world be like without them?
Also...stripes
*runs*
Stripes? Try strings. *runs*


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Haha.. To be honest, that came at a moment of crack, and.... I don't really know what to do with it now . I like it very much and really want Hayate keep it, but I don't seem to be about to give her a good reason for having it in the very first place. She'll need to be very angry and the opponent to be really slippery, methinks.
To be honest the spell is unusable really. Rather pointless to have a spell you'll never use. The spell itself is interesting, though its overly haxxed and just not worth risking the use.


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Think of it as threats on your life?
More like a mountain to scale.


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Woe to the being that ingests those creatures.
Not me, you'll have to call some big bad wolf to eat up all those sheep.


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Precisely. It'll be madness to see Signum in 100% dere drive. Though it'll take something like Hayate being shot down and seriously injured to show some dere from Signum to her.
I think more likely she'll feel righteous fury and immediately set out to destroy the perpetrator.


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I get the idea most of the time but to capture the exact feel is something pretty tough. I had a taste trying to sound out character reactions and I had always discard the current one for a better attempt until I get the feeling it's done right since I'm pretty nit-picky in such things and it bothers me a great deal to not have a in-character reaction. Which spells major headache since I'm doing that to OCs most of the time.
Which is why its easier with OCs actually. The creator knows their creations best after all.


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The NxF one.



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I'm getting serious familiarity vibes here.
Getting ready to go into tertiary studies? Choose really wisely then.


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I'm quite looking forward to write it out though I have other stories planned out and work piling up is killing off free time.
Holidays for me, and I just finished Tales of the Abyss. I'll probably start writing tomorrow instead of continuing to wade through my pile of unfinished PS2 games.


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Vestrall:"Can't we wait until we are adults to do this?"

Katrina:" I don't care. You're going to get some practice."

~~

Katrina: "I'm going to wet you slowly."

Vestrall: "Ah~ please be gentle with me.."



Continuation withheld.
Does not compute. But still, I approve!!!


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Although all she does is point out their faults and pitfalls and mocks them over it.

Katrina: "I do more than just that."
I don't think Itsuki will like a visit from her.


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Multi-elemental spells are pretty hard to go by. And besides any special abilities, the next thing h4xx cannons will be looking at are spell lists.

Dual elemental control and zero spell list for me..oops
I was thinking along the lines of dual elemental. Sure elemental affinity is supposedly rare, but we've seen a couple to suggest it really is THAT rare. Its probably more uncommon than rare really, multiple elementals on the other hand has never been seen, and could probably be classed as rare.

That being said, what do you guys think of an OC being able to use say...Ice and lightning spells?


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We share many things.



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Can't have everything but what I have now is pretty good. *shrugs*
I can't say I'm dissatisfied with life here, but I'm not satisfied with it either. Its not bad, but not good either. Malaysia is relatively peaceful, and we don't have problems with natural disasters. We don't get insane hurricanes or typhoons, nor tsunamis and stuff (though the one that hit Indonesia a few years ago was felt even here in my area, I was freaked out to be honest).

However, many services offered here really suck, such as our Internet service providers. They don't sue us for downloading anime, but they make using the Internet a real pain every so often. Then there's the problem with the ever increasing cost of living here. Damn that has to be the worst.


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The little firebrand stands out as a breathe of fresh air of among the many sweet and nice girls, sadly. Need more CCs like her and Tiana.
Yes we need more Vita ownage. Go Vita, we offer the Kagerou's soul to you.


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Tessa: (in a sleepy daze) Haaaa...? Where was the Bluecheesium torpedo...? Damage report...? Where did everyone go...? Danaaaaaaan...

(wanders off not noticing that she woke up on an empty bridge half-naked)
That would be really fun to see. Gotta dig up the OVA and re-watch.


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Yes... Tsunderes...

But what?

I prefer black and lacy...



(runs off digging on for backlog breaking)
Strings, Kha, strings. Laces get old really quick.


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Mendoi Conclave. They've got the best overall quality out of all the groups, not to mention the current fastest
Yes I'll have to agree on this. I do have some bones to pick with them, but overall they are the better group out of all so far.

Give you a tip though, there's a translation mistake in episode one. Which they still didn't seem to have noticed. When the AEU fighters first started getting shot by Lockon from below, what the pilot yelled was if I'm not wrong "enemy attack!?" and not "retreat!" It was noticeable even by the tone of the fighter pilots voice, it was a question exclaimed, not a call to retreat.


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Well, despite the political situation it ain't all that bad, at least in my position. Also, moving overseas is a hassle, places better visited than lived on
The Philippines must be quite a nice place to live in then.


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*Storm Raider, Linebacker L and Linebacker R set up*

[Cartridge Load]

All three: You were saying something?
What? Three A class mages wanna attack me? *Sends AAA classed Itsuki to dispatch off the upstarts*


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*Carries Gem of True Sight*

*blows mines away*
*Detonates mines whenever Lowe gets in range and sends hundreds of death squad goblins to suicide bomb Lowe*


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More like she weighed what was more important to her, and she broke her promise.
That's really sad then. It sounds as if she isn't concerned about her body, nor of keeping promises.


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Yes, what would the world be like without delicious tsunderes?

*runs*
Delicious?


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That said, have you watched Utawarerumono ?
Not enough hard disk space anymore. Will get to it when I buy a newer and bigger one. What about it anyway?


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So... All in favor of Fluff farmers ?

Is there really nothing else ?
Short of doing it yourself? None that I can think of.


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Hey! You try looking for GOOD lolicon images then you can talk !
Nah...don't have so much time to go dig for pictures left and right.


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But they multiple fast
Something is wrong with the people nowadays.


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She's NOT my catgirl!
Was I talking about the catgirl? Got lost in all the backlog. I think I was talking about Jeno actually.


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=_=


I'll save you time, go dig into FF thread.

But watch out for the sinkholes...
Nah it'll probably be easier to dig through FF.net than the FF thread.


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Give her to Erio then

Or Nero, he's a babysitter anyway.



Nero: ""
Erio's harem is suppose to be cutesy girls like Caro and Annabelle, though Lutecia not so. I don't think he's old enough to handle a tsundere kitty.


