Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Keroko]

Why would she? If she's the one who provides the egg, and Nanoha the one who caries the child, then there is no reason for her to be jealous.

Besides, according to Satashi, both the girls asked Yuuno, so they don't mind at all.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Why would she? If she's the one who provides the egg, and Nanoha the one who caries the child, then there is no reason for her to be jealous.

Besides, according to Satashi, both the girls asked Yuuno, so they don't mind at all.

I agree.


*looks around*

I guess I should post something else too.

I think some people are really missing just how strong the bonds between parent and child are. It's been said before but it's a very important important point. The image of adopted and sperm doner children always looking for their "real" parent(s) is in fact a dramatization because happy adopted children wouldn't make a good story. While it's true there are cases, these are the exceptions not the rules.

The truth is is the child [Vivio... I mean *shifty eyes*] as long as it's raised with Nanoha and Fate as central parent figures really shouldn't have that many problems with Yuuno (yeah there'd be some questions and confusion later on but as a whole it wouldn't consume their lives.) It also should be noted that no matter what Yuuno will end up as one of Vivio's central male role models (It'll be like him... and Zafira... and Zafira really is a dog in SbtB (actually to be fair I can't really remember if Zafira is even in SbtB ^^; but I'm sure he's a dog)


(On a different note I can't think of it as Nanoha cheating on Fate with Yuuno. Not because I'm against Yunoha (I like it fine (I'm not a shipper but I'm cool with it) though I think it needs new name -_-') but because in SbtB Yuuno was like her brother so by the cheating logic it'd be like Nanoha having.......with her brother. *shudeer* squicky squicky squicky. Not that I'm against them using Yuuno I just can't... imagine... brain malfunctioning.

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Why would she? If she's the one who provides the egg, and Nanoha the one who caries the child, then there is no reason for her to be jealous.

Besides, according to Satashi, both the girls asked Yuuno, so they don't mind at all.

Nanoha wouldnt be able to carry an egg from Fate, Nanoha,s immune system would identify the egg, zygote by this stage, as foreign and kill it in the womb.

[Keroko]

Hmm, so much for that idea then.

Darn, and it was the perfect solution too.

[Mae]

Uhm, I don't think the body would reject the egg. Ever heard of surrogacy? If a woman is having difficulties carrying her own child, she can use another woman to carry her embryo... It's been done many times before, so the whole Fate's egg and Yuuno's sperm put into Nanoha's womb would work.

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Mae

Uhm, I don't think the body would reject the egg. Ever heard of surrogacy? If a woman is having difficulties carrying her own child, she can use another woman to carry her embryo... It's been done many times before, so the whole Fate's egg and Yuuno's sperm put into Nanoha's womb would work.

Oops, I completely forgot about that, thanks for telling me. Sorry Keroko my mistake.

In this case I'm completely for the idea of it being Fate's egg carried by Nanoha, but I still think it should be an anomous donor.

Though I would like to point out that an overly powerful immune system is behind some cases of infertility.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Mae

Uhm, I don't think the body would reject the egg. Ever heard of surrogacy? If a woman is having difficulties carrying her own child, she can use another woman to carry her embryo... It's been done many times before, so the whole Fate's egg and Yuuno's sperm put into Nanoha's womb would work.

Quote true story. They even did it in "FRIENDS", which is where the idea came from.

What it boils down to from the debates the last......two pages...... is people think Vivio may see Yuuno as her father and not Fate-papa. Here is the way it works: Even if NanoFate did somehow splice their genes, Yuuno would still be godfather. Yuuno would babysit, Yuuno would cook out on the grill on Saturdays while Vivio plays in the yard, Yuuno would do all the fatherly stuff. Logic? He's Nanoha's proclaimed brother, lived with her while little, and she "lived" with him for the rest of their lives until she married Fate. That would technically make Vivio his niece. Also, there are some things a male figure does and some that female figures do. Either way, Vivio will see Yuuno as "someone who has always taken care of her". LAbeling him as a term will make Vivio see him in differnt ways.

If Yuuno= Yuuno-san, her godfather, then she will grow up clearly knowing and understanding that he is important in her life.

Vivio will, of course, one day, ask why she has two mothers, and They will explain it to her as "She's special". There's no reason to "hide" who the donor was. Yuuno donated sperm, they fertilized Fate's egg, and Nanoha carried it. So they are all biological parents. The "parent" is the person who raises the child.

