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leoblack9 · 2009-10-02, 10:16

Godlike1889: 9/10 - mmmm red swirly thingies.. I like 'em, good job with that. And oh, Kallen's hair blends just right.

mehn, I'm hopelessly stuck with a oversized sig..

Chaho-Chi · 2009-10-02, 16:37

Godlike1889: 7.8/10 it looked too squished in and its really bothering me >.>
Animation is not bad and same with the text.

ganbaru · 2009-10-02, 18:58

leoblack9 8,4/10 interesting but over the file size limit

Haladflire65 · 2009-10-02, 23:06

ayu-smepai: Really pretty. 9.8/10
ganbaru: I like your new set. It's just a little too light - the text (English) is hard to read. 8.5/10

Kelisidina · 2009-10-03, 01:09

Haladflire65: 7/10 it's not bad, but... The focal is unclear, and the highlight ruins the flow...

ganbaru · 2009-10-03, 04:07

Haladflire65 8,5/10 good artwork
Kelisidina 8,6/10 good effect and colors

May I ask for some rating/C&C for this one as well?

Kelisidina · 2009-10-03, 04:13

ganbaru: I'll just CnC cause I'm crap with ratings xD; The focal is very unclear, might also be due to the fact that it's too red. I'd select the focal point and filter it to sharpen. Then I'd duplicate the render layer and set it to Soft Light. And lastly, I'd start a new layer and fill it with grey/black before filtering it as a lighting effect on the focal and setting it to soft light.

Kyuuen · 2009-10-03, 04:30

katiemirmo > 9/10
Evil Rick > Jagged edges, unnecessary animation
Godlike1889 > Is it really necessary to animate the flashing words? BTW, the no-blood version is nicer
capture > 8/10
leoblack9 > Nice fade, but the animation is too fast, and the filesize is too big.
Kelisidina > 9/10, don't like the choice of font though.

Kelisidina · 2009-10-03, 04:40

Kyuuen: 8, the focal is quite fine, and I like how the girl is sort of not part of it; the way a few bits of her go beyond the border make her look like a ghost who just flew in and hugged him, and that makes for some gorgeous flow. I would remove the text, since the way it overlays the foreground is quite annoying, and ruins the flow. Another thing I would work on is the rendering, it's too choppy and stiff. But quite a lovely sig overall.

The Chaos · 2009-10-03, 08:01

Kelisidina..Nice work on the effects ..8.5/10

leoblack9 · 2009-10-03, 08:40

Kyuuen - [9/10]
Makes me think of a scene to be treasured and reminisced. A happy couple + old/sepia-like colors + the text (wow I only noticed it now), a nice combination.

Kelisidina - [8.5/10]
Simplistic, and colorful. Staring at the picture, yes, I do think the sound of music could reach through space and beyond. That's the power of music for me.

The Chaos- [8/10]
Nice, a picture story with a vibrant red color attuned to it. The girl doesn't look to happy, wait, it's romantic right? There's a rose!! But the girl isn't happy and looks lonely.. meh.

ganbaru · 2009-10-03, 18:01

Kyuuen 8,8/10 great one
leoblack9 8.4/10 finaly, something within the animesuki restriction.

katiemirmo · 2009-10-03, 18:19

Kelisidina - I kinda don't like the font 8.9/10
ganbaru : Posted one : creepy..goodluck to you on the SOTM

8.5/10
HaladFlire65 - kya!Edward and Roy! 8.9/10!

leoblack - uniqueness rocks

10/10

KanaMinami · 2009-10-03, 20:47

I'm kinda new here, I will rate based on what just I saw so don't hate me too much

Kyuuen - 2/5 the upper part (transparent part) is choppy, some part are pixelated, IMHO it's better to make it a jpeg rather than a gif

KatieMirmo - 3/5 purple is overkill but if used correctly it can be nicer than any color, sharpen the character a bit for nicer effect.

ganbaru - 2.5/5 simple but the quality of the char. is low, is that a manga scan or an original sketch?

leoblack - 2/5 nice pic but text/font is a failure, the white parts doesnt suit the sig I think

Drake · 2009-10-03, 20:57

ganbaru Your sigs are getting better with every one you make so keep it up. few minor points i'd personally change the first being your name which could have been better placed and the eglish text is maybe a bit too faded. 7/10

ayu-smepai Its a nice image and crop but its maybe a little low quality and the overlay style boardery bit with the verticl line half way through is a little stange. All in all 6/10

