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Old 2007-11-26, 09:19   Link #16761
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Did I just say something to upset everyone?

*runs*

NO H-SCENES ?!?!



You just made yourself a powerful enemy....


P.S - Oh yeah, I figured out how I want to start my story

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Just came back from a 1 day Utawarerumono marathon...and I feel so from it's EPICNESS
*faints*
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Flame, you should just watch whatever I tell you to watch I'm never wrong


Oh yeah, Utawarerumono is EXCELLENT One of my all-time favor H-Game to anime And If you thought the OP was good, you should check out Suara's album


Here's a sample to get you started





P.S - Oh, my mistake, that song is from the OP's single I'll try to find one song from her album...
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Old 2007-11-26, 09:31   Link #16762
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- Noted but who among the OCs shall be included?

And I'll deposit a slight crack of a snippet, fueled by reading Nazo no Kanojo X

slightly unhygienic though

Spoiler for Compatibility?:
- yes, quoting myself....

@ Kha: show up in MSNM demnit!

And yes, since part of my team stays on the ground during StS/R-StS, might as well add this baby for a base.

Spoiler for Gekko:


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OH SHI-

Time to mobilize the GDI


That long?!?!?!

In that case, lots of time to prepare the defenses then

*begins Sonic Disruptor construction*



I think the thought of a StrikerS rebuild has crossed alot of peoples minds here since halfway through StrikerS, but DAMN... I smell something

EPIC

brewing nearby


Youch... ganyan talaga ang buhay
Andrei: You called for the GDI?

- Readies observing tower

- I can smell it too.



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Cooking up stuff these few days as well..writing Katrina's profile which only gets only longer and more versatile as I add more ideas in and her future stories. Along with Nanoha ReStrikeS and a possible Yuunoha. :3
What possible?

THERE IS!!!
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Old 2007-11-26, 09:34   Link #16763
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Thanks for saving me the trouble of saying so


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Tagay ka muna pre
Di ako umiinom...

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We'll have to see how well you can do so, although I don't think we have to worry about the descriptive parts, considering your... earlier endeavours
See my reply to Chaos.

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But... but...

Passion should be RAGING, fueled by the release of hormones and lust and-

*Harisen Mk. 2000 >>>> Lowe*

GAME OVER
Me: Excellent hit, Sophia.

Sophia: You're welcome.

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NO H-SCENES ?!?!



You just made yourself a powerful enemy....
Heh.

If anything, I'll follow the path KEY used in CLANNAD an Little Busters. Occasional unclean thoughts? Here. Suggestiveness? Sure! Even some fondling at times? Yup. But H-scenes? Sorry.

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Good to know. Good luck in regaining your wings Darth Chaos!
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Old 2007-11-26, 09:42   Link #16764
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I was actually intending to follow this up with Cinque waking up in a hospital bed, chained to bed, naked save for a realllly thin hospital gown, and Fate going, "You'd better start talking, I'm the only person keeping him from killing you and your sister, and I can only protect you two from Jaeger so long as you give me the truth." In the end, I decided not to. Franz has enough problems already... his greatest fear is of rejection: that Naomi will discover his secret and reject him.
Whoa.... a bit excessive, but also completely understandable.
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At any rate, suitably epic. I can hardly wait.
Wait and see if it get's turned into reality first. Even then it may be dodgy... How many things has Kha started now that haven't been finished?
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Did I just invent a catchphrase...

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I do SFW interactional fanservice. Not the ecchi-type.
but ecchi's still SFW...... marginally
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Noted.
Only to be done when your group in incompetant mind you... otherwise you'll always be doing alot of work in just organising things.
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Wait...

I AM NOT REMOVING THEIR PASSION, DAMMIT!!!

I'm just regulating it because I don't make H-scenes!



Did I just say something to upset everyone?

*runs*
But the bit from before was nowhere near H....... it was just beginning to border on Ecchi material. What's wrong with making out.......
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Old 2007-11-26, 10:10   Link #16765
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*peeps in*

....

*throws some smoke bombs*

Spoiler for Some work in progress:


Something that gushed out when the Hammer of Divine Inspiration hit me on the head.

*goes back into hiding*
Er... so what's this about?

Nice monologue though.

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We're submitting Vivio to Spartan training now?
Well, the only other choice is eating Relic capsules that can temporarily invoke the Saint King...

shit, DestinyS spoiled.

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My recent Mass Effect induced variation is saying "This one is mine!" and stand back while, by prior arangement, my bionics expert suspends said target helplessly in mid air, allowing me to calmly grab whichever weapon I feel like using at the time, take aim, and pump a few vaporizing rounds into him. Shotguns are particularely satisfying, as they tend to completely disintegrate the target.

Oh yes, Mass Effect is filled with awesome.
So, is Mass Effect worth getting a 360 for?

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[Like what the rest has said...