Take Vivio in Strikers. Do you consider her Nanoha and Fate's child? I do and I'm a Yuunoha fan as well. We perceive this because Nanoha raised her, and Fate was there as well. Vivio was told "you have two mamas" and she simply agreed with it.

Besides, In the story it's nothing more than:

Spoiler for It's right below the title, so I don't mind revealing this:

“Yeah,” Fate opened the car door for Nanoha and helped her slowly sink down into the seat. “You're getting bigger by the day. I swear you're about to pop.”

“Nya haha,” Nanoha placed both hands on her stomach as Fate walked around the car to the driver's side. “I can't believe it's been eight months already. Seems just like yesterday we asked Yuuno to donate for us.”

Fate laughed brightly, shaking her head at the memory. “I will never forget that day. We all got together for dinner; Yuuno, Hayate, and us, and talked for a while before you just bluntly answered when he asked what it was all about.”

With a grin, Nanoha looked out the car window. “I thought he was going to do a spit-take when I asked him to knock me up.”

“Hayate was going to have a duck before I explained it... Mou, you totally ruined the mood.”

“How else do you ask someone for their sperm? Might as well be funny rather than awkward. But still,” She looked down at her swollen waistline. “Vivio is going to have two mamas. What a lucky girl.”

“I still think we should have waited to find out...”

“Mou, what would we do if we bought boy stuff and it turned out to be a girl? I'm happy we found out.” She stuck out her tongue. “But anyway, how was work?”

That's all that's said.

Anyway, topic closed for now. Thank you everyone for the thoughts ^.^ I read every post and every PM <3

[Momo Chan]

WOW. The last two pages of debate were INTENSE to say the very least. It was really fun to read, I don't know why. All this talk about genetics and psychology, I loved it
Whew.

Glad we got to a conclusion.

And Vivio is sooooo cute ^^

Spoiler for Your head will explode from teh cuteness O_o:

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

WOW. The last two pages of debate were INTENSE to say the very least. It was really fun to read, I don't know why. All this talk about genetics and psychology, I loved it
Whew.

Glad we got to a conclusion.

And Vivio is sooooo cute ^^

Spoiler for Your head will explode from teh cuteness O_o:

*head asplodes*

I dunno what it is about Vivio, but she's great cuteness factor. Even not born yet, everyone squeals for her

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

And Vivio is sooooo cute ^^

Spoiler for Your head will explode from teh cuteness O_o:

*boom*

Vivio hit a string in me the moment that very first image of a strange girl clinging to Nanoha on the CD was posted. <3

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

And Vivio is sooooo cute ^^

Spoiler for Your head will explode from teh cuteness O_o:

...

Graf Eisen: EXPLOSION!

on another note it took me 3/4ths of the video to realize where I recognized the song from.

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I'm Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacccckkkkkkk~


Sorry a mix of life and computer problems forced me to go compyless for a little while. (It also made me go writingless =-= please forgive my extreme lateness)

Welcome back You were missed

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Hark is this a crack filled ooc crazy crossover short I've written...

Why yes it is

Spoiler for OBJECTION!Nanoha:

*snip*

Can you guess what I did when I was computerless? (If you guessed played DS games 'til my eyes glazed over you're right)

With apologies to Evil Rick for stealing that awesome line. (I have no idea why I like it so much)

Now that was good

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

WOW. The last two pages of debate were INTENSE to say the very least. It was really fun to read, I don't know why. All this talk about genetics and psychology, I loved it
Whew.

Glad we got to a conclusion.

And Vivio is sooooo cute ^^

Spoiler for Your head will explode from teh cuteness O_o:

Laevatein: Explosion
*Brain splatter*

That double 'ohayou' by Potemayo and Vivio finished me off totally

Spoiler for 178, 179 & 180:

”I am sorry miss Lushe, your child suffers from monobeatificus.” A man is next to me. A light stops blinding my sight. ”And she is showing symptoms of Natural Awakening.” A gasp of woman.

”What blessing is it?” I turn my head. A pink haired woman is tearing.

”I'm afraid I've never felt something like this.” He sighs and looks down on me. His eyes show pity. ”But we cannot afford Natural Awakenings. We'll send execution team tomorrow. Enjoy your girl's final day.” I understand this now. Same's predictions were correct.

”But she's the only heir!” A woman yells at the cold man. I'm a heir?

”That only makes things worse. Families with high status tend to gather the powerful blessings under themselves.” The man nods as if they made an agreement. ”Enjoy your day.”

The pink haired woman falls on her knees, sobbing. ”I... I won't let you!” She yells and trips the man down. -Devouring Poison!- She places her hand at the man's face and putrid green colored light glows from it. -Lifeforce Cleanse!- Silver flames dance around her for a moment before she starts the cycle again.

