Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[CmmdrRosh]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

@Zero:

Ii still have a hard time trying to analyse his character as he could be cold one moment then pleasant the next. For example, I don't think that ken would reveal his past to Cecilia THIS SOON after the first battle where the two were aiming for the other's throats.

Strange things happen in revealing pasts time... warp... things...

Plus, Kenneth's just looking for a friend, considering he just watches Ichika being Ichika.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

@Zero:

Well, if Kiritsugu can get away for most of his deeds as the Magus killer, I can't see why Ken can't do something similar.


@Eratas: Well, we'll see how his story develops. Most of the complaints would revolve the main OC overriding the main cast at mostly everything (so far, Cecilia has been beaten) and the author already explained about the nanomachinery. But I believe there should be a little emphasis about if the nanomachine tech is perfect or not and Kenn suffering some side effects.


Ii still have a hard time trying to analyse his character as he could be cold one moment then pleasant the next. For example, I don't think that ken would reveal his past to Cecilia THIS SOON after the first battle where the two were aiming for the other's throats.

Kiritsugu is in Naru-verse you know in an universe where shit doesn't just hit the fan, it break it into two and went on to hit a jet engine.....

My point is: Things are so bad in Naru-verse that everybody can just raise an eyebrow and say: Being assassinated? that wasn't too bad. Not as bad as being raped by worms, being turn into human piano, being use a material to for some weird magic thingy, being used as Mana/blood bank.

Moar edit: Did I mention that a Family of assassin in Naru-verse can literally kill everything?
Edit: and death is so common that police basically give up when they see a dead body died from really insanely freaky unnatural death.

[Eratas123]

Still seems a bit too fast. Friendship isn't instantaneous, especially if you were just fighting and one of the people is extremely prideful.

[ZeroXSEED]

Positive version?

She's only a single girl trying to take care of her brother, without any form of parental figure for her to follow in. She only did what she learned: Life is harsh. and Yet she can't let Ichika took his own path, afraid of him being crushed.

Again, this duality of her is a perfectly human trait, humans are flawed. And If you want to be idealistic, she can took some character development, loosen up a bit and trust Ichika more, and guide him proper. Then she is a perfect Parent for him.

[CmmdrRosh]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Still seems a bit too fast. Friendship isn't instantaneous, especially if you were just fighting and one of the people is extremely prideful.

Worked with Ichika, fyi

[Eratas123]

Despite my love of deconstruction, I love positive and happy outcomes. Hence why Shadow's still fairly idealistic despite everything.

Does it matter if it has few people? The Vatican's still influential in the eyes of many.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by CmmdrRosh

Worked with Ichika, fyi

There is a difference:

Ichika isn't trying to kill her.....

Edit: In spite of what you say, Ken still give me the vibe of a Stu...... Not sure why.... need to reread again.

[CmmdrRosh]

And neither was Kenneth...

[Eratas123]

@'Rosh - Ichika runs on Harem Powerz. I thought you wanted your story to be more realistic?

[CmmdrRosh]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@'Rosh - Ichika runs on Harem Powerz. I thought you wanted your story to be more realistic?

True, but seeing that each others pasts for why they are being a$$holes tends to give better opinions of each other.

[ZeroXSEED]

Again, in spite of their small population, Vatican is a symbol that as you said influenced a lot of parties allover the world. But who else will protest about a machine that perfectly described as screwing God's rules? Certainly not liberal people. Things MIGHT change however, but I'm not wanting Religion involved too deep despite bing the major part of human life, too sensitive. If it does happen, it's merely a small passage that might go unnoticed.

*Silently preparing fire extinguisher*

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Again, in spite of their small population, Vatican is a symbol that as you said influenced a lot of parties allover the world. But who else will protest about a machine that perfectly described as screwing God's rules? Certainly not liberal people. Things MIGHT change however, but I'm not wanting Religion involved too deep despite bing the major part of human life, too sensitive. If it does happen, it's merely a small passage that might go unnoticed.

*Silently preparing fire extinguisher*

How about a group of Religious people protesting against IS? There is historical record on that [See: Creationism Versus Evolution]

Edit:

"Infinite Stratos is Playing god!"
"That Bunny ear on Tabane is hiding the devil's horn!"

[Eratas123]

Don't worry. I'm faithful, but not to the point that I force my view on others. Anyway, I was wondering since I saw an OC from the Vatican on the list.

@ Rosh - Then I wish you good luck. Do you plan to pair him with anyone?

[agetreme]

I think I will have a Male oc lead.....(Doesn't help that Stratospear's fic is awesome....)

But I will make sure he stay balance....

(Via stereotypical Game Balancing...like Might Glacier is always slow, Fragile Speedster is weak in defense.)

Against stronger opponent, he get crub-stomped.

[Eratas123]

I really don't understand why everyone here outright refuses to use female OC's as the mains. It's not hard to write about girls, and if it is, then write about tomboys. That solves just about every problem most fans have.

[CmmdrRosh]

Haven't a clue... Kenneth probably will work alone, probably not wanting another one "Angel" incident to happen again.

But thanks everyone for the thoughts! =)

I'll leave a little spoiler Silver Gospel and Natalie Fairs... She is also a member of STARIS under the name "Daughter of the Three"

[ZeroXSEED]

Spoiler for Virtual IS:

Our mind materialized from nowhere into a place resembles a heavily-fortified base, there's a lot of NPC here, indicated by their awkward movement and uncanny expression.

(Apparently, this was deliberate, to make them distinct from players as well as to save CPU power)

However, there's only four players here. I, Madoka, Dan, and Ran. We all use what could be described as full body version of I.S. outfit.

"Woah, this is awesome" Dan grinned happily, knocking the wall to check if that's really as realistic as Iori-san described. A near-100% accurate experience being an I.S. pilot, even if you're a guy.

On the main screen, Iori-san appeared.

"[Greetings, this is the first time the system tested out of factory, do you feel any difference already?]"

"Aside form the NPC-related weirdness, everything seems real. Actually, even the NPC is interacting differently"

"[Well, we applied procedural generation implements to give as much dynamic as we can, but we still apply some preset value for the player's convenience]"

We nodded in response.

"[Well, please proceed to the hangar. We'll conduct live combat test ASAP]"

"Ehh? Right now? But I'm not ready!" Ran wailed in response, she earn raised eyebrow from all of us. "But... but of course I'm not nervous or anything, let's go"

I can tell that you are, really nervous.

[Eratas123]

On a side note, Tatenashi appears to be gaining prominence as a pairing for OC's. I wonder why.

[ZeroXSEED]

Isn't that because she's mostly unoccupied with Ichika-fawning syndrome?

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I really don't understand why everyone here outright refuses to use female OC's as the mains. It's not hard to write about girls, and if it is, then write about tomboys. That solves just about every problem most fans have.

why don't you try?

It is only easy as a concept. -_-

Anyway, I think I will focus on Rune first before working on the Male Lead OC....

Edit: because Rune handle most of the school while the Male lead oc (Not a student) handle other stuff...