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Old 2008-01-06, 06:44   Link #18221
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Well better late than never. I'm busy lately with schoolwork as well as setting up own stories so I'll just toss random scenarios here every now and then.
Which seems all we can do at the moment

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Who we got next? Protoss? Tyrannids? The previously hidden Terran Federation?
What about the Borg? The Zentraedi? Reptiloid Aliens? The Terran Empire?

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Awesome work on the Fields of Hope. Though would the puzzle reveal the final resting place of the Blau Glotten?
Not if the Illuminati can help it

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Hmm. Can't quite place it though she looks familiar.

Tesla?
Hint: CC with blue hair and green eyes.
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Old 2008-01-06, 07:21   Link #18222
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Hint: CC with blue hair and green eyes.

That description sounds like Kanata.
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Old 2008-01-06, 09:33   Link #18223
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Look who I found lurking around a certain Non-Administered World with a new hairstyle!



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...

*tumbleweed rolls by*

Nobody's gonna get this joke will they?

*runs*
Isn't that blue-haired girl one of the two high schoolers seen in the Triangle Hearts OVA, part time worker in Midori-ya? She and her rival, green hair, would try and get into all sorts of fights.... and thenSHE appears, with a smile on her face.

"What are you doing?"

"n-nothing at all!

"That's good; I'd hate for you two to be fighting."

Even without her Magic, even without her title of White Devil, Takamachi Nanoha is a power to be reckoned with...

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Minor FIXed another for your new and improved EPIC CHANT
Sankyuu, kyoudai! Truly the flames of your youth burn brightly!

...So, you mentioned your dad was getting promoted to General - what exactly does he do?
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Well, there is no such thing as OVERKILL
Yeah, and I'm calling an ion cannon strike on my position, before the Keroko-tachi do it for me. I mean, c'mon. Ivanovich and 25mm cartridges. That's gotta be hax.

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Need to think up better computations. For Chrono as well. Maybe.
It's a bit sad what carck I can come up with:
Spoiler for On call:

Franz is walking wih restrained pissed off and dangerous aura because canceled Valentine's Romantic Dinner = No sechs.
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Well better late than never. I'm busy lately with schoolwork as well as setting up own stories so I'll just toss random scenarios here every now and then.
Same here. *cries* Oh god the cracky ideas in my head.

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It gets more awesome!
Thanks! ^_^ much thanks to Lowe who helped refine it...

Right, everyone, this is it. FINAL VERSION! No more correcting! It shall be, now and evermore!



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Steel is my jacket, and mana is my bullet.
I have primed over a thousand cartridges.
Unknown to jamming, nor known to misfire.
Have withstood pain to load many Devices.
Yet, these hands will never know peace.
So as I load,
Unlimited Cartridge Works.

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Old 2008-01-06, 11:13   Link #18224
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Look who I found lurking around a certain Non-Administered World with a new hairstyle!



...

...

*tumbleweed rolls by*

Nobody's gonna get this joke will they?

*runs*
Subaru. Though she could also be Hayate if shopped.

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Nagbalik si KABAYAN!!!

Thanks for the greetings, and a HAPPY HOLIDAYS to you too
Thanks.

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Di na ako tito lamang... Ninong na rin!!!!! Mawawalan na ako ng pera pag okasyon!!!

Pasensyahan na lang.

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And the BLUECHEESIUM HAS LANDED!!!!!

Thanks.

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Though not much actually happens in terms of action, I like the interactions I see, from Agito's first impressions of Aurion, to the ever suspicious Acous (I want to see those pictures of Ha- *hears cough behind him* ... nevermind ), to Hayate pairing off Yuuno with Nanoha in Vivio's presence(), to Tesla's analysis of the 'new' Aurion (most AWESOME VIBE .
Glad you liked it. It was fun having giving Acous a bit of a stalker vice.

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It's good to see such enjoyable BLUECHEESIUM for the New Year again!!!
Can I claim the 2008 BLUECHEESIUM Kick-start Badge?

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Holy BLUECHEESIUM!

Grandis foreshadowing starts it off and Agito gets her first impression of Aurion in this. A well-done exchange between Chrono and Acous with Hayate being naughty in front of Vivio, pairing up Yuuno and Nanoha. And at Tesla and Aurion part. That was pretty intense, even for a short while. Every interesting notes section and very much agreed and looking forward. I enjoyed this chapter, especially at certain parts. Looks to be a great start.
Thanks! That Aurion & Tesla part is my favorite in chapter 1.

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..and I just spend the last hour reading GuardianS and typing this up while I should be doing my report. I blame you for distracting me from work and itching to get started on the Katrina-centric StorieS while I should be doing something else.
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Old 2008-01-06, 11:17   Link #18225
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Where's everybody?!

Fine! be that way!!! Double post, HASSHA!!!

Part 1.


Spoiler for MSLN: GenerationS: Chapter 1: Part 1:
Good effort! Just a few typos, but it seems to gel quite well, though the Japanese is slightly jarring - probaly because I've just finished Black Hawk Down for the third time. Agito's reaction to Aurion is lol, as is stalker Accous. ^^

And Yuunoha lives on! Ganbatte, Yuuno!

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Nice setup and scene with Tesla and Aurion, and GREAT LOL atAurionxHayate scenes ^__^

Hmm.... if Aurion is now more human, does that mean he'll be more accepting of Erick's manly challenges and rematches? Does the fire of youth burn once more in Aurion, or just in Erick?

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Comments? Please do tell me if there's too much OOCness.
So far, looks good. Remember, the offer still stands; if you ever need the OFM, they'll be there.
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Old 2008-01-06, 12:17   Link #18226
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Where's everybody?!

Fine! be that way!!! Double post, HASSHA!!!

Part 1.

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Part 2...

Spoiler for MGLN GenerationS: Chapter 1: Part 2:





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Comments? Please do tell me if there's too much OOCness.
Darn wish I got time to read this... I'll review it once I can, I promise! Glad you got started! Sorry for missing out on all the background to GenerationS.

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Look who I found lurking around a certain Non-Administered World with a new hairstyle!



...

...

*tumbleweed rolls by*

Nobody's gonna get this joke will they?

*runs*
Registered nothing with me, unless this really has got to do with Toraha, but then again why does she remind of someone from the Mai series?

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Uhm... Tequila Sunrise?
I'd love to have that on the rocks. If the rocks last for more than a femtosecond that is.

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So... Kha also does "What Playboys Do" in the evenings?
Oh well, you know, one of the things that fall under the "Don't Tell Fate" list, like giving Erio manual control over the bridging vehicle during a never-seen-before car chase in Rebuilt of StrikerS, or the intimacy-like emotion effects while having to Trace and repair Nanoha's damaged magic circuits or Keroko's berserking Aspect (Events in A's Destiny) aka good mindfuck.