I don't like the sight, but I look anyway. The man continues to break down until there's only a formless mass left. Pink haired woman is panting heavily and raises up. She walks towards me. Her eyes are teared.

”I won't let them get you.” She wraps her hands tightly around me. Was I really this silent or couldn't I speak? No, I'm not that young. This is just four years back. My village.

____________________

”Do you have everything now?” She asks, strapping the backbag tighter.

”Yes, mother.” I nod sadly. ”Do I really have to go?”

”You do.” She tears as well. ”The curtain is lifted. You'll find a better life outside.” We share a tight hug.

”But you won't be there.” My vision blurs as my tears fall.

”I'm sorry. I cannot go with you.” She tightens her hug. It is so warm that I don't want to let go.

”Why? Why can't you come with me?!”

”We've gone through this many times already. I cannot tell. But remember, no mother would leave her children without a good reason.” She lets me go and hold my cheeks. ”Stay away from dangerous thing. And don't get too emotional. They will just hasten your Awakening. Do everything you can to delay it until it's too late for it.” She kisses me maternaly everywhere my face. ”Live as a human. Not as a slave for gods.” She finishes with a kiss on my lips.

”I will, mother.” I accept relucantly. I don't want to leave, but she wants me to. I have to.

”There is a foreing expedition a week's walk away. Keep your nose towards the rising sun at day and sleep at night. Be sure to drink all your sealed energy.” She turns me around and pushes me to go.

”What about you mother?” I stop to ask this final question.

”We will keep hiding. Because we are slaves.” She smiles with unhappy tears in her eyes.

”G...goodbye mother.” I stutter these final words and run towards the way I was pointed at.

”Goodbye Caro.” Her voice breaks down but I keep running. It was what she wished.

____________________

”There are humans here?!” A man yells, seeing me walk from the constantly raging sandstorm. I fall weakly on the sand and gasp for water.

”Get her into shelter and bring the medics. Get water and food ready!” Different male voice.

”You'll be okay. Hang in there.” I am lifted from the ground and carried at the nearby tent. He places me down on a plain bed and covers me in sheets. Like I wasn't warm enough in this desert. ”Who are you and where do you come from?” He questions me and hands me a bottle of water.

”Me...?” I gulp the water down instantly. ”I don't know...” I answer meekly. ”I just felt like walking this way...”

I see now. Mind affection poison. She made me forget everyting. To protect me and the secret of Heijin. Griefing at the memories would have surely Awakened me.

”Where am I?” I asked, looking around myself.

”This is TSAB planet mapping expedition 3.” A nurse came to check my vitals. ”Men, leave.” She pointed the door and the male people hopped out in fear. She starts undressing me. My backbag catches her hands and she turns it over at the nearby desk. ”What's this?” I turn to look what caused the question. Amidst the skins, there is a note.

”'Her name is Caru Ru Lushe. Please take care of her. Her mother.' What kind of woman leaves their children into the desert!?” Don't speak of my mother like that. She only thought what was best for me.

”My mother?” I ask ignorantly of the real situation.

”Don't worry about her anymore. We'll take care of you.” She gives me a hug. It feels familiar, but more repulsive. But I'm sure that wasn't what I thought then.

Spoiler for Lobus notes:

Lobus notes

I am Lobus, the head researcher of the temple. I am in charge of copying the Book of Darkness and this is the simplified version of my notes.

Edited by Sen Vens

2355 15.5
We have achieved the book from Meria Genran. The knights were relucant of the trade but complied on Meria's words. Meria will receive Prolong Life until the current Jube dies and shall live in the temple as a king for the rest of her life. The book is standard size V3 tome with unknown insignia, resembling a cross, on the top.

2355 32.5
We gained contact to the book with Machine Contact. It seems to have very complex desing. I've never seen anything like this. The knights have told us that the way to fill the pages is to feed it these 'Linker Cores'. Up until now we have called these 'Lights of Life'. I shall not accept their term as it makes no sense.

2355 21.6
The testing of the book was succesful. One of our researchers lost his light and the book received a page. This event has been replicated many times and we have already gotten a grasp on the mechanism.

2355 42.6
We have created a frame for the new book. We attempted to mimic the desing as well as possible, but we changed the 'Belkan cross' into Selshin circle. We are certain that this doesn't affect the book's capabilities.

