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Ayla · 2003-11-06, 22:58

Yes, I know, the hands suck. lol. I'm trying though

Also, not sure whats going on with the guys shoulders/arms?

Any tips on whats wrong there?
K, the girl is suppost to look on freaked out or whatever, the guy is comforting her but shes like all nervous for some reaons...

Anywho, not sure I'm really improving at all, but I really like how I did the guys shirt for some reason..

C&C please

Ayla · 2003-11-08, 16:31

Is it that bad? lol :x

@Naruto@ · 2003-11-08, 19:46

No, not bad at all. You just need more practice that's all. I can say the samething for myself too. hehehe

Your right, the coloring of the shirt on the guy looks really good.

Keep on practicing. =)

gravitation · 2003-11-08, 21:01

i think thats a nice pic! its nice, lol i keep saying nice..its kool ^__________________^

get_a_life · 2003-11-09, 07:04

first things first, did you draw with a mouse/tablet or did you scan in your drawing?

first thing i noticed was your anatomy and sketchy lines. try to keep it clean and smoooooth.

it looks like youve got your idea down and pretty clear. what works for me is that i draw the same idea at least 3 to 5 times before im satisfied. 2nd, tracing is not a crime, its an essential tool!! so yeah, use tracing paper or, if you're really serious Canson Marker Paper. why that? bc its got good transparency and a smoooooth surface thats perfect for pencils and inks. trace over your drawings and at the same time make needed changes.

Ayla · 2003-11-09, 22:56

Wow, those are sketchy lines? I thought they were pretty good myself..but I'm still a beginner. I do use a tablet..And I do a rough sketch, then go over it again making it smoother..however the program I use, I'm not sure how to make it smoother? I just got the program and am learning..You should see my first lineart with it, it sucked a lot more then this lol

OFFSPRiNGCo16 · 2003-11-10, 00:15

Not bad, not bad at all. Keep practicing and showing your work, I feel that with more practice you can get much better.

Keep up the good work

Sukato · 2003-11-11, 12:06

Pretty good! The guy's shirt is definately very nice.

Hmm..you might try making extra small pupils for a freaked out look. For instance, often in anime when a character is freaked out their eyes will slightly widen while their pupils will drastically shrink.

2003-11-06, 22:58	Link #1
Ayla Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Canada Age: 39	Newest CG.. Yes, I know, the hands suck. lol. I'm trying though Also, not sure whats going on with the guys shoulders/arms? Any tips on whats wrong there? K, the girl is suppost to look on freaked out or whatever, the guy is comforting her but shes like all nervous for some reaons... Anywho, not sure I'm really improving at all, but I really like how I did the guys shirt for some reason.. C&C please

2003-11-08, 16:31	Link #2
Ayla Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Canada Age: 39	Is it that bad? lol :x

2003-11-08, 19:46	Link #3
@Naruto@ Mind Sweeper Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Toronto, North York Age: 41	No, not bad at all. You just need more practice that's all. I can say the samething for myself too. hehehe Your right, the coloring of the shirt on the guy looks really good. Keep on practicing. =)

2003-11-08, 21:01	Link #4
gravitation Don't use animesuki now.. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: London, UK Age: 34	i think thats a nice pic! its nice, lol i keep saying nice..its kool ^__________________^

2003-11-09, 07:04	Link #5
get_a_life hentai! banzai! Join Date: May 2003 Location: pasadena, ca Age: 39	first things first, did you draw with a mouse/tablet or did you scan in your drawing? first thing i noticed was your anatomy and sketchy lines. try to keep it clean and smoooooth. it looks like youve got your idea down and pretty clear. what works for me is that i draw the same idea at least 3 to 5 times before im satisfied. 2nd, tracing is not a crime, its an essential tool!! so yeah, use tracing paper or, if you're really serious Canson Marker Paper. why that? bc its got good transparency and a smoooooth surface thats perfect for pencils and inks. trace over your drawings and at the same time make needed changes.

2003-11-09, 22:56	Link #6
Ayla Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Canada Age: 39	Wow, those are sketchy lines? I thought they were pretty good myself..but I'm still a beginner. I do use a tablet..And I do a rough sketch, then go over it again making it smoother..however the program I use, I'm not sure how to make it smoother? I just got the program and am learning..You should see my first lineart with it, it sucked a lot more then this lol

2003-11-10, 00:15	Link #7
OFFSPRiNGCo16 Godlike Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Long Island New York Age: 37	Not bad, not bad at all. Keep practicing and showing your work, I feel that with more practice you can get much better. Keep up the good work

2003-11-11, 12:06	Link #8
Sukato Kendo Fanatic Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 39	Pretty good! The guy's shirt is definately very nice. Hmm..you might try making extra small pupils for a freaked out look. For instance, often in anime when a character is freaked out their eyes will slightly widen while their pupils will drastically shrink.