2012-03-13, 03:30 | Link #25677 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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The Jet fighter is established as able to fight any I.S. in existence, yet curbstomped anyway, along with the base it resides. Tabane wanted it to be destroyed, and everyone in the base to be killed. (which actually very OOC for her, seeing as she singlehandedly destroy rival lab without any single life lost in canon).
So we have this awesome jet fighter, who destroyed before getting into action so we can introduce this cool male O.C., who is Tabane's bodyguard, who steamrolled military base without any repercussion whatsoever.
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2012-03-13, 03:37 | Link #25679 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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The tech wank is more plausible compared to the fact that the OC are supposed to be cool and likable. And then we have this OC suddenly able to beat an I.S. using a single, modest combat knife. Okay.... even Gary Stu have limit, damn it!
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