2018-05-25, 14:00 | Link #41 | |
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The only flashback about them was they hated each other There's a chance they fell in love later But if so, then poor MC He confessed to Holy Maiden and she answered "I think I love you, but I don't really understand this love thing, let me answer again after this war is over" But then she fell in love with the enemy in such a short time? On top of that asking the MC to take care of Maou's daughter? Sounds like NTR Hentai Plot to me
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2018-05-25, 23:35 | Link #44 | |
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2018-05-26, 20:09 | Link #48 |
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3 likely reasons:
- Author purposely wants to write a short story - Author doesn't know how to drag on story for longer (it is their 1st time with this genre) - Narou readers don't like the NTR twist, author wants to end it before the bad reception goes out of control and affects their reputation on Narou* *(I recall Erotora once mentioned a WN which has surprise twist of MC's love interest not being a virgin (she was raped prior to story or something). Readers were so angry with the development they boycotted the WN, said many bad things about author and author had to cancel WN.) |
2018-05-26, 23:29 | Link #50 |
Confused Shark
Join Date: Oct 2007
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The setting might be re-used in new series
And yes, it's ended Last chapter was exposition As predicted, most female characters were either raped or gangraped in the past This was meant to be a short story from the start Has better world building than long ass stories though Next series will be TS protagonist
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2018-05-26, 23:51 | Link #52 |
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Join Date: Oct 2007
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^Daughter is safe and now she knows the truth
- Maribelle = Was the daughter of 1st prince, but 2nd prince usurped the throne and she was captured, tortured, and gangraped. Finally burned at the stake. - Shion = Raped by foster father and sold to the brothel for money. Used until full of STD then thrown out. Died in cold winter. - Jeanne = Former Holy Maiden. Captured by the demon race. Tortured and gangraped, then died in Drowning Trial. These 3 are what you call witches. Women who lived unfortunate life and died, but then resurrected as Witches. Their powers are based by their cause of death.
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