Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@Blitz 1/2- Thanks! I'm counting on you for help in the GrimDark segments

ZeroXSEED- All the heroes have a connection to phantom task

Ichika- Madoka is his connection.

Kyuukai- They have a personal vendetta since he's stopped some of their operations before. Some of them have a crush on him though

Irish-

Spoiler:

His mom and siblings are working for phantom task!

HOW UNEXPECTED, we should stop posting it here, too much spoileriffic information already!

ZeroXSEED out!

[Eratas123]

I think it adds dramatic irony, don't you? I told you Irish's story is cynical

[ZeroXSEED]

I mean we opened too much of surprising future events... we shall keep the surprise from readers

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

I mean we opened too much of surprising future events... we shall keep the surprise from readers

Unless the readers come and read animesuki before ff.net...

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Unless the readers come and read animesuki before ff.net...

Umm....

(That would be my fault for promoting animesuki I.S. forum...)

speaking of which, here's the mock illustration, I'll shop it later.

Spoiler for WHOPPING SIZE:

It's not Ichika that is short, Joshua is whopping 190 cm!

He'll pilot Vervietta (aka Vic Viper, Viper-chan, Viper Pieter etc.), A transforming I.S like Powered Exoskeleton using an obsolete system found in I.S. prototype (the one before White Knight)

Spoiler for Size:

[Eratas123]

Love Charles and Cecilia in the background

I've started writing chapter 4. If I have no interruptions it should be done in a day or two

Main antagonist list is as follows:

Spoiler:

Ichika - Madoka(Age 15: Reason is pretty obvious)

Kyuukai- Reaper (Age unknown: OC terrorist I found on the animesuki list. Cybernetically enhanced humam being who's destroyed hundreds of IS facilites and killed multiple civilians along the way.)

Irish- Asuka and Ryoko (Age 18: PT IS pilots who have been tasked with stopping Irish and Tatenashi, They're actually his older sisters but neither of them knows this.)

ZeroXSEED and Blitz 1/2-Any changes or suggestions?

[ZeroXSEED]

Getting a massive flak for chapter 8 from FanDumb due to meager/irrational reason (Guy!Char, getting more spotlight on Madoka, Ichika punching Laura in the face etc.) and only two person reviewed properly (and one was Blitz).

Spoiler for Lol for retribution:

My reply? I sent them an e-mail...with a very special, Viral archive attached...
By the time they extract it...good bye NTLDR

(The toll must be around 3-4 computer by now)

[Eratas123]

Disproportionate retribution much? Sending a virus seems a bit overboard for negative reviews

[DarkJak2050]

Okay, there's a possibilty that Ch. 2 of Project Silverback will be up this weekend. But with how things are at my end, I don't know...

For Ch. 2, it will show some of Alpha Squad's capabilities. And maybe, maybe... they'll find out what's on the encrypted disc they got from Magnus.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Disproportionate retribution much? Sending a virus seems a bit overboard for negative reviews

Well, they DON'T even post a review, they P.M. me with this:

Spoiler for NSFW:

"Basement dweller" "Fatty Nerd" "Your dad is gay" "You mum is a whore" "Stop writing already" "Charlotte is a girl! DIE!" etc. etc.

I pick the 4 message that is most obscene and the rest is history, my message: "You can insult me, you cnanot insult my parents"

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Well, they DON'T even post a review, they P.M. me with this:

Spoiler for NSFW:

"Basement dweller" "Your dad is gay" "You mum is a whore" "Stop writing, plagiarizer" "IchiChar 4evar" etc. etc.

I pick the 4 message that is most obscene and the rest is history, my message: "Do not mess with nerds"

Well, reading that brings me to this quote:

"They can eat shit and die for all I care."
-Marcus Fenix (Gears of War 2)

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Well, they DON'T even post a review, they P.M. me with this:

Spoiler for NSFW:

"Basement dweller" "Fatty Nerd" "Your dad is gay" "You mum is a whore" "Stop writing already" "Charlotte is a girl! DIE!" etc. etc.

I pick the 4 message that is most obscene and the rest is history, my message: "You can insult me, you cnanot insult my parents"

I stand corrected They deserve it, no one insults the parents and gets away with it.

Can you please give me your advice for the antagonist list I posted earlier? I need to know if it's okay or if it's too cliche and maybe you can suggest any changes I can do?

[DarkJak2050]

Dang...

I just finished reading Stratospear's Fanfic (Infinite Stratos: Athéna Bouclier). I don't know if I should continue with Project Silverback when I finish Ch. 2.

Just saying guys.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I stand corrected They deserve it, no one insults the parents and gets away with it.

Can you please give me your advice for the antagonist list I posted earlier? I need to know if it's okay or if it's too cliche and maybe you can suggest any changes I can do?

Not cliche enough, I said. We felt it Cliche because we're tropers, we have 6th sense: sensing plot elements.

Falcolobo gawked in surprise when I suggest him a scenario and my suggestion covered 80% of chapter 3. He asked if I'm an esper, I said "I am a troper"

@ Jak: why? Are you afraid/hate StratoSpear's fanfic?

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Not cliche enough, I said. We felt it Cliche because we're tropers, we have 6th sense: sensing plot elements.

Falcolobo gawked in surprise when I suggest him a scenario and my suggestion covered 80% of chapter 3. He asked if I'm an esper, I said "I am a troper"

@ Jak: why? Are you afraid/hate StratoSpear's fanfic?

It's not that I'm afraid/hate of StratoSpear's Fanfic. In fact, I find it interesting to read.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

It's not that I'm afraid/hate of StratoSpear's Fanfic. In fact, I find it interesting to read.

You mean similar plot elements or something like that?

[Eratas123]

@ DarkJak-Don't stop your fic, mine started out as a EthernalRain's fic except I replaced soldier with terrorist but thanks to the help of this forum it's turned into a deconstructor fleet

@ ZeroXSEED- Any changes you can suggest for the antagonist list? I'm afraid putting Reaper and Irish's *BEEP* as antagonists may cause sue flags to start popping up, especially since reaper's described as having both plot armor AND Hax armor

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

You mean similar plot elements or something like that?

You're just going to have to wait as Project Silverback goes on, man. If I tell you now, there's going to be a strong possibility that it'll be a huge giveaway.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ DarkJak-Don't stop your fic, mine started out as a EthernalRain's fic except I replaced soldier with terrorist but thanks to the help of this forum it's turned into a deconstructor fleet

@ ZeroXSEED- Any changes you can suggest for the antagonist list? I'm afraid putting Reaper and Irish's *BEEP* as antagonists may cause sue flags to start popping up, especially since reaper's described as having both plot armor AND Hax armor

@ Eratas
For a Villain, having Hax armor would be fine (That's why protagonist' effort is shown), plot armor on the other hand...just be careful.

@Jak
There's no reason for pulling the fic unless you felt unsatisfied by the result (whether it's the fic or the response). It's what happened with my fic Warhammer 40K Trouble.

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@ Eratas
For a Villain, having Hax armor would be fine (That's why protagonist' effort is shown), plot armor on the other hand...just be careful.

@Jak
There's no reason for pulling the fic unless you felt unsatisfied by the result (whether it's the fic or the response). It's what happened with my fic Warhammer 40K Trouble.

Well, one thing that's kinda holding me back is the lack of reviews. I know there's 8, but I consider it 7 because one of them is a "double post".