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Rental Magica is that good huh...
Well I did say "IMO". Whether you might like it or not is another matter altogether. I'm a fan of magical and fantasy stuff after all.


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Obviously, we Hayate-fans are very protective.



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Hmm... Should I use that?
Provided Hayate can even throw a decent punch...

<shoots StrikerS>
Well in PF's fic Hayate threw a Black Impact fist at Leona.


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I'll do my best. BTW, Jack and Felix are confirmed to be in. Any more additions?
What exactly do you have in mind? Is it about the Hayate kidnapping thing?


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*phew*

That was a tough one.

Here's part three of my ongoing arc:

Spoiler for Fall:
Very nice. Its always painful to have to deny someone you care about something they truly desire. Hope Gwen can work her magic and calm her. Though I wonder, where did she pop up from?


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And now I come forth....

Spoiler:

So?
This is made of lots of WIN!!! Damn Yutaro, how dare you hog the twins to yourself???

Black=sexy? Oh yes~~black..with strings..ok gotta stop I'm starting to sound like a gone case.


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next stop: The Family Arrives. Expect more madness and this....

Spoiler:

N-na-naniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii??


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1: Yeah, they just slept.

Good thing Galatea wasn't there, otherwise:
Spoiler:



2: Just like our people here always say:

Black is Beautiful.

Hmm... this may be the hint of our closer look to Gala-nee's Secret World?

*runs*

3: since the Gemini Sisters arc is parallel to Seto no Hanayome in one or other way, and the fact that Freya is OC thread's San, I may have to spoil this important plot:
Spoiler:


Yes, Yutaro finally meets Father-In-Law. Expect a very severe love/hate relationship between them.

BTW, Lowe, have you done with the picture editing?
Its like USB has also been infected by extreme crack.


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Ughhh, my head has been hurting for quite awhile now so I'll tackle the backlogs later, for now, anyone has any bad guys OC profile that i can view?
tshouryuu's new one is also a villain.


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Let's see...

Spoiler for Other girls:

That's pretty much it, the other girls (two) you interact with aren't 'accessible'
*runs*
Sounds fun.


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That's the only time she slaps him though...

There's this cute scene where they're already 'going out' and she let's it all out.
Spoiler for scene - rough translation:

She's so cute when in dere
Also, her VA is sounds like Lucky Star's Kagami
So do they get it on there? A school's rooftop seems to be a popular spot.


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Katrina:"Watching a person tear himself apart slowly is much more satisfying than killing him."

Creator-kun:"Now now don't say that, be polite."

Katrina:"Lies. We share too much in common to deviate along such matters."

Creator-kun:" You got me there. "
Tormenk reveals his evil side.


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Btw, would anyone want their OCs to answer some questions?
Questions? Do you have another questionnaire in mind?


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Yep, I do. Perhaps if she focuses on one particular elemental affinity, it would be much better. That, and you can always push up her powers in that and in other departments.
So, knowledge and ability in multiple elemental uses but only specializing in one?


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Yeah, they do, but that doesn't mean that they cannot reproduce.
I never said anything about reproducing.


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This one got me even more confused.



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Oh, that can be done. Maybe a duel that they have forgotten during the Jail Scaglietti Incident.
Sounds like it'll be just a big mess. Rein is going to huff and puff while chasing Agito around trying to bind or freeze her, and Agito is going to continue to throw fireworks in Rein's face or steal her food or do the deadly tickling combo.


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Well, certain personalities need not be derived from the characters they are taken from.
Well if you are only using the looks then yes.


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You should do well to remember that they still have canine teeth.
*sigh* The people around me are all so violent. Nobody wants to give me any loving. T_T


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Self-defense?



Hayate: Hai-yakk~! Tai-chi Fists of the Icy Maiden!



That said, she's going to show some uber-powerful defense spell in GuardianS, so much stronger that she could stop a tsunami. *cough*

*runs from enraged HAXX-busting Gods*
Fist of the 18 dragons!! Sorry, was reminded of Chinese kung-fun suddenly.


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Vestrell: Later, later, my Creator-san is sending me to a big battle in a few moments. Sheesh, talk about giving me some private time off-screen.
Abusive creator.


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And I was wondering who's PA ...
I haven't changed my gender if that's what you're thinking. -_-


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Creator-san: Katrina, I really do feel that she needs to be an adult to learn something that advanced.
Nonsense, you are never to young to learn things like this.


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Backlog finished, now for a quick question.

Anyone here familiar with the military drill? I mean, once they are alerted of a situation, what do they do, actually? In Nanohaverse, it seems like most of them are alerted via some cool communication screens and then they skip off for the site. Don't the Captains/Superiors need to be briefed by their Commander on the mission, the logistics provided, timing, army size, etc.? And are the armies always ready for such emergency situations (in terms of being able to go off the cuff when the signal comes)?
I'm sure Tk wouldn't mind answering this.


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We need a snitch...

People off the list at the moment:

Myself, obviously
Kha, obviously
Aaron (No way they'll buy it)
TK (HAHA! Kicked out )
Snitch?


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What's the matter LimitedEternal? The way you're taling... Makes me think you're gonna snitch...

You're not going to snitch on us, are you? I certainly hope not...

On a completely random and unrelated note, I've found new places to dump bodies



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HE IS ?!


...Damn... Where's Adr when you need him?!
Sulking because he has no more stupid questions to ask.


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FLAMESPARKZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!



*zoom out above Singapore*



YOOOOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!


*zoom out above Asia*


BBBAAASSSTTTAAAARRRDDDDDDD!!!!!!!



*zoom out to the world*



DDDDAAAAAMMMNNNNNIIIIIITTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!


*Solar System*
I see, you are weak to sweet stuff like this. *takes note*


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General's MIA lately.
He's got exams.


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Private time off-screen?

Jokes aside, Vestrell looks set to bring the pain to someone else this time.
Well, hope she doesn't go berserk and destroy another park.


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Phantom Assassin!
Oi don't go off and change my gender as you please!


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PF? FA? LimitedEternal?
Huh? Why me? I'm your senior in this thread by one week!


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Chaos really likes his tsunderes. Make one for yourself to play with then.
Though I wonder what happened to his obsession with Priecia.

