2020-10-14, 20:48 | Link #1028 |
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She lead a squad of Knights to save a village from some monsters, but there were too many monsters, and they were surrounded. Kian went after her together with his mercenary group, Fiona, Sariel, Nero and Kai(The latter two, who joined them by coincidence) And helped her. By the way, there were still some villagers alive on the place, so Charlotte salved them.
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2020-10-15, 11:11 | Link #1030 | |
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It's not fake, They are fiancees and one of the motives for Nero to become a little bitch and try to kidnap Charlotte was this. Well, we still don't know where this will end. And yes, the cursed weapons can take human form. At least Hitsugi can by using Kurono's pseudo water element. Machete-senpai can show a human form, but she's like that evil spirit of the movie "Grudge". |
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2020-10-17, 05:25 | Link #1031 |
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Well caught up to this after putting it off for 2 and half-ish years. Glad I stopped a couple arcs before the amnesia stuff. At least it was progressive amnesia and Kurono returned to his roots to improve his magic basics instead just his melee skills.
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2020-10-17, 05:56 | Link #1032 | |
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Could it be that Iris was Haruto's sister |
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2020-10-17, 13:27 | Link #1033 |
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Nah it's Souma Yuuto. I'm pretty sure he used to be called Souma instead of Haruto in Kuro no Maou, with the spelling differing from Jujutsushi's 蒼真 but the pronunciation being the same. Might have been 蒼馬?
Could also be that his last name is somewhere else in the story and I just can't find it, and the author didn't actually change it. |
2020-10-25, 08:10 | Link #1036 | |
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The biggest problem is the pacing. If the autor wrote at double speed for example, we'd already have read these developments a few years ago... And now the story would be several arcs ahead...
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2020-10-25, 15:00 | Link #1037 |
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Yeah I'd say pacing is its biggest weakness as a novel. It's not bad pacing per se, it's just when you have this long of a story you really don't want to spend your once a week chapter on filler stuff, like going out shopping or whatnot. It doesn't happen that often with this one, but it does happen. In that sense, his other work Jujutsushi has been really good, with the only filler-ish portion being the school tower arc.
Otherwise the plot does steadily progress, making allies and building foundations for future events with plenty of foreshadowing. It's a lot better than many other novels' pacing. Like Wiseman's Pupil will spend a month of updates on pointless furniture shopping or card games, among other things. Dendrogram has LONG side stories out the ass. Spoiler for :
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gods, harem, human experimentation, yandere, yandere on parade |
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