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*sees the light-year large swarm known as the Zerg*

Too late
"Awaken my child and claim that which is your birthright..."

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It does? Lemme tr-

*headshot >>> Lowe*
Charlie: (grins through cigar while looking up from rifle sight) Drinks are gonna be on you, kid.

Gimmy: Let's see if that stands...
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Gimmy: 3-2, old man. It's yours.

Charlie: First to five remember?

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Wesson, I don't like that look on your face...
Gimmy places the Nighty half of his revolver tonfas against Wesson's temple.

Gimmy: A penny for your thoughts? I'd prefer you return me the change by the way.

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A Warrior Will Come...

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My... head... it feels like crushing itself with much CRACK
Oh that's crack? How come I didn't feel it to be so...?

Oh dear this is bad...

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Nice chants there... though FoH sounds like something I'm setting up as an Advanced Spell for Neo-Lyrical Meisters
Er... What? Will the Real Lacus Clyne please stand up?

Neo-Lyrical Meisters though... Haruhi's followers?

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Who we got next? Protoss? Tyrannids? The previously hidden Terran Federation?
Er well...

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Ah the crack evolves.
Bluecheesium always does.

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Awesome work on the Fields of Hope. Though would the puzzle reveal the final resting place of the Blau Glotten?
It will lead to the next clue.

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What about the Borg? The Zentraedi? Reptiloid Aliens? The Terran Empire?
What about the Burning Legion? The Predators? Klingon renegades? Celestia?

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Hint: CC with blue hair and green eyes.
Huh? Saint X's CC?

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That description sounds like Kanata.
Really? I don't see CC getting blown about by the wind, especially with all that mozella holding her down.