@Tk: There's a hammer wielding Vita avy in the avy and sig request thread. If you are interested you should grab it before someone else does. ^.^
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Old 2007-11-15, 11:55   Link #16004
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I was thinking along the lines of dual elemental. Sure elemental affinity is supposedly rare, but we've seen a couple to suggest it really is THAT rare. Its probably more uncommon than rare really, multiple elementals on the other hand has never been seen, and could probably be classed as rare.

That being said, what do you guys think of an OC being able to use say...Ice and lightning spells?
Interestingly, I plan for Naomi to be a duel elemental...

As for Ice and Lightning Spells, I posted something a couple of pages back on Franz attempting Eternal Coffin. He froze patch of ground with a diameter of 8 feet, depleted his mana, and ended up passed out face-first in the frost. XD

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I can't say I'm dissatisfied with life here, but I'm not satisfied with it either. Its not bad, but not good either. Malaysia is relatively peaceful, and we don't have problems with natural disasters. We don't get insane hurricanes or typhoons, nor tsunamis and stuff (though the one that hit Indonesia a few years ago was felt even here in my area, I was freaked out to be honest).

However, many services offered here really suck, such as our Internet service providers. They don't sue us for downloading anime, but they make using the Internet a real pain every so often. Then there's the problem with the ever increasing cost of living here. Damn that has to be the worst.
Not to mention the political system here; we're practically living in a racist elected dictatorship that's intent on turning us slowly into Sauti Arabia.

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LOL That is very funny. Better to be careful or Franz might become Tais Scien Ver 2.0
Lol, unlike Tais, he can't pwn himself too much, because his CO and the Sergeant Major want paperwork done.

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YUp, Hotblood increases COURAGE to do the IMPOSSIBLE!!! (even counteract Phobias)

DO THE IMPOSSIBLE
SEE THE INVISIBLE

RAW RAW
FIGHT THE POWER!!!!


Indeed. ^_^
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Kinda true there, although most are trained to be logical rather than brave
As my Marine friend (who is also a cop) told me, the Marines don't really teach brave, they teach you to be courageous: doing brave things without feeling brave.

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As I explained in a previous post, I'm under the assumption that a year and a half on Post-StrikerS, Teana would most likely outrank the LineBackers
I see. *nodding*

Also.... what would you say if at some point in the far future, Franz recruited the Linebackers to join the OFM?


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Unfortunately, Franz lacks true SPIRAL POWER
Indeed, he has only a pale imitation of it. Which is a good thing, because if he had any more, Ivanovich would beat it outta him.

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And we already have our first volunteer

Although IMHO for this plan to be effective, it'll have to be someone who's not known to hang out here
We won't know until we try. *shrugs*

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Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare View Post
Anyone here familiar with the military drill? I mean, once they are alerted of a situation, what do they do, actually? In Nanohaverse, it seems like most of them are alerted via some cool communication screens and then they skip off for the site. Don't the Captains/Superiors need to be briefed by their Commander on the mission, the logistics provided, timing, army size, etc.? And are the armies always ready for such emergency situations (in terms of being able to go off the cuff when the signal comes)?
It depends on the unit. For example, air forces and navy air wings would typically have 2 fighters on what they call "Alert 5": A pair of fighters ready to scramble in five minutes, 24/7, round the clock; the Alert 5 birds head up while the rest of the squadron scrambles. It really depends on the situation. The Alert 5 senario above applies to DEFCON (DEFense CONdition) 5, peactime, as following the US Standard. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DEFCON

Under DEFCON 3 and 2, squadrons are ready to scramble 24/7 in full; the SSBN and strategic bomber fleets typically operated on DEFCON 3 and 2 during the Cold War, regardless on current DEFCON level.

For an aircraft carrier at sea, there are always two fighters on Alert 5 at all times and another 4 fighters in the air on a Combat Air Patrol, patrolling for threats; carriers operate on higher levels of threat and paranoia compared to ground forces.

The level of alert also depends on how close you are to the action. As we see in Transformers, which is highly accurate in its depiction of the military response, air support assets in hot combat zones are typically kept ready to go. As can be seen from the scenes of the Hogs taking off, both were already fully-equipped and fueled; all that was needed was for the ground crew to yank off the safety pins and they were ready to rock.

In this situation, which I think you're thinking of an intercept, what happens is that the pilots are launched, and as they're en route to the bogey, ground control will vector them in and brief them. Typically, on emergency or Alert 5 scrambles, there isn't enough time to figure out enemy dispositions, beyond the basics- "We have two Bears inbound on vector xxx". You get briefed while in flight to the objective...as for how I found this, it's from reading a book on the Air National Guard, back when they still had lotsa air defense squadrons and did Bear intercepts.

It's different though, if you have more time, at which you can plan your response properly and thus have what you mentioned above.

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@Aaron008R: OC's to be involved? Basically anyone who wants to get involved. It will be a rescue mission but with restrictions.

You will first meet up with an injuried Ginga at the entrance to the "hive" (I'm using this for now till i can think of something better). You will have to evacuate her while fighting off waves of "Raptus" aka Aliens. Once you fight off the beasts, you will decend to rescue others trap deep below. The last one to be rescued will be at the deepest part of the "hive". You will fight something there.

Main problems? Lack of light, it is very dark. Lights are not going to be effective. You will be underground so space will be an issue so forget all your "super powerful AOE attacks" or risk heavy friendly fire. Same for flight magics, there is really only 1 place you can fly. Next, the "Hive" isn't that stable, so melee is perferred, use ranged attacks if you want, but no cannon /bombardment spells.

Any other questions?
Sounds like Emili and Franz could have a lot of fun in this operation. >.>
And don't forget this man too, because this is right up his alley:
Spoiler for A.J. Ivanovich, Sergeant Major of the Order of Freelance Mages:
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Old 2007-11-15, 12:00   Link #16005
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Ok, yet another part of Chapter 20
It's not going to end in this one, because I like to keep these parts short

Here goes...
Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 5:

Those who thought this would happen, raise your hand

Well...I'll hopefully finish this in the next part...until then, enjoyt this one...
*runs*
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Old 2007-11-15, 12:11   Link #16006
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(Busybodies can also attempt )



1) Bananas or Cucumbers?