Edit: i seem to have missed a page =I

KanaMinami I like it. Nice image itself and a fitting backround. Only negative points i can see are with the shadowing over the top as imo they dont really add anything to the look. Still a good effort all round. 7/10

Kelisidina · 2009-10-03, 21:05

Drake: 8/10 It seems a bit overcrowded, and chaotic, so I'm not seeing a fixed flow @.@ Not sure where the focal is either, right now I think it's the sword? But, re colors work nicely and effort is very evident. I think you're ready to add depth to it

katiemirmo · 2009-10-03, 21:24

KanaMinami - uhh..too dark..if your trying on a depth sig u should erase the dark spots more..O.o 7.5/10

Kelisidina · 2009-10-04, 00:06

katiemirmo: 8/10 pretty effects, but some of them overlay the focal and steal the fixed point :x Text is a little awkward too but not bad.

ganbaru · 2009-10-04, 03:55

katiemirmo 8,4/10 good effect, maybe the text need some work
KanaMinami 8,5/10 good effect too

leoblack9 · 2009-10-04, 11:45

katiemirmo - [9/10]
Dynamic effects, I personally like that couple as well so + points

. Using green (or emerald?) as a background and effects perfectly matches CC's hair. It's as if Lelouche is being surrounded by C.C's aura. All in all, a very appealing work.

2009-10-02, 10:16	Link #12041
leoblack9 Your fagottry, I hate it! Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Hamster Slapping Land	Godlike1889: 9/10 - mmmm red swirly thingies.. I like 'em, good job with that. And oh, Kallen's hair blends just right. mehn, I'm hopelessly stuck with a oversized sig.. __________________

2009-10-02, 16:37	Link #12042
Chaho-Chi toptoptoptoptoptoptoptopt Graphic Designer Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Behind you >:) Age: 27	Godlike1889: 7.8/10 it looked too squished in and its really bothering me >.> Animation is not bad and same with the text. __________________

2009-10-02, 18:58	Link #12043
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	leoblack9 8,4/10 interesting but over the file size limit __________________

2009-10-02, 23:06	Link #12044
Haladflire65 Senior Member Artist Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Normandy SR-2 Age: 29	ayu-smepai: Really pretty. 9.8/10 ganbaru: I like your new set. It's just a little too light - the text (English) is hard to read. 8.5/10 __________________

2009-10-03, 04:07	Link #12046
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Haladflire65 8,5/10 good artwork Kelisidina 8,6/10 good effect and colors May I ask for some rating/C&C for this one as well? __________________

2009-10-03, 01:09	Link #12045
Kelisidina On thin ice Join Date: Mar 2009	Haladflire65: 7/10 it's not bad, but... The focal is unclear, and the highlight ruins the flow...

2009-10-03, 04:13	Link #12047
Kelisidina On thin ice Join Date: Mar 2009	ganbaru: I'll just CnC cause I'm crap with ratings xD; The focal is very unclear, might also be due to the fact that it's too red. I'd select the focal point and filter it to sharpen. Then I'd duplicate the render layer and set it to Soft Light. And lastly, I'd start a new layer and fill it with grey/black before filtering it as a lighting effect on the focal and setting it to soft light.

2009-10-03, 04:30	Link #12048
Kyuuen New Member Join Date: Dec 2005	katiemirmo > 9/10 Evil Rick > Jagged edges, unnecessary animation Godlike1889 > Is it really necessary to animate the flashing words? BTW, the no-blood version is nicer capture > 8/10 leoblack9 > Nice fade, but the animation is too fast, and the filesize is too big. Kelisidina > 9/10, don't like the choice of font though.

2009-10-03, 04:40	Link #12049
Kelisidina On thin ice Join Date: Mar 2009	Kyuuen: 8, the focal is quite fine, and I like how the girl is sort of not part of it; the way a few bits of her go beyond the border make her look like a ghost who just flew in and hugged him, and that makes for some gorgeous flow. I would remove the text, since the way it overlays the foreground is quite annoying, and ruins the flow. Another thing I would work on is the rendering, it's too choppy and stiff. But quite a lovely sig overall.