2355 5.7
We have initiated the study on the knights. All four of them seem to be defensive programs the book creates to aid it's master. Strangely enough we cannot establish a contact on them. They seem to be far too humane for it.

2355 24.7
The knights have shown strange spells that seem to be capable of absorbing massive amounts of force and fly without support. They call this Belkan magic.

2355 16.8
We have yet to achieve any data from the knights. The knights have started training people in Belkan magic. It seems that everybody, that hasn't learned Selshin magic, is capable of learning this new school. The publicity it has drawn is staggering. We are considering of stopping them from doing this as the shielded magic school could harm the balance of the world, not to mention the possibility for Natural Awakenings.

2355 3.9
We have decided not to interfeare with this training. Instead, we notified every school to create methods to counter these shields. The guardian beast, Zafira, is to go on a tour to demonstrate these powers.

2356 35.10
We have succesfully copied the Light gathering mechanism. The mechanics can be found in the LN2 addition. The knight programme still puzzles us and we have gained no knowledge of it. We have noticed how the book carries six slots of different programmes. Four for the knights, one for Avatar program and one for backup protocol. Avatar program seems to activate as the book is finished, so we cannot study this at the time being. Backup protocol is a strange one. It doesn't seem to have any real activation. We are currently looking into this.

2356 20.11
We have found something distrubting. A teleport mechanism that is activated as soon as the book is finished and then depleted. This is currently taking the slot of backup protocol. We are working on overwriting this in our version.

2357 13.1
We have found a solution for the teleportation mechanism. We will create an empty slot on top of it with no function. This will hopefully prevent it from activating.

2357 38.1
We have found another distrubting program. A random master mechanism, that seems to take hold of anybody within reality with Light. This works in synergy with the teleportation mechanism but we shouldn't let it be. The study on the knights is not progressing.

2358 6.3
We have managed to modify the master program so that it can now be controlled. We do not dare to complete the book so we can see the Avatar program. That shall be the last addition.

2358 13.5
We still haven't had any progress on the knight programme. Even Meria's administrator rights do not seem to have any effect, even that she claims to have 'imagined' the knights' carb.

2358 20.7
We have decided to ignore the spell storage function that the book carries. It seems to be too complicated to be worth it.

2358 38.11
A strange function has been discovered. Something the Avatar programme seems to control. The book drains the Light of it's master to prepeare for the finishing. Meria is fine because of the Prolong Life she receives every day. We are currently looking into this.

2359 4.1
The drain function seems to be connected with something we named 'Land of Dreams' or 'Yunein'. Within everybody's Light, there are emotions, desires and hopes. From those the book has drained the Light, it can absorb them into the perfect scenario of their hopes. Strangely it doesn't seem to consider it's masters Light as drained. Perhaps the event is too slow for this. We have managed to copy this for the upcoming Avatar program.

2359 17.3
People are starting to lose hope in the knight program. They are considering that we don't implant it. I am against this and shall work until I find a way to make it happen.

2360 17.3
We have made no progress on the whole year conserning the knight program. But I am certain we will find a way. We decided to implant the spell storage system because of the lack of work.

2361 36.6
We have asked the gods for aid but they declined. I am not surprised of this reaction. It was foolish to think they could bend the rules just for this.

2362 11.4
We have finished the spell storage system, but, unfortunately, it is useless. It cannot store Selshin spells. The knight system's implantment isn't progressing.

2364 40.9
Even I am considering the giving up of the knight program. There has been no progress in the whole six years.

2366 28.10
I have a solution! Instead of copying the knights, we will copy the results: unaging protectors. We have received seven Shackles of Time, Crystallized Prolong Life and Light Channels. These T4 level crystals held no purpose before as they could not be used. Shackles crystallized a person instantly because it was so strong. Prolong Life had the same problem and there wasn't a light strong enough to use the Light Channels for. But if we combine these together with the Light storing capability of the book, we can dissolve the crystallication caused by the Shackles and Prolong Life.

2367 7.2
We have managed to implant the Crystallized of Prolong Life and Light Channels into the book. They will now automaticly create constant Prolong Life on those connected with the book. The book doesn't accept anybody without Shackles of Time. We have decided to change the maxinum page number to 1333 to power this mechanism.

2367 4.3
We have found canditates for knights. Miachell Del Relesh, the cast out of the Relesh family and Linque Cedoz, the willkeeper of Cedoz'es. Both are young and monobenidific with T4 blessing.

2369 23.10
The training is going smoothly. Both of them were accepted in T4 training. Miachell seems to be strangely attached to Signum. Linque seems to be interested in dancing. Things will turn lively in here.

