2011-05-17, 19:03 | Link #161 | |
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2011-05-18, 13:47 | Link #163 | |
Adeptus Animus
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2011-05-19, 01:04 | Link #164 |
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The saner counterpart to Jon. Nice girl, but rather sensitive. Spoiler for portrait:
Name: Rachel Lee Wei Ying (Theoretical) VA: Ryou Hirohashi Gender: Female Age: 17 Height: 160cm Division: Assault Butei Rank: A Ancestor: None of significance Equipment: SIG Sauer P226 handgun, ASP telescopic baton, KA-BAR knife Background: Spoiler:
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2011-05-19, 03:21 | Link #165 | ||
Princess or Plunderer?
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Élise Kujo updated.
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2011-05-19, 10:21 | Link #166 |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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Location: Mauritius
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*decloaks*
HMMMMM.... Just arrived here while seeing what everyone here was up to... Interesting stuff... Hehe, I have two OCs that are waiting to be deployed in a small instant... *re-cloaks and heads to IS writing and HNA writing together now... boy... I might do some accidental cross-over verse... wait... IS and HNA CROSSVERSE!? nonono... focus on current jobs* Next post will be my two OCs. Hint: One's codename is "Alucard" Note: Dracula descendant storyline modified.... there's already Vlad the impaler in here...
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2011-05-19, 15:14 | Link #167 |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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Location: Mauritius
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Ok, time for me to barge in.
Hello everyone... two new OCs have arrived! Spoiler for OC N.1: The Descendant of a Nosferatu!:
Spoiler for OC N.2: And his dreaded nemesis?! (or not?):
Now, non-OP chars... perfect protagonists... BUT FIRST, I MUST FINISH MY INFINITE STRATOS WORK. But HNA is still fresh in my mind, I might write some stuff, but IS takes priority over this for now. Another thing is... Daisuke Ono and who else as VAs? (If I lump Kaname Kuran's or Zero's VA in here... it would be smexy, but over used as well...) And we could maybe have Nana Mizuki grace us with the reverse roll here by playing the one that gets bitten... (Mayaa Sakamoto is another option for sweety girls... plus she has Ciel mode. ) Ah, maybe should I do another one of those char. sheets for sheer convenience levels? Hmmm... where are the FF plans for using all our OCs and trying to put in a story that happens in the same verse as our dear Aria and Kin-chan? P.S: Kha, there, two SSR members (they do other the other stuff only as electives) for you... WITH LOVE AND DRAMA! Double P.S: Anyone who played Diablo II KNOWS Kyousuke's ancestor's alternate depiction. Triple P.S: Sorry for the e-mail spam @Meister, Saint X, Saintesse and Flamez, forgot to turn off the "send notification" thingie...
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2011-05-19, 16:49 | Link #168 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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The three other members of Preston's circle, including the official leader. I may as well start calling it "Preston's Angels", "Preston's Visual Novel Cast" or something else, also I retconned Kirten and Preston's infos.
This group may need "guests" to make up for the shortcomings, such as the lack of sniper. But the sniper may be covered by someone ported from the fictional modern fantasy world I have been brewing, a Spaniard named Mendoza, because his actual name is well.. Spanish LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG. Character .3 Spoiler for portrait:
Name: Amelie de Batz-Castelmore d'Artagnan, nicknamed Ami by Sanae. (theorical) VA: Ami Koshimizu Nationality: French Age: 17 Class: 2nd year Butei Rank: A Ancestor: Charles de Batz-Castelmore d'Artagnan Department: Inquesta Bloodline Ability: None Weapon: S&W No. 3 Schofield, Garand M1 Rifle. Friends: Sanae Noriaki, Fiorenza Diotallevi, Preston Lee Whitworth, Kirsten Vikernes. Character Quotes: "Oh I know. You are expecting me to whip out a rapier and say 'En Garde'. Too bad you have not read the memo, we are in the 21st century."" "Swords are so passe. Guns democratized a lot of things about fighting." "Musketeers were called as such for a reason, and my friend right here IS the reason." Background: Spoiler:
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Ability: None Style: Amelie is a good shot with her Schofield and her Garand. She uses her parkour skills to run around the targets, take them from unexpected places and her training in savate is handy when things gets a little sticky. Trivia Spoiler:
