Gundam Fanfiction Thread

[Dean_the_Young]

Episode 17. Sergei dies, Andrei doesn't. Hundreds of people screaming for the other way around.

Be careful what you wish for. It's not always what you intended.

[Masterkeyes2]

Another alternative is that Sergei and Andrei actually had the talk they needed before it was too late. Though I suppose that would be kind of boring and unimaginative to put on paper.

[Dean_the_Young]

Originally Posted by Masterkeyes2

Another alternative is that Sergei and Andrei actually had the talk they needed before it was too late. Though I suppose that would be kind of boring and unimaginative to put on paper.

That's actually for a future piece, a collection on the theme "If you were as strong as you wish you were." It might be just a miscellaneous short, but it involves a talk over Andrei's favorite past time: Jenga.

[Masterkeyes2]

He has a favorite past time or did you just make that up?

[Dean_the_Young]

Originally Posted by Masterkeyes2

He has a favorite past time or did you just make that up?

He has one. It was in a Japanese-language 00 character commentary/date set including Andrei, giving some of Andrei's basic preferences. Basic general stuff, like how his preferred type of woman is 'a maiden,' and his hobby/past time is jenga.

[Masterkeyes2]

That's kinda of neat. Anywho a little food for thought on Nena; it seems to me she is a girl, like Setsuna I suppose, who suffered from those who stood idly by while the situation was going sour. She also seems to have a hatred for high-society types-hence why she may have killed the Halveys and why she dislikes Wang Liu Mei so much. You could work that into a story I guess.

[Dean_the_Young]

Latest episode drabble: Motivation.

[Nightwing(T_T)]

Nice fanfic that I found Some Things Never Change; Setsuna/Marina; R

[Ardi220288]

Originally Posted by Nightwing(T_T)

Nice fanfic that I found Some Things Never Change; Setsuna/Marina; R

Hmm this is pretty good. How come I never noticed it. Thnx

[Dean_the_Young]

Anew died, and went wherever Gundam characters go. A mix of light hearted and a serious reflection on what it means to be a character in Gundam.

[kandidasama]

Originally Posted by Nightwing(T_T)

Nice fanfic that I found Some Things Never Change; Setsuna/Marina; R

Thanks ! I felt Setsuna like Heero Yuy

[blitz1/2]

Chapter 2 is up for "A new fight"
- contains the events of ep 1 of season 2.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4728276/...00_A_new_fight

[willyvereb]

I gave up my CG fanfic for now(i stuck at the plot and until i don't have the image most of the plot i can't start it)
And i'm planning to start a Gundam 00 fanfic/rewrite. Main points:
Main character: Allelujah Haptism
-Some changge in the s1 plot(and much more in the S2 one)
-More skillfull Tieria action(he become much more skilled)
-Some Gundam changes(most of the Gundams more like the original ones aka "chess gundams")
-Some change in the pilot backgrounds and characters.
Main problem: Setsuna. If we strip of his main character role then he's became somewhat boring.(my only option about his mecha if it's become the "Knight Gundam" and Exia's mixture, and Lockon still got Dynames). I glad to got some ideas about his character.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by willyvereb

I gave up my CG fanfic for now(i stuck at the plot and until i don't have the image most of the plot i can't start it)
And i'm planning to start a Gundam 00 fanfic/rewrite. Main points:
Main character: Allelujah Haptism
-Some changge in the s1 plot(and much more in the S2 one)
-More skillfull Tieria action(he become much more skilled)
-Some Gundam changes(most of the Gundams more like the original ones aka "chess gundams")
-Some change in the pilot backgrounds and characters.
Main problem: Setsuna. If we strip of his main character role then he's became somewhat boring.(my only option about his mecha if it's become the "Knight Gundam" and Exia's mixture, and Lockon still got Dynames). I glad to got some ideas about his character.

I wouldn't mind reading and reviewing it if I have some spare time.

[willyvereb]

Honestly Setsuna "Gundam" Seiei is my least favourite...and his personality like a cyborg's most of the time...so if we take out his Main Character role then pretty much nothing remains. Anyone have some ideas what to do about his character?
I have little problem even if i scrap him from the story and adding an OC, but perhaps there's some Setsuna fans with other opinion.

[Dean_the_Young]

If you gave up on the Code Geass work, what makes you think you'll follow through and complete a rewrite? Something like that is a very ambitious project, even more so when you take out one of the most critical characters of the cast.

[willyvereb]

Yeah i know...Allelujah will have a somehow "negative Kira Yamato" development.
Well i think it's quite rare to have dual personality characters as Main(real dual personality characters...not someone who prettends to be other).
Kyrios become more melee oriented, but the problem's with Setsuna:
He and his gundam is totaly worthless if he's not the main hero. That's why i thinking about scrapping his Gundam and him and replacing with a fresh new OC.
The only problem i have that with it i may cause hatred with some of the Setsuna fans.
Anyways:theese characters would play a bigger role in my rewrite:
- Pattrick
- Tiera(mainly in S1 plotline)
- Nena
- Ali
And perhaps Allelujah/Hallelujah and Soma/Marie.

Possibily scrapped characters:
-Setsuna and Marina
-Saji and Louise(probably not but i have problems with Saji cause o-riser): Perhaps if they're in then Saji's roomate would be Alle.

Perhaps with the "Setsuna crisis" i have problems even with the first chapter.
About the Setsuna replacement:
He would be a young mercenary who had connections with Ali.

[Dean_the_Young]

Except, worthless or not (the Exia is the explicit countermeasure to other GN shield machines), Setsuna is a vital catalyst for the series. He's the one who first stands up against the Trinities in Season 1, and in Season 2 he and only he is responsible for bringing together Celestial Being again and finally grasping Aeolia's true intentions (and being the first true human Innovator). Few other fan-made characters could do half of that without being blatant ripoffs of him.

And while Saji and Louise were mostly irrelevant in first season, in season two they're both significant main characters. Not just to eachother, but in terms of plot; Ribbons chose Louise to basically be queen of the world. That's pretty important.

[willyvereb]

But it's possible with anyone(Kyrios have it's claw for that work and i modified it with many other hidden weapons)...In practice everyone was fed up with the trinities just the editors make that Setsuna had the most guts to actually do something...and about Bringing together CB again...Setsuna only brought back Summeragi and a new Lockon...the other things was just plain coincidence(an Wang's doing).
There's only 3 thing that with other characters are difficult to do:
-Marina and her song of peace
-Graham's transformation to "Masked Man" Mr. Bushido.
-Ribbons's evil plot to got 00 Gundam(I mean he was 0 Gundam's pilot and he made from Setsuna a Meister)
Only the Middle one that have even a little importance in my opinion. The Marina song was plain hillarious(and unneeded other than Setsuna's character development) and the Ribbons's one the same too.
Now that i think of it over i have no reason to keep his character...I replace him with a more emotional character.
That's good...i think i can start with Chapter one. The only thing that remained: Making the new Gundams with the help of PS(the "full-armor Exia", the "hideous Kyrios" the "Nu-Nadleeh" and so on...)
Question: What do you think about Nadleeh having "funnels"(Armor Bits...quantum brainweave operated "fin-funnels"[in practice they're Virue's shred armor parts] that can make GN field or used as a flying gun pod)

[blitz1/2]

Note: For people confused with my Zero Gundam.

It is a repainted black O-gundam with red eye lens
- the hips were remade in the way that it stores 2 Flag sonic knives.

@willy: Can you review my FF? Tell me how it is?