TRULY EPIC BLUECHEESIUM!!!


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So I'm jumping the already full wagon here and declaring...

HOLY EPICSIUM!!!!!!!!!



Everything manages to be epicly delicious, from Chrono's jackassness, Leona's brodding over her past, to Grandia and Signum's duel, and of course Teana's CrossFire Ichigeki Hissatsu (And points to Cross Mirage )

And then to top it off with Hayate's most awesome line...

"YOU SHALL NOT PASS!!!!!!"

Hayate has become the GAR she deserves!!!!!




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That's a nice Car
I kinda wanna get some other cars into my cast list as well, but some of them are pretty as well.

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AExtract from Rebuilt of StrikerS:
Spoiler for :D :
Ah kk...

I'll drop a few bombs--

--naa... Make it a full invasion force--

...next March. :3

Welcome here. :3

~~~~~~

Just a few teasers:

Crack that joins the Combiners type of movie spoofs:
Spoiler for The what?:
And a interview with the Director of the Movie Event this Summer - Rebuilt of StrikerS
Spoiler for Interview:


Cleric Returns.


Clerics are selfish beings who fly around in funky little armors and don't share their powers with mankind.




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You can't have romance without passion!


*saved*


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NO H-SCENES ?!?!
Not everyone write h-scenes for the heck of it. If it's not meaningful, it's not.


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Flame, you should just watch whatever I tell you to watch I'm never wrong
~right....


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Oh yeah, Utawarerumono is EXCELLENT One of my all-time favor H-Game to anime And If you thought the OP was good, you should check out Suara's album


Here's a sample to get you started
Suara is a good song. One of my top as far as anison goes.

Nothing's gonna beat this for me though. (( in the current time. ))

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Old 2007-11-26, 10:37   Link #16766
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Heh.

If anything, I'll follow the path KEY used in CLANNAD an Little Busters. Occasional unclean thoughts? Here. Suggestiveness? Sure! Even some fondling at times? Yup. But H-scenes? Sorry.

*Threaten Aaron with sticks and harsh languages*


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Good to know. Good luck in regaining your wings Darth Chaos!

But of all weeks, I pick one that I'm the most busiest

Ah well, let it be let it be...


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Not everyone write h-scenes for the heck of it. If it's not meaningful, it's not.



I DON'T KNOW YOU PEOPLE ANYMORE !!!!


Damn, gone for a few days and look what happened -_-


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Suara is a good song. One of my top as far as anison goes.
Suara is the artist And her album is the first one I've ever downloaded

The title for Utawarerumono's Op is Musou-Uta, which IMO, has one of the most beautifully written lyrics

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Nothing's gonna beat this for me though. (( in the current time. ))

OH SHI-

I've heard this song from a distant past before Or at least a song that sounds ridiculously similar to it
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Old 2007-11-26, 10:44   Link #16767
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I DON'T KNOW YOU PEOPLE ANYMORE !!!!


Damn, gone for a few days and look what happened -_-
Who the hell do you think I am?

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Suara is the artist And her album is the first one I've ever downloaded

The title for Utawarerumono's Op is Musou-Uta, which IMO, has one of the most beautifully written lyrics
Oops, careless miss.

But I agree. The album was really good. It was one of the few I actually bought after downloading.
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Old 2007-11-26, 11:00   Link #16768
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Who the hell do you think I am?

"You are not human, are you?"


"Who knows? I'm not even sure myself..."


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But I agree. The album was really good. It was one of the few I actually bought after downloading.

Erm... Yea... Me too... I just forgot to mention it, that's all...
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Old 2007-11-26, 11:19   Link #16769
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Well, the only other choice is eating Relic capsules that can temporarily invoke the Saint King...

shit, DestinyS spoiled.
...

Moments like these still invoke a small sad twitch at the elimination of Keroko's project F scenario.

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So, is Mass Effect worth getting a 360 for?
For me? Hell yes it was! (I never owned a 360 untill two days ago )


The game is not without its flaws, most of the graphical complaints are true (the it-doesn't-have-save-system whine is an outright lie, though), but I'm the type of guy who doesn't care about that, as long as the gamplay rocks.

And oh how how it rocks...

The game is like a mixture of KotoR and a tactical shooter, with me as a former KotoR player, this was like a blast from the past, only improved. Someone asks me to help him convince another to stop spreading rumors, I begrudingly agree. After convincing said person to do so (mostly by threatening to shoot him in the face if he doesn't) I go back, get my reward -and barter for a bit more- and carry on. The story is still in its beginning, but so far mystery and intrigue are widespread, allong with a heluva lot of political mayhem. The shooter part brings a nice bit of action into the game, fast paced and furious action, a great difference from normal RPG's. Using biotics in combination with your weapons give really cool -and sometimes amusing- results.

For me, it is definetely worth the purchase of a 360.

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I DON'T KNOW YOU PEOPLE ANYMORE !!!!