2) Fur or Feather?

3) Runways or Valleys?

4) Roller-coasters and bumper-cars or Ferris-wheels and Carousel?

5) Long or short hair?



And lastly name two of your favorite colours .
Hmmm..
1) Bananas
2) Fur, I guess
3) Valleys
4) Ferris-wheels and Carousel
5) Short Hair
Colors) Blue and Grey

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Katrina:"Watching a person tear himself apart slowly is much more satisfying than killing him."

Creator-kun:"Now now don't say that, be polite."

Katrina:"Lies. We share too much in common to deviate along such matters."

Creator-kun:" You got me there. "
Xgouki: Interesting pair, aren't they?

Shamsel: Have to agree there...

Xgouki: Though I can't help but think of Arael...

Shamsel: My sister? What about my sister?

Xgouki: Ah... No, no. The 15th Angel.

Shamsel: Oh, THAT Arael.

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Btw, would anyone want their OCs to answer some questions?
Xgouki: Feel up to it?

Shamsel: *shrug* Sure, why not?

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So? There's a reason why I would rather spend 100 gold on repair bills from death while trying to get the [Skybreaker Whip] , then spend the same 100 gold on just buying[Riding Crop].

Ask Kha or Keroko if you don't play WoW.
Man...I really hate that chain.... Got my mount though
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Hmm...there's another one?
Can't remember right now

*thinks*
...oh...you mean...Yue?
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My Guess is Setsuna.

I said tsundere... =_=;;


(Though I did like Setsuna ALOT back in the Kyoto-Arc, but only because she was pretty.)




NO! NO! NO! It's ANYA!

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No doubt you do.

I had no ideas of such but now that you just had to say it out..

AH! You're thinking about it again aren't you !


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So if you're not in you're out? I want to claim neutrality! Though I can't for much longer
There's no such thing as neutrality

You're either with or against them


Btw people, we broke another barrier again

I'll celebrate by sharing this song... It's from the first opening to the Anime "Groove Adventures RAVE"





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Those who thought this would happen, raise your hand

Well...I'll hopefully finish this in the next part...until then, enjoyt this one...
*runs*
Either I'm getting dull, or you're getting better....


...I'm just dull then.

But I did notice that Koji was being excessively non-violent against the previous Opponents...

But because you and I know who the Darkness Knight is, who the Black Knight is really doesn't surprise me
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Old 2007-11-15, 12:21   Link #16008
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

@Thread

Spoiler for off-topic, Fall season turnout:
Hmm, lets see, I like Gundam 00, Night Wizard and Kimikiss the best right now. Night Wizard is your typical adventure story as of now, but I'm enjoying it. Da Capo II is pretty fun as well.

Bamboo Blade I have not watched yet, but I hear is good. Havent watched Dragonaut or Shana either.

Myself; Yourself is so cliche its getting quite boring...though I did like the last episode I watched, about that little girl who fell in love with Syusuke. Ef is just plain weird after 2 episodes...maybe it gets interesting later? And Ninomiya...dunno, I watched 3 or 4 episodes, and at least I gotta say that it got somewhat interesting.

And what else. Ah, Clannad. I sincerely dont know what to think about this show. I'm not drawn to it because of the animation studio so, for now, I gotta say its pretty uninteresting. *runs from fans*

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Shana, Clannad, Dragonaut, Gundam, Neuro, ef are JUST AS PLANNED. Pretty average, just around the original expectations for it. Nothing outstanding, but acceptable considering the workforce. Clannad has more comedy than I'd thought, 00's world and politics are immersing, and it's all-roundedness is very nice, and Dragonaut's cliche is just fine, even if LOLOLOLOL crap writing LOLOLOLOL.

KimiKiss is better than I thought it'd be, but it's still around above average due to it's normal nature.

Moyashimon, Minami-ke, Kaiji, Ghost Hound are so far, the most entertaining for me. Moyashimon is made of CUTE MICROBES FUCK WIN, Minami is Lucky Star without the fail and overrepetitive repetitive jokes, Kaiji's pace is a little slow, but it's entertaining, and Ghost Hound has that surrealism to it.


I gotta get me some Moyashimon. I judged the show from the AniDB pic alone.

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Yes... Tsunderes...

But what?

I prefer black and lacy...



(runs off digging on for backlog breaking)
Tsundere...this word was not part of my vocabulary before I came to this thread...and at first, there was not much interested in them.... But in the last few weeks, three girls have hit me for MASSIVE DAMAGE. First it was Yukari from Persona 3, then Cyrille from Shining Force EXA...and now Ayano from Kaze no Stigma.

It was a 3-hit combo. All critical hits.

And I already have plans for the last two as OCs.

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Too late... Nighty has already posted his intentions... -_-


WAIT!! I'VE GOT IT!!
We have Nighty write his story the way you said it, THEN we get someone else to post that story! Someone the FF wouldn't suspect to be Cadians!

It'LL BE LIKE THE TROJAN HORSE!! MWUHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
And since they dont come here, any of us besides those who frequent that fluffy thread will do.

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I can't post them again atm

Just think of lolis in compromising postions...

...One of them is moe-tan .
lol

Need..visual..confirmation... I repeat...need visual..confirmation...

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Proudmoore.
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Jaina Proudmoore. Archmage in the Warcraft universe.
Ah. I think I remember her...

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*phew*

That was a tough one.

Here's part three of my ongoing arc:

Spoiler for Fall:
Wow...so heartwarming... Awesome piece...you can feel Mai's unfathomable sorrow. And the ending was so sweet...

Teana's inclusion was well founded as well, since she knows firsthand what Mai had done. And Fate as well.

Now to see what Smith and Wes will do...

Next part cant come soon enough!

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I like sweet girls too

Praise Be Nodoka-sama!!!
Oh no, here comes Nodoka again.

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And now I come forth....

[spoiler]
THE GEMINI SISTERS II
CHAPTER 3


*snipped*

So?

next stop: The Family Arrives. Expect more madness and this....

Spoiler:

YUTARU MUST DIE, FOR GREAT JUSTICE!!!



And black, huh...yeah... ... *ahem*

Nice ending there with Freya, too.