2374 13.5
The original book requires only five more pages, but we shall wait until the training is completed. Signum has accepted Miachell as her apprentice and Linque is accepted as the new head master of Crondo's. Our book needs only these two.

2385 22.1
How could we be so stupid? We had completely forgotten the importance of master and Avatar. It seems that the daughter of Meria, Rie Genran, is pregnant. If the child has any strong blessings we will use it as master. I think they will be pleased of this act of kindness.

2385 11.9
Rie didn't comply with our actions but we have gained the children. She gave birth to twins and both of them have staggering amount of blessings. We will give the administrator right to the boy and the girl will be trained as Deity transformer and shall be the Avatar program. This way we can make sure the boy will behave himself.

2385 19.9
The training of Miachell and Linque is finished and we have decided to complete the original book to gain information of the Avatar programme.

2385 20.9
Failure. The Avatar programme went rampage and destroyed the capital. The original book vanished but we have something just as horrible here. A copy. We do not dare to touch the book anymore and decided to seal it in the Ark. Miachell was away from this event and brought a child with her. I did not ask where she got this but he seems to have T4 blessing for Lucine. I decided that Lanlai will not be the Avatar program. Instead we will add this nameless child and her to the knights and have the original number of four. Now we just need to find another person for Avatar.

2386 22.10
We have locked Rie in the cells. Meria was drained by the book and was lost forever so we also gave Rie the rights for Prolong Life. We do not want this specimen to die. She may have something that can help with the book.

2387 2.3
I can not find anybody that is capable of carrying the burden of Avatar program. Thus I have decided that my child will take this burden. He will train with the knights from now on.

2390 32.4
A plan for the destruction of the tome has been made and it's already in action. We shall liquidify the Mind Crystal and morph it with liquidified Preservation gem with Aren inside. In theory he should be able to drain minds and that way collect information of the book. Most of all he can be sent into the other worlds to search the original book and destroy it. Once that book has been destroyed he is to return here and use his knowledge to destroy our book. He seems to cherish his sister and we shall use her as the driving force for him to finish this mission.

2390 15.4
The gods have disapproved of this plan as the spreading of Selshin blood is forbidden and plausible with Aren going outside. We came to an understanding with placing the Heartbreaker on Aren. This will prevent him from spreading the blood and help him finish this mission. The only proplem is that the Heartbreaker is removeable by the user. This problem is to be looked into.

2396 13.6
Lanlai has made staggering progress in her magic school and has now been Shackled to the book at the age of 11. We do not want to risk her dieing from anything now that she has achieved T4. Miachell suggested a name for the nameless child. Same As Myes is his name from now on. She declined to tell us how she got the idea of this name. But I don't think this Myes person is any concern to us whoever he is.

2405 23.7
Aren has finally managed to achieve T4 and understands fully the situation he is in. If he removes the Heartbreaker from him, Lanlai will not be unbinded from the book. We are concerned of the knights revolting so we placed Vichin's relic Lovers Protectiveness on them all. Sadly, even my child had to take part in this. All of them will now protect the book at all cost and attack everybody going for it. We decided not to place this on Aren as he has the mission of breaking the book. The bond will break along with the Shackles. My child was now placed as the Avatar programme and Aren was given the administrator rights. We decided to leave the backup protocol slot open as it would be unnecessary power boost for the book.

2405 25.7
Aren is to be sent tomorrow to outer space. The preparations are ready.


For some reason the entries stop here. Reason is yet to be found.
-Sen Vens

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

WOW. The last two pages of debate were INTENSE to say the very least. It was really fun to read, I don't know why. All this talk about genetics and psychology, I loved it
Whew.

Glad we got to a conclusion.

And Vivio is sooooo cute ^^

Spoiler for Your head will explode from teh cuteness O_o:

I died of laugh in 00:11-00:16
Oh Vivio...

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I'm Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacccckkkkkkk~


Sorry a mix of life and computer problems forced me to go compyless for a little while. (It also made me go writingless =-= please forgive my extreme lateness)

Now that I've gone through ten pages of backlog I can put this:

@Satashi- the Disney stuff is fun (though unlike any Disney world I've ever been to... well it's the mid version so....XD). oh and by the way E (:3)
@Satashi and MecurianAngel- Teasers are mean T_T
@JunkedCat- New (well not so new now I guess) Landscaper is very interesting and I feel it's setting up an interesting future for the fic
@Evil Rick- I'll give Rise of the Techno ch 2 a proper review when I finish downloading it
@Everybody else- Some cool new stuff being added to Nanoha Fanfiction everyday it seems
@People who noticed I was gone- Wow O.O I didn't know people noticed me

Hi SS! Nice to see you're back.