Damn, gone for a few days and look what happened -_-
Yes, this place became a whole lot cleaner during your time away. Almost no bloodstains remaining.
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Old 2007-11-26, 11:25   Link #16770
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Me: *sigh* ... The children have grown up, haven't they?
Zafira: Why is EVERYONE calling me a DOG?! I AM A WOLF, and I HAVE PRIDE!!!!
Me: Hmmm... Well, blame 7Arcs for shafting you.
Zafira: WOE IS ME!!! *cries tears of manly grief*
Oh, quit whining, you big baby.

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Also, TK: Kagerou has approved the mod-Tempest, and we've decided on a name: Aus'ruf. Which has a symbolic meaning designed to poke fun at spec ops ships...
If you want interesting names, read the works of Iain Banks. Imagine a ship named Lapsed Pacifist...

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The Cleric Begins[/CENTER][/SPOILER]And a interview with the Director of the Movie Event this Summer - Rebuilt of StrikerS
Spoiler for Interview:
So, this'll be an AU...sounds interesting.

Would Yuunoha be one of the changes you're making?

And I'm glad to see the 82nd finally getting screen time from other authors...

...and though it IS up to you as to how you want to run your story, keep in mind that for 3/4 of the year, the 82nd is out on the frontier, so it'd be more likely that they don't show up until partway thru the story...on the day off perhaps?


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WHAT KIND OF CRACK IS THIS?!?!?!?!

Though really... I'm going for the more romantic relationship instead of the overly passionate one.
But there's no romance without passion!!! Even Arcas & Mel realize this!

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You can't have romance without passion!
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[Tk3997] You can't have romance without passion! [/Tk3997]
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[Tk] You can't have romance without passion! [/Tk]
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[Tk3997] You can't have romance without passion![/Tk3997]
Holy SPAM!! TK's invented the next meme-worthy phrase!!

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Did I just invent a catchphrase...
I think you just did...

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I AM NOT REMOVING THEIR PASSION, DAMMIT!!!

I'm just regulating it because I don't make H-scenes!



Did I just say something to upset everyone?

*runs*
No H-scenes...?

Well, Arcas will be happy...

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But... but...

Passion should be RAGING, fueled by the release of hormones and lust and-

*Harisen Mk. 2000 >>>> Lowe*

GAME OVER
Arcas: KURAE!!!

Crusade>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lowe
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Old 2007-11-26, 12:04   Link #16771
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And a interview with the Director of the Movie Event this Summer - Rebuilt of StrikerS
Spoiler for Interview:
You've got my attention. Even for a new user's first post. ^_^;;

This idea of yours is, indeed, made of large amounts of win.

Good luck with it; I'll definitely be looking out for it.
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Old 2007-11-26, 14:34   Link #16772
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The idea of a external add-on weapons itself isn’t terrible the pod as presented in Weber books IS.

First off this logic is somewhat shaky to start with as either since these pods are going to be basiclly carried strapped to the hull, in which case you could fire just as many missiles by integrating the pods to the ship and leaving them attached and salvoing them, or the other option is that they're carried inside and dumped out the back as you go along, but in this case you could fire just as many missiles by punting them out the back of the ship and lighting them off once clear. Either way the idea of a detachable missile pod is nonsensical IMO as they're just added mass thats taking away from your total missile magazine.

In fact nowadays the entire idea of a "missile tube" is shaky to start with as most modern launch systems are basiclly just doors over the magazines so you can fire as many missiles as you have very rapidly. This would work just as well in space all you really need is a door over the magazines with all the missiles lined up behind it open the door and a quick puff of compressed gas and or the missiles motor punts them into space and they light their boosters. Crap in space you could also ride into combat with the missiles just clamped to the hull aircraft style you'd have less mass then pods this way and probably more missiles and you'd also shed mass as the fight went on gaining speed.

Nonsense if it can find space to strap dozens of huge inefficients missile pods or carry them inside it's hull it has space for more missile tubes or just extra missiles end of story IMO.

Pods are just detachable armored box launchers which frankly is an inherently silly idea IMO, it's also worth noting that in the real world such externally mounted add on missiles where pretty much replaced in favor of a larger number of integrated VLS tubes.
I think they might be practical. If you're retreating from an enemy, for example, they might be useful as a distraction. If you can remotely pilot them, they may also be useful for ambush purposes.

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Did I just invent a catchphrase...
Yes, yes you did.

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Nothing like 105mm howitzer shells from the sky to adjust someones moral compass...
Works every time. Almost like befriending.

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For me? Hell yes it was! (I never owned a 360 untill two days ago )


The game is not without its flaws, most of the graphical complaints are true (the it-doesn't-have-save-system whine is an outright lie, though), but I'm the type of guy who doesn't care about that, as long as the gamplay rocks.

