2012-09-27, 06:44 | Link #37183 |
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@ Eras
So it jumped even further (I guess the underground metropolis) nothing wrong I can spot. @ Demi Nah, Sturgeon dictates 90% of fan-made machine are overpowered, just like 90% of male pilots. That includes mine. But still I think about balance being more important.
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2012-09-27, 09:49 | Link #37189 |
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To address the point: a couple of rookie Erusea pilots is doing a patrol-training exercise with very crappy training plane, then Ichika flew straight past the area and they began to pursue him. Ichika is all but alone, having ALL of his comrade shot down shortly before.
Ichika has a better unit and weaponry and the captain of Erusean group (Chelsea) told them to retreat after one of them was taken out by him, decided to handle Ichika by herself. This is not the most logical decision but she prefer to be safe than sorry. Ichika took the chance to run away after a series of dogfighting and she returned to base as ordered. After this, Ichika got stranded with Maya's flight team, comprised of Houki and Ran.
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2012-09-27, 10:08 | Link #37192 |
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Duelist or more standard soldier?
High on music I guess? Complication by Rookiez is punkd I wanted something that was like Schwarzer Regen, more powerful but reasonably much less effective. I thought back to what little combat data I had on Schwarzer Regen and realized what I wanted was a unit that could take more hits, deal a massive amount of damage at any range, fast but can't make any form of tight turns without crashing. The vierling auto cannons are basically a single system spread across the shoulders with 2 on each shoulder. The missiles are more like rocket propelled cherry bombs. The really big lugging things are the 100mm cannons. |
2012-09-27, 10:16 | Link #37193 |
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Standard, and could engage multiple enemies too.
Just to give some enlightenment of size, well. Imagine this guy is an I.S., and that as your 100mm cannon And that's, by the way, is real life 30mm Autocannon. There's a good reason Laura's weapon is listed as 80 caliber (~20 mm) and not 80mm... good luck not toppling yourself if you use frame of standard size. Of course, you can always go for rule of cool and ignore this post, I never obey anything I didn't like either
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2012-09-27, 10:22 | Link #37194 |
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When you say that I can only imagine her with only a weapon of one type on each hand. Unlike Charlotte who uses her guns in pairs, I can see Maya as more of a primary in the dominant hand and side arm on the other.
Looks just about how I envisioned it. The butt of the cannon is a tad bit too small, maybe way too small. And then the actual handle is more mid way. The rear end of the cannon mainly focuses on a recoil dispersion system. The 100mm's aren't normally used for mid to short range combat. That's why they are normally kept in equalizer ports. EDIT: Cannon whipping is also a viable option. Though easily dodged. EXTRA EDIT: Hmm then the vierlings have to be redesigned then. A smaller load wouldn't be too bad since there's four of them firing. 18 maybe? Hmm... Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-09-27 at 10:32. |
2012-09-27, 10:38 | Link #37195 |
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Nope, she also dual wield SMG when the situation calls for it, but in case of rifle and grenade launcher, she use both hands.
Up to you then I have less-egregious weapon, though the concept is mostly the same as yours, it's a deployable ultra-high velocity sub-orbital gauss rifle. The I.S. equivalent of anti-materiel rifle, inciting YGBSM reaction from any other sniper/marksman since the wielder is the smallest I.S. in existence. Of course, being deployed means it's totally stationary... and it's semiautomatic
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2012-09-28, 22:11 | Link #37200 |
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Maybe I should just reduce the vierlings to 20mm...
Spoiler for Maya's Rafael Custom:
In cake eater, I wanted to make Maya a badass... just really really adorable. She doesn't act well under pressure but her skills are for real. She'd get a nickname and a near unbelievable reputation. "Bullet Fairy" would be the nickname. Her reputation would be one of the top shooters in her generation, as she's very conservative with her shots but still reaches a rough 83% not including shots blocked by her opponents. Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-09-29 at 02:05. |
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