2014-03-17, 07:30 | Link #50922 |
Some say I'm the Reverse
Join Date: Jul 2006
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"My name is Kanuma Kanata. I am the 53rd in a long line of assassins who strike in secret, my identity hidden by a white hood..."
Ichika: "YOU JUST TOLD ME YOUR IDENTITY! WHY EVEN BOTHER WEARING A HOOD?!?!?"
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2014-03-17, 09:41 | Link #50925 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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you do aware the most IS pilots are just normal girls playing sport right? You are talking about killing sport players (like Competitive shooter). Also, if it is that easy, it would have been done a long time ago.... they don't even need to invent something like the Exo-skeleton suit.
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2014-03-17, 18:55 | Link #50928 |
Junior Member
Join Date: Mar 2014
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Why Hullo there online strangers!
I just wondering if you can be kind enough to critique my OC for my fan fiction Name: Ryusei Sakurai Gender: Male Age: 15 Country of affliation: (None) Assoicate with: Ex-Phantom Task, Dunios Inc. Appearance: With a less distinguish height (169 cm) for boy around his age, Ryusei has one of earphones in either one of ear, while the other earpiece dangles down (because he think it is cool). Ryusei disregards fashion trend, a shaggy black longcoat on outside, while still wearing a black hoodie or a typical white dressshirt with loose tie benath the coat (He thinks it is fashionable, why not?) Ryusei enjoys jeans for no reason, rather than shorts And the boy loves boots, espically black boots. He rarely gets a haircut, since he likes his medium black hair his eyes are heterochromia, right eye is covered with black eyepatch to hide its abnormalites (derived from second handed experiment from German), and normal blue iris to his left eye. he always wears a fingerless glove for his right hand. Personality: Quite brash for a fifteen years old, he loves to find fault of other and expose it . Ryusei doesn't care how the job gets done, either he deals with it or doesn't deal with it. Quite a procastinator, has little respect for his employer, An cheap asshole, Ryusei often blames his own fault in others. And Ryusei can't stand girls (much like unable to be more conformatable with them) Yet, he is willing to help out of those truly in need of help, Ryusei casts away the job just to protect others. Despite of all that, he is very lonely and self loathing at times. Likes: Sunscreens, Oranges, Tarot Cards, Tokusatsu film/series/shows, Kick Boxing, Classical Music, 1930s gangster outfit, tons of explosion, imperialism, darwinism military history, mint cholocate, works of H.P. Lovecraft, etc. etc. Dislikes: Sun(UV-radiation), government, IS units, terroist, milk, Capitalism, Communism. Humans in general. Strength: close quarter combat, analysis, history, and mapping Weakness: general direction, math calucation, physics, computers, talking to girls, children History: Son of Japanese aerospace researcher and Germany foreign exchange student. At age of four, due to the development of IS units, Japan space expolartion program was shut down. that drove Ryusei's father to insanity (as two decades worth of reasearch were wasted to mass produce IS), Ryusei's father was contacted Phantom Task , and the terrorist group gained numerous informations on the system. Japanese government declared treason and arrested Ryusei's father, Ryusei's mother was extradicted back to Germany along with him. The plane crashed, Ryusei barely survived, but his mother did not. The boy was declared in critical stage, he was near edge of death. But the Germany intelligent agency was looking for a nearly to death patient to find experiment of nanotechnology on healing, Ryusei was chosen by random, the injection of nanobots into the bloodstream caused the change of the iris color of his right eye and burn scar on the back of his right hand. Ryusei recovered after six months of coma, (At the same time, IS units proudctions began). For the next three years, Ryusei spend his time in an Germany orphange, where he studied Germany and English. At age of seven Ryusei was kidnapped during middle of night by the Phatom Tasks (who had located him after the plane crashed, and thought Ryusei might be a better bargaining chips for his father's reasearch works, but the organization changed its mind after saw Ryusei's eyes and began to train him as a child soldier). For the next five years, Ryusei traveled around the globe to take part of insurgences and industrial esponiages. Despite being a child soldier, Ryusei's understanding of world became much pessmistic than average those of children. During a mission of inflitrating Dunios Inc. Ryusei was captured but released by the CEO of corpration and offered him a job as security assistant, which