And oh how how it rocks...

The game is like a mixture of KotoR and a tactical shooter, with me as a former KotoR player, this was like a blast from the past, only improved. Someone asks me to help him convince another to stop spreading rumors, I begrudingly agree. After convincing said person to do so (mostly by threatening to shoot him in the face if he doesn't) I go back, get my reward -and barter for a bit more- and carry on. The story is still in its beginning, but so far mystery and intrigue are widespread, allong with a heluva lot of political mayhem. The shooter part brings a nice bit of action into the game, fast paced and furious action, a great difference from normal RPG's. Using biotics in combination with your weapons give really cool -and sometimes amusing- results.

For me, it is definetely worth the purchase of a 360.



Yes, this place became a whole lot cleaner during your time away. Almost no bloodstains remaining.
I want it so bad ;____; .
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Old 2007-11-26, 15:17   Link #16773
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It’s not really the same thing as these pods are basiclly just dumped off the ship and then fired, plus they have a bunch of big railgun built into them to punt the missiles out at a decent starting velocity, and once you launch them you just abandoned them completely. This never struck me as a very efficient or useful idea.
They did need some other way to get the missle on its way fast, since it couldn't activate its gravity drive within the launcher ship's drive field, not without blowing up the ship. As for abandoning the pods after use, peanuts compared to being able to afford entire fleets of warships.
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They did need some other way to get the missle on its way fast, since it couldn't activate its gravity drive within the launcher ship's drive field, not without blowing up the ship. As for abandoning the pods after use, peanuts compared to being able to afford entire fleets of warships.
It's called a booster rocket the distance they needed to cover was trivial in terms of space, beside which that just means that you need some ludicrously specific piece of technobabble to somehow make this vaguely sane, and it's still only vaguely so. In any more normal sci-fi or realstic setting pods are totally useless. Also the cost to building a huge at least somewhat independently manvuerable mini-space ship stuffed with magnetic cacatpults is not something I'd right off as "trvial" more so when a single battle could involve chucking thousands of the things.

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I think they might be practical. If you're retreating from an enemy, for example, they might be useful as a distraction. If you can remotely pilot them, they may also be useful for ambush purposes.
This is space you can do all that with just normal missiles by dropping them in your wake and ordering them to arm and attack as the enemy closes in or launching them with magnetic catapults on a glide path to some predetermined location from which they then engage their engines and burn toward the target, the lack of drag means you can do all sorts of fun things with missiles without needing a stupid pod to fire them from.

The Honorverses technobabble is the only thing that sort of makes them reasonable, and even then it's debatable to some extent.
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Yosh! I spent most of the morning reading earlier stuff I had missed instead of recent backlog, and so here are a few comments.

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Spoiler for Part 2:


Whew. She was quite an excellent mage...
Up next, young! Aurion's profile!


@Lowe: Maraming salamat, Kabayan!

@Tk: Thanks for the HAXXbusting while I was away. And yes, I seem to have a jinx with computers... -_-
Very, very nice addition to Almaria's profile. I really like her a lot. I like the small details you have written, such as how Almaria's BJ is..quite popular. Her fighting style is also very nicely explained, and you pointed out both its advantages and disadvantages. And Aurion beating Almaria by using binds made me laugh. Aurion has been binding girls ever since he was young, huh?

The ONLY thing that did not fit well in my opinion is the Cartridge System. Sure, you said that back then it was an uncommon thing to use... but still, this is Mid-Childa. IMHO, for a reason Mid-Childans chose to better their technology and AI in their devices, as opposed to Belkans, who preferred to use the cartridge system in them for a potentially bigger damage output. In Almaria's case, she obviously can benefit more from better AI and a more complex (technologically speaking) device, than one toned down (technologically speaking again) to be able to host a cartridge system, which would only help her increase the number of her bolts. If I read correctly, cartridges are only needed when using the Swarm and Hellstorm Shifts. Since Almaria has a more powerful Linker Core than Aurion, I would have expected her to have enough energy to cast those without the need of external energy sources. Sure, it might be a bit more taxing for her stamina, but she would instead be receiving a huge boost in magic control and other things thanks to her much better device.

Still, only my opinion.

In any case, very nice overall profile. Love Almaria. And the only thing I am against is the use of the cartridge system, which, sincerely, feels somewhat forced here...feels as if you just had to include a cartridge system, for the sake of including it. I'd love to see more mages who use pure Intelligent Devices.

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And now, for young!Aurion's profile!

Spoiler for Young Aurion:
This one is very nice as well. Nicely explained differences between this Aurion and his older self.

And interestingly enough, I dont feel the same way about Vega's Cartridge System...it does seem to fit...maybe because Vega is a rifle, and especially because of Aurion's different fighting style.

