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2011-10-19, 17:40
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2011-10-20, 10:05
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 -edit KYAAAA!!! OMG I JUST READ IT!!! SHIINA FINALLY APPEARED!!! OMG *ultimate fandom mode turn on* she's so damn freaking cool! ahhhh <3 please dun judge me XD but omg another 1 more month for more shiina T_T -edit again hey wait a min! Chapter 17 and 18 are out too!!!
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2011-10-20, 10:58
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2011-10-20, 11:06
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I read finish chapter 18. Omg I feel Hinata's pain. -edit uhm yah i can help translating from chap 16 first. wont be fast though. ^^"
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2011-10-20, 15:51
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About the typesetting don't worry that's my job ^.^ (only that I use paint XD) and we all live in different places so we have very different time zones XD
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2011-10-21, 13:24
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GAHHHH I nv knew translating is so tiring! It's easy to read and understand for me, but I'm getting all worried over my English grammar. So please! Help me check if there's anything wrong! I've translated until page 18 of Chapter 16 so far. Shall continue tmr. Getting damn tired already. It's 2.30am at my place now X_X
---- All of my translations stars with the bubbles from the top/right. Just like how we usually read the words in mangas. Once the person change, it's probably for the next bubble. Page 2 Noda: I'm asking if you're partners!! Yuri: Looks like he's not an underground man... But we have to think of a way to deal with his weapon. Chaa: Understood, I'll finish it. Ooyama: eh? eh? EH? page 3 Ooyama: WAAAHHHHHHH Hinata: OOYAMAAAAAAA!!! Chaa: Sliced open bones and flash Yuri: The one's been sliced open is not you, stop saying it. Ooyama: *Sniffs...* That's to much... Ooyama: My... My stomach is... (words on top of Yuri : "Can't hear you") (Kaito : No idea who's the one shouting but it says) You're a group of devils...! Bastard! Page4 Noda: Let me go! (bottom) What's wrong with you people!! Yuri: We should be the one asking you that, do you understand, Mr Underground Man? Noda: ... Are you guys related to that person? Yuri: That person? Noda: ... The underground Boss... Noda: said "beat me to finish this game". Page 5 Yuri: ...Game... Everyone thought of it in the beginning... Noda: Yes! I'll use my own hands and end this... Yuri: ...Do you know you can't end this? Noda: Huh? Yuri: This world won't end by doing that. It'll still carry on like this... So we'll have to use our own powers to change it. Yuri: (right) I'm your partner. (Left) Let's work together. Page 6 Noda: Bu... (Kaito: actually I'm not sure if he is saying "But" or "Ok". Both chinese words start with the same word.) Page7: Noda: Bu...bu... bu....o...ok... The rest: THAT'S FAST!! Hinata: Is that fine!? Are there even enough trust in this person!? Yuri: This is the results of my strength of my leadership Yuri: Let me introduce myself again. I'm the leader, Yuri. (bottom) Everyone calls me Yurippe, what about you? Noda: No... Noda... Page8 Yuri: So then, Noda-kun, our first mission is to beat the boss here. Noda: (the 2nd bubble to the right) Leave it to me. Noda: (left bubble) You just have to stay at the back and look. As long as I have "him", I'm invincible. Noda: Furthermore, only I can beat that dude! (bottom) Follow me!! Noda: Ouch! Hinata: ... He's like an idiot. Chaa: He's an idiot... Page 9 Ooyama: Ahhhh~~~ It's so scary. It's so dark. And it's so painful. (Kaito : no idea who said that. First bubble to the right on the left side