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Old 2008-05-03, 00:11   Link #8901
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HA! JOKES ON YOU. I ATE THEM ALL AND I KICKED YOU INTO A PIT OF STARFISHES. YOU CAN'T EAT THOSE NOW CAN YOU!? YEAH THOUGHT SO.


Okay we need to get back on topic, Shaoron if you want to continue, PM plox.


But anyway, any suggestions for Otouto?
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Old 2008-05-03, 00:27   Link #8902
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still working on endless eight...
dkellis isn't updating his archive
and it's the dangos keeping me going (don't have dangos here where i live.. but "dango daikazuko" does its job)
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Old 2008-05-03, 00:31   Link #8903
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that's one scary obasan... <_<
Is that approval or disapproval ...?

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It's not bad at all, but I'm just wondering is it really necessary to make the old woman so perverted? I mean, I don't think the original old guy was that perverted...I take it that it's for comedic purposes, right? Well... it gives off a good idea, but it seems like you're trying too hard.
I can't seem to win with you, can I ...?

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yes.. it's fer t3h lulz.
Ahem. Comedic purposes, yes, but also to break through the apparent deadlock since 'no one was willing to write the part of a crusty, horny old lady', or so I recall reading. Now this is out there, dkellis or one of the other recognised authors can at least edit it and we can move on.
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Old 2008-05-03, 01:03   Link #8904
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I did a bit of editing because I was bored. If anyone disapproves of it - just go and edit some more!

Spoiler for Endless Eight part 1:


Spoiler for Endless Eight part 2:


Spoiler for Endless Eight part 3:

Last edited by Aebliss; 2008-05-03 at 02:41.
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Old 2008-05-03, 01:05   Link #8905
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Maybe Kyon and Haruhi have a battle on which sex is harder to be, and then the next day. BAM.

On the side note: I SAW FUKO. YET I RECEIVED NO STARFISH. WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS?
That's workable thx. Now I need to squeeze my brain to make up how it ends..

Side note: Starfishes will come later.
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Old 2008-05-03, 01:31   Link #8906
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Exactly, a Starfish can last forever because you don't eat it. A dango can last 2 seconds after I buy them.
And if you eat a limb, it grows back!

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HA! JOKES ON YOU. I ATE THEM ALL AND I KICKED YOU INTO A PIT OF STARFISHES. YOU CAN'T EAT THOSE NOW CAN YOU!? YEAH THOUGHT SO.


Okay we need to get back on topic, Shaoron if you want to continue, PM plox.


But anyway, any suggestions for Otouto?
Actually adopted, and he and Kyonko realize that they're in love with each other, resulting in H-scene. Haruki walks in, resulting in BAD END.
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Old 2008-05-03, 02:00   Link #8907
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... You are bad people. -_- Really bad.
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Old 2008-05-03, 02:23   Link #8908
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... You are bad people. -_- Really bad.
Where's the Tanchou? We NEED the facepalm!
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Old 2008-05-03, 02:33   Link #8909
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Where's the Tanchou? We NEED the facepalm!
More like a smack to the back of someone's head ...
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Old 2008-05-03, 03:38   Link #8910
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Where's the Tanchou? We NEED the facepalm!
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More like a smack to the back of someone's head ...
We need the industrial strength facepalm!



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Old 2008-05-03, 04:29   Link #8911
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“Therefore, let’s do it again. Yuki, this time I am not going to lose to you!”

Has anyone ever taught you that you can't use "therefore," a conjunction, in this usage? Just what is this absurdity? You’re just being a sore loser who's trying to win at least once in overtime.
Would that actually work in the Japanese language? I mean, there's no actual Japanese translation, but this is in Japan.. Kind of a break of reality there.

Also, 9000 is coming up soon!
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Old 2008-05-03, 04:33   Link #8912
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We need the industrial strength facepalm!

*snip*

Thanks. I'll make sure this will be put into good use...
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Old 2008-05-03, 05:39   Link #8913
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First person to shop beanbrew's avatar into a post-chop picture of Maka's father from Soul Eater wins. And I want good-quality, not just a rotated GIF file pasted on top of his head.....



As for the text thats been posted since the last time, I did see a number of places which had non-converted pieces... best example
Spoiler:


But overall, it read through fairly good. Nice job.
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Old 2008-05-03, 06:31   Link #8914
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As for the text thats been posted since the last time, I did see a number of places which had non-converted pieces... best example
Spoiler:


But overall, it read through fairly good. Nice job.
I wonder whether you noticed my edits as well ...?
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Old 2008-05-03, 07:58   Link #8915
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I wonder whether you noticed my edits as well ...?
errr, my brain didnt feel like re-reading the pieces, so I skipped over them... I should have mentioned that... Im sure you repaired those small mistakes...
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Old 2008-05-03, 10:15   Link #8916
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errr, my brain didnt feel like re-reading the pieces, so I skipped over them... I should have mentioned that... Im sure you repaired those small mistakes...
Heh ... I do hope so. I also added some material that seemed to have found favor before, and I'd appreciate feedback.
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Old 2008-05-03, 12:36   Link #8917
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I can't seem to win with you, can I ...?
I'm picky.
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Old 2008-05-03, 14:19   Link #8918
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I'm picky.
Well, that's fine. I just wish you expressed yourself with a smidgeon more nuance.
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Old 2008-05-03, 16:16   Link #8919
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Alrighty, here's a stab I took at it.

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Comments welcomed.
Nice, that will help.

I'm dead tired right now though. Dungeons and Dragons for 12 hours will do that you.

Edit: Dear god, no new posts all day? What the balls?

Aebliss, I used your edit in this latest. It was damned helpful, thanks.

Spoiler for Chapter 6, Part 2:


More later, probably tomorrow.

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Old 2008-05-04, 00:38   Link #8920
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Nice, that will help.

I'm dead tired right now though. Dungeons and Dragons for 12 hours will do that you.

Edit: Dear god, no new posts all day? What the balls?

Aebliss, I used your edit in this latest. It was damned helpful, thanks.

Spoiler for Chapter 6, Part 2:


More later, probably tomorrow.
Niiiice. Kyon in full-on snark mode, plus some moments of emotional vulnerability. Glad to have been of help.
I noticed a few small blemishes, which I'll edit in the quoted text if you don't mind.
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