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Name: Fiorenza Diotallevi, nicknamed "Fio" (theorical) VA: Haruka Tomatsu Nationality: American (of Italian ancestry) Age: 17 Class: 2nd year Butei Rank: B (Potentially A but is very unlucky to have Doc as examiner at her every tests). Ancestor: Nobody of note Department: Logi Bloodline Ability: None Weapon: Heckler & Koch VP70 and FN P90 Friends: Sanae Noriaki, Amelie D'Artagnan, Preston Lee Whitworth, Kirsten Vikernes. Character Quotes: "Giiiiirls! Let's! Get! DANGEROUS!" "88 MP/H!!!" "Hey guys! Watch me graze all over the traffic!" "She is sitting on the thin line between crazy, and hot" - Preston Background: Spoiler:
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Ability: None, unless you count her insolent chance with vehicle accidents. Style: Fio says she can make any vehicle a weapon and she is a fan of what she calls "Drive-by bullet shower" with her P90, she laments to have to use it instead of a Tommy Gun. Without weapon, Fiorenza is not a pushover, her upbringing have taught her street fighting skills. This means that she will do ANYTHING to win, expect dirt flung into one's eyes, head smacked by a brick, faking a wound, using her "charms" to win someone over only to kick kick the opponent in the crotch, strangling someone with that person's own article of clothing, ANYTHING goes. Trivia Spoiler:
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Name: Sanae Noriaki (theorical) VA: Minori Chihara Nationality: Japanese (half-breed Chinese) Age: 15 Class: 2nd year Butei Rank: A Ancestor: Nobody of note. Department: Amdo Bloodline Ability: None Weapon: Walter PPK Friends: Amelie D'Artagnan, Fiorenza Diotallevi, Preston Lee Whitworth, Kirsten Vikernes. Character Quotes: "This situation is a little too cliché." "Dumbass" "Amélie-onee-sama~" "Jensen Ackles~" Background: Spoiler:
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Ability: Sanae's engineering skills allowed her to manufacture various gadgets ranging from electronic device jammers to surveillance drones that are no bigger than a kite. She is currently studying the structure of various car models to find which can be modded into her dream monster car. Style: Sanae prefers to avoid fighting as much as possible. More often than not she relies on gadgets and choose her battlefield she have made sure to stuff with traps before. She have a knack for improvisation and will use improvised weapons when cornered. Her handgun is a very last resort and it's useless to say how she manages with them. Trivia Spoiler:
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*adds another into Jim's hare--* *is thundershocked by Chrysanthe!!* Jim's unofficial colorless gang begins to form. Quote:
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2011-05-20, 10:47 | Link #170 | |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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Location: Mauritius
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The first thing that popped up in my head was "Underworld".... Plus the vampires here have guns... (except that the chick is now the werewolf, and the guy the Vampire) BUT... he already has a girl... but for lol factors. *imagines* Spoiler for Short story I wrote randomly concerning possible Werewolf/Vampire relationships...:
edit: On a side note... I'm wondering the VAs I could use for em... Ayako Kawasumi, Daisuke One, Mamoru Miyano... all of em taken... Hmmm... OH YES. *Updates VAs for both Chars* *Updates SSR Ability Grade Rating for Kyousuke* Ok, both char profiles updated: Kyousuke Yamato Alexandra V.H Yamato A third OC is on his way.... a descendent of a certain Sebastien Michaelis. Let's see who gets baited...
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2011-05-20, 14:32 | Link #171 |
Truth Martyr
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*facepalms*
I'm starting to believe that the average OC creator in anycares nought for badass normals, instead preferring to just throw in whatever they like into the mix whether it works or not, with a strong preference towards the supernatural and vampires. I'll comment in-depth at some other point but I just want to say - really? It wasn't enough to rip off Castlevania and Hellsing, you're going to turn this into goddamned Twilight? We need to give Monster Hunter International a call. If I have to use movie terms, Hidan no Aria is Bad Boys meets Hot Fuzz meets harem anime. It is not Bad Boys meets fucking Twilight. Just because there is a confirmed vampire within the series does not mean the floodgates are open. Now on to more cheerful things: Spoiler for Michelle H. Winters:
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2011-05-20, 15:23 | Link #173 |
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New characters!