of Yuri) Hey, have we arrived yet? Why don't we head back? (????) Why do we have such scardy-cats in our group? (???) It's all because of you. Yuri: But it seems that we've came quite far down. what level are we at now? Chaa: 27th Yuri: Ahh... That's an amazing depth! I wonder why is there even such an underground tunnel? Hinata: God knows. But I guess that the boss should know the answer. Page 10 Ooyama: But... If beating the boss and the world ends is true... What should we do? We have not accomplished our goal yet! Noda: Why can't we beat the boss? That's the point of this game. Hinata: Ahh.. It's about time to say (bottom) this is the Afterlife. We're here to revenge against god. Noda: Afterlife? Revenge against god...? What's this? That's such a complicated plot... Yuri: Ah! I've forgotten to tell you. This is not a game. Noda: Then... what is this world? Yuri: It's the real world. Page 11 Noda: Real world?! But... but aren't you my female lead?! Yuri: Female lead? What's that? I'm the leader of this group, is there any problem? Chaa: Plus she's my wife. Page12 Noda: Wh...why... Noda: I... I am not the male lead... Am I...? Yuri: If you insist then you can be the supporting role! (bottom) Yuri: Since we've became partners, you should stop ranting over such things. Noda: Why am I... a supporting role... Page13 Noda: I DO NOT WANT TO BE ANY SUPPORTING ROLE!!!!!!!!!!! The rest: Huh Chaa: Gone (left) He's gone! Hinata: Should we give him a chase? Yuri (left): What are you saying? Yuri: He should be a character designed to tell us about this underground boss! Yuri: Let's get going! Hianta: Wait! Page14 Hinata: Are really moving? You're a really powerful Leader-sama. Yuri: What..? (bottom) You have any comments? Hianta: Nothing... Just the same as usual... Yuri (left): What's wrong? Ever since Chaa joined us you seem to have changed and kept on ranting! Haha! Yuri: (right) Are you jealous? (left) Because Chaa mentioned that I'm his wife. Page 15 Hinata: HUH??! NO WAY... Chaa: Ah I see... Seems like I've interrupted the two of you, little boy. Sorry. I'll take note of it in the future. Hinata: I've said it's not... (box) It's not like that... Hinata: (box) It's not as simple like that... Ooyama: Uh... Hey, why don't we take a break at this spot here now? Hinata: (box) It's just that feeling... Page 16 Hinata: (box) with Chaa around, it's doesn't seem to matter if I'm around anymore... Hinata (box; left of page) Why... Why will I think of such things? Yuri: Your wife's an idiot!! Hinata: (bottom right) Ah... Is this jealousy!? Hinata: (top) No. No. This should be a good news. It's like no one will follow any useless leader. (bottom) Just like last time, for that reason it's enough for us to form a team. Page 17 Hinata: (box) There seems to be no problem in this team.. I should be happy about it. I should just ignore all my emotions. Hinata: Just like that... Hinata: is it ok..? Hinata: I just dun feel right... Are there really no problems at all?! Hinata: That's it! We just had a team mate ran away crying!! Noda: Wa~~ ahh~~~ ah~~~ Hinata: (top) With the results of Chaa joining us and me getting more and more silent (centre) This made Yurippe's decisions even stronger!! Hinata: Hey Yurippe!! Page 18 Hinata: Let's bring Noda back! Yuri: No...da? Hinata: You've already forgotten your team mate's name!! Yuri: Ah that guy... Forget it. It's been so long and we'll be wasting our time to find him. Hinata: What are you saying? Aren't we a team? Should we really leave him alone here in this dark underground!? Hinata: (right) He's must be feeling very lonely right now. Let's find him and bring him back. (Left) you're the leader, right!?
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Here's the rest. Btw if there's any weird english sentence then I'm sorry. My english is not really good either.
