2003-11-18, 23:04 | Link #1 |
Back From The Dead?
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Canada
Age: 34
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FinalDusk: ¿Plot?
Some of you might remember a game I was creating a while back called
FinalDusk. Anyways, I finally made a semi-version of a plot. Spoilers are there for no reason... [it spoils the game, but oh well ^^"] still some plot holes, but here it goes. [just a quick version, write the full one later] Spoiler:
*sigh* beta version, will change tommorrow, don;t have much time to type, sry ^^" Last edited by ChibiDusk; 2003-11-18 at 23:27. |
2003-11-18, 23:42 | Link #4 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 2003
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Cant judge, you got some big plot hole.
Af for now if I did wanted to judge, id say it got some elements that are overdo in the amateur rpg world (hell even in anime). Its a pretty weird combination of many major plot twist that people could figure out way before it happens wich doesnt make a good plot twist. Its also a big combination of primary rpg element with close to none secondary stuff ( the girl having the tatoo, the end of the world, the guy she loves being the key, etc..) wich can actually make a good story. So in my humble opinion once you fill some more gap it could produce a really good story, or you could mess up and turn out with something really bad. |
2003-11-19, 22:59 | Link #8 |
Afflicted by the vanities
Fansubber
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Fish-shape Paumanok
Age: 36
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Spoiler:
This is a cliche and you are already boring yourself typing it... when you come up with something that you can type without "etc., etc., etc.", despite it being a rough draft, that will be a good plotline.
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