*comedic cymbal crash*



~~~New intelligence data updated~~~

Sneak from Rebuilt of StrikerS:

Spoiler for Uh...:
Plot questions aside (It is hinted here that Riot 6 is a bigger force than the canon version, having 2 support platoons of grunts, and this is during Auris' inspection of Riot 6), there's a perfectly good explanation for this crack. Just passing it through the censors so I won't have to change it later.
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Old 2008-01-06, 13:33   Link #18227
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Err... Do you guys have any collective library of all the stories told in this thread?
Because browsing through 900+ pages of posts in search of bits and pieces isn't exactly my idea of a fun read...

edit: of course, if i had just looked at the very beginning of the thread...
... brb in a couple of months when i actually finish reading all of this
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Old 2008-01-06, 13:42   Link #18228
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Where's everybody?!

Fine! be that way!!! Double post, HASSHA!!!

Part 1.

Spoiler for MSLN: GenerationS: Chapter 1: Part 1:
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Part 2...

Spoiler for MGLN GenerationS: Chapter 1: Part 2:


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Comments? Please do tell me if there's too much OOCness.
First all, Pardon my insertion of backlog snippers hehe

Remember to add your charas in AltS II as well... well i have Lost with Aurion already- doing a bit of field work though, with Alma...

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Look who I found lurking around a certain Non-Administered World with a new hairstyle!



...

...

*tumbleweed rolls by*

Nobody's gonna get this joke will they?

*runs*
Did not get it but it reminded me of that Alicia (Aria) pic with Bard on hand...

Also the AltS II version of Alicia, the 'Most Beautiful undine in Elhazard'...



*runs*

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Spoiler for In a cliff several hundred meters away...:
Saint X could only imagine what his fictional XRT-17 Electromagnetic Ballistic Rail Rifle could do...

It's a portable two-man howitzer-ish rifle that can be used to snipe from ranges too far for normal anti-material rifles can manage



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Well better late than never. I'm busy lately with schoolwork as well as setting up own stories so I'll just toss random scenarios here every now and then.
Noted

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Isn't that blue-haired girl one of the two high schoolers seen in the Triangle Hearts OVA, part time worker in Midori-ya? She and her rival, green hair, would try and get into all sorts of fights.... and thenSHE appears, with a smile on her face.

"What are you doing?"

"n-nothing at all!

"That's good; I'd hate for you two to be fighting."

Even without her Magic, even without her title of White Devil, Takamachi Nanoha is a power to be reckoned with...

It's a bit sad what carck I can come up with:
Spoiler for On call:

Franz is walking wih restrained pissed off and dangerous aura because canceled Valentine's Romantic Dinner = No sechs.

Same here. *cries* Oh god the cracky ideas in my head.
Well in my ficverse, those two as well as the girl holding the Kitsune Kuon are actually Ma-

Momoko Takamachi suddenly drags Creator-Kun out, leaving X behind



Though i don't pit Yuuno as a Delta Force-ish kind of guy, I feel that he's more MITHRIL-ish

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"Awaken my child and claim that which is your birthright..."
*remembers a song from long ago*

Spoiler for Birthright by Loquy:


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Er... What? Will the Real Lacus Clyne please stand up?
Someone from Saint X's character vault raises her hand.

I do not mind unleashing her here...

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Neo-Lyrical Meisters though... Haruhi's followers?
Saint X remembers something that does not really compute

Lowe, Aaron, naalala nyo pa ba yung mga dancing inmates? Narinig ko na sinayaw daw nila yung... *transmission cut*

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What about the Burning Legion? The Predators? Klingon renegades? Celestia?
The Scrin? The Magog? The Abyss? The Jam? The Aliens from AVP (and just about every movie of the "Alien" franchise)? And Especially, THE ANTISPIRALS?!!

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Huh? Saint X's CC?
Saint X: You called?

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Really? I don't see CC getting blown about by the wind, especially with all that mozella holding her down.

*comedic cymbal crash*

Saint X sees a giant harisen heading towards Kha

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~~~New intelligence data updated~~~

Sneak from Rebuilt of StrikerS:

Spoiler for Uh...:
Plot questions aside (It is hinted here that Riot 6 is a bigger force than the canon version, having 2 support platoons of grunts, and this is during Auris' inspection of Riot 6), there's a perfectly good explanation for this crack. Just passing it through the censors so I won't have to change it later.
"Uh..." indeed.

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On other notes, managed to acquire a few attacks, but these are for OCs that are of the 'Valkyrie Class' - like Keroko's Sol and FSZ's Yui...

@ the two:

Who wants to have "Nibelung Valesti"?

*runs*

@SpaceBrotha

Welcome to the OC!

Read Page 1 Post No. 5... though the person updating them has not yet updated that.

or Find the very first posts of each person here, they also serve as indicies to their characters and stories.
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Old 2008-01-06, 16:13   Link #18229
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Fine! be that way!!! Double post, HASSHA!!!

Part 1.


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Part 2...

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Comments? Please do tell me if there's too much OOCness.

Ah that was great!
Very fun to read!

There wasn't too much OOCness... and even if, I'm not someone who would complain to much about something like that. ^^

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It's a bit sad what carck I can come up with:
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Well yeah... thats some crack xD
Nice crack!

And as I learned from Persona 3: Badass comes after fearless. xD


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Right, everyone, this is it. FINAL VERSION! No more correcting! It shall be, now and evermore!



I am the primer of my cartridge.
Steel is my jacket, and mana is my bullet.
I have primed over a thousand cartridges.
Unknown to jamming, nor known to misfire.
Have withstood pain to load many Devices.
Yet, these hands will never know peace.
So as I load,
Unlimited Cartridge Works.

FTW!



Ok... I finally managed to come out of my holiday laziness... you can expect something of my writing soon ^-^
And If someone is masochistic enough to check my grammar... please tell me
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Old 2008-01-06, 17:34   Link #18230
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Welcome back Aaron, we missed you. Here's a little welcome back present, to stay in the Tesla-vibe:

Spoiler for The Knight and the Adjudant:


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@Everyone: I'll be giving a belated birthday gift for Lowe and Keroko-kun today. A more than 10,000-word first Chapter of MGLN Nanoha GenerationS! Keroko-kun, I hope you don't mind if I use Tesla instead of Keroko-chan for my gift scenario.

Be back later. :3 I missed you guys.
Heck no I don't mind. Especially since you can nail down Tesla perfectly, its a joy reading more about her from other writers.

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KEROKO-TAN!!! WHAT WAS THAT ABOUT?! I thought I fixed the crack already! Let me explain...
You've got five seconds...

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"Signum" is the false cover for a Belka paladin's vigilante daughter, Lamilia Loveless von Eisenberg. She also has another pseudonym for masquerade parties, "Caroline" which she shortens to "Caro". One day, Caro meets "Erio" at a party...

Fastforward a couple of years. "Erio", upon discovering Caro's true identity, ponders about his future with her. At that time, he was being recalled to his home world, and so he decides to leave and never return. Caro catches up with him, and reveals who she is when Erio says Caro's family could never accept him. Thus he proves his point:

"Slowly, Erio edged his beret off his red crop, and out sprang two tendril-like feelers from amongst the strands. Lamilia gasped.

'I'm a half-demon, Caro. I am a paladin's nemesis.'"




Half-daemons are incredibly rare, but are the most misunderstood, far more than half-Eta. Most of them result from unions between the followers of the Shadow and the benign Daemons that are spawned passively by the Quera. At least that's what I think at the moment.

The other details are still sketchy, but nevertheless, Agito is that half-demon's UD and she is assigned to find "Caro" in Erio's place.

Crush crinkle toss...
Right, so if I understand it correctly, Signum is 'a' Caro, but not 'the' Caro?