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3: since the Gemini Sisters arc is parallel to Seto no Hanayome in one or other way, and the fact that Freya is OC thread's San, I may have to spoil this important plot:
Spoiler:
Water dragons, huh? I think I can picture some...

And I hope Frieda appears with that ultra-sexy school uniform + lab coat outfit.

BTW, I'm a bit confused right now. Apologizes if I mixed stuff up... Yutaru is supposed to be young!Hikki, or is he another person now?

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Yes it is. Wondered why Mai wears black un-

*radio static*


Damn, should have recolored her *radio static* in one of those pics I shopped sometime ago... *ahem*

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courtesy of LoweGear. Thanks, pal!
Spoiler for Frieda in her younger year:


This is all from me. Till next week, as I'm gonna be gone for exam this weekend.
Nice.
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Old 2007-11-15, 12:24   Link #16009
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Ok, yet another part of Chapter 20
It's not going to end in this one, because I like to keep these parts short

Here goes...
Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 5:

Those who thought this would happen, raise your hand

Well...I'll hopefully finish this in the next part...until then, enjoyt this one...
*runs*
And FlameSparkZ does it again...*thumbs-up*


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What's the matter LimitedEternal? The way you're taling... Makes me think you're gonna snitch...

You're not going to snitch on us, are you? I certainly hope not...

On a completely random and unrelated note, I've found new places to dump bodies
Nande? I don't even know who to snitch to! And like I said, I'm not talking sides here...until I get offered incentives...
And why, exactly, do you have need of a place to dispose of bodies?

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I was thinking along the lines of dual elemental. Sure elemental affinity is supposedly rare, but we've seen a couple to suggest it really is THAT rare. Its probably more uncommon than rare really, multiple elementals on the other hand has never been seen, and could probably be classed as rare.

That being said, what do you guys think of an OC being able to use say...Ice and lightning spells?
Ooh, I think dual-elemental would be a cool idea. Especially once you start on synergy between two different elements. All kinds of cool thins to do with that one.

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We have both really, but the former isn't too big of a problem. Probably because they can't even afford AKs.
[Angry Mob]AK-47s for everyone!!![/Angry Mob]
Sorry, I just had to get that out of my system.

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Ecchi-tan+Keroko-tan. 3 more vacancies.
Do Logic- and Reason-tan not count?

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AH! You're thinking about it again aren't you !
THIS and THAT???
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Old 2007-11-15, 12:35   Link #16010
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Spoiler for Ivanovich = badass out of 10:


heh, crusty bad-ass marine boot camp dude.

Not sure I feel Dragonforce as his character theme though.

He seems more like a Slayer/Metallica/Morbid Angel/ guy than a happy power-metal guy.

Suggested Character Theme: Slayer - Reign in Blood

That's all I can really say.

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[Hey! You try looking for GOOD lolicon images then you can talk
define a good lolicon image
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Old 2007-11-15, 12:57   Link #16011
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You should be safe. I made Clio and she is from Ancient Belka. I need to change a few details of her past just to match with Keroko's timeline. You should check with her as well.
Thanks for the pointer. Much needed though I wait for more views before I start wiritng.

Though shouldn't I be asking him since Keroko is a guy after all.

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Cute is an understatement. Tiny 30cm tall girls that use -desu are the ultimate in cuteness!
Tk's new avatar reinforces the statement.

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Selective protectiveness.
Selective recognition.

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It really depends on the country you're living in really, "greener pastures" can be pretty overrated too depending on your target "pasture".
The same for everything else. People don't always get the perfect scenario they want. I would know since I get this pretty often.

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Well liking what you are doing is the biggest motivation IMO.
QFT. And why so many of us are here.

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I think more likely she'll feel righteous fury and immediately set out to destroy the perpetrator.
More like reducing the attacker to the last scrap.

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Which is why its easier with OCs actually. The creator knows their creations best after all.
I'm working with other OCs mostly as well. Can't be helped since the scenario calls for it.

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Getting ready to go into tertiary studies? Choose really wisely then.
Sort of there already. In a polytechnic now.

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I don't think Itsuki will like a visit from her.
I don't think anyone would like a visit from her when she's like that.

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I was thinking along the lines of dual elemental. Sure elemental affinity is supposedly rare, but we've seen a couple to suggest it really is THAT rare. Its probably more uncommon than rare really, multiple elementals on the other hand has never been seen, and could probably be classed as rare.

That being said, what do you guys think of an OC being able to use say...Ice and lightning spells?
One affinity being uncommon but I'm pushing for two for the reason as rare partially since it's rare then why not? It's not if every other CC or OC has multi-affinity.

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I can't say I'm dissatisfied with life here, but I'm not satisfied with it either. Its not bad, but not good either. Malaysia is relatively peaceful, and we don't have problems with natural disasters. We don't get insane hurricanes or typhoons, nor tsunamis and stuff (though the one that hit Indonesia a few years ago was felt even here in my area, I was freaked out to be honest).

However, many services offered here really suck, such as our Internet service providers. They don't sue us for downloading anime, but they make using the Internet a real pain every so often. Then there's the problem with the ever increasing cost of living here. Damn that has to be the worst.
Similar over here. Increasing expenses costs and health care are big headaches. Any local here will tell you it's fine to die but not be ill.

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What? Three A class mages wanna attack me? *Sends AAA classed Itsuki to dispatch off the upstarts*
The LineBackers are AA and the duo act as a team pretty well to keep opposition away.

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Tormenk reveals his evil side.
It took form in Katrina a long time ago.

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Questions? Do you have another questionnaire in mind?
Yup. I made the mistake of actually posting it on a slow weekend and it was mostly ignored so I brought it up again in an earlier post today.

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So, knowledge and ability in multiple elemental uses but only specializing in one?
Doesn't sound bad to me but since I'm in on this too my opinion is probably biased.

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Well, hope she doesn't go berserk and destroy another park.
And nearly killing someone in the process as well.

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Huh? Why me? I'm your senior in this thread by one week!
Wow you keep track of such things? I don't even know when I came in here.

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Interestingly, I plan for Naomi to be a duel elemental...
Looks like a lot of people are gunning for the same idea currently.