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Chapter 27

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Souls traped in Fire:

After we reach the other side of the lake and stoped huging and claiming Alphonse as our hero, we moved again in direction to the church that we had saw

After like 2 hours of walk, we reach the church, it was conected with an old Graveyard, now I know that probably you think that a Graveyard is the most dangerous place to bee in a zone fulled of Slaves of the Dark, but you are wrong, a graveyard is the best place to refugiate when the slaves are around, a graveyard is sacred land and the demons can't enter in it, so when we saw it, we got really happy

We ran to the church and entered in, it looked abandoned, it was totally covered with dust, only a big Iron cross seemed to be only thing that wasn't break

"I think that we my rest here for a minutes before keep going" I sayed and we all sitted in what remained of the chairs

From were I was sitted I saw that Helga was trying to tell something to Alphonse, this is what I was able to hear

"Umm.. Alphonse?" She asked

"Uh? What?" Alphonse replyed aboiding looking her at the eyes

"I... I wanted to... umm..."

"To talk with me?"

"Y-yes, I wanted to talk with you... umm... you see... I... I, um...I lo..." She was going to do it, Helga was going to tell Alphonse that she love him too,I was sure, but Jasper interrupted pulling ou his gun and saying

"Everyone take your weapons"

"Why?" I asked at the time I standed up, he only pointed to the Iron Cross that was in front of us, there was when I noticed that from the other side of it there was falling gouts of aparently blood, I grabed my gun and slowly walked in direction to it, I got terrified when I saw what was at the other side of it, a woman crusificed to it, died and with a number in her chest that sayed "45"

"Get out! Return to the graveyard!" Was all that I could scream, when a murder is comited in a church, the place lose his protection against the Slaves, our only hope was the graveyard

We ran at full speed to the exit but suddenly a wall of fire appeared and blocked it, preventing us from escape

"Wha..!" Karil sayed when we saw that enormus wall of fire who was blocking our only exit, then I rised my head and I saw an infernal figure covered with fire flying upon us, then it put itsel'f in front of us and I was able to saw that horrible Slave, a Flying torso, his legs had been totally ripped apart and his organs were hanging from his body, instead of a left arm he had an enormus blade who was added to his shoulder and instead of a head, he had a flaming pupking

"My God, that's the slave that Alphonse and I saw in Edmund's mansion!" Jasper sayed

The slave made a horrible chill and launched fire from his head against us, we evade it and backfired with our guns

The Demon made horrible cryes when the bullets got inside his body, I could saw his coagulated blood falling to the ground, I though we had him, but suddenly he got transformed into an espectre of fire and fly to an uper level of the church, there he recovered his horrible form and attacked us again

Most of the batle was like that, each time we though he was ours, the bastard transformed himself into Fire and flought to another part of the room to counter attack, I knew that if we keept that, we shall eventually ran out of amo, that was what the slave wanted

"Karil, cover me!" I comand to my friend

"What are you going to do?" She asked

"Something stupid, that's sure" I answered at the time I pulled out my Inquisitor's axe and charged against the slave, I swing my axe but the slave evade it, I swing it again and this time I riped off his good arm

He made a horrible sound, then the blade that was added to his left shoulder unfasten itself but it still was conecting to the slave by a long chain, the slave swing it against me,I jumped to evade, he swing it again and this time I got bended

We both got into a fearsome melee combat, and it looked to be endless, I attacked and he evade, he attacked and I evade, I was not sure how long I was going to resist, my friends couldn't suport me because if they shooed they may hited me, then I saw my answer, in front of me there was a very weak wall, and in the other side it was the graveyard, I knew what I shall do, I used my axe and body and launched myself against him, he didn't expected that, we broke the wall and falled in the graveyard

I was fine, when I rise my head I saw the slave screaming like hell, smoke was going out of his body, I jumped over him and holded him with my axe against his neck to prevent him from escape, the slave was making horrible sounds at the time he was transforming into a pile of ashes, the sacred land of the graveyard prevented him from using his "fire teletransportation" to esacpe, after some minutes he made her final chill and ended like a pile of dust in the graveyard, I falled upon my back recovering breath, I realised that I had killed a greater Demon all by myself! I feelt so Happy!