As for the spell list, wow, I much prefer this one over older Aurion's spell list, since it is way better balanced, not making Aurion overly-versatile. Though, still, so many bind spells...

Blaze and Frost Cannons, while I see their usefulness, seem to be a bit out of place, though, dont you think?

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And now, for another scenario.
The following is a scenario right after a severe terrorism and kidnapping incident. Several of the subjects were too dangerous and were eliminated accordingly. Aurion got the majority of the kills, managing to finish off even the leader.

Spoiler for length:
THIS IS A WINNER!!

This scenario has just lightened my day up. Excellent character development for Aurion here, and the ending was really sweet. Truly Aurion and Almaria are meant to be with each other.

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And some combination attacks!
Spoiler for Combo attacks:



Finally!
This time, I sure hope he feels different from the current one. For the scene where he talks with the two kids, just imagine Setsuna from Gundam 00 talking with Gimmy and Darry from Gurren Lagann. Vega is based off Zeta Gundam's beam rifle.

And though unintentionally, I managed to put in even more rabu-rabu and some fanservice as well.

Comments?
At the combination attacks. lol isnt that first one overkill?

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Whheeee.. hopefully the time-space continuum is back to normal now after Aaron's haxx breaker..

It's been a while but here's part 6 of my ongoing ficlet A visit to MD6, otherwise known as 'training' on the OC directory...Hmm I'm going to have to get that changed.

Earlier parts
Part 1- Err we need a new training partner
Part 2- Get Set
Part 3- Exercise Start
Part 4- This is going well...
Part 5- Blades win?

I'm still not sure if this is going to be the final version... While I'm happy with what I've written at the moment, things are capable of changing depending on feedback and other factors..
Spoiler for Part 6- The calm after the storm:


Spoiler for Extra Info:


Comments/Flames/Etc... welcome. Just keep the flames civil please
I apparently missed this one back when it was first posted, so here are my comments finally.

Nice debriefing scene here. The suggestion of Teana and Subaru working together against a more powerful adversary is indeed what they should have done, as their fighting styles complement each other (though we saw in the anime how their teamplay almost backfired. ). And funny how the bureau's image was brought up when discussing about the hostage situation. It was Signum who said that, right?

Also, nice Enforcer rankings there. The list has given me a better idea of how the Navy might be, since there is no canon information about it.


I'll be finishing the next part tomorrow morning, if not later tonight after work. Same goes for more recent stories, which I have in queue.
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Old 2007-11-26, 17:37   Link #16776
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Ah, nice to see the crack still in full force. *dons HEV*

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You have, I dare say, "invented a catchphrase." May it see many days.

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Nothing like 105mm howitzer shells from the sky to adjust someones moral compass...
*gulp* I just had to spend yesterday playing CNC Generals. Damn artillery strike, man. Points my moral compass, not to mention my army, right at the enemy's head.
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At the combination attacks. lol isnt that first one overkill?
Why do some of those attacks seem familiar...?

Bleah. Too much backlog, not enough time, between Metroid addiction(<3), schoolwork, hanging out...that said, reading all this is like a daily routine now! *Sigh*
And it really doesn't help that it gets dark here SO early...makes me sleepy.
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Old 2007-11-26, 17:46   Link #16777
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Back after the holiday weekend...and what do I find? Over 10 pages of BACKLOG and BLUECHESSIUM!!

Lete's do dis!!

BLUECHESSIUM BACKLOG IMPACT!!!

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That was why I liked Fate's new jacket better, I like my combat troops to look like well... troops not street walkers.
I have to agree there. I definitely liked her new Barrier Jacket design. It suits her well .

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Another piece of fiction relation to the Order; getting this outta the way before I go on to the StrikerS mock battle..

Spoiler for Snatch and Grab:

Wow...awesome piece of work there. I can't wait for more! and more big boom.

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Ok, here goes

Chapter 21

Spoiler for Chapter 21 - Koji's Knighting - Part 1:


Well, that's it for part 1

Here's a small teaser.
Spoiler for Teaser:

Their personalities are somewhat alike after all

*runs*
Yay! Very nice ending of the trial. And a new character introduced to our lovely OC family, too .

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Well, it held on very well this long past StrikerS, and even if slower a little, it's still a fast~ thread.

And it's not like Nanohaverse is over.
It shall never die! As long as we are here, it will live on within our hearts forever!!!

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Well, here is the latest 82nd short.

Enjoy, and belated Thanksgiving!

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Oh my...very interesting development there .

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Of course Hammond is the quintessential Cool Boss, AND he can kick ass when he has too at least if you give him a spaceship of some kind.
Oh hell yea! Hammond rules!