----- Page 19 Yuri: ...... Fine... Let's find him.... (Words above Chaa): You'll be packing up Chaa (left top): Let's split up then. Yurippe and I will find the boss (bottom) Ooyama and you will hunt for Noda Hinata(top): What?! How can you randomly decide on this! Chaa (bottom): Oh. I'm sorry. You and Yurippe will head to the bottom, while Ooyama and I search for Noda. Yuri: Why are you apologizing? Chaa: It's my fault that I didn't think so far ahead. Yuri: Hm.. Then? What do you plan to do, Hinata-kun? Hinata: Eh? Hinata: I... Page 20 1st choice: Find Noda together with Ooyama 2nd choice: Head to the lowest level with Yurippe 3rd choice: Ask Yurippe to change clothes (Right top) Uniform (the one with arrow) Bikini Hinata: WHAT'S WITH THE THIRD CHOICE!? Yuri: How? Please decide! Hinata: I've decided. Hinata (right side of the box with Yuri): I'll go find the boss with Chaa. Yurippe and Ooyama will find Noda. Yuri: HUH!? Why!? Hinata (right side top): If what Noda said is true (bottom) Boss should be a really strong, right? Hinata (left): If so, both Chaa and I should be facing the battle since we're the stronger ones. Page 21 Yuri: No!! I'm the leader! I should defeat the boss! Hinata: Are you a child!? Didn't I said that this is dangerous!? Yuri (bottom of Hinata): Then the more why I should go! Chaa (right): We understand. We understand. Leave Noda to this boy and I. (left) Yurippe and you should get going. (word above Ooyama): Sigh Ooyama (most left): We hurry and find him, then meet up with you guys as soon as possible. Hinata: That's fine too....... Chaa (top): Alright, let's go, Ooyama. Ooyama (bottom): Mm... Let's go. Ooyama (right, above hinata): Hinata-kun! Hinata (left, on Ooyama): Mm? Page 22 Ooyama: Ahh... Cure poison!! (words above Hinata): Again Ooyama: This is my farewell gift! Nothing will stay in your way no matter what! (words above Hinata): Thank you Hinata: Did I get poisoned before this...? Chaa: Stop playing around, let's go. Ooyama: Yes yes. The two of you, be careful! Hinata: We will. You guys too. Yuri: Let's go. Page 23 (Between them two): ...... (Right): ... Come to think of it, we have not been carrying out missions with just the two of us for awhile... (Left) Ah... You're right... Yuri: Fighting with you seems to have been ages ago too. Hinata: I only remember being beaten by you.... Yuri (Right): Since you can't even win a girl in fighting... Are you super weak? Yuri (Middle): Even I am the one who beat Chaa. You only know how to fall from the roof top. Hinata (Left): Don't be mistaken. I was kicked down by someone. Plus, I have not been serious before. Page 24 Yuri (Right): When will you be serious? Hinata (bottom): When... Hinata (on Yuri): you are in danger... Yuri (Most Right): But before that won't you be dead? Yuri (2nd right): Please be serious if you face danger yourself. Hinata (2nd Left): It's my nature that I don't really get serious in doing things for myself. Hinata (Left): But I guess it's good too. Page 25 Hinata (right): I want to protect Yurippe! Hinata (left): Even though you may not need me anymore. Yuri: ? What did you just say? Hinata (bottom): Ah.. You're such a worrying person... Yuri: Oh ya! Yuri (pinwheel image): Hinata-kun Hinata (top): Ah, that's the pinwheel just now. Yuri: I'll lend it to you. You gotta help me keep it safe! Page 26 Yuri: This thing carries the will to live on. Yuri (on Hinata): Don't even think of destroying it! Hinata: .... Thank you. Page 27 (Right): It's so spacious.... (Left): It feels different from the rest of the levels... It feels like we've reached the bottom. Yuri: I agree. There's a final boss feeling around. Hinata: We have to be extremely careful from now onwards... Yuri: YAHOO!! Hinata: Eh eh eh?! Hinata (top): What are you doing!! The final boss will know about us!! Yuri (Bottom): I say, the final boss won't move and he will remain seated on his throne. He won't move unless he said his opening speech. Page 28 Hinata: I don't think so... Yuri: It's true!! All boss are the same!! Hinata: Fine. Fine. (bottom) :.... It can't be... Page 29 Yuri: Look over there!! She's seated!! Seated!! Hinata: Oi oi... It's can't be. Is this person really the boss? She just looks like a normal girl. Yuri: (top) You're dumb! The final boss will change her appearance a few times! This is the first appearance!! (bottom): C'mon Final Boss! Begin your opening speech!! Page 30 Shiina: ... Shallow-minded... Yuri & Hinata: ...... Shiina: Come get me. Yuri & Hinata: THAT'S TOO SHORT!!! Page 31 Yuri (right): That's all? You're gonna be defeated by us ok!? Yuri (left): Aren't you gonna tell us any explanations or reasons or what?! Once you get beaten there won't be any chances of letting you go anymore!! Hinata: Say it! Who are you!! Hinata: What!? Where is she... Page 32 Yuri: Don't you feel... It's getting bad? Hinata: If this is a shonen manga... The bottom should have a "To Be Continued" right now, right? (words become Hinata): Continue in September. (Words all the way on the right, downwards): A final boss with the looks of a high school girl... What's her power!? Continue on next chapter!!
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