"Vivio!" I heared and saw my friends runing with me

"Were is the slave?" Alphonse asked

"Uf... uf... he is... gone" I replyed, my friends smiled and Karil huged me

"No time for rest" Helga sayed at the time she rested in the curchs wall, I let my head fall again in the grass but not much later we hear a horrible din, I raised my head and saw that from the other side of the church a hand was holding Helga by her neck, I recignise that hand... Ella

Spoiler for Inmolated Curse:

Why? Why did they have to be attacked right when Helga was confessing!?! Vivio's awesome with the axe.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Hark is this a crack filled ooc crazy crossover short I've written...

Why yes it is

Spoiler for OBJECTION!Nanoha:

Smack. Point. “OBJECTION!” Nanoha Takamachi ace defense attorney pointed directly across the courtroom at her arc-rival prosecutor Fate Tesstarossa.

“Does the defense object to something?” Hayate Yagami looked down from the judges stand with a teasing smile.

Nanoha rubbed her head, “Um… yeah that’s why I… you know pointed and shouted.”

“And here I thought you were just being noisy,” an annoyed sigh came from the prosecutor’s stand. “Again.”

Nanoha opened her mouth to respond but was interrupted by her assistant.

Thump. The red head jumped on top of the defense’s desk, “Nanoha may be a noisy loud mouth who doesn’t think before she speaks and often doesn’t know what she’s doing until the last moment—”

“H-hey you’re not really helping,” Nanoha was ignored by the young girl.

“But she’s going to win!” The girl turned to look at the ace attorney. “Right Nanoha!”

“Uh… of course Vita-chan.”

Satisfied the girl sat back down.

“If we’re done with that… distraction,” Fate pushed her bangs out of her eyes. “Then the prosecution requests we continue and hopefully the defense will stop making a mockery of the court.”

“I’ll make a mockery of yo—”

“V-Vita-chan!”

A short struggle later the defense was back where they were supposed to be.

“The defense… doesn’t remember what their objection was,” Nanoha tried hopelessly to recall what she had been talking about when she had slammed her hands and pointed.

“You know I’ve been thinking the outfits you lawyers wear never seem to change,” the judge looked up at the ceiling, pondering. “You really ought to vary you know.”

Slam. “It is true that Ms. Takamachi always wears that tacky white suit—”

“Hey! And what’s with the Ms. Takamachi Fate-chan?”

“—but can we please proceed with trial?”

Hayate sighed, “if we must.” She waved her gavel in the air. “The prosecution may call its witness or whatever…”

Fate cleared her throat. “The prosecution calls Signum Yagami to the stand.”

Within seconds Signum appeared on the stand.

“Witness. Your name and occupation?”

“Signum Yagami.” The pink haired woman was eerily stoic and Nanoha made a note not to anger her… ever.

“And occupation?”

“Signum Yagami.”

“I see.” Fate nodded. “No—”

“OBJECTION!” The court fell silent. Hayate blinked, Fate rubbed her forehead and Signum… looked stoic. Nanoha seemed to burn with lawyer power, it emitted from her very being. “The witness listed her occupation as her own name!”

“And does the defense believe this to be somehow relative to the case?” Fate asked, bored.

It was like there were two options hanging in the air, waiting for Nanoha to pick one. One seemed to be: No it doesn’t seem to be necessary at all. The other: This information… IT’S DETRIMENTAL TO THE CASE! The choice was obvious.

“This information…” Nanoha took this opportunity to look dramatically away. “it’s…” She looked up eyes blazing. “DETRIMENTAL TO THE CASE!”

Fate jerked back in shock, “What are you talking about!”

“It means…” Nanoha flung her finger forward, “Ms. Yagami… IS LYING TO US!”

“Hmm,” Hayate rubbed her chin. “No… no I don’t think that’s what it means at all.”

“…Really,” Nanoha chuckled nervously and scratched the back of her head. “Yeah I guess not.”

“Eh hem,” Fate cleared her throat and straightened her yellow tie, a bizarre contrast to her black suit. “Witness please testify about the night of the crime.”

“It was two nights ago…” a pause. “Normally Hayate or I make dinner but that night…” another pause. “We were both late. Vita isn’t allowed to use the oven since… that incident and Zafira is a dog so…” a small shudder. “Shamal cooked. By the time we arrived Zafira was already…”

“That’s enough witness,” Fate crossed her arms with a small smirk. “I think we have undeniable proof that Shamal Yagami poisoned Zafira!”

“I don’t get what the big deal is,” Vita shook her head, “Zafira’s a dog.” A weak groan in the distance seemed to cry ‘I’m a wolf.’