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Not to mention the political system here; we're practically living in a racist elected dictatorship that's intent on turning us slowly into Sauti Arabia.
And we have a monarchy system here. *runs from local thought police*

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And don't forget this man too, because this is right up his alley:
Spoiler for A.J. Ivanovich, Sergeant Major of the Order of Freelance Mages:
Really nicely done. The OFM OCs are turning out to be quite diverse in personality, traits and history.

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Ok, yet another part of Chapter 20
It's not going to end in this one, because I like to keep these parts short

Here goes...
Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 5:

Those who thought this would happen, raise your hand

Well...I'll hopefully finish this in the next part...until then, enjoyt this one...
*runs*
*raises hand*

Dark Koji pinpointed his own faults very well. And the clash between both sides of Koji was nicely done too.

Though..

Katrina :"I like him. He's going to be my pet."



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Xgouki: Interesting pair, aren't they?

Shamsel: Have to agree there...

Xgouki: Though I can't help but think of Arael...

Shamsel: My sister? What about my sister?

Xgouki: Ah... No, no. The 15th Angel.

Shamsel: Oh, THAT Arael.
Katrina:"Pfft.The title of Angel of Light hardly fits me. I'll show how it's done to break a person permanently and make Asuka's aftermath seem delightful."

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Xgouki: Feel up to it?

Shamsel: *shrug* Sure, why not?
Yes gooooddd.

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AH! You're thinking about it again aren't you !
Only because you keep reminding me.

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There's no such thing as neutrality

You're either with or against them
I'm claiming it for my OCs.

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Btw people, we broke another barrier again

I'll celebrate by sharing this song... It's from the first opening to the Anime "Groove Adventures RAVE"


Seems like so recently that we just went through 13k, 14k, 15k and now 16k.
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Old 2007-11-15, 13:13   Link #16012
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You should be safe. I made Clio and she is from Ancient Belka. I need to change a few details of her past just to match with Keroko's timeline. You should check with her as well.
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Thanks for the pointer. Much needed though I wait for more views before I start wiritng.

Though shouldn't I be asking him since Keroko is a guy after all.
My fault for being this thread's Jun.

Anyway, I personally don't mind at all if you make a character going as far back as AB, as long as you have a reasonable explanation, of course.

The only things that need a double check on my part are things centered around the fall of Belka.
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Old 2007-11-15, 13:17   Link #16013
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The idea's great. I'm waiting for Kyou's story to come up, since I have no idea how her story is going to turn out and she looks quite interesting.
Too bad we can only get 1 though...


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Being shared by twins, or rather having hot twins to yourself. USB struck gold with the idea. Makes me wonder why I didn't go with the Katrina sisters..
<DIVINE INSPIRATION>

Excuse me... I have a fic to write.


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You're not....

... Now bow down to our Tsundere Mistresses or face extinction, mongrel.
Mongrel?

And I bow - to no man.





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You can't have them both =_=

One way or the other =_=

Besides, it's also set in stone that the younger twin always have the shorter hair to make them hamsters.
Then I'd go with Ryou.

And hamsters?





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Sipher: "... He meant as protective as you... He didn't say anything else =_="


Sion: Jiiiiiiiii~ >.>
Nero: Jiiiiiiiii~ >.>
Arcas: <mouth moving, but no words>




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You're a relic! It's time to replace your kind!
Son, you're not the first to say that to me - but you know what?

I'M STILL HERE.




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*Blink blink*

So? There's a reason why I would rather spend 100 gold on repair bills from death while trying to get the [Skybreaker Whip] , than spend the same 100 gold on just buying[Riding Crop].

Ask Kha or Keroko if you don't play WoW.
I GET the idea.

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Ok, yet another part of Chapter 20
It's not going to end in this one, because I like to keep these parts short

Here goes...
Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 5:

Those who thought this would happen, raise your hand

Well...I'll hopefully finish this in the next part...until then, enjoyt this one...
*runs*
This is good... but I'm enjoying the Maren & Yui parts much more than the cliche Koji stuff.

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I said tsundere... =_=;;


(Though I did like Setsuna ALOT back in the Kyoto-Arc, but only because she was pretty.)




NO! NO! NO! It's ANYA!
<jawdrop> You're pairing Negi with the <inhales>

PETTANKO?!

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Hmm, lets see, I like Gundam 00, Night Wizard and Kimikiss the best right now. Night Wizard is your typical adventure story as of now, but I'm enjoying it. Da Capo II is pretty fun as well.

Bamboo Blade I have not watched yet, but I hear is good. Havent watched Dragonaut or Shana either.

Myself; Yourself is so cliche its getting quite boring...though I did like the last episode I watched, about that little girl who fell in love with Syusuke. Ef is just plain weird after 2 episodes...maybe it gets interesting later? And Ninomiya...dunno, I watched 3 or 4 episodes, and at least I gotta say that it got somewhat interesting.

And what else. Ah, Clannad. I sincerely dont know what to think about this show. I'm not drawn to it because of the animation studio so, for now, I gotta say its pretty uninteresting. *runs from fans*
Gonna have to check some of these out then.
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Old 2007-11-15, 13:20   Link #16014
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[QUOTE=Melodius Trueheart;1255441]As for my character:

Spoiler for OC criticism and response:
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Now the revisions:

Spoiler for Revisions:
I think my knife was not sharp enough. I'm going to try using an axe this time. Your character is better now but it still needs to be chopped down to size. I'll give you a bit of leeway since it is a villain. Since your magic style is ancient belka, this is what i have to say.

As far as I know(correct me if I'm wrong), ancient belkan warriors are divided into mainly 2 categories which they specialize in, the front attackers (Vita, Signum and Zafira I guess) in melee/defence and the rear supporters (Hayate, Shamel and Rein) offensive, defensive or utility support.

Your character is trying to take on the job of both front attacker and rear support currently. I say this for a reason. Vita, Signum and Zafira are mainly melee characters, the close range fighters. Although they have range attacks, they don't usually use them. Vita may be an exception but she still gets up close and personal alot.

You might say your character is based on them but you have a long range spell Twilight Strike. This spell is too good for a melee character. It has range, accuracy and power. A staple of a typical mid-childa type mage like Nanoha.

