2012-06-09, 01:44 | Link #32081 |
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Are there any clues on what type of shield IS use? Is it like a eclectic shield where the shield itself is about 2 feet in front of he user and getting close enough can bypass it completely or is it literally skingrafted?
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2012-06-09, 03:00 | Link #32083 |
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@Eras, Zero:
Thanks for the point out about the "alien" idea - I will take note of that. Glad that my OC is still alright. Btw he's not an IS pilot. ^^; As I've said before there are too many IS fanfics out there with male pilots, and I don't wish to fall into the same cliche trap so easily. Also, I do understand that IS is a harem show, and I intend to keep it that way. It's pointless to create another male pilot - I mean, wouldn't Ichika lose his ace reason to be the main protagonist of the story? (@Zero) I take it that the Fuyutsuki idea is ok, then? It's good to hear that the idea is pretty alright, so I don't think I will need to make any more changes to it, I guess? Anyway, once again thanks for the useful input! Appreciated! *sneaks off to continue writing the fanfic*
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2012-06-09, 10:20 | Link #32085 |
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Ah, been awhile since I posted. I've been writing a lot and doing my exams.
@Eratas: I think the shield is somewhat skin grafted (depictions kinda vary between novels), since, if I am not mistaken, Ichika got choked by the Silver Gospel while his shields still block off the hands, implying that the shields hover right above his skin (forgot which volume this is).
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2012-06-10, 08:47 | Link #32086 |
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@ Eras
Yes, the shield is ALMOST skin grafted. In this sense, Absolutely defense is, while the normal energy shield isn't. Once again, I.S. has two layer of energy shield, not one @ kakeru It depends really, if our working process of creating male OC Pilot is A. Highlighting that Ichika suck B. Having our OC better than Ichika in almost everything C. Instantly taking aways his harem member without definite reason Then we already fail Mind you, most of the Stuish example so far wasn't created with those intentions, it's really the process that is risky. @ Demi D'oh, this is going top be hectic.
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2012-06-10, 15:45 | Link #32087 | |
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Just earlier today, I read some other OCs that were outright overpowered Of course, they got instantly and mercilessly shot down Even in my early OCing days, I never made mine insanely powerful... ...stealing the spotlight? yes But stealing the protagonists's harem? never! Well, atm I'm just a nosy bystander, so that's enough ranting from me
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2012-06-10, 16:31 | Link #32088 |
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Fanfic spotted.
Infinite Stratos Legend of the ShiroYaksha From the same Author of Rise of the ShiroYaksha that was accidentally removed, according to the author. |
2012-06-10, 20:19 | Link #32089 |
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@ Flame
Same here, my male OC Pilot is... well, 1. A mentor figure with limited spotlight, and his influence on Ichika is also limited to that spotlight issue. 2. He might be better than most of the cast in unrestricted aerial combat (open sky), but that's because he has years of experience and knowledge in piloting, well, anything that could do manned flight, being military test pilot and all. I.S. are new stuff for him, and almost anyone in Ichika's harem can beat him inside cramped arena. 3. Often accused being Lolicon after jokingly flirt with Ichika's harem (he's 24), he never live it down. Besides, he's shipped with Chifuyu (with a good reason too)
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2012-06-10, 20:56 | Link #32091 |
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Madoka in her canon characterization is... unconventional, but probably closer to 'the Vamp' stereotype. Sensual, sadistic, dangerously smart and cunning.
The incest and hostility amped up the appeal even more, due to the 'forbidden fruit' issue. ------------------------------------------------- This is the kind of Ichika's dynamic with her in TLR Stratos, being two sides of a coin. When damn near everyone told them "Get a room already or you'll drive us insane!", you know the tension is high enough to power entire I.S.A. (Since PT in this verse are evilly incompetent and more or less Chaotic good)
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2012-06-10, 21:27 | Link #32093 |
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But Chifuyu will be ten times better at controlling her own urge and expression compared to Ichika, really hilarious on it's own though
Besides, incestuous vibe is really that common in Kamen Rider, strictly speaking, it's almost always het.
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2012-06-10, 21:42 | Link #32095 |
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Oh god, please do not channel box with outlandish lesbian crack.
My plan for M/H lesyay will be screwed EDIT: Strictly speaking, I plan to include some subtext for the Dunois twin as well (because this time, Charles and Charlotte are separate person). "I will come to save you" Indeed.
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2012-06-10, 21:53 | Link #32097 |
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*Facepalm*
Anyway, I'm not sure about this, it's really possible to conquer a corporation via manipulating it's stock in the market right? Planning to make Charles one of the less-badass guy, in virtue of prefer being a chessmaster than kicking ass around (though he is capable to).
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2012-06-10, 22:14 | Link #32099 |
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The first method seems viable if you have enough connection though.
To quote, my plan is having Charles managed to buy massive amount of stock in a short timespan. And subtly implied that he can just destroy the integrity of Dunois nobility status if he really wished. Charles' nonviolent takeover on his family's Corporation and the threat following get WTF reaction from the rest of Dunois, even Charlotte looked at it as excessive. But considering how much they screw with his life, and that Charlotte has it worse, everybody knew and understand. Knight Templar Twin Brother indeed On a different notion, Papa-Dunois is portrayed more humanly and less of an ass too.
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