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Look who I found lurking around a certain Non-Administered World with a new hairstyle!



...

...

*tumbleweed rolls by*

Nobody's gonna get this joke will they?

*runs*
Two questions:

On the OC note, who did this to Tesla's hair!?

On the other note, who is this, and what anime is she from?

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Fine! be that way!!! Double post, HASSHA!!!

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Part 2...

Spoiler for MGLN GenerationS: Chapter 1: Part 2:
Chrono/Acous interaction was nice to read, and well done too. Hayate trying to manipulate Vivio to embarras Nanoha and Yuuno was Aurion/Tesla interactions were brilliant! I may be biased, but I loved that part the most, especially when Tesla went analysis mode, I could just hear her talking with Yukana's C.C. voice. And then Hayate came by (causing a brilliant reaction with Aurion ) with a nice touchy moment.

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I don't think Keroko is possible. After the Jail incident, Keroko is under medical orders not to use any magic whatsoever for at least three months (Phanan threatened to seal them up if she even so much as levitated ). In fact, she is too physically injured to do much anyway, and is in a lot of pain if she moves too much. After being cleared, she still has to take it easy for several months. She's fit enough to return to normal duty by the time of the 'final mock battle' at the end of StrikerS (which, mind you, is a good seven months after the battle with Jail).

I'm still tubbing over what kind of permanent damage she would get from this... But it's going to be something on the same level as Nanoha's, so if you're concerned about her injuries, then Keroko is out of the question too.

On the subject of Artherion, I recently retconned a little tidbit about his past. Formerly he was a device created by Yuuno. I thnk we've established by now that there is no way to create an intelligent device out of scratch in seconds without propper resources, so I used the theory that was once mentioned as the reason Yuuno had Raising Heart. Basically, Artherion is an old Device excavated by Yuuno's tribe.

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Old 2008-01-06, 21:28   Link #18231
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Well I'm back! Been busy lately, work is a lot more tiring than I imagined. Most of the time when I get back home, I really don't feel like doing anything else. You know how you keep telling yourself you need to start doing the stuff you wanna do, like writing ficlets in the OC thread and stuff, but never get around to it for one reason or another?

Argh! I seriously wish there is 48 hours a day, but if you think about it, it'll probably just mean longer working hours.

Whatever, short backlog smasher coming up!
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Fine! be that way!!! Double post, HASSHA!!!
Suffering and trying to adapt to working life. +_+


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Spoiler for MSLN: GenerationS: Chapter 1: Part 1:
Whee! Bluecheesium is back! This is really nice. The flow is there, and the interactions is just how we know you do it. Love the added dimension to Acous' personality. Stalker! Tesla's antics were fun to read, and it seems Keroko-kun has given the thumbs up as well so it all good. And oh what's this? Vivio is a genius? Yuunoha FTW! (I can so see the people at the image thread frothing at the mouth if they ever read this piece.)

Nice one Aaron, you've got me motivated to get on with my suspended projects. Just what we need to kickstart this thread again. Bluecheesium banzai!


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Again, the interactions. Simply love it. I believe we are starting to read a lot more pieces with really good Tesla related interactions, and its fleshing her out really nicely. (Why is it Aaron is writing more Tesla than Keroko? )


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I feel you Aaron. As I've always said, the people who wrote StrikerS really should be shot in the head, with a gun powerful enough to blow their stupid brains away. Nothing wrong with the interactions IMO.

About including one more ace, it seems your best bet now will be Fate. Unless you wanna consider some other OCs like Kha or Leona. Speaking of which, PF! Where are you!!!!??


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Can I claim the 2008 BLUECHEESIUM Kick-start Badge?
*Hands badge to Aaron*


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Thanks! That Aurion & Tesla part is my favorite in chapter 1.
So far, mine too. Though I would say the Chrono and Acous interaction was pretty fun to read too. It shows their individual quirks. Also, want more Yuunoha!!! *spies a few more dead bodies still spasming and frothing at the mouth in the image thread*


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Spoiler for The Knight and the Adjudant:
And we get more of Tesla, her personality is really that of a young teenage girl when you look at it. Its so commonplace and you just go "yeah that's definitely how a teenage girl usually behaves". Love it! More love rivalry please! *Tesla chases FA with Gungnir*


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Right, so if I understand it correctly, Signum is 'a' Caro, but not 'the' Caro?
I've learn quite some time ago that more often than not, Kha's cracks don't really make any sense.
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Old 2008-01-06, 21:44   Link #18232
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Linda Zwei: "Can't touch this!"
<Grins> You know what follows THAT, don't you...?


<Hefts Weapon>

"HAMMER TIME!!"


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Gimme a sec, it's at the bottom of this post!

Mel's Fields of Hope:

I am the Life of my Voice.
Pure is my Body, and Light is my Blood.
My song has created over a thousand blades.
Unknown of Despair,
Nor known to Hate.
Have withstood pain to inspire the masses,
And these hands shall never betray them.
I have no regrets; This is the only path.
I'm always here, "Fields of Hope".


FoH is a special reality marble. It does not envelope the battlefield, but forms a marble of infinite light over her that can be see in the hearts of her allies, instilling them with endless hope and heroism, inspiring them to fight on. FoH has a limitless range of passive healing, making Mel and her allies feel no remorse or hesitation until the song runs through or are somehow killed.
You... got something done...?

WHO ARE YOU, AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH KHA-SAMA?!


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Part 1.

Good! Very good! Almost TOO good!

Love the ChronoVerossa interactions... Acous reminds me of Irie from Higurashi...the melodramatist.

AND YUUNOHA LIVES AGAIN!!!


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Part 2...
Nothing to say here that I haven't already...although...


OTOU~SAN!!!!!



Spoiler for A Few Quick Notes For You Re: the 82nd:



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Look who I found lurking around a certain Non-Administered World with a new hairstyle!

I'm going to the hospital for this...

<raises arms>

TESLA-CHAN, THE WONDERFUL CRYBABY!!!


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Spoiler for The Knight and the Adjudant:

And Keroko proves that even the Mighty Tesla's Brain is no match for that wonderful emotion that we call:


LOVE!




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I don't think Keroko is possible. After the Jail incident, Keroko is under medical orders not to use any magic whatsoever for at least three months (Phanan threatened to seal them up if she even so much as levitated ). In fact, she is too physically injured to do much anyway, and is in a lot of pain if she moves too much. After being cleared, she still has to take it easy for several months. She's fit enough to return to normal duty by the time of the 'final mock battle' at the end of StrikerS (which, mind you, is a good seven months after the battle with Jail).
3 months?

Well, crap. There goes my plan to use her for LegendS...unless I delay the story...oh boy.
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That description sounds like Kanata.
Who?

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Isn't that blue-haired girl one of the two high schoolers seen in the Triangle Hearts OVA, part time worker in Midori-ya? She and her rival, green hair, would try and get into all sorts of fights.... and thenSHE appears, with a smile on her face.

"What are you doing?"

"n-nothing at all!

"That's good; I'd hate for you two to be fighting."

Even without her Magic, even without her title of White Devil, Takamachi Nanoha is a power to be reckoned with...
Far from it. But the thought if seeing Nanoha being scary even without her powers...

I need to see the Toraha OVA now...

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Sankyuu, kyoudai! Truly the flames of your youth burn brightly!
You are most welcome brotha!

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...So, you mentioned your dad was getting promoted to General - what exactly does he do?
No names, but as of promotion he's Police Chief Superintendent for the Philippine National Police Special Action Force.

(Note to fellow countrymen: Yes, THAT Special Action Force.)