“OBJECTION!” Nanoha cried out.

“OBJECTION!” Fate yelled right back.

“OBJECTION OBJECTION!”

“OBJECTION OBJECTION OBJECTION!”

“OBJECTION OBJECTION OBJECTION OBJ—”

“Enough!” Hayate smacked down her gavel. “What exactly is this objection?”

“The defense demands to be allowed to cross examine the witness.”

“To prove the prosecutions case even more?” A cocky grin was splayed across Fate’s features.

“Shut up and let me examine!”

Fate was apparently to taken aback by being told to “shut up” to argue back.

“Ms. Yagami! Please repeat your entire testimony so I can take it apart sentence by sentence!” Nanoha nodded proudly.

Thirty minutes and twelve repetitions later Nanoha had an exhausted look on her face. She had managed only to confirm that it was in fact Shamal who had cooked.

“Well it looks like it’s time to pass judgment,” Hayate twirled her gavel around. “The defendant is— eh?”

A very official looking long haired blond guy scrambled up to Hayate’s level and whispered something in her ear.

“Oh.” Hayate looked up. “Well it seems Zafira was just unconscious so there doesn’t seem to be a case any more.” She shrugged. “Oh well. Let’s party!”

The courtroom was suddenly turned into a disco hall. Three men in black suits and sunglasses descended from the ceiling like magic, bringing circles with hoops and beach ball looking things with them.

“Let’s dance,” Nanoha boogied up to Fate, hitting one of the circles with her hands as she did.

“Let’s get our grooves on,” she threw one of the beach balls in an arc.

Just as they were starting to groove a bizarre almost metallic man danced his way to him. “DO_YOU_HAVE_A_TICKET_FOR_THE_PARTY_LADIES?”





Vivio jerked up, knocking her DS off of its position on her chest. She rubbed her head, “what the hell was that!”

She groaned, “That’s the last time I fall asleep playing videogames… but where the hell did that robot come from?” She shook her head. “I don’t wanna know I don’t wanna know, I don’t wanna know!”

Can you guess what I did when I was computerless? (If you guessed played DS games 'til my eyes glazed over you're right)

With apologies to Evil Rick for stealing that awesome line. (I have no idea why I like it so much)

I like the almost quadruple OBJECTION!

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

WOW. The last two pages of debate were INTENSE to say the very least. It was really fun to read, I don't know why. All this talk about genetics and psychology, I loved it
Whew.

Glad we got to a conclusion.

And Vivio is sooooo cute ^^

Yeah all that debate. Personally I think what Satashi decided was fine. Yuuno's a nice guy. Even though I don't really support YunnoxNanoha, I think it works out fine.

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

Spoiler for Your head will explode from teh cuteness O_o:

*brain overloads with the cuteness and explodes*

[Evil Rick]

Hey Satashi!

I think I found the ideal image for your Disney Fic

Spoiler for Disney:

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Hey Satashi!

I think I found the ideal image for your Disney Fic

Spoiler for Disney:

*puts brain back together from previous splatage*. Hmm... what's this picture... *click*... Aww how cu--*Brain explodes from cuteness... again*

[Kha]

Vivio clocked more Brain Exprozions than Satashi or me in 1 night? USODAA! 0_0

But yup, moe-blob is moe, just needs to be used better. :/

[Satashi]

Update:
SbtB Epilogue is coming along nicely. It isn't much, and won't be very long, but it's full of future waff and warm fuzzies. Angel is working hard as well on the images. I think she's going to break down from all the hours she's put in T_T ganbatte ne, Angel!

I wrote her a little something ^^

Spoiler for off topic for Mai-HiME:

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=140

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Update:
SbtB Epilogue is coming along nicely. It isn't much, and won't be very long, but it's full of future waff and warm fuzzies. Angel is working hard as well on the images. I think she's going to break down from all the hours she's put in T_T ganbatte ne, Angel!

I wrote her a little something ^^

Spoiler for off topic for Mai-HiME:

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=140

Ooo that was pretty. I stay away from the HiME fanfic threads because I don't like the people there. At all. Well, one in particular, but still.

I'm looking forward to the end of SbtB quite a lot! Keep up the good work!

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Hey Satashi!

I think I found the ideal image for your Disney Fic

Spoiler for Disney:

zomg WIN! XD talk about inspiration.

This didn't make it in SbtB but I laughed when I wrote it for fun"

“Ne, Mom? How did you decide my name?” Fate looked over at the older woman.

Precia grinned. “I was a hippie.”