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At least you have improved. Mine are still shoddy despite my efforts. In fact, I think I actually gotten worse. That said, I have a new "My name is Tais" for you guys to maybe have a small smile.

Spoiler for The first can be embarrassing or a nasty trick:
CC please

Oh poor, poor, Yui. I wish her the best of luck. Hope she doesn't maim him too badly .

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And now, for the overdue Chapter Five (announced to be out yesterday) ...

When reading Leona's part in her room later, I suggest listening to >>this<<. And yes, that's one of her theme songs.

Spoiler for Chapter Five—Amethyst Star (Part One):

Wow...I wish I could write like that . Keep up the good work .

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You could always Put Him on a Bus to go hang with Vita and Zafira… The three of them can all have an emo party that they can’t be around to help Hayate!

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*The Trio is seen sitting at a Bar someplace with many empty glasses around them*
Grandis(Buzzed): Why can't I be with Hayate if I got a chance to save her from danger I could totally get in her...
*Vita is seen glaring at him*
Grandis: err good graces! I was totally going to say good graces!
Vita (also more then a tad tipsy): Whatever I should be the one there! I’m one of her Knights for god sakes I’ve been with her… *pauses and tries to recall a number, but fails miserably* Well its way longer then your Johnny come lately ass anyway!
Zafira: Hey I’m one of her knights too you know…
Vita: Shut up dog breath no one cares about you.
Grandis: Seriously.
*Zafira turns away and sulks miserably as the other two keep slamming drinks*
Vita (getting very drunk and nearly crying): Haaaayyyaaaatttteee why did you leave me!?
Grandis (also hammered and nearly crying): Forget you why did she leave meeeee!
Felix: God I thought knights where supposed to tough this is just fucking sad.

PRetty much my entire family was married before that...

Aww...they deserve a hug

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Crack that joins the Combiners type of movie spoofs:
Spoiler for The what?:
And a interview with the Director of the Movie Event this Summer - Rebuilt of StrikerS
Spoiler for Interview:

I can't wait to read it . If you still need OCs, I'm willing to loan out Shamsel for your project and he's an aerial mage . Everything I've written before is pre-StrikerS, so having him transfer to a different unit is fine by me.

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Finally...finished...
*dies*
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Old 2007-11-26, 17:52   Link #16778
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*The Trio is seen sitting at a Bar someplace with many empty glasses around them*
Grandis(Buzzed): Why can't I be with Hayate if I got a chance to save her from danger I could totally get in her...
*Vita is seen glaring at him*
Grandis: err good graces! I was totally going to say good graces!
Vita (also more then a tad tipsy): Whatever I should be the one there! I’m one of her Knights for god sakes I’ve been with her… *pauses and tries to recall a number, but fails miserably* Well its way longer then your Johnny come lately ass anyway!
Zafira: Hey I’m one of her knights too you know…
Vita: Shut up dog breath no one cares about you.
Grandis: Seriously.
*Zafira turns away and sulks miserably as the other two keep slamming drinks*
Vita (getting very drunk and nearly crying): Haaaayyyaaaatttteee why did you leave me!?
Grandis (also hammered and nearly crying): Forget you why did she leave meeeee!
Felix: God I thought knights where supposed to tough this is just fucking sad.
Xalinth: Um...saving Hayate from danger...have you ever SEEN the shit Hayate can do??? If anything, she'll be saving YOU from danger.
*walks off snickering at Grandis's desperation*


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Also, we're attempting to expand the Nanohaverse at the same time
Since there are hundreds of magical styles, would it be too out of line to think up "new magical styles" willy-nilly?



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giving the Belka forces more screentime.
Let's give *Hayate* more screentime lol; she didn't even get a transformation IIRC ._.


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Would Yuunoha be one of the changes you're making?
My opinion on this is very simple:

Spoiler for My opinion on Yuuno X Nanoha::



Okay, let me try again with Xalinth. I made his backstory a little better (I hope) and it should at least be more palatable to viewer tastes...

One thing: would a shooting attack that can "strike through" other magical damage attacks like SB and DB be too over the top?

Spoiler for Xalinth Tamerlan Personal:


Spoiler for Xalinth Tamerlan Appearance and Persona:


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Old 2007-11-26, 21:28   Link #16779
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You have, I dare say, "invented a catchphrase." May it see many days.
He's also the sci-evangelist too...

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*gulp* I just had to spend yesterday playing CNC Generals. Damn artillery strike, man. Points my moral compass, not to mention my army, right at the enemy's head.
This is the 105mm howitzer mounted on the AC-130H Spectre gunship. Death from above, bet your ass. ^___^ You get to use it in one mission of Call of Duty 4. Also, I have an actual mission vid of an AC-130H mission... they sniped a Taliban with the 105mm.

"Did we get him?"
"He went flying, he's not running."
"Jesus, is he still alive?"
"Don't sweat it, he's not running. I can see pieces down there."
"Roger, retarget."

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It's called a booster rocket the distance they needed to cover was trivial in terms of space, beside which that just means that you need some ludicrously specific piece of technobabble to somehow make this vaguely sane, and it's still only vaguely so. In any more normal sci-fi or realstic setting pods are totally useless. Also the cost to building a huge at least somewhat independently manvuerable mini-space ship stuffed with magnetic cacatpults is not something I'd right off as "trvial" more so when a single battle could involve chucking thousands of the things.