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Yeah, and I'm calling an ion cannon strike on my position, before the Keroko-tachi do it for me. I mean, c'mon. Ivanovich and 25mm cartridges. That's gotta be hax.
Depends on what the 25mm's are capable of

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It's a bit sad what carck I can come up with:
Spoiler for On call:

Franz is walking wih restrained pissed off and dangerous aura because canceled Valentine's Romantic Dinner = No sechs.


Crack? This should be Canon!!!!!! Liked the bits with Franz, and most especially Naomi, who despite her non-appearance still manages MOST AWESOME WIN, good to see how far they've progressed

But Psycho still continues to be... Psycho?

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Right, everyone, this is it. FINAL VERSION! No more correcting! It shall be, now and evermore!



I am the primer of my cartridge.
Steel is my jacket, and mana is my bullet.
I have primed over a thousand cartridges.
Unknown to jamming, nor known to misfire.
Have withstood pain to load many Devices.
Yet, these hands will never know peace.
So as I load,
Unlimited Cartridge Works.

And it is DONE!

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Subaru. Though she could also be Hayate if shopped.
And one point goes to Aaron Though you're missing the other half of my intent... although I haven't given enough hints anyway

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Pasensyahan na lang.


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Glad you liked it. It was fun having giving Acous a bit of a stalker vice.
So... where are those ima-

*dodges sniper fire*

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Can I claim the 2008 BLUECHEESIUM Kick-start Badge?


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Registered nothing with me, unless this really has got to do with Toraha, but then again why does she remind of someone from the Mai series?
*buzzer*

Not even close

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I'd love to have that on the rocks. If the rocks last for more than a femtosecond that is.
You're giving the rocks too much credit... I don't think they'll even last for half that time

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Oh well, you know, one of the things that fall under the "Don't Tell Fate" list, like giving Erio manual control over the bridging vehicle during a never-seen-before car chase in Rebuilt of StrikerS, or the intimacy-like emotion effects while having to Trace and repair Nanoha's damaged magic circuits or Keroko's berserking Aspect (Events in A's Destiny) aka good mindfuck.
...

Did Erio just do something to Nanoha akin to.... mana replenishment?

*runs*

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"Awaken my child and claim that which is your birthright..."
*types Radio Free Zerg*

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Charlie: (grins through cigar while looking up from rifle sight) Drinks are gonna be on you, kid.

Gimmy: Let's see if that stands...
Gimmy: 3-2, old man. It's yours.

Charlie: First to five remember?
Oh Kha, you have no idea what Erio and I are cooking up...

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Gimmy places the Nighty half of his revolver tonfas against Wesson's temple.

Gimmy: A penny for your thoughts? I'd prefer you return me the change by the way.
Wesson: Change? I'll give you change.

RIDER CHANGE!!!!!!!!

*Akira Drop Kick >>>> Wesson*

Akira Takeshi: Rider Change Ja Nai!!!! HENSHIN DA!!!!!!


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Er... What? Will the Real Lacus Clyne please stand up?

Neo-Lyrical Meisters though... Haruhi's followers?
More like carrying out her vision

And Lacus Clyne eh? Haven't thought of her before

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Huh? Saint X's CC?
CC as in Canon Character I spell the name as C.C.

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~~~New intelligence data updated~~~

Sneak from Rebuilt of StrikerS:

Spoiler for Uh...:
Plot questions aside (It is hinted here that Riot 6 is a bigger force than the canon version, having 2 support platoons of grunts, and this is during Auris' inspection of Riot 6), there's a perfectly good explanation for this crack. Just passing it through the censors so I won't have to change it later.
...



EXPLAIN NAO!!!!!!!!!!!!

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edit: of course, if i had just looked at the very beginning of the thread...
... brb in a couple of months when i actually finish reading all of this
See you in a couple of months then

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First all, Pardon my insertion of backlog snippers hehe
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh?!?!?!?!

That's some slick and nasty scissor use there

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Did not get it but it reminded me of that Alicia (Aria) pic with Bard on hand...

Also the AltS II version of Alicia, the 'Most Beautiful undine in Elhazard'...



*runs*
Very Very Close, but still didn't get it.

Though Elhazard had Undines?!?!?!

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Saint X could only imagine what his fictional XRT-17 Electromagnetic Ballistic Rail Rifle could do...

It's a portable two-man howitzer-ish rifle that can be used to snipe from ranges too far for normal anti-material rifles can manage

How far are we talking about here?

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Saint X remembers something that does not really compute

Lowe, Aaron, naalala nyo pa ba yung mga dancing inmates? Narinig ko na sinayaw daw nila yung... *transmission cut*
...



To think TMoHS hasn't even aired here

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Welcome back Aaron, we missed you. Here's a little welcome back present, to stay in the Tesla-vibe:

Spoiler for The Knight and the Adjudant:


Tesla is such DENIAL EXTRAORDINAIRE, I love it Though out of all the people, I didn't expect Vita to deliver the simultaneous GODLIKE Triple KILL that sends Tesla cooking

And so Nighty aka Sandman invaded Tesla during her sleep eh?

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Two questions:

On the OC note, who did this to Tesla's hair!?

On the other note, who is this, and what anime is she from?
Now that a couple of people point this out to me, she does look like Tesla more... although the clip's on the wrong side. As Aaron said, I intended her to be Subaru with the similar outfit and all

Spoiler for As for her source:


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I'm going to the hospital for this...

<raises arms>

TESLA-CHAN, THE WONDERFUL CRYBABY!!!

SUWA!!!!!!!!

More like "Gachapen" actually...

*runs*
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*Hums 'Burning Rangers'*
Sooo... I finished up all the character-stuff on Rune, just need her bio... And her full name and title I gave her is: "Rune Juril, the Silver Dragoon". I had "Silver Dragon" but "Dragoon" is cool. Plus, Legend of Dragoon is seriously awesome.

Then I even did EDS-47's profile and bio. Though it's a tad... Dark.
Spoiler:

And her title... No.47 the Tormented.

Then started a Varistan OC I haven't named yet but her title might be "Empress of War".

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Ha! Page claimu!
I claim this page in the name of NanoFa- *Beaten and mugged*
Sounds morbid, even though I don't mind it. Rape isn't unnatural, and I daresay that most people, even in the fanfic world, gets urges sometimes. I was thinking along the line of making something morbid as well, but not entirely rape-centered.

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Chaos-kun has officially become Chaos-chan, the female version that is.
Can we hope fervently that the absence and transformation have mellowed him down a little?

[Bob]Absence makes the heart grows fonder. I don't expect him to be any other than himself (or herself). Gender plays little in determining the traits of one such as Chaos.[/Bob]

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Random thought: it's the Year of the Rat (yes, I know all about the difference between Solar and Lunar New Year). Rats are rodents. Ferrets are rodents.

Therefore, please welcome the Year of the Yuuno. Maybe this year he'll get lucky.
Is this going to be explicit or implicit?

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Eeerh I meant only 1949 posts till we hit 20000, from 1949 to 20000

And yes, the finely brewed crack that can only come from the likes of Kha/Nighty Enterprises
True, true, and they're the most yummy kinds, no doubt.

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If canon doesn't do it, fanon may. When was the last time something GAR was wrote about them anyway.

Hmm..

Spoiler for 5 mins of crack:


Good GAR is hard to come up with but this is workable with the plan indeed...

Back to more Heroes V for now.
Something tells me that Hayate is going to get owned by Katrina ...

And no! I still couldn't play Heroes V.

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That depends entirely on the story. Check out PhoenixFlare's "GuardianS" Chapter One, which clocks in at 5,071 words
You made a word count of my Chapters?

In any case, I was wondering whether I should be changing the formating for my story a bit. If I'm not mistaken, reading through a block of superdense text is going to be very exhausting (I re-read Chapter Four, the longest, and it was slightly distracting with too many text, even if the flow was there).