2009-10-03, 08:01	Link #12050
The Chaos ǾΝΈ ΡЇΈÇΈ is the Best !! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: away from you Age: 35	Kelisidina..Nice work on the effects ..8.5/10 __________________

2009-10-03, 08:40	Link #12051
leoblack9 Your fagottry, I hate it! Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Hamster Slapping Land	Kyuuen - [9/10] Makes me think of a scene to be treasured and reminisced. A happy couple + old/sepia-like colors + the text (wow I only noticed it now), a nice combination. Kelisidina - [8.5/10] Simplistic, and colorful. Staring at the picture, yes, I do think the sound of music could reach through space and beyond. That's the power of music for me. The Chaos- [8/10] Nice, a picture story with a vibrant red color attuned to it. The girl doesn't look to happy, wait, it's romantic right? There's a rose!! But the girl isn't happy and looks lonely.. meh. __________________

2009-10-03, 18:01	Link #12052
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Kyuuen 8,8/10 great one leoblack9 8.4/10 finaly, something within the animesuki restriction. __________________

2009-10-03, 18:19	Link #12053
katiemirmo Chrome.o23 Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Animanga Empire Age: 27	Kelisidina - I kinda don't like the font 8.9/10 ganbaru : Posted one : creepy..goodluck to you on the SOTM 8.5/10 HaladFlire65 - kya!Edward and Roy! 8.9/10! leoblack - uniqueness rocks 10/10 __________________ FACEBOOK\|KAT'S GALLERY\|FANFICTIONS\|TUMBLR

2009-10-03, 20:47	Link #12054
KanaMinami Member Join Date: Oct 2009	I'm kinda new here, I will rate based on what just I saw so don't hate me too much Kyuuen - 2/5 the upper part (transparent part) is choppy, some part are pixelated, IMHO it's better to make it a jpeg rather than a gif KatieMirmo - 3/5 purple is overkill but if used correctly it can be nicer than any color, sharpen the character a bit for nicer effect. ganbaru - 2.5/5 simple but the quality of the char. is low, is that a manga scan or an original sketch? leoblack - 2/5 nice pic but text/font is a failure, the white parts doesnt suit the sig I think __________________ Cirno is the fairy this coming season // Sig by ganbaru

2009-10-03, 20:57	Link #12055
Drake dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Northern Ireland	ganbaru Your sigs are getting better with every one you make so keep it up. few minor points i'd personally change the first being your name which could have been better placed and the eglish text is maybe a bit too faded. 7/10 ayu-smepai Its a nice image and crop but its maybe a little low quality and the overlay style boardery bit with the verticl line half way through is a little stange. All in all 6/10 Edit: i seem to have missed a page =I KanaMinami I like it. Nice image itself and a fitting backround. Only negative points i can see are with the shadowing over the top as imo they dont really add anything to the look. Still a good effort all round. 7/10 __________________ Last edited by Drake; 2009-10-04 at 09:18. Reason: banana cake.

2009-10-03, 21:05	Link #12056
Kelisidina On thin ice Join Date: Mar 2009	Drake: 8/10 It seems a bit overcrowded, and chaotic, so I'm not seeing a fixed flow @.@ Not sure where the focal is either, right now I think it's the sword? But, re colors work nicely and effort is very evident. I think you're ready to add depth to it

2009-10-03, 21:24	Link #12057
katiemirmo Chrome.o23 Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Animanga Empire Age: 27	KanaMinami - uhh..too dark..if your trying on a depth sig u should erase the dark spots more..O.o 7.5/10 __________________ FACEBOOK\|KAT'S GALLERY\|FANFICTIONS\|TUMBLR

2009-10-04, 00:06	Link #12058
Kelisidina On thin ice Join Date: Mar 2009	katiemirmo: 8/10 pretty effects, but some of them overlay the focal and steal the fixed point :x Text is a little awkward too but not bad.

2009-10-04, 03:55	Link #12059
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	katiemirmo 8,4/10 good effect, maybe the text need some work KanaMinami 8,5/10 good effect too __________________

2009-10-04, 11:45	Link #12060
leoblack9 Your fagottry, I hate it! Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Hamster Slapping Land	katiemirmo - [9/10] Dynamic effects, I personally like that couple as well so + points . Using green (or emerald?) as a background and effects perfectly matches CC's hair. It's as if Lelouche is being surrounded by C.C's aura. All in all, a very appealing work. __________________