They DO use booster rockets and ballistic paths, at least in At All Costs, where Honor's Eight Fleet fires a massive salvo of missiles; the boosters engage, then burn out and the missiles continue on a ballistic path until they enter terminal range, at which point the 2nd stage ignites.

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This is space you can do all that with just normal missiles by dropping them in your wake and ordering them to arm and attack as the enemy closes in or launching them with magnetic catapults on a glide path to some predetermined location from which they then engage their engines and burn toward the target, the lack of drag means you can do all sorts of fun things with missiles without needing a stupid pod to fire them from.

The Honorverses technobabble is the only thing that sort of makes them reasonable, and even then it's debatable to some extent.
Inbook explanation is due to the lag invovled in controlling the missiles, though by At All Costs, the most recent main book, Manticore (Hemphill, rather) has figured out how to get rid of the lag and control missiles directly. At any rate, the 2nd senario you suggested was used in At All Costs to ambush one thirds of an incoming Havenite fleet attacking Manticore, before the call for surrender was made.

I managed to email a contact of mine, a retired Royal Navy Captain, and asked him his thoughts on the matter. Summarised as follows, they are:

VLS all over the hull: VLS is highly useful and you get a good rate of fire; the problem with that, however, is that the VLS fires so fast you're liable to run dry after a short engagement. A Ticonderoga-class cruiser will shoot itself dry in less that two minutes, while an Arleigh-Burke runs dry a little over one. This on one hand is a good thing, because the Ticos were built as fleet defense cruisers, intended to missile spam incoming enemy fighters and missiles; on the other hand, once they've shot themselves dry, it's a real bitch to reload the VLS tubes, especially at sea: you have to reload them from the outside in, and this doesn't consider the problems of matching and keeping in formation... basically, reloading at sea is a bitch; now take that to space and consider reloading a 1.4km warship. More of a bitch.

A second consideration he pointed out to me was of the risk of having an entire hull studed with VLS tubes would pose. He was a frigate captain, and the British were just starting to implement VLS during his days (60s to the early 90s was when he served), and there were great fears in the Royal Navy over what would happen if the Argentinians scored a direct hit on the VLS. On a Frigate like the one he skippered, it's a moot point - any hit would have been dangerous - but on a Ticonderonga? (Yes, I know the British never had any Ticos. They still wargamed against the Americans, so they did have a good idea of what US Navy ships could do.) One lucky hit to the VLS and it blows sky high. Now imagine a space ship 1.4 kilometers long, studded with VLS tubes. One hit and you'll set off the magazine. Not exactly a comforting thought.

Also, consider this: say that in one minute, an SD(P) pops out 120 pods; at the end of three minutes it's 360 pods, at the end of five, 600 pods. (Five-minute rolling intervals seem to be standard, and these are rough numbers. VERY rough. I need to reread At All Costs...) Each pod can hold a maximum of ten missiles, though in reallity only 7 will be active warshots, the rest are EW/penetration platforms. That's still 4200 missiles from ONE SHIP. Compared to the costs of all that firepower going out, the cost of pods does start to seem of lesser importance...



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Wow...awesome piece of work there. I can't wait for more! and more big boom.
Oh, there'll be more big boom... and some smaller boom. The OFM are upgrading their shotguns to use HEAT shells and unit armorer Lurch is putting the finishing touches on ammo which is apparently similar to GCI Gyro-Jet ammo...

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It shall never die! As long as we are here, it will live on within our hearts forever!!!
Hell yeah!
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*Grabs a big thick science text book, puts on a lab coat, and sets out on in a jeep loaded down with lab equipment to preach the good word, of SCIECNE!*
*chuckles*

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Yeah well my guys wouldn't be much different, some people just need killing you know? Acutally one of the recent EU books did have one good scene in it.

Luke is fighting a Sith Lord near the obligatory cliff and she goes to fall over it at which point he grabs her and says "I'd never let you fall" then slices her head off apparently he'd been reading the evil overlord list.
Ah, I think I skipped to the end of that book, when he was emo-ing over killing her for the wrong reason. Nevermind that she still needed to die.


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The Space Navy is technically an arm of the TSAB navy though like I said elsewhere I kind of think of the TSAB as a super powered EU individual planets can have small militaries (if they’re in good standings), but the TSAB ultimately holds most of the power and can conscript those local forces for national use. Sort of like how some larger planets in Star Wars where allowed to keep planetary defense forces even though the New Republic had a proper Navy and Army as well, or even vaguely like the National Guard in the US.

The Gatebusters are also unofficial… technically they were supposed to be dismantled after the war against the system lords, but very few people believe they really got rid of all of them, if you asked about them the standard reply would be “I don’t know what you’re talking about we don’t have any of those left…”. Yes this is a total set up to allow them to bust one out at some critical juncture and nukfiy something.