Name: Karla Bidan Nationality: German-Korean Age: 24 Butei Rank: Maintenance Engineer E-2 Ancestor: Gerhard Barkhorn Department: Logi Bloodline Ability: Pilot any aircraft or robot by instinct. Horrendous with land vehicles. Weapon: Baton, HK P2000 Friends: Ayari/Kanari's parents - One of the only few who knew about Ayari/Kanari's true background, Reisen Background : A former student from the German Butei Academy, she was almost granted a scholarship into the Luftwaffe but it was retracted when she was convicted for dangerous driving during her driving test, running the car through a lamppost and almost severing the car into half. Nonetheless, she was the school's top aircraft pilot and graduated from the academy with honors, therefore the school attached her to the Japanese Butei Academy. The academy was skeptical of her skills, so she was assigned as a second-level engineer. Initially innocent, she was thrust into the underworld and conspiracies after the Unamichi twins were suddenly deposited on her doorstep with a letter simply bearing the words "Take care of them. Please." in familiar handwriting, and 10 million euros deposited into her bank account. She had been the unofficial guardian of the twins for four years since she arrived in Japan. Name: Reisen Nationality: Metropolis Age: 24 Butei Rank: None Ancestor: Lim Bo Seng Department: Ex-Dagula. Now a fugitive. Bloodline Ability: Analysis and problem-solving Weapons: STK CPW, Glock 19 (given to Kanari), Fairburn-Sykes knife modified into a wristblade/piton gun (given to Ayari), L96A1 Suppressed /w high-intensity thermoscope, Mateba .44 Unica 6 Autorevolver Friends: Ayari/Kanari's parents (another who knows the truth), Karla, an unnamed legal counselor for the Yakuza, the Metro ambassador, Kinichi, Jeanne (unexpected friendship) Background : Missing and wanted for involvement in a bomb attack on the parliament house, he was initially captured but escaped from Whitely detention centre. Dubbed highly dangerous due to his background as a course-planner with the Metro Butei Academy, it is touted as a conspiracy that he is framed, or at least worked undercover with the internal spy agency. As such, he is branded as a "missing fugitive" who "disappeared or died without a trace". Having contacted Jeanne once on "business" when serving as a information broker on a one-time deal to the EU, the two of them were on edgy terms as Jeanne was unwelcome towards Reisen's mercenary attitude. It is also rumoured that he provided for Kinichi and Patra and helped them to disappear, as well as having a hand in many events funded by groups looking to buy information and certain equipment. His real name is not known, and his official identity, or as he is known in Japan, is simply Reisen - the owner of a Akihabara store selling games and otaku merchandise, which Riko visits on occasions. After his store is destroyed during a Yakuza war (which he indirectly had a hand in), he is now residing in an offshore yacht docked on Butei high's island, and running his business (both his game store and information brokering) online and on-contact basis. It is not known how he got the permission and rights to do so. You know, the beauty of character creation is to do and create whatever you want. Zero limitations. Let them have that fun.
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2011-05-20, 15:39 | Link #174 |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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@Yoake: One word. Dracula. He's in the novels from what I've seen. (I have yet to gather info on his allignment and etc... but I'd guess that he's on the antagonists' side)
@WG: In now way is this Twilight. It's not just because there's a relationship between a chick and vampire that it turns into that show. Besides, I've never watched it, and cannot judge anything in it for myself. There is no Dracula nor Alucard vampires in here (except for the Novel one). My vampire in question is descendant from an alternate vampire line. Dracula has a set of peculiar powers in HNA, I was thinking of explaining his "un-vampiric" abilities as his "evolution". The Bathonet bloodline is still stuck with most basic traits of the generic Vampire. Besides, my vamp is nothing like Edward Cullen (from what I could understand of his character). Edward, from the looks of it, is calm, silent and not really your society guy. Kyousuke's calm and gentlemanly, but he also loves socializing and can be eccentric at times when it comes to woman. Also, his vampiric issues are more of a type that is similar to Erika Sendo's in Fortune Arterial (rejects vampirism, conflicted with her own kin) Note as well that he is far from being an OP char as he is heavily handicapped by his bloodthirst. He hasn't drunk any "good" blood since five years. For now, he's basically a human with some boosted reflexes (sub-par to Kinji's Hysteria Mode, but has the advantage of being on everytime). His full vampiric powers can awaken when he drinks blood from someone, and that, he doesn't want to do it at all. Power Limiter, yes. Also, concerning badass normals... I appreciate them very much, but I've never been skilled at doing them correctly, so they're not a common production of mine. Perhaps when my imagination and pen skills expand a bit more, will I finally be able to correctly mold a badass normal. But anyways... the third character of my team's coming in. Also, I'm going to do some fixing about my agent's division, as well as some history modification so that they're not ALL in SSR... (at least, they might have SSR as a common elective, but their main specialty will be different)
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Nemo: I know I won't be at your funeral when you die from this. Jim: Stuff a bloody sock in it. Quote:
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Reisen: I'm still Nikolai as much as you are still 141. Jim: I'm looking for something. Reisen: You know the rules. Pay cash, or get mash. ~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~ Jim and Preston find a body. Preston: He's dead, Jim. It just occured to me...