he accepted. Now, as the head security manager of Dunios Inc, Ryusei takes on hardest mission he has thought he ever faced, going to all girl school and retrieve some incomplete data. IS: (He is a dude, can't really pilot one) But, Dunios Inc did made him a combat exoskeleton without IS cores, heavily battery driven (which lasted at max six hours of combat). Velocity Grinder Primarily based on IFX-V301 Gawain (Code Geass) Other:He knows he is hypocrite, and he gives no damn about it. Ryusei is not horrible person, he is kind to kinds because he believes the ability of children's imagination is much more pure and powerful than adults. Even though he is Japanese, he didn't re-learn Japanese until age of fourteen (which only a year prior to the story and receive his combat exoskeleton). So please do forgive me for my grammar and spelling, English isn't my first language tyty Last edited by AbsorbQueen; 2014-03-17 at 18:57. Reason: Changes |
2014-03-18, 01:30 | Link #50929 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Completely unrelated to the post above.
When we introduce males: OC or not. Why does it have to be that the girls are attracted either to him or Ichika? We seem to always settle things with a decisive pairing even before things develop. In a sense we are already throwing fuel into their ship even though technically they don't exactly know each other. This makes me question. Why can't they like both at the same time? Why do we not write about their attraction torn between two people? |
2014-03-18, 06:17 | Link #50932 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Basically, when we decide on a pairing, we make really obvious references and start marking territory that this is his girl, and that is that guy's girl, etc.
For some reason, Why can't the harem like both guys? Well at least like them both until they ultimately have to decide on one just as the protag has to choose from one of the harem. |
2014-03-18, 06:20 | Link #50933 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2011
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Funny you should say that~
But girls can be as shallow or as deep as they decided to be. Guys also like that, just that they rarely show the extreme ends. They can like multiple guys albeit barely, or invested themselves far too much to one guy beyond logic. What 'modern' harem entails are the latter, while typical fangirls portrayal usually the first (Unless we count crazy yandere fangirl). Oh, and in other words, brother said he's back to mirrorverse soon after GBF finish. He said he's trying his damnedest to kill the harem aspect if possible, except when it's supposed to be comedic. |
2014-03-18, 06:25 | Link #50934 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Damn it she's trying to hijack my account just now
Anyway, while the teasing is there, I was thinking of killing the harem situation for real and went straight to screwing oneself shenanigans. In case Tempest come here soon (and still interested continuing the project) hopefully he can understand.
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2014-03-18, 07:32 | Link #50935 | |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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"Make it happen!" And hurry up with GBF. The last thing I want is your enthusiastic got curbed after the series final. |
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2014-03-18, 08:23 | Link #50936 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Well I'm not really saying the girls should be shallow. Rather, why is our only recourse to set the pairings in order to break the harem status quo? Is it really like Fire just said? That none of us are capable of writing substantially with such relationships of multiple attractions?
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2014-03-18, 08:31 | Link #50937 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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Oh please! It's one of the rule of anime: be faithful to one, even if your feeling isn't answered.
In an audiance perspective, it's like "Have all" mindset. Beside, last time checked, Wavehawk goes with crazy crossover; SaintessHeart is totally in Lolicon; Tempest, ZeroXSEED and Blitz1/2 are members of the Incest Guild; StratoSpear and Agetreme have their OC to deal with; and I'm too busy to set up a complete AU. In short, none of us qualified. |
2014-03-18, 09:48 | Link #50940 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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That's more or less my point I guess. I'm no feminist. But just guys getting the harem is getting kinda old. If we crossed the webs instead of making all the arrows point one way, or point in decisively straight lines. Well... wouldn't that be more interesting?
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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