How about a change, where I split them into smaller parts (using more spoiler tags, that is)? Or is the current reading form all right for all?

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Hello everyone. It seems like it's a ten or so page backlog pile for me to handle.

Anyway...

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE!!!

@Lowe: Happy Birthday, Kabayan!!! Congrats to your dad.
Welcome back, buddy! You've been missed (and partly so, since I can't do some stuff without you around; I'll keep you posted some time)!

I'll tackle your delicious-looking appetizer of a Bluecheesium for this year later, the computer at the university here is not conducive for massive reading.

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Holy BLUECHEESIUM!

Grandis foreshadowing starts it off and Agito gets her first impression of Aurion in this. A well-done exchange between Chrono and Acous with Hayate being naughty in front of Vivio, pairing up Yuuno and Nanoha. And at Tesla and Aurion part. That was pretty intense, even for a short while. Every interesting notes section and very much agreed and looking forward. I enjoyed this chapter, especially at certain parts. Looks to be a great start.

..and I just spend the last hour reading GuardianS and typing this up while I should be doing my report. I blame you for distracting me from work and itching to get started on the Katrina-centric StorieS while I should be doing something else.
This summary just tingled my tastebud to get started on GenerationS, but I guess that'll have to wait.

And why the reading again?

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I feel you Aaron. As I've always said, the people who wrote StrikerS really should be shot in the head, with a gun powerful enough to blow their stupid brains away. Nothing wrong with the interactions IMO.

About including one more ace, it seems your best bet now will be Fate. Unless you wanna consider some other OCs like Kha or Leona. Speaking of which, PF! Where are you!!!!??
I'm quite alive and around, just not posting. I'm trying to condense a huge wall of raw data into some readable form for my thesis as well as tinkering with some ideas that require a good amount of thinking and linking. Basically, I'm trying to put a civilization and society to life. In any case, the base ideas are already there, now comes the part to integrate it into the story. :3

========

Well, I had been doing something, in any case, and this one will serve as an intermediary chapter before we go into Chapter Six for real. Bear in mind that it is extremely metaphorical in nature, so what you understand from this need not necessarily mean the same thing literally. This is just a short piece, about 2.5k words.

Note: Do take notice of the location and date.

Spoiler for Transition, Part One—Trinity:
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True, true, and they're the most yummy kinds, no doubt.


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You made a word count of my Chapters?
Microsoft Word is your best friend

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In any case, I was wondering whether I should be changing the formating for my story a bit. If I'm not mistaken, reading through a block of superdense text is going to be very exhausting (I re-read Chapter Four, the longest, and it was slightly distracting with too many text, even if the flow was there).

How about a change, where I split them into smaller parts (using more spoiler tags, that is)? Or is the current reading form all right for all?
While we don't quite mind the length, as the stories themselves are engrossing, I guess it would be a much easier read to cut the chapters up into smaller pieces for much easier digestion

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Well, I had been doing something, in any case, and this one will serve as an intermediary chapter before we go into Chapter Six for real. Bear in mind that it is extremely metaphorical in nature, so what you understand from this need not necessarily mean the same thing literally. This is just a short piece, about 2.5k words.

Note: Do take notice of the location and date.

Spoiler for Transition, Part One—Trinity:
The origin of the Jewel of the Stars? Going by your warning of metaphors, it's kinda hard to make out the actual events, although I can only guess this is Leona's worst birthday ever
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Creator-Kun is back from the Takamachi Dojo, after Momoko did something to him

Saint X: What happened to you?

Creator-Kun: Something about renewal of contract of non-disclosure...

*Creator-Kun faints*

Saint X: that's what you get for trying to do spoilers too much...

On the other hand...

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No names, but as of promotion he's Police Chief Superintendent for the Philippine National Police Special Action Force.

(Note to fellow countrymen: Yes, THAT Special Action Force.)
USO DA!!!

*Hides all the crack and seeming haxx weapons and attacks (not to mention T3H TRAP he plans to unleash) he has made so far*

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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh?!?!?!?!

That's some slick and nasty scissor use there
THAT ACTION kinda signifies my need to tear backlog...

FSZ can relate to that...

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Very Very Close, but still didn't get it.

Though Elhazard had Undines?!?!?!
Female Taxi drivers (in their seemingly beautiful rides,) are called Undines...

Though true Undines, like Alicia work in the waterways, like in the canals of Neo-Venetzia The Grand City of Aquea.

She also wears black and has a little Fate-chan dollie as well...

*runs*

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How far are we talking about here?
10 miles over high noon dessert on a good day, can stretch to about 30 if the shooter is a crackshot or a good artillery man with 5 min-heads up on the psysweep...

*runs*

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...



To think TMoHS hasn't even aired here
Yeah...

*Tosses HeroTV forums a cookie*

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Now that a couple of people point this out to me, she does look like Tesla more... although the clip's on the wrong side. As Aaron said, I intended her to be Subaru with the similar outfit and all

Spoiler for As for her source:
Yes... it does look like her

Saint X plots an chapter of Lost with Subaru in that hairstyle for a few days to be able to hide in a town controlled by the 'Chaos Choir'

Wait...




That's Aika?!!

or a different Aika?

===

*Tosses an attack into the ring*

This is only for certain types of OCs only! gimme a ring if anyone is interested, or else Yui gets this one...

Spoiler for For Valkyries ONLY:
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Creator-Kun is back from the Takamachi Dojo, after Momoko did something to him

Saint X: What happened to you?

Creator-Kun: Something about renewal of contract of non-disclosure...

*Creator-Kun faints*

Saint X: that's what you get for trying to do spoilers too much...

On the other hand...


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USO DA!!!

*Hides all the crack and seeming haxx weapons and attacks (not to mention T3H TRAP he plans to unleash) he has made so far*


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THAT ACTION kinda signifies my need to tear backlog...

FSZ can relate to that...
I'd prefer a good Gravity Shockwave Generating G-Tool to do the job

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Female Taxi drivers (in their seemingly beautiful rides,) are called Undines...

Though true Undines, like Alicia work in the waterways, like in the canals of Neo-Venetzia The Grand City of Aquea.

She also wears black and has a little Fate-chan dollie as well...

*runs*


I just suddenly realized that there's Alicia T and Alicia F now... though that was probably your intention

But I cannot imagine taxi drivers being called "Undines"

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10 miles over high noon dessert on a good day, can stretch to about 30 if the shooter is a crackshot or a good artillery man with 5 min-heads up on the psysweep...

*runs*


Now THAT's Reach

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Wait...




That's Aika?!!

or a different Aika?
Haven't seen NATURAL yet have we?

Let's just say, Aika went through a bad hair day... but you'll have to see it for yourself
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What? This is purely AlternateS business... right, Miss Momoko?

An evil aura appears around Mrs. Takamachi.

yup, only the mother of the white devil can be much worse, especially if she's the original...


Creator-Kun is once again dragged out by Momoko Takamachi

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lol

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I'd prefer a good Gravity Shockwave Generating G-Tool to do the job
NO U!

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I just suddenly realized that there's Alicia T and Alicia F now... though that was probably your intention

But I cannot imagine taxi drivers being called "Undines"
Adult!Alicia is living in Elhazard (which is a also a fancy name for "Heaven"), earning a living being a high-class Undine in Aquea, and a Transporter and Model in some places... almost being the 180 of Fate.