Next you have Nightside Eclipse, a bombardment type spell from the looks of it. This sort of spell is like Hayate's specialty, who is an Offensive REAR supporter. If you want to nuke, your melee shouldn't be powerful. None of the front attackers I've mention have nuke spells.

If you use Mid style or even Neo-belka, then its a bit different. Fate is the perfect example as she is a generalist IMO. In fact now that I look closer, It seems like you're trying to build a character that's basically a super powered Fate. But even then Fate's melee and range abilities aren't really that good (Compared to Signum and Nanoha). The only thing Fate is really good at is speed.

Basically If you want a really powerful OC bad guy, specialize in one area and be H4XX in that area to the max. But please exercise a bit of restrain and do give your guy some weakness. So specialize like the rest or get destroyed by the best.

Now that I've finish with magic styles, lets talk about your Device. Its a lost Logia. In case you don't know, most people don't know anything about lost Logia except use them. The only one so far that actually repaired a lost Logia is Jail Scaglietti and he is a genius scientist. And your character is no Jail Scaglietti. Not to mention he has plenty of resources to use and such. I also said it before, I doubt your character has the time to study, train and repair that lost logia.

Next, I want to talk about your Infernal Blood Sacrifice spell. IMO this is the most useless spell I have seen so far(Okay useless maybe a tad too extreme but you get what I mean). As your device is struck in you, how are you going to fight? Melee is out as you don't have a weapon. If you're saying you can cast without a device as a melee specialist/ generalist, Rainharst is way too H4XX. Only one person has shown ability to cast without a device and that is Yuuno and the spells he can cast without a device are the ones he specialize in.

These are my thoughts on the current revision of your character and sorry if I'm too harsh. You should ask opinions of the others but I stand by what I've said. If you got a good back story to explain how he is so good, then he may be acceptable but as he stands now, no go.

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
WHO? WHO DID THIS TO SIGNUM?????
*dies*
this was the translation I found by Shinji103:
"Well....you said you liked short hair more. So I tried changing my image."

"It really doesn't l...look good on me."
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Old 2007-11-15, 13:22   Link #16015
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Yeah, they do, but that doesn't mean that they cannot reproduce.
That means S. and G. will--

*RUNS*

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I can't find my OCs

Sipher: "What are we? Chopped liver ?"

Sion: "...Men ."

Nero: "..."
Didnt I link them up?

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If that ever happens...

Are those...Digimon?

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Yup, that is Erio's OC Gwendolyn, one of the LRW's In fact, Mai and Gwen are gonna have a LOT of shared history together


Though just a note, they wont be referred to as "LRW" any more.

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Gwen to the rescue.

As for the Keroko/Mai scenario... I still haven't decided wether the meeting will end friendly, with a small spar, or with a fight that ends both on them in the hospital. Your thoughts?
Now I wonder what kind of scenarios you're imagining...

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I was thinking along the lines of dual elemental. Sure elemental affinity is supposedly rare, but we've seen a couple to suggest it really is THAT rare. Its probably more uncommon than rare really, multiple elementals on the other hand has never been seen, and could probably be classed as rare.

That being said, what do you guys think of an OC being able to use say...Ice and lightning spells?
I would say that as long as the elements are not opposite to each other (Fire and Ice), it should be possible. Such mage would have done quite a lot of training before he was able to use both elements, though (the hardest part would be to learn how to transmute his energy into elemental energy)...or he had been h4xxed to do so. (Artificial Mage, for example.)

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Very nice. Its always painful to have to deny someone you care about something they truly desire. Hope Gwen can work her magic and calm her. Though I wonder, where did she pop up from?
"Pop up"? Gwen has been in Mid-Childa all this time...where did you think she was?

However, considering I have not said where she is at the time, its interesting that you say that...


I still need to read previous chapters before I read FlameS' latest.

Reading other stuff later.


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Gonna have to check some of these out then.
Which ones?
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Old 2007-11-15, 13:53   Link #16016
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I was thinking along the lines of dual elemental. Sure elemental affinity is supposedly rare, but we've seen a couple to suggest it really is THAT rare. Its probably more uncommon than rare really, multiple elementals on the other hand has never been seen, and could probably be classed as rare.

That being said, what do you guys think of an OC being able to use say...Ice and lightning spells?
If you mean Mana Conversion Affinity when you said elemental affinity, all users shown so far (Erio, Fate, Signum) are artificial in nature.
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And don't forget this man too, because this is right up his alley:
Spoiler for A.J. Ivanovich, Sergeant Major of the Order of Freelance Mages:
Ohhh!! Nice.
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Thanks for the pointer. Much needed though I wait for more views before I start wiritng.

Though shouldn't I be asking him since Keroko is a guy after all.
His avatar and sig keeps making me equate Keroko = female.
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Old 2007-11-15, 13:54   Link #16017
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I think my knife was not sharp enough. I'm going to try using an axe this time. Your character is better now but it still needs to be chopped down to size. I'll give you a bit of leeway since it is a villain. Since your magic style is ancient belka, this is what i have to say.

As far as I know(correct me if I'm wrong), ancient belkan warriors are divided into mainly 2 categories which they specialize in, the front attackers (Vita, Signum and Zafira I guess) in melee/defence and the rear supporters (Hayate, Shamel and Rein) offensive, defensive or utility support.

Your character is trying to take on the job of both front attacker and rear support currently. I say this for a reason. Vita, Signum and Zafira are mainly melee characters, the close range fighters. Although they have range attacks, they don't usually use them. Vita may be an exception but she still gets up close and personal alot.

You might say your character is based on them but you have a long range spell Twilight Strike. This spell is too good for a melee character. It has range, accuracy and power. A staple of a typical mid-childa type mage like Nanoha.

Next you have Nightside Eclipse, a bombardment type spell from the looks of it. This sort of spell is like Hayate's specialty, who is an Offensive REAR supporter. If you want to nuke, your melee shouldn't be powerful. None of the front attackers I've mention have nuke spells.

If you use Mid style or even Neo-belka, then its a bit different. Fate is the perfect example as she is a generalist IMO. In fact now that I look closer, It seems like you're trying to build a character that's basically a super powered Fate. But even then Fate's melee and range abilities aren't really that good (Compared to Signum and Nanoha). The only thing Fate is really good at is speed.

