2010-10-11, 09:46 | Link #63 |
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@JRendell Looks nice although a bit empty. The background leafs blend in with the rest of the signature and thus are very easy to miss.
@CMHerrera Ver.2 since the color of the border blends in with the color scheme way better @GuiBleh I like it Butterflies are great. I'd work on the font a little bit though. It does not feel right considering the rest of the signature. @Namiey Great idea, although I think it really needs a little bit of AA on the borders @milan kyuubi Nice, but I think you should add a little bit of color variety. The signature features a lot of details and all of them have very similar color range, making it a bit difficult for the viewer to pick out the most important parts. Also, thank you for all your C&C, helped a lot
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2010-10-11, 14:31 | Link #64 |
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So far, Urei's and JRendell's entries are my favourites, I'd definetely vote for them.
@Namiey, I don't really like the fact that the edges are jagged and the render looks kind of blurry and there's no depth. Other than that, everything be good, just a little bit of extra work should fine ^^ @milan kyuubi, there's too much yellow in it, even like that the render doesn't seem to blend in, and that quote, I'm not so sure. I believe text should be closer to the main focus so it doesn't distract. @ganbaru, it looks too faded and very bright, I believe you should burn some shadows on it. Nice idea tho ^^. @GuiBleh, besides what other people said about blending, I feel that the colors are a tad oversaturated, but that might be just my picky eye xD good work all in all. It looks cute xD My second draft, C & C please *puppy face*
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2010-10-11, 16:54 | Link #69 | |
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2010-10-11, 17:26 | Link #70 |
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In my opinion, its sorta a bad thing, for great effects, it would be great to blend the character and the background perfectly, but thats just my opinion, and I'm an avatar maker, not a signature maker Just wait for other signature maker's opinions.
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2010-10-11, 18:54 | Link #72 |
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Mittwoch Cool siggy I swear I seen that (maybe the stock) somewhere but I cannot recall where @__@ But anyways, I think maybe make the stroke paths an orangy color instead of a peachy pink color? A more "autumnish" color, not saying that what it is now isn't
RGC I think your sig looks kind of cool, just the head and hair looks flat compared to the rest - not sure if that's intentional but maybe make the head stand out just as much as the dress? I dunno :x
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2010-10-11, 20:04 | Link #78 | |
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I did all the work on making her autumnish. Yes, you are right tho, it is a bit peachy but I did not want them to distract from the main focus. Unfortunately because of the height limit I could not show more of her leaves crown, and making the picture even smaller would decrease the visibility of the details . Thank you for the critique, it's very much appreciated ^^. @Namiey, yes, it looks much better now. Good job on it xD Sorry if I had offended anybody with my advice, I'm just trying to be helpful :-s.
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2010-10-11, 21:10 | Link #80 |
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@ Namiey, ver2 look better even if it's fake transparency
@ RGC Railgun The colors of the render don't really fir with the rest of the sig, may I suggest to use gradiant map or photo filter over the render @ Mittwoch, I would suggest you to show more of the leaf on her head @ GuiBleh now you should blend the butterfly near the center of the sig.
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