A Pervy version of Fate?

She also has a device with Bard-speak programmed into it.

as for the nomenclature, well it rubbed off from the original Undine job- being the operative word for a female taxi driver in EH, since gondolas are also taxis.

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Now THAT's Reach
Luckily there are only 5 of them in existence in the GDI or make it the multiverse at any given time. One of them is being used against W.O.R.M.S. though

*Runs from the Sky Girls and the Squadron of Vic Vipers...*

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Haven't seen NATURAL yet have we?

Let's just say, Aika went through a bad hair day... but you'll have to see it for yourself
I'm only at EP1 of ANIMATION, since i'm still processing Sky Girls... and awaiting CLANNAD to re-air this saturday.
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Saint X could only imagine what his fictional XRT-17 Electromagnetic Ballistic Rail Rifle could do...

It's a portable two-man howitzer-ish rifle that can be used to snipe from ranges too far for normal anti-material rifles can manage
...sweet Guiness, overkill much?
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Well in my ficverse, those two as well as the girl holding the Kitsune Kuon are actually Ma-

Momoko Takamachi suddenly drags Creator-Kun out, leaving X behind



Though i don't pit Yuuno as a Delta Force-ish kind of guy, I feel that he's more MITHRIL-ish
Aha. *nodnod*

Well, Mithril and Delta share some similarities. Mithril appears to be based off the SAS model: PRT has six units, each one specializing in a particular type of warfare: air assault, amphibious warfare, espionage, assault, communications, and building breaching and assault. Soldiers rotate within the six teams to learn the methods and skills of each team. SAS does something similar: there's a base set of skills and each man specialises in one, while being proficient in the others. Delta's specialty is air assault, breaching, and assault, it would seem. Gray Fox/Centra Spike/Torn Victor/Deep Throat/god knows what else focuses on communications.


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The Scrin? The Magog? The Abyss? The Jam? The Aliens from AVP (and just about every movie of the "Alien" franchise)? And Especially, THE ANTISPIRALS?!!
If the antispirals come, we're fucked. Ditto the Jam - it's not like TSAB has Yukikaze...

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Well yeah... thats some crack xD
Nice crack!

And as I learned from Persona 3: Badass comes after fearless. xD
Thanks for the approval! *grins* I'm glad you liked it. I may or may not proceeed furhter with this; the thought of Yuuno being in the OFM was just a lol thing. By day, Professor Yuuno Scrya, Infinity Library Head Librarian and archeologist. By night, Alpha 12... black ops Delta Force mage...

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Ok... I finally managed to come out of my holiday laziness... you can expect something of my writing soon ^-^
And If someone is masochistic enough to check my grammar... please tell me
Well, I suppose I could try. It's the least I can do, after you helped me with my translation issues. ^^

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Far from it. But the thought if seeing Nanoha being scary even without her powers...

I need to see the Toraha OVA now...
the Toraha ova is actually quite sucky, and Triad fucked up one part of the translation (there's someone who in their translation is saying she wants to test out the new ammo that's just arrived... WHEN SHE'S HOLDING A BRAND NEW BODY ARMOR VEST), but 12-year-old Nanoha is lol in her smiling scariness.
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You are most welcome brotha!
Indeed, I thank you! And as a mark of my gratitude...

...what are Smith and Wesson doing during the Cradle event? Because in Disrupted Tangent, which starts with the press conference attack and proceeds to end several years later, Franz is struck by the hot blood of S&W and recruits them into the OFM, crying manly tears. At least, that's what I want to do... <.<


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No names, but as of promotion he's Police Chief Superintendent for the Philippine National Police Special Action Force.

(Note to fellow countrymen: Yes, THAT Special Action Force.)
Sweet jesus. Looks like you've just become the OC thread's main source of info for SWAT tactics! ^^;; Congrats to your dad on his promotion!


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Depends on what the 25mm's are capable of
Well.... probably 2-4 times, maybe even 5 or 6 times stronger than Nanoha's cartridges....

Franz can actually use cartridges that are more powerful that normal in Cortana, since it's a bolt action; on the other hand, his body can't take the strain of prolonged use, so he almost never uses his special cartridges...


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Crack? This should be Canon!!!!!! Liked the bits with Franz, and most especially Naomi, who despite her non-appearance still manages MOST AWESOME WIN, good to see how far they've progressed

But Psycho still continues to be... Psycho?
*grins* Well, at some point, Franz would have to stop the hot blood, especially since he and Naomi have, as you said, progressed. And you're the first one to pick up on that too...

Yeah, Psycho is still Psycho.
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Crack, CRACK, SENTAI CRACK BUSTAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!



Hyapyaku Hyakuju
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Zenryoku Shouchou

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Zenryoku Shouchou

Ei! Ei! EI!

FIYAAAAAAA!!!! SHOKKU BOMBAAAAAAAA!!!!!


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It's a bit sad what carck I can come up with:
Spoiler for On call:
Ahh... the price to pay to be badass...

Nice one. Though Psycho's really freaky...

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Thanks! ^_^ much thanks to Lowe who helped refine it...

Right, everyone, this is it. FINAL VERSION! No more correcting! It shall be, now and evermore!



I am the primer of my cartridge.
Steel is my jacket, and mana is my bullet.
I have primed over a thousand cartridges.
Unknown to jamming, nor known to misfire.
Have withstood pain to load many Devices.
Yet, these hands will never know peace.
So as I load,
Unlimited Cartridge Works.

NICE!
This guy'll make a fortune when cartridge-devices go mass-production!

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Good effort! Just a few typos, but it seems to gel quite well, though the Japanese is slightly jarring - probaly because I've just finished Black Hawk Down for the third time. Agito's reaction to Aurion is lol, as is stalker Accous. ^^
Thanks! I used the Japanese inserts to make it feel more Nanoha-ish in my point of view...

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And Yuunoha lives on! Ganbatte, Yuuno!
Might as well push for it. Their already 21 and still no progress? Not on my watch!

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Nice setup and scene with Tesla and Aurion, and GREAT LOL atAurionxHayate scenes ^__^


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Hmm.... if Aurion is now more human, does that mean he'll be more accepting of Erick's manly challenges and rematches? Does the fire of youth burn once more in Aurion, or just in Erick?
Aurion:I'm- *dodge* too old- *dodges even more* for this! *ducks*



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So far, looks good. Remember, the offer still stands; if you ever need the OFM, they'll be there.
I might actually have them go with handling a platoon of enemies in their own area during the final battle. It's large-scale after all. Though would you mind if I had you and Kagerou handle those parts? I'm not too famliar with more technical firearms terms. I'd give a good description of the enemies, anyway. And I'll make sure to have Aurion mention the OFM in the main story.

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Originally Posted by Kha View Post
Darn wish I got time to read this... I'll review it once I can, I promise! Glad you got started! Sorry for missing out on all the background to GenerationS.
Don't worry. Take your time.

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Err... Do you guys have any collective library of all the stories told in this thread?
Because browsing through 900+ pages of posts in search of bits and pieces isn't exactly my idea of a fun read...

edit: of course, if i had just looked at the very beginning of the thread...
... brb in a couple of months when i actually finish reading all of this
You don't have to read them all... Welcome!

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First all, Pardon my insertion of backlog snippers hehe
Okay. I guess...

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Remember to add your charas in AltS II as well... well i have Lost with Aurion already- doing a bit of field work though, with Alma...
WANT!

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Saint X remembers something that does not really compute

Lowe, Aaron, naalala nyo pa ba yung mga dancing inmates? Narinig ko na sinayaw daw nila yung... *transmission cut*
HOLY SHI-!



Gotta see that!