Basically If you want a really powerful OC bad guy, specialize in one area and be H4XX in that area to the max. But please exercise a bit of restrain and do give your guy some weakness. So specialize like the rest or get destroyed by the best.

Now that I've finish with magic styles, lets talk about your Device. Its a lost Logia. In case you don't know, most people don't know anything about lost Logia except use them. The only one so far that actually repaired a lost Logia is Jail Scaglietti and he is a genius scientist. And your character is no Jail Scaglietti. Not to mention he has plenty of resources to use and such. I also said it before, I doubt your character has the time to study, train and repair that lost logia.

Next, I want to talk about your Infernal Blood Sacrifice spell. IMO this is the most useless spell I have seen so far(Okay useless maybe a tad too extreme but you get what I mean). As your device is struck in you, how are you going to fight? Melee is out as you don't have a weapon. If you're saying you can cast without a device as a melee specialist/ generalist, Rainharst is way too H4XX. Only one person has shown ability to cast without a device and that is Yuuno and the spells he can cast without a device are the ones he specialize in.

These are my thoughts on the current revision of your character and sorry if I'm too harsh. You should ask opinions of the others but I stand by what I've said. If you got a good back story to explain how he is so good, then he may be acceptable but as he stands now, no go.
Listen to this man, no time for hax busting sadly too much shit to get done for school, but his observations are pretty much dead on. I’ll need to do the big Backlog breaker later tonight as I’m desperately racing to finish my paper at the moment.
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Old 2007-11-15, 14:09   Link #16018
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As far as I know(correct me if I'm wrong), ancient belkan warriors are divided into mainly 2 categories which they specialize in, the front attackers (Vita, Signum and Zafira I guess) in melee/defence and the rear supporters (Hayate, Shamel and Rein) offensive, defensive or utility support.
Okay - let me ask: if a character specializes in one area in terms of training/practice, can he/she attempt to diversify into other areas of magic? A melee attacker can't one day wake up and say "even though I'm not as good as X as I am at Y, I want to attempt to use X".

I actually had in mind both Vita becoming a decent range attacker, while Hayate become a good close combat fighter.

About his magic style, he was trained as an Ancient Belka melee combat mage. However, the ranged/nuking ability is not a product of his formal training, but of his own personal research and training. (basically, in addition to the fact that the mages in this kingdom spend literally half of their lives from the age of 4 to the age of 16 in physical and magical training, he spends another 6-8 hours a day training himself and refining his magic.

I don't mind taking those aspects out, as that's only 10% of his offense at best, but I'm just stating what I had in mind.

What I might be doing wrong is that "this character is SS in X, so he should be above-average in Y and Z" when it should be "this character is SS in X, so he should be average to mediocre in Y and Z". Please clarify this?

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Now that I've finish with magic styles, lets talk about your Device. Its a lost Logia. In case you don't know, most people don't know anything about lost Logia except use them. The only one so far that actually repaired a lost Logia is Jail Scaglietti and he is a genius scientist. And your character is no Jail Scaglietti. Not to mention he has plenty of resources to use and such. I also said it before, I doubt your character has the time to study, train and repair that lost logia.
Well, to be fair, he's not starting from scratch - they know, more or less, how it's designed, how it works, and theoretically, how to repair it - it just takes exceptional skill to actually do it without risking death via making an error.

This particular group of people have been messing with Lost Logia for a while.

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If you want to nuke, your melee shouldn't be powerful. None of the front attackers I've mention have nuke spells.
Is there something intrinsic to Nanoha-verse magic that forces a high degree of specialization? Or is this something that just "happened?"

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Next, I want to talk about your Infernal Blood Sacrifice spell. IMO this is the most useless spell I have seen so far(Okay useless maybe a tad too extreme but you get what I mean). As your device is struck in you, how are you going to fight? Melee is out as you don't have a weapon. If you're saying you can cast without a device as a melee specialist/ generalist, Rainharst is way too H4XX. Only one person has shown ability to cast without a device and that is Yuuno and the spells he can cast without a device are the ones he specialize in.
The device can be removed from his body once the transformation is complete.


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These are my thoughts on the current revision of your character and sorry if I'm too harsh. You should ask opinions of the others but I stand by what I've said. If you got a good back story to explain how he is so good, then he may be acceptable but as he stands now, no go.
I don't mind you being harsh; I'm really sort of learning how to make good characters as I go, and I don't mind criticism.
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Old 2007-11-15, 14:18   Link #16019
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*raises hand*

Dark Koji pinpointed his own faults very well. And the clash between both sides of Koji was nicely done too.

Though..

Katrina :"I like him. He's going to be my pet."



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Katrina:"Pfft.The title of Angel of Light hardly fits me. I'll show how it's done to break a person permanently and make Asuka's aftermath seem delightful."
Xgouki: Actually, Arael is the Angel of Birds

Shamsel: True, though the word Arael literally means Light of God...

Xgouki: Mmm...but in this case she's talking about the title. Though that would explain the pristine, white form it took...

Shamsel: Good point. Though could be start considering some kind of mental defenses...please?

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Yes gooooddd.
Shamsel: Erm...why do I suddenly feel a little scared about these "questions"?
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Old 2007-11-15, 14:24   Link #16020
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I said tsundere... =_=;;


(Though I did like Setsuna ALOT back in the Kyoto-Arc, but only because she was pretty.)



NO! NO! NO! It's ANYA!
Oh...forgot about her
"They're my enemy too!"



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Either I'm getting dull, or you're getting better....


...I'm just dull then.

But I did notice that Koji was being excessively non-violent against the previous Opponents...

But because you and I know who the Darkness Knight is, who the Black Knight is really doesn't surprise me


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And FlameSparkZ does it again...*thumbs-up*


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*raises hand*

Dark Koji pinpointed his own faults very well. And the clash between both sides of Koji was nicely done too.

Though..

Katrina :"I like him. He's going to be my pet."

Thanks
and '' at Katrina

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This is good... but I'm enjoying the Maren & Yui parts much more than the cliche Koji stuff.
I personally enjoyed the part where Dark Koji calls him a "halfhearted bastard" *hint**hint*

The only thing they have in common is caring about Yui
Though...each has their own 'unique' way of caring about her


*runs*
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