Kinship could happen this planet took a different tack and basiclly joined willing, but then once inside with a handle on how things worked it began to ruthlessly work and exploit every loophole they could find to keep doing what they’d been doing. Normally they stay within the letter of the law, but totally ignoring the spirit of said law. That said it’s not like it was ancient Rome or something it’s mostly that it’s militaristic mainly by TSAB standards, by out standards it’s militarized, but not ludicrously so.
I see... good, in-depth... I guess Hammond's in there somewhere, isn't he?

*nodding* Yeah, what I meant by militaristic was by TSAB standards; by ours, I figure they'd be reasonably militarised. They are in the back of beyond with all sorts of nasty aliens...

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You'd think even script writers would realize that punching people THROUGH concrete is hard...
If you've never done it before... you'll never know....

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Well fact was they began training them before the Covenant ever showed up intending to use them as covert government enforcers... did I mention the novel portrays the UNSC as a tad... fascist?
Nope. It's been about 2 years since I last read First Strike or Fall of Reach, so my memory's a little rusty.

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Nothing like 105mm howitzer shells from the sky to adjust someones moral compass...
"I see lots of pieces down there."

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HELL NO!!!! If anything, he's a modded Komui Lee with a touch of Wushu's intelligence, a bit of my nastiness and lots of perversion

I hope you're not holding your breath cos you'll be waiting for a long time. I don't have any inspiration for that yet and I just thought up something very silly that I'm working on.
Aha. *grins* Komui Lee, eh? That actually fits Tsuzuki better, rather than Gendo on crack... so is Lena around?

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Yep... now he should use that smarts of his to make Unlimited Carim Works...



*runs*
Reminds me of a doujin where at the climax of UBW, Shiro uses Unlimited Saber Works to create infinite cosplay Sabers who distract Gigalmesh while the original Excaliburs him.

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Aaaah, so it's relatively easy to actually get Franz to go cold blood, as opposed to my Linebackers, who need something BIG to get really angry.
Well... not exactly. See, if his normal hot blood level is 70-80%, his rifle-toting hot blood level is 50-60%, and the more he shoots and sees the destruction the angrier he gets... that whole scene was basically as follows: Franz had seen the destruction in RF6, chased into the tunnels, took everything in a glance and realised that they'd kidnapped Ginga, and he was ready to bring in Cinque alive when Sein popped up, and that was the last straw for him. Operating totally on combat instinct he fired and Sein and brought her down, then knocked out Subaru so she wouldn't have to see him threatening Cinque. By the time he began talking to cinque, however, he had already made up his mind to shoot both her and Sein.

He's actually on a slow fuse, that's been burning for the last decade or so, fueled by guilt and negatice feelings. He joined the Gardai, Erusia's version of magical cops, to serve the public trust, to protect the innocent, and uphold the law; when he killed Naomi's parent's innocents, even though no one knew about it, HE knows, and has been in a fairly dark place ever since. His hot blood is his way of keeping himself out of that dark place, but because of all the things he's done - black ops and wetwork can be quite unsavory at times - the pressure is building more than his hot blood can keep in check.

Sooner or later, all this will break free and bite him in the ass, forcing him to deal with it instead of ignoring it.

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And for some reason, I stopped reading at "naked save for a realllly thin hospital gown"

*dodges sniper fire*
It's for fanservice and psychological warfare. Deny them human clothing, you deny them a part of their humanity; Franz was trained as an interrogator while with the Gardai.

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So her plan involves the creation of Psychic Dominators all over the planet to mind control the Earth popul-

Oh wait
I think she has a more... personal plan...
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As in regards to Gwen and Mai, which are sisters-of-fate so to speak Gwendolyn is Erio's OC afterall.

And their secret world is filled with lots of... mysteries
...The mysteries of...kyoudai-ai?
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Or a ball of sleeping gas released by opening it...

*whistles*
That too. Though who is it for? Fate? Jail?
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Old 2007-11-26, 21:41   Link #16780
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...

Yes, this place became a whole lot cleaner during your time away. Almost no bloodstains remaining.

There's nothing good around here either.... -_- Other than the,

(Magic + Science) x Logic = [???]


...Debate about barrier jackets =_=



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And in other news, to avoid Contradictions and screw-ups, I would like to know how many OC departments/divisions in the TSAB do we have here?

BUT!

I'm only looking for those that were not created recently like Keroko's rogues. To be more exact, I want those that are already in the system and not put together in the "last moment" by a single character.

aka, NO RF6.

State their:

1. Designation
2. Function/Speciality/Responsibility
3. Affiliation (Ground, Air, Naval, others...)
4. Authority/Jurisdiction
5. Estimated manpower size
6. Equipment (If any, this includes vehicles.)



Have fun, I got to go to school... -_-
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