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@ the two:

Who wants to have "Nibelung Valesti"?

*runs*


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Ah that was great!
Very fun to read!

There wasn't too much OOCness... and even if, I'm not someone who would complain to much about something like that. ^^
Thanks! That's good to know!

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Welcome back Aaron, we missed you. Here's a little welcome back present, to stay in the Tesla-vibe:
Just in time! Thanks!

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Spoiler for The Knight and the Adjudant:



Tesla finally experiences the springtime of youth!
Nice interactions all around. With Vita exploiting Tesla's new weakness quite well.
Tesla's antics and lightweightness were !

This is an area where the creator of the OC rules. I couldn't replicate this type of characterization if I tried since I didn't create Tesla. Naturally, you know her best. It's nice to see this side of Tesla!

Great work!

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Heck no I don't mind. Especially since you can nail down Tesla perfectly, its a joy reading more about her from other writers.
Only her playfully competitive, analytical and toughie cute side for now. I'll try doing more later.

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Chrono/Acous interaction was nice to read, and well done too. Hayate trying to manipulate Vivio to embarras Nanoha and Yuuno was Aurion/Tesla interactions were brilliant! I may be biased, but I loved that part the most, especially when Tesla went analysis mode, I could just hear her talking with Yukana's C.C. voice. And then Hayate came by (causing a brilliant reaction with Aurion ) with a nice touchy moment.
Thanks a lot! I actually rewatched Code Geass for a better feel on Yukana's C.C. voice. It was for getting out a better portrayal of Tesla's analysis mode. And what can I say, the pick of voice fits perfectly!

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I don't think Keroko is possible. After the Jail incident, Keroko is under medical orders not to use any magic whatsoever for at least three months (Phanan threatened to seal them up if she even so much as levitated ). In fact, she is too physically injured to do much anyway, and is in a lot of pain if she moves too much. After being cleared, she still has to take it easy for several months. She's fit enough to return to normal duty by the time of the 'final mock battle' at the end of StrikerS (which, mind you, is a good seven months after the battle with Jail).

I'm still tubbing over what kind of permanent damage she would get from this... But it's going to be something on the same level as Nanoha's, so if you're concerned about her injuries, then Keroko is out of the question too.
OUCH! I guess it's Fate, then...

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On the subject of Artherion, I recently retconned a little tidbit about his past. Formerly he was a device created by Yuuno. I thnk we've established by now that there is no way to create an intelligent device out of scratch in seconds without propper resources, so I used the theory that was once mentioned as the reason Yuuno had Raising Heart. Basically, Artherion is an old Device excavated by Yuuno's tribe.
Sounds better.

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Suffering and trying to adapt to working life. +_+
Good luck! Gambatte!

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Whee! Bluecheesium is back! This is really nice. The flow is there, and the interactions is just how we know you do it. Love the added dimension to Acous' personality. Stalker! Tesla's antics were fun to read, and it seems Keroko-kun has given the thumbs up as well so it all good. And oh what's this? Vivio is a genius? Yuunoha FTW! (I can so see the people at the image thread frothing at the mouth if they ever read this piece.)
Thanks! And yes, Vivio is very smart for her age. Since she is a Project F Clone of the Seiou after all. It's been shown in canon.

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Nice one Aaron, you've got me motivated to get on with my suspended projects. Just what we need to kickstart this thread again. Bluecheesium banzai!
Glad to be of help!

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Again, the interactions. Simply love it. I believe we are starting to read a lot more pieces with really good Tesla related interactions, and its fleshing her out really nicely. (Why is it Aaron is writing more Tesla than Keroko? )
Thakns! Interactions are my forte, it seems. And I'm much more at home in characterizing Tesla compared to Keroko. Her C.C.-esque sides that are very direct are a joy to write out.

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I feel you Aaron. As I've always said, the people who wrote StrikerS really should be shot in the head, with a gun powerful enough to blow their stupid brains away. Nothing wrong with the interactions IMO.

About including one more ace, it seems your best bet now will be Fate. Unless you wanna consider some other OCs like Kha or Leona. Speaking of which, PF! Where are you!!!!??


I'll be using Fate.

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Thanks! *pins badge on shirt*



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So far, mine too. Though I would say the Chrono and Acous interaction was pretty fun to read too. It shows their individual quirks. Also, want more Yuunoha!!! *spies a few more dead bodies still spasming and frothing at the mouth in the image thread*
It came out unexpectedly natural to me. Acous was also fun to use.
And about the Yuunoha, I'll be hard-pressed to do anything more since I'm focusing on the main characters of this story more. Maybe someone can pick up my slack and write a Nanoha+Yuuno+Vivio in the park sub-fic.

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Good! Very good! Almost TOO good!

Love the ChronoVerossa interactions... Acous reminds me of Irie from Higurashi...the melodramatist.

AND YUUNOHA LIVES AGAIN!!!
It's rare to get a 'very good' reaction from Reiji. Yosh!
Thanks.

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Spoiler for A Few Quick Notes For You Re: the 82nd:
I'll see what I can do. But for now, I intend to use more real-type action here. So as it is, inserting more CC's and the OFM are easier.

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No names, but as of promotion he's Police Chief Superintendent for the Philippine National Police Special Action Force.

(Note to fellow countrymen: Yes, THAT Special Action Force.)
WOW!!!

Congratulations to your dad again! I'm sure he deserves it!

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And one point goes to Aaron Though you're missing the other half of my intent... although I haven't given enough hints anyway
I haven't watched Aria yet, so...

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So... where are those ima-

*dodges sniper fire*
Who knows?

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You made a word count of my Chapters?
Microsoft Word has word-count.

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In any case, I was wondering whether I should be changing the formating for my story a bit. If I'm not mistaken, reading through a block of superdense text is going to be very exhausting (I re-read Chapter Four, the longest, and it was slightly distracting with too many text, even if the flow was there).

How about a change, where I split them into smaller parts (using more spoiler tags, that is)? Or is the current reading form all right for all?
Myself, I have no problem. But I guess it is easier to read spoiler tag breaks instead of ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ones.

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Welcome back, buddy! You've been missed (and partly so, since I can't do some stuff without you around; I'll keep you posted some time)!
I've been very eager to hear more about GuardianS as well. Thanks!

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I'll tackle your delicious-looking appetizer of a Bluecheesium for this year later, the computer at the university here is not conducive for massive reading.
Take your time.

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I'm quite alive and around, just not posting. I'm trying to condense a huge wall of raw data into some readable form for my thesis as well as tinkering with some ideas that require a good amount of thinking and linking. Basically, I'm trying to put a civilization and society to life. In any case, the base ideas are already there, now comes the part to integrate it into the story. :3
Gotta be tough...

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Well, I had been doing something, in any case, and this one will serve as an intermediary chapter before we go into Chapter Six for real. Bear in mind that it is extremely metaphorical in nature, so what you understand from this need not necessarily mean the same thing literally. This is just a short piece, about 2.5k words.

Note: Do take notice of the location and date.

Spoiler for Transition, Part One—Trinity:


I truly envy your way with words! This is simply superb!

At first, one might think that the character here is Leona. But I have a gut feeling that she's a different person. She's the Princess, that much is seemingly certain.
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