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2011-05-20, 22:05 | Link #177 | |||
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As for making badass normals - how hard can it be? Take a normal person (with normal being relative, admittedly) and put them into this situation. Mike Lowery and Marcus Burnett. Jonas Blaine, Mack Gerhardt, Charles Grey, Bob Brown. Jack O'Neil and SG-1. John Mclane. Mad Jack Churchill. Lachiman Gurung. Bishnu Shresta. John Basilone. Mitchell Paige. Alvin York. Randy Shugart and Gary Gordon. SEAL Team Six. Delta Force. MARSOC. Carlos Hathcock. Dick Winters. Ronald Speirs. Salvatore Giunta. Those are but a few Badass Normals who actually existed in the real world. It's not too hard to make one, mate. Quote:
At all times when creating characters, one must ask one's self, "Does this charecter fit the spirit of the series that I am working on?" Also, you got nationality wrong. Nationality refers to what nation you belong to, where your origin is. Ethnicity is the racial mix. Thus as an example, Jon Davis is of Malaysian nationality and British-Indian-Chinese ethnicity.
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2011-05-20, 22:24 | Link #178 |
Princess or Plunderer?
Join Date: May 2009
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Èlise: And I thought I'm going to see only a handful of students from Tokyo Butei High School. *sighs*
Hanzou: Well, at least you're a student, Kujo-kun. Now that it's raining Original Characters harder than a tropical cyclone in here, I have to update my student roster. Kono yarou.
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2011-05-21, 04:45 | Link #179 | ||||
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BACKLOG MICRO DESTROYER !!!! Quote:
Also, I remember a certain other little girl that also has a habit of ignoring stupid people So I guess Kujo eventually manned up and kissed Victorique... Cause that's how you get a girl pregnant Quote:
....Eh ? Not your infamous Project [Keroko] incarnation - The Heroine of the Multiverse ? Alsoooo... I guess someone would have to say this (these) eventually... 1. Horny much? 2. What big horns you have! 3. And ain't nothing but a horn dawg 4. Horn if you're h- *Transmission End* Quote:
I like her alot. Every time we start an OC thread in a new series I've always find a girl that I can't get out of my head. In Nanoha OC there's Maren... Or possibly Keroko, I had a little tsundere thing going for her too... In Toaru OC there's Sibyl... Nyan might had issued some kind of 'stern warning' against me touching her... In Aria OC... Could you be the one...? EDIT: Japanese Alias: Minato Arisato True Name: Michael Auditore Age: 17 Butei Rank: 'A' Ancestor: Ezio Auditore da Firenze (Legendary Master Assassin of the Brotherhood) Department: Dagula Bloodline Ability: Eagle Vision Weapon: Heckler & Koch USP .45ACP with two-tone finish,Emerson Combat Karambit Character's Catch phrase: "My way is fun too." Character's job description: "Interrogating a hostile witness is like proposing marriage. You want to get it right the first try; So you don't settle until you find the perfect spot... You take special care to set the right ambiance and set the mood... And then you wait for the best moment to pop the question." Spoiler for Background:
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2011-05-21, 07:15 | Link #180 | |
Princess or Plunderer?
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I might change it into a submachine gun so that it's easier to handle for someone as small as Èlise. If you have any tips on how to pick a suitable gun, please enlighten me. :3
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